King of Passives

It's originally a good book, but it's too wordy, and the number of words is too much for chatting and making noises.

Sha🦅 Seeing a person show off his talent once is really impressive.

Running dialogue throughout

Ping, I can't say it's good, I can't say it's bad. But what I hate the most is the presence of a few Axi from time to time. Accepted, the most important thing is not all this, it is all this. I understand the catchphrase, but a little bit of all kinds of swear words, and then an Axiba comes from time to time, it will be uncomfortable.

Generally, this kind of writing is enjoyable, but this book is about the daily life of a low-level gangster. I couldn't stand it after reading the previous part. It's really meaningless if the game article is not entertaining.

The bosses are all the same. I was bored enough to finish reading this book. All the bosses in this book have 80% health for the first big skill, 50% for the ultimate skill, and 20% for the violent rage.

Long-winded, full of nonsense, and too naive. No matter who asks, he will tell the truth. What's more, what is the origin of the author? Are you going to brainwash the readers with the endless beast-talking Axiba and Xinei? Hybrid are you?

I can really make up the numbers, it's so verbose

Overall, the plot is very good. It is a rare game novel in which the protagonist does not establish a guild, nor is he a lone ranger. The shortcomings of the writing are also quite obvious. There is a lot of nonsense, not just superficial, but, for example, the psychological activities of whether an equipment is for personal use or for sale can fill more than half a chapter. In addition, I want to complain about the value settings. The author is so talented. Every time a new percentage of passive is obtained, the multiplication is directly based on the current value. Normally, skills should be calculated by addition, and the final value should be obtained by comparing with the base value. Using the author's method, it's no wonder that the protagonist's attributes are so high in the end

Not bad