The Strongest Landlord in an Online Game

The front part is more interesting, but the back part just introduces skill books repeatedly to make up the numbers.

If you have incredible talent at the beginning, the game will be fair in terms of statistics. If you spend money later, it will be a waste of money. A game like this will be damned if it doesn't go bankrupt.

Author, there is no plot in what you wrote. It is all about introducing skills. Why are you planning to devote two-thirds of the book to introducing skills?

It started out well, and some of the game's plots were quite attractive, but the author's shortcomings were quickly exposed, and it gradually became off-putting: First, there is too much explanation of game settings. This kind of virtual online game novel is to write about equipment and skills, but it mainly introduces the protagonist in detail. As long as others are generally passable, there is no need to describe it in detail, let alone explain its rationality. The focus is on the game plot and conflicts. Because unlike LOL and Glory of Kings, there is currently no real-life game corresponding to your novel. It's embarrassing for you to describe it in a serious way as if it's true. Secondly, harem drama is obviously not the author's specialty. The male protagonist and several women have no relationship at all. As a result, it feels like the male protagonist is a gangster and the women are willing to degenerate. It's disgusting.