A First-Rank Commoner

To be honest, this book has a low Tomato rating. No matter from the plot design, various character creations and settings, it feels like you are in a real world. The characters in his works are all flesh and blood, as vivid as a movie, rather than a simple outline of words! The situational dialogue has depth, is not rigid, and has a sense of empathy. You seem to be able to feel the emotions of the characters. The author is remarkable in terms of his writing style. I have to say: There is a lot of spirit in his writing, and you can tell who he is by looking at his writing! Good!

At first I thought it was a cool article! ! As I read it, I became more and more fascinated. The author's writing style made me feel like I was reading a book by Zhang Jiajia, which seemed to be a literary work. Very good, like it

It's really super pretty. It really depicts a scene of troubled times. It's really good-looking. The plot is interlocking and compact. It's not a mindless plot to make a fortune. It's really good-looking.

Like "Swordsman in the Snow", it is a novel that can be used to confer gods. It is not a cool novel, but the plot is so well written that it feels like I have traveled to ancient times. It is the best historical novel I have ever read [Blowing Kiss]

It's really not embarrassing, this is the most detailed description of the characters' emotions among the books I have ever read, and the foreshadowing and pitfalls are well written, unlike other time-traveling and mindless novels. This book has a clear and logical thinking. I feel that the rating of 9.0 Is really low.

Three tips before reading: 1. If you want to read Shuangwen, turn left when going out; 2 The protagonist is just an ordinary person who behaves steadily; 3. The supporting characters' actions have their own logic, and should not be too taken from the protagonist's perspective. This book is very well written. I don't know how to review books, but I think it's beautiful and the writing is smooth. The disadvantage is that it has less refreshment and is not suitable for mainstream tomatoes. I hope the author will continue to work hard! !

The Little Boss from the old racecourse on Sitong Road to Horseshoe Lake is very exciting, passionate and tragic. The struggle of the little people to survive describes the feeling of preferring to be a peace dog rather than a person in troubled times! The old officers, the Tongzi camp, the veteran camp, the petty officials, and the young marquis all died with goosebumps. I wanted to have a fight with my Erha! The people of Di laugh at me for criticizing people who are sick and weak. Look at the ancestors on the city wall who are still able to survive thousands of arrows. I am a person who is strong-willed and strong. Can I shoot well? "I was twenty-four that year. I carried a three-foot simple sword, wore bright clothes and an angry horse. I sat under the city gate and looked at the twenty thousand people who were like pigs and dogs!" Entering Shu and becoming the king of Shu was very dull, not as exciting. It was all about playing tricks with all parties and fighting all the time. The farming research and development equipment was mentioned in one stroke, and the battlefield was described in two strokes. There was no trace of the misery of Wangzhou, the thrill of entering the inner city, the passion, resourcefulness, and danger of running from the inner city to the border and going deep into the grassland! I watched it four times after entering Shu, but I still can't stand it. Maybe I don't have the patience, so I'll just wait until it's over and watch the ending [facepalm] [facepalm]

The pace of the whole book is well controlled, and the plot advances at a suitable pace. Some battle descriptions are not good enough, but overall the flaws are not concealed. For online articles that are updated daily, the author is very capable and has not been carried away by the pace of updates. The entire book has still maintained a consistent style until it is in the later stages of writing, which shows the author's skill and also shows that the author has put a lot of effort into setting the outline.

I love reading it. The whole story has a tight rhythm and there are no watery chapters. It gives people the feeling that the protagonist has solved one problem and has to rush to solve the next one. You will not feel as tired as the characters even if you are involved in it. At this time, when you look back at the number of chapters, you will find that there can be so much content written in one or two hundred chapters, and so many things can happen. The exaggeration of the war and the tragic heroic spirit of the soldiers are moving. It often reminds me of the revolutionary martyrs who were so passionate about defending their home and country. This is a book that made me feel so immersive about poetry for the first time.

I came across this on Douyin. I thought it was a cool article at first, but the more I read, the more strange it became, but I just wanted to read on. It's very well written.