Total Avatar: Return of the Grim Reaper

After reading dozens of chapters, the author's writing style and mentality are very childish. Although it is a fanfic, it completely misinterprets the settings of each character in the original work. The setting in the original work is that the peak-level characters are all about the same strength (even Ye Busha). No one is necessarily better than others. The setting here is the division and ranking of strength levels. "This fanfic has completely subverted the setting of the original work. The author has a child's mentality. What he writes is that if you rank lower than me, you will definitely lose. What's the point of competition in this way?"

After reading a hundred chapters, it's still hard to write a game fanfic like this, and it's hard to grasp all the data. I can only say that this book is better than the other one, but still not great. The overall plot of the first two hundred chapters is not much different from the original work, but the plot development is indeed a lot faster (a lot of data is missing) At the moment, there is only one thing that is difficult for me to accept. In order to highlight the protagonist, the author stole a lot of Ye Xiu's scenes, and then wrote that Ye Xiu didn't think about it carefully. It is really just to attract the protagonist and can't think of other plots to criticize.

If you have forgotten the original book of Avatar, it is better to treat it as a book that you have not read. The ideas are all about the protagonist, but after watching Avatar, it suppresses Ye Xiu by half of his strength, embodying the protagonist. For those who have read Avatar, this book suppresses Ye Xiu and reflects the protagonist. Follow the plot of Avatar. People who have read Avatar want to watch the World Championships, but this book does not. It just adds the protagonist and emotional drama according to the original book. If you watch Avatar again, you will feel that it is nondescript and childish, or if you ignore the protagonist, you will watch Avatar again.

When will the World Invitational Tournament be updated?

It's okay. I followed the main line of the original work, but in the end I thought Su's knights were very strong, and they weren't fought with old characters.

What about the World Championship?

It's so beautiful. I don't have any culture. The author is cheating.

Alas, the tediously written emotional drama is also mediocre.

Too boring

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