NBA: The Veteran Superstar

Although I haven't finished writing it yet, it looks very good. In line with the principle of being an individual, the system is relatively down-to-earth and not omnipotent. The editor is like a super giant in reality, and the system does not allow him to exceed human limits. If you feel unhappy, it is also a system problem. Overall, it looks pretty good, with no fatal flaws and no issues with perspective. There are also some wonderful and unique details, including emotional portrayals. As of writing now, I can start with an overall score of 8.6.

It's very perfect, I think it's very well written. I'm looking forward to the next book.

The setting is very interesting. 29 Years old may not be a cool article, but it will definitely make you learn something.

To be honest, it's really average. The author doesn't seem to know much about basketball. I feel like he writes a lot of nonsense. Also, basketball articles are rarely written in such a frustrating way. He was dumped by a woman after he was expelled. He looked like he was going to play in the NBA. The woman found him again and then even took him home. He knew it was green tea but he still wanted to eat it. Oh, really, this kind of person is not given a system by the author. He really deserves to be expelled.

I want to pick the stars from the sky for you, but I find that they are already in your eyes. ​​I want to pick you the stars in the sky, but I find that they are already in your eyes. ​​I want to pick you the stars in the sky, but I find that they are already in your eyes. ​​My secret to staying young: lying about my age O(∩_∩)O My secret to staying young: lying about my age O(∩_∩)O My secret to staying young: lying about my age O(∩_ ∩)O You are the sugar secretly added to these days when boiled water is as bland as water🍬(*/ω\*) You are the sugar to be secretly added to these days when boiled water is as bland🍬(*/ω\*)· ℋᵅᵖᵖᵞ♡ᵕ̈ 🥘 🍮🍹 One meal a day, one memory ෆYou are the sugar secretly added to these days that are as bland as boiled water🍬(*/ω\*)

The author doesn't watch basketball and writes blindly

It's so frustrating to watch.

It is a very real NBA article. It is not the ideal situation where teammates are all good people who will cooperate with the protagonist and are high-quality tools. In this book, players, coaches, teammates, managers, etc. All have their own demands to affect the protagonist. This is very real. , The failure of this book lies in the national team. The protagonist is repeatedly messed up by the leadership of the men's basketball team, but he still chooses to forgive each time and continues to be punished and beaten. This situation occurs repeatedly. Although it is very real, it is frustrating to watch.

If you don't know how to write about feelings, don't write about them. When you are twenty-nine, you handle things like a child. There are few things other than basketball that you are not good at.

The beginning is to experience the card system and the girlfriend abandonment flow. I was immediately persuaded to give up a lot of people, but later I felt that the experience card time was limited and I couldn't show off, so I directly changed it to a 10-year experience card. Anyway, if you feel there is something missing, you just force it to make up for it. When someone targets you, you just knock the opponent down and feel like you are back in the game. This is a complete victory method of Ah Q's spirit. The soft group are forced to look like leaders.