The Peerless Heir

Author, do you really not know how to write? When it comes to the urgency of war, it is not very urgent. When it comes to being funny, it is not funny. This feeling of being caught in the middle is very uncomfortable. You know? There is no artistic conception in the writing, and it is not excessive. The front foot is still fighting, and the back foot is talking about love. The front is still passable, but the back has more and more flaws. What I write later is a bit confusing. These are some small details, but these small details accumulate too much and become a big drawback. There are too many flaws, which affects the texture. Your artistic conception is not quite there yet. The first part of the story was okay. Then I went to the back to investigate the story about the canal builders, and what a saint, and they fell in love during the war. It felt like Luo Liba Suo. The middle was not overly dry. Others were fighting in the front, and suddenly it switched to the two of them having a love affair. There is no war-like artistic conception, and I feel a little bit the same as Shanghai Fortress. In such a tight time, a man and a woman are suddenly inserted into it, and they are still sending messages to fall in love. It's so awkward. This transfer method is sandwiched in the middle, which is really uncomfortable. It was really unpleasant to watch.

I could tolerate it before. You see that the cool articles are devoid of reason and logic, so I could tolerate it, but with all due respect, after reading chapter 327, this book can really be discarded. What is it about? Well, everyone, let me introduce it to you. Your so-called fiancée relies on the fact that she looks like your first love Bai Yueguang, so she can use you as an ATM machine to withdraw money like crazy, and then force you to do that. Your biological grandfather, who is over seventy years old, went to the battlefield, and killed your biological father and brother with her wild men. Then, she told you not to mess around before getting married, but ended up getting pregnant with your enemy's coconut seed behind your back. Finally, one day, when you are successful and can borrow a knife to kill someone, another so-called heroine who comes from the sky says to you, "Oh?! You have to be brave and forgive them"... To be honest, if this kind of author can write this kind of article, I can only say that you should stay away from him. Why? Because when it is struck by lightning, it is easy to harm you. You have just been stabbed by someone, and your blood has not been wiped off yet. He comes over here and says, "Oh?! You have to be brave." Author, are you going to die?!!!!

One word, chaos. All kinds of plots appear. It's a different world. The First Emperor left his footprints, but Xiang Yu didn't appear. Even Journey to the West was published. Who wrote it? But there are no Tang poetry and Song lyrics

I admit that you don't need to use your brain to read novels, but you can't really think that I have no brains. My tongue was cut out. I can't speak for a while, and I can speak again for a while. I have been reading novels for several years, and you are the only one I want to comment on.

Full of foul language, the author must be a junior high school student

Is there anyone still chasing this thing? It's not intelligence, it's just no intelligence at all

It's disgusting, it's so disgusting, and that's 9.2 Points? Qimao, what do you do for food? The protagonist really has no conscience at all as a human being. If you want to write a cool article, you can do it, but writing it like this can no longer be considered cool. It is considered a pure beast. Anyone with normal views will not be able to read it.

Wonderful stories that captivate

I always feel a little confused, but overall it's pretty good.

You Long Aotian! I thought I wouldn't recognize you after you changed into a vest. You can't go to Snow City after that, let alone take the guards there. And don't provoke a guy named Lu Chengwen! Remember, remember!