With Xiao Li's Flying Knife at Full Level, I Will Be a Judge in the Water Margin!

This book possesses the top-notch IP of Xiao Li's Flying Swords and Martial Arts + the classic Water Margin plot and high-quality themes. Unfortunately, the follow-up content has completely failed to live up to its inherent advantages! First of all, the core character collapsed, and the protagonist's positioning was seriously off-kilter. The title of the book focuses on "Maximum Level Xiao Li Flying Knife + Water Margin Judge". It is supposed to be a strong character who relied on his top flying knife skills and calm judge's thinking to establish himself in the officialdom of the Northern Song Dynasty and check and balance the heroes of Liangshan and the power struggles in the court. However, the narrative focus of the entire text has shifted. The protagonist spends a lot of space to deliberately accommodate and please the female supporting characters. The behavioral logic is reduced to a dog-licking style to please. The aura of the judge who is supposed to be decisive in killing and wise and steady is completely gone. The top combat power setting of Xiao Li's flying knife has been idle for a long time. The fierce opening character design of "killing Ximen Qing in one chapter and conquering Wu Song in three chapters" is completely separated, and there is a huge gap in the perception before and after. Secondly, the word count is seriously crimped and the plot is redundant and long-winded. The main plot advances extremely slowly, and a large number of chapters are filled with irrelevant daily chatter, repetitive psychological descriptions, and meaningless interactions with supporting characters. The original work of Water Margin has clear conflicts between court factions, Liangshan forces, and local government. However, this book rarely digs into the political intrigues and the conflicts between Jianghu forces. Instead, it consumes the ink in trivial and boring emotional pulling scenes. The key plot is passed over in one stroke, and irrelevant passages are repeated. The reading rhythm is fragmented, and the further it goes, the more obvious the sense of forced word count. Third, the dual-IP integration is sloppy and the core highlights are completely wasted. Xiao Li's flying knife's characteristics of precision, coldness, and Jianghu rules are almost not reflected. The identity of a judge should be connected with the laws of the Northern Song Dynasty, the rules of officialdom, and the plot of the case. The characters such as Wu Song, Lu Zhishen, and Ximen Qing are heavily instrumentalized and their characterizations are thin. The positions of Liangshan, the conflicts between the government and the people in the Northern Song Dynasty, and the game between the government and the opposition that could have been explored in depth are all marginalized. The hard-core Machiavellian martial arts story is turned into a daily dog-licking story.

The beginning is small and interesting, but as the plot slowly unfolds, I unexpectedly find that the author's writing skills are quite good, and it is quite readable. The characters who appear one after another have different personalities, and there are also outstanding details. If the plot does not collapse later, it will be a good book.

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A different Water Margin, beautiful! I'll save the tickets for you, update soon! !

At the end of the writing, all the gods appear, so it's better to just read the novel about cultivating immortals.

What a pity! What a pity! ! I usually don't want to watch it. I think I'll watch it after I've fattened it up. How come it's gone after I keep it up? T^T

Licking the dog

How did Water Margin become a fantasy novel?

Li Yu, Su Shi, Liu Sanbian, Lu You, Jiang Kui, Zhou Bangyan, "The east wind blooms flowers on thousands of trees at night, and even blows down the stars like rain." "The road is filled with the fragrance of carved BMWs. The sound of phoenix flutes, the light of jade pots, and the dancing of fish and dragons all night long." "The moths are covered with golden strands of snow and willows, and the laughter is full of hidden fragrance." "The crowd searched for him thousands of times. Suddenly I looked back, and there he was, in a dimly lit place." Xin Qiji is still better