A First-Rank Commoner

The author uses the plainest language, but depicts characters with flesh and blood and great personality, like a game of power of blood and fire across mountains and rivers. The plot is compact and not procrastinating, the text is concise and not verbose, and there are very few typos. The author is not writing about time travel, but about another kind of life. The protagonist has no halo, and the words are full of wisdom. It is an excellent article. It can also be seen that the author has taken great pains to arrange the development of the storyline! Nowadays, there are too many bad articles, which are nothing more than cheating of the protagonist, upgrading the monsters, the same plot, and a bunch of explanations about the magic, just to make up the word count! And this novel is worthy of everyone's appreciation!

The grammar is rigorous, the wording is neat, the structure is clever, the language is catchy, and it can be said to be concise and comprehensive. It shows the author's solid writing skills, as well as his handy writing skills and unparalleled creative ability, which is admirable. It profoundly expresses the author's deep blessings and profound emotions. It can be said that the words are simple and the meaning is shocking, which fully shows the author's solid writing skills, easy-to-handle writing skills and ruthless innovation ability. The finishing touch, the wonderful strokes, the profound artistic conception, echo the previous text, and sublimate the theme!

It's just a rubbish article, with such a small format, and it's also a time-travel novel. The protagonist's feudal thinking is more important than the Marquis who protects the country. People don't care what happens to the country. The protagonist just wants to continue to be a feudal slave owner under the dynasty. That is, slavish thinking. The layout of this article is terrible. After reading it, all three views will be biased. Since it is a time-travel novel, in addition to the element of war, there are some time-travel elements. It is basically slavish thinking. Character determines fate? The protagonist is really only worthy of being a slave and a prostitute. Didn't it say at the beginning that the protagonist is a designer? Okay, apart from fighting, no skills will be used later, so there is no need to write a time-travel novel.

The old bookworm rated it realistically and gave him 9.2 Points. A book worth reading 1. I will rate it after reading 78% of it. I am afraid that it will end in an anticlimactic manner. 2. The whole book has lofty intentions, clear context, smooth connection from front to back, and reasonable transitions, which makes people reluctant to stop reading. 3. The number of characters is appropriate, so that the character lines are not confusing, and the halo of the protagonist is not too strong, creating a fast-food feel. 4. The logic is reasonable and the development context is clear. It is the core of development literature, military literature, and national founding literature. It can withstand scrutiny, which makes readers feel that it is written with care, and it reads logically, without being abrupt or far-fetched. 5. The characters are rich in emotions, flesh and blood, and have sharp contrasts. In the case of online stories, it is the love and hatred of those few people. If these people are flesh and blood and have different values ​​and emotions, the story will be full of ups and downs and fascinating. 6. This book is not like a time-travel novel, but more like a fantasy novel. It does not have the technology and hard work of a time-travel novel. It is more about the optimized configuration of contemporary technology and productivity after the accumulation of knowledge and experience of civilized people. I hope more such rigorous authors, who carefully create characters, can stand out. Bring us more people who can read Shuangwen, we old bookworms can't read anymore.

It doesn't look good, so abandon it. The reason why I don't watch it is because you made the main character capable of being played by anyone, and it looked like it was going to develop slowly, but it ended up being discontinued in the middle. Business is not like business, and the army is not like army. It's like one person comes from behind and kills hundreds of enemies. The most outrageous thing is that you didn't take advantage of the modern technology tree in terms of equipment and force, and you managed it with 0 battle losses with just a single burst of blood. Articles that are outrageous, start high and then go low quickly

I have read more than a hundred chapters. The person who fights Di is as smart as a person. When he meets an official, he is like a dog. The good news is that he changes the map. The bad news is that he is a coward. He dares to go to the wine city to buy wine, but he is a coward when he meets an official.

I'm a level 23 bookworm, so just read a few chapters to see if it's good or not. If book lovers are tired of all kinds of cheating and cookie-cutter historical articles. You can read this book, it's well written. In troubled times, how can those who are capable stand still?

As an old bookworm, the writing style of this book is quite good. The content is full of ups and downs, and it is remarkable. It is not an empty and boring pretentious slap in the face, nor is it a cowardly and hateful hero. The content is full of iron-blooded tenderness, and the three views are very upright. It is just that there are some unsatisfactory aspects in the characterization and acting style of individual characters, but in general, everyone has his own characteristics, which is quite good. Come on, author💪, I hope the author will get better and better in the future! ! !

This book is actually pretty good. The protagonist builds guns and cannons without even starting, and the details and emotions are well described. It's a good book, but it's just too little.

The content at the beginning of this book is very nonsense. For example, the enemy army is about to conquer the city, but they still send wine into the city, and they refuse to leave. The enemy conquers the city, but they still refuse to leave, and they still want to resist the foreign enemies. It's not that I don't object to this spirit, but that this thing is impossible. The protagonist comes from time-travel, and the Holy Mother's heart is overflowing all day long, and he is also very hypocritical. He can be lawless if he has a little strength.