Traveling Through the Courtyard with the Game Panel

No wonder the rating is low, villains like Xu Damao and Deputy Factory Director Li, with such a big background as the protagonists, actually let them punish themselves one after another!

Let me talk about the conclusion first, the author is a novice! This book is too late to be completed! Then there's the reason. . . First, this book actually has more than 260 chapters? When we headed south to Hong Kong Island, it was already over! . . Second, the author did not understand how to write a novel and what readers want to read. These all have their basic principles! Taking this book as an example, if you go to Siheyuan, you can watch the torture of birds or punish evil and promote good people. If you go to Hong Kong Island, you can watch gangsters or beauties in the entertainment industry! The result? ? ? The protagonist reaches more than 700 chapters and is not even married yet! Not even a woman? ? ? ! ! ! Sha'ezi hangs around me all day long. Is it for you to see? ? ? Or your outline will have an explanation after 1,000 chapters, but now it's unfinished after more than 700 chapters. What's the use? Regardless of priority! I can't write the key points! There is one more thing, focus on it below! . . Third, from more than 200 chapters to more than 700 unfinished chapters, there are more than 500 chapters. When you meet a person, you will introduce the origin and achievements; when you meet a company, you will introduce the establishment status! I want to read these, why don't I check certain subjects by myself? ? ? ! ! ! Do you need the number of water words that you are so proud of here? ! If novels were written like this, who wouldn't know how to write them? I can write a million words casually! He... Tui...!

The sea, you are all water

Fake benevolence, fake righteousness, courtyard, rubbish📚. Go find a factory to make screws.

You can watch it, it looks okay in the early stage, but it doesn't feel so good later on!

A bit of a saint! I feel like I want to whitewash certain people or things

It was okay at the beginning, but in the middle I started to feel a little less comfortable.

As an author, you can't just scrape up the word count, and you can't repeat every paragraph of the previous chapter in each chapter.

I read Chapter 180, but it's not interesting. There is no table of contents at the back, so I can't jump to it even if I want to, so I just gave up.

Who wants to have a blind date arranged by an 18-year-old brother? I also spent all my family savings. This is just a blind date. If you say that the blind date is successful and you are ready to get married, you can understand a little bit. But at that time, I didn't even have enough to eat, so I spent all my money to buy big things just for a blind date, and I still listened to the arrangements of a little brother who had just grown up. Do you think it's normal? You won't be able to live well in the future. What if the blind date fails? Is this something a normal person can do?