Wuxia Crossover: Build a Thriving Clan, Starting by Marrying Yaoyue

The days are long…infinite harem..🔥👌

There are indeed a lot of harems in this book, but there is no such plot at all. Even if it is described a little bit, it will be okay, otherwise it will lose some meaning, hahaha😁😁😁

Generally speaking, the setting of taking the wife is passable, but the setting of giving birth to children is a bit ridiculous. Every wife is pregnant and keeps giving birth, and the children born do not even have names,,, and there is the crushing of the void. It is very embarrassing to watch. I can't imagine what the scene of crushing the void is like, how to pinch it, everyone else is shattering the void, the author wants to be special, but can't think of good words.

The protagonist is a licking dog. It can be seen that no matter what a good-looking woman does, whether to kill him or hurt his wife, the protagonist will not even give any punishment from the beginning to the end. He will lick without any bottom line, not even a little forced. From the beginning to the end, he is setting up his character, as if the protagonist is the person who respects women the most in the world, to dilute other people's impression of him. To be honest, I have no problem with you being nice to your wife. You can lick even the enemies who have not yet been taken down.

If you write well, you will definitely be a leader in the novel world in the future.

It's amazing to watch half of it. I can't stand it until I reach ten chapters. This is simply Yun Zhonghe's highlight moment. The Yihua Palace and the Valley of Evil are in tit-for-tat opposition. Wei Wuji is even more promiscuous. Is the Grandmaster level so good? Poisoning Yun Zhonghe is something that is not just a slap in the face. Yun Zhong He Yue Lao San was not convinced.

The more you get to the back, the more boring it becomes, the flow of writing, the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are a mess💩

Generally speaking, the protagonist's golden finger is too big, winning all the way, and there is basically no conflict plot. The biggest man-made conflict plot is Murong Fu's part, but it is not written well. Murong Fu only had the intention to seize the protagonist's family property, but did not implement it. On the surface, he sent two maids and a generous dowry to please the protagonist, but the protagonist killed him in return for the crime of conspiracy, which obviously cannot be justified on the surface. It's like someone wanted to rape a girl, and the girl turned around and killed the person after knowing it. Is this reasonable? The biggest natural conflict plot is the part of overcoming the tribulation. Logically speaking, it is a plot with a relatively severe conflict. However, it was also scrapped by the author. The reasons are: First, the protagonist did not make any preparations before overcoming the tribulation. Lin Chaoying said that there is a risk of failure in overcoming the tribulation. The protagonist cannot not know it. As a person with normal IQ Generally speaking, we should find ways to improve the success rate of overcoming the tribulation, such as preparing some defensive formations, defensive weapons, etc. However, the protagonist rushes into overcoming the tribulation in a hurry without making any preparations, and even succeeds in overcoming the tribulation easily. It is purely based on the author's writing and lacks logical self-consistency, so it is meaningless. When the author wrote about the section about overcoming the tribulation, he wrote that the reason for the success of overcoming the tribulation easily was attributed to the relatively large golden elixir and the special reward of getting 20 wives. This was not prepared in advance and the protagonist did not know it in advance. Second, the tribulation area is a death zone. Anyone else who enters will be killed by the thunder tribulation. Therefore, according to logic, the protagonist should warn his wife, relatives and friends in advance not to set foot in that area, or even move to a deserted place to survive the tribulation. Even if no one is accidentally injured, the thunder tribulation demolishing the flowers and plants of his own house is a serious loss. As a result, the protagonist ignores it and directly goes through the tribulation in his own home. Doesn't he care about the life and death of his family? Don't you care about the damage to your property?

This is not a bus to kindergarten

How should I put it? In harem stories, the timeline is quite messy. I don't know what the author is thinking. The author might be a... Real man.