I'm Really Not the Child of Destiny

10 Points or even 9 points are messy, the early development is too slow, the later levels are extremely confusing, and the deadlift progress is started towards the end. The boy is so handsome, and all the girls love him, but he doesn't really go too far at all. I thought the fight was over, but an ancient god, the Immortal King, appeared in the last two pictures. I started fighting for my parents, my little apprentice, and my little apprentice🥹. I felt that the plot was very confusing and my ideas were not clear. Just by looking at the levels, I can't understand that everything was fine at the beginning, but very strange at the end. From saint to saint king to great saint, then to quasi-immortal, true immortal, quasi-emperor, great emperor, and then suddenly back to the immortal king😰😰, it's really confusing. The level of the weapon is not clear either. Did you say that the chessboard is a weapon of the Immortal King? Later, it suddenly became a great tool😇😇. It was really messy.

Mrs. Xiuwei is so slow. I've read half of the 500 chapters and I'm still building the foundation.

Do you have any good book recommendations?

Talking all the time

The plot is good, the combat power is neither super strong nor overly obscene, and the humorous events make it comfortable to watch.

I feel like it's unfinished. The first two or three hundred pictures were all in Wanning Garden, but in the end there were more than a hundred pictures, and I went straight to the Immortal King level to fight. The subject matter is good, but the writing is too poor.

I watched it in junior high school, and now I'm watching it again. Although the writing is average, I liked it as a junior high school student.

It's pretty good, the writing is witty and humorous, and the storyline is fun and interesting but not brainless. Take advantage of opportunities and expand profits to grow together, instead of being like other novels that first demote the child of luck to be useless and have a bad character, and then cut off all opportunities and shape the protagonist into a selfish and self-righteous villain. There is fighting but not mindless fighting to the death. There is not much inexplicable and unprovoked intrigue. The main enemy is external evil spirits. The existing problems are: 1. The expression of the realm is a bit confusing, which makes it difficult for readers to figure out which one is strong and which is weak, which one is superior and which is inferior. For example, the tribulation period is also called a saint, the Mahayana period is also called a great emperor, and there are quasi-immortals and true immortals who seem to be weaker than the great emperor. Anyway, I didn't figure it out in the end, so I'll just give it a try. 2. Many places are too watery, some places are too compact, and the space occupied by each plot is not arranged well enough. Overall, it's a good work.