God-Level Mechanic of Online Games

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Although it seems average so far, the last book is so good. I'll give you a good review. I hope you can fill in the pitfalls of the previous book.

It's just the update speed, give us a surprise, XX (you know...)

This book is very good, as good as the previous book of Zen Heart Daogu. I only have one request for this book. I hope the author will not be as bad as the last book. Just fill in the holes. I hope to write more cheap plots.

It's okay, the plot is okay, but every fight feels the same, and with the addition of eunuchs, I can only say it's watchable

It's good-looking, but I don't think it's as good as the original version.

In short, there is no sense of fun and freshness like Wang Li and his team had before. When writing a book, you can't stick to the same tune all the time. By the time the readers have developed a taste for it, you will almost collapse (the above is not a black Zen, it is just a personal opinion)

After watching half of it, there is a setting that I still can't understand. Isn't it true that the last online game has been popular for a long time? Isn't it a bit strange to see the protagonist create something similar to the previous game? Only the old enemy can see it, and the others are completely blind. Even if it's just a casual perfunctory paragraph like "No one else could build it, I have to attribute it to the protagonist's superb skills" (although it's a trap if there are several other people who are also called the Eight Great Locksmiths if they don't have any doubts), in short, almost no one would think of the previous game, which is outrageous.

Just a bit short

This author has written three online game novels, and this one is the worst. It has no common sense about weapons. I can accept your imagination and imagination. But I cannot accept making things up and confusing readers.