Douluo: Shadow Demon Scythe, Angrily Attacks Yu Xiaogang at the Beginning

I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw the hidden identity. It was fine at first. Why don't you give Old Jack two gold coins? Do you still know how to repay your kindness? The registration fee was earned by my own work, and there was no story about eating from hundreds of families. It doesn't matter if I don't give it, but even if it helps, give me two gold coins? Who is disgusting? No, Xiao Bie San's Xiu Luo Shen is gone, and you are still Bibi Dong's disciple, and you still have to hide your identity? Hidden for more than 300 chapters, I really can't stand it. It's a fanfic. What's so touching about it? Move yourself? I'm speechless. I still had some brains at first. I started writing randomly after leaving the killing city.

How to say it? Sorry, I really can't give a good review. After all, if the author wrote it himself, the previously changed settings should have been changed later, but some places are still the same as the original work, so... Stop drinking fake wine and give the author some snacks. I can only say that the plot is okay and the content is barely acceptable. Watch it when you want to kill time, just don't use your brain...

I feel that the author is too dark. The master and Tang San in the original work may indeed have problems, but the people written here are too dark.

The writing is too messy. It's chapter 100 and it doesn't say what level the protagonist's soul power is. I can't understand what the hell it's about. It keeps writing a bunch of nonsense about Rhaast and Kayn. The main character's growth is unremarkable. If you really don't know how to write, don't write it. Write it like an AI 😅

Many places are pasted and copied without correction, and there are many typos. Many things are made out of nothing. There is obviously a lack of opportunity. Tang San and the others are still cheating and flying. It can be said that it is the same whether there is an opportunity or not. The author's memory is also not good. What happened in the previous chapter will not be remembered in the next chapter. He is clearly said to be a tall man of more than two meters. The next second he is the same height as everyone else, and his appearance has not changed. I can't stand it anymore...

When I heard Tangshan's sentence in Chapter 43, I laughed out loud. As a decent person, I wanted to eradicate the Demon Sect for Shota. I found it funny_I see that the Tang Sect's Baolu kills people at every turn. I feel more like the Demon Sect.

Before the killing, the writing was very good, I was moved. After the killing, the protagonist pretended to be dead, etc., It was still very messy, and it didn't match up to the previous article. In short, after the killing, it was nothing.

Expose yourself as a time traveler at the beginning

Copy paste + comment? Brainless novice + tool man?

The plagiarism check rate of this book is at least 30%. We can block this book and the author now.