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666 There is also the matter of Yin Zhiping
When is the best time to give birth to a baby dragon? It is best to inherit the entry

Have you really read Zhe Tian? I laughed when I read the title synopsis of the book. Can a ruthless person kill the protagonist with just one slap?

I still don't want to see reborn people sign such a 50/50 company contract. There are also liquidated damages, these things are complete restraints. Just a few words after signing the contract, and a reborn person with a system is trapped. Don't say that there is no company, no opportunities, etc. You are the protagonist, why don't you make some money first? What's more, you're hooking up with Da Tiantian.

Five hundred chapters later, it's still something inexplicable.
Electromagnetism is here, what kind of hydrology is it that can be written in such a silly and refreshing way?

Everything else is fine, even the first ring of the millennium, but only the fifth ring and below can be hidden. In Notting City, Tang Hao, a titled Douluo, was very vicious under his nose.

If Wang Bo is proud of himself and becomes emperor, he will probably challenge Dong Huang. Chaos body can basically reach the strength of Emperor of Heaven if he becomes emperor. It will not be easy for Dong Huang to defeat Wang Bo.

The Nine Heavenly Lords are from the age of mythology. What are you talking about in the ancient times?

The plot is rubbish and the protagonist is rubbish too
The protagonist is a typical villain who goes wild when he succeeds. Before level 10, the protagonist is normal. After level 10, he has no brains. He is even more disgusting than Tang San.

Can't keep it
If you can't keep it, you can't keep it. The more you follow it, the better it gets. You can't guess the next plot, which is more interesting.

Compared with those cookie-cutter time travel stories, rebirth stories are a hundred times better looking.

I can't understand even if I copy it! The fishing ground inherited by the protagonist is on a small island of 400 to 500 square meters. What is amazing is that there is a small town with 500 people living on this small island of about 300-400 square meters. The fishing ground of the protagonist has a manor covering an area of 100,000 acres at the southern end of the island🤐🤐 There is a lake more than ten meters away from the protagonist's house. The area of the lake is not small. There are many fisheries on this island that are raised in this lake. To sew plagiarized novels, you also have to whiten the data!

The writing is very interesting, I hope the author will work harder

The content of "Zha Tian" is okay. When it comes to the perfect plot, you just make it up. Please stop talking nonsense. If you really can't do it, watch "Perfect World" again.

I can still read it before, but after I entered the sect, all I wrote was a mess, it's really disgusting🤢

1111111111111 If you can put together a few words, you won't be able to boast.

The timeline is so confusing! When writing a fan timeline, the settings of the main characters cannot be changed, otherwise it would be boring! It's better to just write a fiction!

In the original work, the Ice Emperor Scorpion Spirit is indeed possible. But can you let Huo Yuhao wait a little longer? The two dragon souls under the ice and fire eyes are as good as the ice dragon souls and just give them to Huo Yuhao to absorb? Then the other fire dragon soul can be directly used as his seventh soul ring, even if the characteristics are different. Hey, yes, the god-level soul ring is the Titan Azure Bull Python, and the only thing left is this half-dead remnant soul of ice and fire with a trace of sanity left. Also, please don't search for Ma Xiaotao and become an evil soul master. A day is a lifetime.

The protagonist has a problem with his IQ, and Flanders can't grasp whale glue at all, so he just says it so fluently? Although Douluo is mentally ill and his sworn enemies want to win him over, you must have the aura of a protagonist, otherwise you will be just a man on the side of the road, captured and bred.

Sorry guys, the author has never written a book. I don't know how to write it, so I separated the first and second chapters into two books. If you want to read the first chapter of Search Pen Is Also the Sword, you can do it.

The author has entered the palace, and five-star installments are given...

Author, author, please update soon. There are already more than 1,000 chapters. Try to write as many endings as possible, as well as the plot behind it. Your work is good enough, but I have been waiting for you to update for too long, and I am almost depressed.

This is a really good novel, Dog Licking Tang San. Does the author have any penguins or something? I want to go in and see how much fun it would be.

Finished reading
I thought I was following a finished book, but then I found out that it was not updated, so when will it be updated?

Interesting!
The protagonist of the Indian cheating story is a bit interesting.

Too much
It's like a fighter among the garbage. I can't stand it after reading 7 chapters. The golden three chapters are so messed up for you. You don't even report rebels as an opportunity to get promoted. How can you say that officials don't treat refugees as human beings? If he doesn't treat the refugees as human beings, how can he help the victims? Left and right brain fighting?

Your shoes are too detailed, and the pace of the plot is too slow. This chaotic young man is a bit useless. Wouldn't he be able to absorb Chaos Qi to recover on his own? There is so much Chaos Qi in the void, but he has to absorb the fire attribute. Isn't your setting a little bit a little bit, and Chaos Qi shouldn't have a little bit of all attributes, and it's pure.

