Dancing on the Blade's Edge in an Online Game

I think the first chapters are quite good, but the later chapters are a bit hard to understand. The NPCs have too few tasks. It feels like the novel is not over yet, but it has the finale. I feel like I can write something more later. But it still looks good. Come on.

After reading more than 100 chapters, I feel pretty good. Let me give you a good review first. The only shortcoming so far is that there are too many typos.

The front is better, but the back is stinky and annoying. The main character's attributes are unknown, and the damage jumps. All the damage caused by hitting a monster is written out. The system prompts are repeated over and over again. Where is the homework?

Finally, gather the hearts of the brave and add them all to agility. Don't you need to adapt?

I've read dozens of chapters and it feels good. I'd like to give you a good review first.

Although I haven't read it for long, I still want to say that the book is good, and it's okay to be emotional. The key is that it's finished. But, books that are less than 3.5 Million words are really not very popular. The main reason is that 1 million words is already a long novel, but more than 600 chapters are really not enough to read. It feels a bit perfunctory and like a bad book. It's over. It's over after killing God Slayer and Fengyun Pavilion. Neither Suzaku City nor Xuanwu City were captured, and there's no description of the key points. To be honest, when I saw your beginning, I thought you were going to write about the national war. But in the end, you ended it hastily before the national server hegemony was even finished. I wasn't satisfied with that at all. Everything else was fine.

It's annoying for pig feet like this. They can't move their eyes when seeing women and fall for them after seeing them a few times. At least it's okay to see them in reality. In the game, you know whether they have changed their appearance. Failure

The writing is pretty good, but sometimes it jumps a bit, like there's a chapter missing in the middle.

The plot is very good, and it is very enjoyable to watch. The only dissatisfaction is that what happened to the male protagonist and the female protagonist was not told, and the ending was a bit hasty.

The overall feeling is very good, but the progress is a bit too fast. I changed equipment many times on the first day! ! !