The Qinghe Immortal Clan

The author's writing of fighting scenes is really poor. For example, in the previous fight between Song Qingming and Zhou Jintang, the talisman thrown by Song Qingming lost its spiritual energy and turned into waste paper after hitting the blue light released by Zhou Jintang's crystal ball. Song Qingming took out several talismans and activated them midway, but they were all blocked. So the question is, what kind of attack did the talisman thrown by Song Qingming turn into? Is it turning into a wind blade, fireball, ice cone or something else? You, the author, don't write any of these details. Not only that, you write all the fighting scenes very vaguely. There are very few details about the attacks of magic weapons. If you don't write details about the immortal cultivator's fight, it looks really boring. It's not interesting at all, and it's impossible for readers to get involved.

In Chapter 1200, it will become a stallion book. If you don't like it, you can choose not to read it. At the same time, you will say that you are cautious. When you have two women, you will keep telling your little secrets... I don't know how to be cautious.

It's a family-type fairy tale, I highly recommend reading it! The author writes about a small family that developed and grew step by step under the leadership of the son of destiny, and wrote about numerous characters (nearly ten generations, a large number of names, I have praised the author). Each generation has a mission, and each has its own destiny. It can be described as magnificent. It's just that the protagonist has too many copies, and the combat descriptions are not good. There are also emotional descriptions. The eldest wife Huang Siyuan was originally a forced political marriage. Later, they fell in love while they were starting a business together for a long time. After many twists and turns, they came together. The description of this character's relationship is worth watching, but what the hell did Li Xuanyi and Bai Yuxian forcefully open a harem later? ! I guess Huo Xiamo from behind will also be taken away? Are those without feelings, passion, or even those without much karma included in the harem? If you take the fire phoenix back later, there will be something to behold. After all, the two have been linked for a long time. Personally, I think the emotional scene should be written about Huang Siyuan in the overt line. After all, they are a married couple, and they have really supported each other since they were young, which is also in line with the character of the male protagonist who values ​​his family; the dark line is about the fire phoenix, several times of fetters, the hostility between the human race and the demon race... And they finally come together, which is very promising.

The impression is very bad. The Xiaoyao Sect has repeatedly used words to pressure Song Qingming in disguised form, using the future of the family to contain the protagonist, his sister and his wife, which is a soft threat. But instead of taking precautions, the protagonist swore allegiance to the sect. Protecting relatives is the highlight of family novels, and the protagonist always gives in and tolerates them. As a middle-aged man, it is difficult for this novel to keep the set of checks and balances in reality intact and put them into the novel.

It's okay to look at it from the front, but it's terrible from the back.

It was okay before Chapter 1,000, but it got really bad after that! All kinds of female cultivators started posting!

I have read more than 1,300 chapters. The author's conception is okay, but others are just average. Some abbreviations can be omitted, but the ones other than the protagonist are too specific! As for the protagonist, he has learned several top-level techniques and several top-level weapons. He can't even kill people beyond his level. He can only fight with people of the same level for a long time, and it's a tie! There are also problems with other settings. For example, the demon clan in the Nascent Soul stage has both Nascent Soul and Demon Core. The description of the fighting scenes is a bit bland and not exciting enough. They are already in the Golden Core Phase. The fight was life-and-death, but there was a truce at night. Could it be that it was dark and invisible? The protagonist often celebrates by having a meal together when he is happy, and the writing is just like modern people! There are 9 levels in the Nascent Soul stage, and there are celestial phenomena at each level's breakthrough. Isn't that necessary?

Overall, it's pretty good, except that the progress of the novel is relatively slow, and each of the last ten chapters has about 1,000 words that are repeated over and over again. As a result, the content is not coherent.

Why is it that after more than 1,200 chapters, there is a problem with the sorting? There are many duplicate chapters, and the chapter titles are not even written.

The setting is general, and the foundation-building pill requires 800 kinds of elixirs and a variety of medicinal materials. Ha, according to this way of writing, what kind of elixir can be successfully practiced? Then there are cheats. It would be better to have a system for signing in to gain longevity. Not to mention that the area of ​​a county is as big as the whole of China. There are countless monsters in the county that can be killed by small families? You taste it, is it in the river?