In the Snow: People Are in Beiliang, and They Use Their Power to Overwhelm Others.

There are just a few shortcomings. Personal opinion. For example, if the protagonist kills a future stumbling block in advance, then a new stumbling block should appear according to normal procedures. For example, if there is no Beiliang, then the protagonist may be Beire or Beiyuwen. . .

After reading more than a hundred chapters, General Manager Xue Zhong can see the feeling of Jin Yong's writing of Jianghu. Everyone is the protagonist and everyone is a Jianghu. The most interesting thing about Snow is the hologram, especially the depiction of human nature and experiences. The feeling of Xuezhong in this book is that he is not skilled enough and only adds to the laughing stock, forcing his wits down and showing off without any brains. In order to emphasize the title of the book, it is not what Xuezhong should be like at all. It is simply outrageous. Stop wearing Xuezhong's hat and consume the world of Xuezhong.

Worth a visit!

This is in line with what I think of the snow in the snow, the beacon fire plays on the princes, the snow in the snow is not free and easy enough, not happy enough, and does not avenge any revenge. He imitates Jin Yong, the Tianlong Babu, and wants to make Xu Fengnian into a person like Qiao Feng. However, Qiao Feng's mother was killed, there is a little People do evil things, which leads to tragedy. His mother was killed because he was worried about the reincarnation of Zhenwu. The second generation of the Northern Liang King of the Xu family couldn't hold it down anymore. He wanted to strangle it in the cradle because it was unreasonable and nothing happened. Therefore, the Liyang Dynasty was disgusting enough and it should be destroyed.

I really can't stand it, it's a stupid piece of writing

Looking forward to the follow-up

It's really too wordy and boring. It's forty chapters and I can't get out of the palace. You can find that the whole chapter is basically talking and describing psychological activities. How is this different from a primary school student's journal? The plot progress is really too slow and I can't watch it at all.

The article was written by nature, and it was accidentally obtained by a clever hand.

It can be regarded as another style of Snow in the Snow. So far, it seems to be pretty good. I am also a fan of the original novel. This book can be regarded as filling my need to read Snow in the Snow! I hope the author can work hard and maintain the style.

It's very detailed. It's the best fanfic I've read so far, and it's also the best snow fanfic. The author has a very thorough understanding of the original work, and a thorough study of the character settings, and even the description and writing techniques of the original work. To make up for regrets, to make up for many regrets, without destroying the framework and settings of the original work, and without destroying the original character settings, this is fan fiction. The protagonist Xu Fengnian is not like someone else who traveled through a time-travel similar to Seizing the Body. It is like Da Mengyi who read the original work once and then became a "book reader" who is a higher level than Huang Sanjia. The so-called system is mainly auxiliary, not the focus. The author did not want to describe the series of battles in too much detail at the end, but simply crushed them with gunpowder, defeating the opponent with the technology of the era. Later, the grand battle scene of the battle in the Central Plains was also briefly mentioned, which was very good. It would be okay if I didn't write about that. There is a river and lake in the snow. It would be good to write about the river and lake. Wu Nanbei and Li Dongxi just didn't appear. There is no Lu Chengyan's "Lamp name in exchange for life, my life in exchange for his life", but she married Xu Fengnian in a marriage at the end. It seems that Xu Ying didn't write it in the end. He appeared in the Qin Emperor's Mausoleum and then stopped to absorb the death energy inside. It was said that Xu Ying would be brought out after the absorption was completed, but then there was no further description. I don't know if Xu Ying was among the people who ascended. The author writes about what Xu Fengnian said to Xu Xiao, "Dad, you have to live well. Only by living well can you see your mother again." There is no explanation at the end of this sentence, but in the end, everyone ascended. It seems to be after leaving the world where Jianlai came, and then it ended.