Great Qin: No More Hiding, I'm Your Father, Qin Shi Huang

The overall writing is very good, the whole text is funny, the author also corrects a lot of history, the writing is very serious, and the final ending is more appropriate. It's great to watch, I like it

I really can't stand it when I see the big dog begging Zhao Lang for millet and being sentenced to a period of family law... In an era where promises are made with bare hands, a young man sees the girl he likes being carried out by the owner of the house. How does this young man feel? What should he do? Are you so heartbroken that you give up on this girl? Roll up your sleeves and fight with the owner? It seems that the only thing left is to kneel down and beg the master to give this girl to him... And this request made the head of the family misunderstand that the boy was objectifying women, seize the opportunity to deal with the family law, and established his authority.

I saw this book in an advertisement. I originally thought it was a cool article, because that's how it was written at the beginning. However, I don't know why the author changed his mind later. He wanted to create a character for the protagonist, and he also wanted to write to develop the character of the protagonist. You can't write it well in this way, and it's nondescript. Don't you think it's inappropriate, the author? I don't blame others for saying you are popular, but I think the book you wrote is pure love literature. Politically correct.

Not bad, humorous, positive energy, very interesting, refreshing article

This book may have the following shortcomings that are more obvious hh 1. The author lacks vocabulary to describe the character's expressions when speaking. You can always see various characters "speaking coldly" and "speaking lightly" This has almost become the only expression description. Even if you turn to the last two chapters, you can still see the character "speaking coldly" For me, I feel that I don't have to say anything if I don't have words, and I don't have to be cold, light, cold, light all the time. 2. The author's characterization of female characters, the interaction between women and the protagonist, and the expression of emotions are a bit green. Looking at the female characters in this book, one feels that this paragraph and the one described in the previous paragraph are not the same person. When the author describes the emotional exchanges between the protagonists and them, they often give people a shallow and indifferent look, as if these characters are just for the plot. The description of the joy of fish and water is also not satisfactory. 3. The reason why I stopped watching In Chapter 134, the protagonist is in the house of the villain Zhao Xie. After taking a love potion and forcing himself to have sex with Princess Yushu, he carried the wrong person home before he fell into coma. After waking up and realizing that the wrong person was wrong, he did not continue to look for Princess Yushu and went to join the army. The author explained here that Princess Yushu was rescued by Bai Lianhua, but obviously the protagonist did not know that it was Princess Yushu. Well, since I didn't know that the other party was rescued, I took the love potion and raped the other party, and even led the wrong person to him, but I didn't send any subordinates to continue searching. Then the protagonist will appear unkind, unfaithful, and a heartless scumbag. Maybe the author forgot this, and maybe the author will make up for it in the follow-up, but this is also a big drawback and red flag in terms of character creation and perception. I quit because of this. When I turned to the last page, it turned out to be a fantasy novel. I don't mind that Including many of the points that have been criticized by others, I think they are acceptable. I just can't accept that the author lacks flavor in characterization. Okay, moisturize I wish all book lovers a happy reading!

It's well written and quite funny (*^ω^*)

The plot is based on watching a few episodes of the TV series and writing it according to the TV series without any of my own ideas. Time travel? Time travel is a ghost, it is better to copy it according to history. Since time travel, I have no idea to write history. Others have not read history, and they have also watched TV series.

Du Wen, a man who can't even eat enough to eat, the protagonist adopts him. He dares to ask his master for a woman, and always disobeys the protagonist's orders. The protagonist is also sick. Why do you keep looking for girls when you are not interested in her? If you always touch someone's head, you will feel both embarrassed and upright. It's also outrageous that he didn't send his men to search for the person after he was raped so that the villain could find out first, and that the author gave the Hu Renwang's daughter to the protagonist's men to form a pair. The Hu man Wang Guang has 50,000 soldiers, and the protagonist only has a few thousand. You think his men are not strong enough to rebel, so you give him 50,000 soldiers and horses. For your father-in-law, if you can't write, don't mess with the mandarin duck book. From ancient times to the present, there has been an emperor who would marry a princess of a country to his subordinates. The key is that you haven't become the emperor yet. You might as well leave the Hun princess, Koryo princess, and Tubo princess to your subordinates, and the protagonist will be Xianyun Yehe. It makes me really sick when I see it. This is not purely disgusting.

This is one of the most beautiful books I have ever read. It has stayed with me for half a semester and is my source of happiness^ω^

The author himself doesn't have a good understanding of history. If he doesn't know how to write about emotions, he shouldn't write about it. He also wants to write about a disgusting harem. It's not that the harem is disgusting, it's that you wrote it that's disgusting