It's not like the sect doesn't have soul bones. Why would you absorb an eight-thousand-year-old soul bone?

Answers to some questions from book friends who are confused about the contents of the book
Some book friends mentioned that the protagonist, the all-powerful Long Aotian, is not quite right. Except for politics, economy, military, and even the machine drawings, which he obtained from his previous life's politics and hobbies, other systems provided him with cement, medical skills, cooking skills, national arts, and firearms modification. Most of them he was unable to master. After all, it was not a framework for cultivating immortals, and his lifespan was limited. He could only pick out three improvements by referring to national arts, and the rest could only be regarded as theoretical knowledge to deal with the enemy. In other words, the protagonist will only pick and learn the things that can play the greatest role for him, and teach others the rest, such as machine blueprints. Without modern tools and no time to study, he can only rely on Zhang Shuhen to put them into practice in the contemporary context, such as cement, given to Zhu For the political purpose of gaining favor, cooking and medical skills also need time to accumulate, so both were handed over to Wan'er, who was more suitable. The latter only selected the parts that could relieve muscle fatigue to learn. It was still under Wan'er's gaze and using companions to increase clinical experience, so he could barely get started. Therefore, talent does not mean that one can master an idea as soon as it comes, and one can grow in martial arts only by sparring with Aman. The modification of firearms is not yet useful, so it is a foreshadowing. As for why the protagonist is trapped in Yingtian Mansion and does not help Lao Zhu's family to do important business, I can only say that ordinary people in the Hongwu Dynasty did not hold any official positions. Even if they were protected by Lao Zhu's family, if they wanted to implement these policies in the Chaotang Group headed by Hu Weiyong, it could be said to be a recipe for death. Moreover, the protagonist was forced into the Zhang Qian case, and he was in a constant conflict with Hu Weiyong. Whenever he dared to leave Yingtian Mansion, he would die outside without going far. The protagonist also tried to vaguely mention whether Hu Weiyong could be dealt with. He could definitely do it, but he should be clear about the consequences of rashly taking action without a suitable excuse. The old Zhu family would not be so stupid. In this case, the protagonist can only participate in political intrigue and internal strife, while increasing his value in the heart of the old Zhu family, while using the momentum of the old Zhu family to develop his own power before the Jin Yiwei spread. If he wants Ying Tianfu Yin's assets, he wants to set up his own intelligence agency, and the same reason is true for sending Zhang Shuhen to the court. He wanted to start the Shilin Talks, but also wanted to improve his reputation in the literary world. He learned martial arts just to not rely on others for everything and to protect himself in critical moments. All he did was to allow himself to stand safely on the side of the court without being an official, not to enter the killing line of Lao Zhu, and not to be easily crushed by the Huaixi nobles and a group of high-ranking officials. There was no disconnect between ability and behavioral logic. The rivers and lakes forces also appear as the protagonist's help, which can be regarded as an introduction. They really come into play when the time is ripe. After the protagonist leaves Yingtian Mansion, there are not many of them. Previously, they mostly stood in line and served as the sword in the hands of the two major forces of the Hongwu Dynasty. The appearance of the protagonist can make the Five Mountains Alliance no longer just a 'useful object', while Wudang Mountain covers the three mountains and appears as a hostile force. But no matter what, the rivers and lakes are the rivers and lakes, and they cannot fight against a large-scale regular army. No matter how high your martial arts skills are, you still have to lie on the ground to fire a salvo, so there will be no possibility of overestimating the guest and even leading to collapse. If you still have any questions, please feel free to ask them again. If there are any questions, I will correct them. If there are no questions, I will answer them.

The first eighty chapters are still exciting and moving. Although the subsequent chapters are also excellent, they still pale in comparison to the first eighty chapters.

I couldn't bear it after seeing dozens of photos. The relationship was exposed when they were photographed kissing each other, but the result was that they didn't even hold hands a few times. If you wanted to write about innocence, you should have written it a year earlier. A group of teammates are trying to make Taeyeon not feel lonely? Substitute? This is how I feel after watching dozens of them😐I like Girls' Generation, but I can't accept this way of writing, and I can't take on the role of the protagonist

Well written, a very good Dou Er fanfic, but I feel like the treasures in the eyes of Binghuo Liangyi should be put into the sea of spirits, and finally sublimate the sea of spirits into the world in the mind

Um. . . The upgrade is too fast and too slow. It feels very complicated.
How can I say that it only took less than a year to complete the Qi training to the middle stage of foundation building. In a world like this where mortals are cultivating immortals, it is too fast. I used Zhuguo Lingpeach, Divine Spring, Fairy Bean, and Strange Fire, etc., And it only went from perfect Qi training to the middle stage of foundation building. Such a good thing cannot break through to a big level through upgrading. For a person with dual spiritual root qualifications and no special physique, it is too slow. Tsk, it is really weird and complicated.

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