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The writing is delicate and touched me a lot
I still haven't read the original work, and I'm still scribbling
author
You should choose to change the protagonist. Both novels are the protagonists of the original works, which cannot attract the interest of reading the novel.
It looks good, I hope the author will update it ten times a day
What a great novel, I read it in one sitting
I've just read Chapter 18. If nothing happens, I will watch it till the end. If something happens, it will only delay me a little bit. I was attracted when I saw the introduction. Then I looked at the author's homepage. It turned out to be the author who wrote the ending of Xiao Yan joining the Soul Palace. At that time, I became even more convinced that this book was worth reading.
The writing was okay in the early stage, but it became more and more watery in the part about going south, middle, and north. I added long and embarrassing lyrical parts, and wrote about meaningless trivial things and psychological activities. The word count is just water.
From what I've read so far, I'm looking forward to what's coming next.
The description of things is very picturesque, but it's a pity that you have to convert typos and wrong words by yourself😅
Entering the palace and being imprisoned?
Why is there no update today? Did you really get in?
It's really stupid. By the time you finish talking about the perfect world, you must have had millions of words, right? Do you want to drink water? It's true that anyone can write a novel. 😐😐
Isn't it going to be updated today? It hasn't been updated yet.
Good book recommendation-don't leave, just leave
Not bad, overall good enough, but the plot progress was too slow for a while.
Who is the heroine? Gu Yuena is not there, right?
This book gives me the feeling that the author neither understands DND nor Magic: The Gathering, and his combat skills are too ridiculous, and the protagonist is purely on the sidelines. To be honest, this kind of unlimited flow is the best for stacking combat power. You can keep changing maps. However, the author keeps suppressing combat power. It almost makes me red.
How can you be so shameless when your handwriting is so bad and you still dare to charge money?
Short and weak. So little. It was gone in an instant. Are you okay? It's fine enough (🥴🥴🥴🥴)
Why can't Jayton beat Melba😦
You Wotian, Hongtian, you have so much local characteristics. Come on, your writing is very good.
The book is good
It is estimated that it will take tens of thousands of chapters to become a saint with this rhythm.
Tian Dihao's brothers rarely studied at Tianjin University
Update time
The update time is too cloudy. It changes every day. Can you fix it?
Heroine Recruitment Building!
Let's talk about some follow-up ideas first. The protagonist should join Wuhun Palace in the future. In order to achieve his goal, he will have some intersection with Hu Liena. Others have not been decided yet. If you have any heroines you want to see, you can tell us in the comment area. This book takes the route of having multiple female protagonists.
Very good-looking and well-designed, eh. I hope you can continue to update while sitting down.
Can I add cigarettes and betel nut to make it look better?
Today's chapter (Chapter 280), brothers, hurry up and read it
This chapter must be very difficult. I will try to pre-review it first. If it really doesn't work, I will send it straight and then change it. In short, brothers, please read it as soon as it is released.
It will look better if you update it quickly
The setting of the story is okay, but the imagination is not enough, but there is nothing I can do about it. The author of gold fingers with special skills or systems like this is often not as big as the readers. Just like collecting Devil Fruits, the most popular ones are definitely the Yonko Group and the Undersea Prison. If you have sliced fruits and imitation fruits, you can imitate a slightly famous pirate and join the Yonko Group. If you don't say anything else, if you become an animal type and join the beasts, it will be much faster than collecting it in some detention force.
Why have you stopped updating again? Don't stop updating?
I haven't seen such a good-looking novel in a long time. I must work hard and read more👍🤞👍
Damn it, why do you stop updating it just by writing it?
Why did you stop updating for so long? Are you not going to write anymore?
You don't have to look at it to know. If you cheat in 3 minutes, cheat. 😫
I beg you all to read and collect
The internal investment has passed, feel free to eat it boldly. If you have any questions, please ask me to correct it. I beg all readers to collect and read.
Made into a short play
It was made into a short play. After watching it, a lot of plots and characters were deleted. The whole drinking bureau was deleted, and the heroine's brother was also deleted. So many plot events are gone. It is not outstanding among other short plays. If it were made according to the novel, it would be wonderful and comprehensive.
After reading the novel now, I feel that the young master has many love rivals
If there is a setting of childhood sweethearts, just write a single female protagonist. Why do you need a harem? Is it easy to write a harem drama?
In the comment section of a certain video, I saw someone claiming to be Guozi's former student, saying that Guozi is now a class teacher in a junior high school. If this is true, based on the time, Guozi should be in the first grade of junior high school this year... Can Guozi be updated this year?
Use 1,000 words to write the first chapter of "Garbage among Garbage". Use content
generally
The author can be said to be King Akaashi. In the beginning, the younger brother kills the protagonist once, and the protagonist just intimidates his younger brother, turns around and wanders around, and is kidnapped and threatened by his younger brother. Then the protagonist discovers that he has an inhuman body. Later, he learns that his younger brother has obtained SSR skills. He talks about revenge against his younger brother, but in fact he never thought about it. It's a garbage plot. No wonder no one watched it.
This book is pretty good
She is a very sober heroine. I personally feel that the heroine is more of a layperson, not a career type, although she has indeed been working conscientiously. This book can be regarded as a follow-up. The ending was a bit fast and I didn't even realize it until it was finished. Overall, it was pretty good. The lead male lead should be Lin Yongsi. It's rare to see such a true gentleman as the main character. I don't seem to have mentioned what happened to my grandfather. I wonder if there will be a sequel.
The more you write, the more rubbish you get
I have written more than two hundred chapters and still haven't solved Rhaenyra and Daemon. There are a lot of good comments in the comment area saying that the killing is decisive, but how decisive is it? Let's talk about it bit by bit. The first point is the setting of the protagonist. He is said to be a time traveler, but in fact he can be said to be a native who knows the plot. He is even more Targaryen than Targaryen. Especially after a hundred chapters or so, it gives people the feeling of being crazy and about to get sick from time to time. Apart from knowing the plot, the setting of the time traveler is completely invisible. The second point is the plot, which can also be said to be the protagonist's style of doing things. The plot against cheese can be said to be a sadistic killing. He has no idea why he did it in front of his subordinates. He is just looking for trouble to create his own brutal image. The third point is about dragon fighting, especially the scene where the protagonist fights against Rhaenys. Two of the protagonist's dragons fight against one of the opponent's dragons. Eight of the ten attacks by one's side are missed, and the opponent's attack is sure to hit. The writing is really rubbish. I suggest you not write it and let the AI write it. The fourth point is the issue of decisive killing. There were obviously at least two or three opportunities to kill Daemon and Rhaenyra directly, but they missed it every time. I wonder what you are worried about? Didn't you also commit parricide? Even the nobles are killed, aren't they? And the protagonist himself has always said that he doesn't care about the reputation of the Seven Kingdoms, so what are you doing? Really mentally ill. The fifth point is the succession of the throne. The most outrageous thing is here. In the previous plot, he inexplicably swore to his father that he would not be the king. Of course, the author has already said that he will arrange for his wife to be the queen, so what else do you plan to do to dethrone Geng? You have been quarreling with Rhaenyra Daemon over the succession of the throne, and now you have arranged for Aegon to be the king. Then you, the author, said that the protagonist's wife and children will inherit the throne, and Aegon also has a child. MD, let's continue the quarrel, right? It's purely against the will of God, and arranges to kill Aegon at the end of the plot. What about his wife and children? You have to be forced to death, right? I don't know what I was thinking about arranging this kind of plot. There are other things I don't want to talk about, I'm tired.
Author, you're not going to do the thing where the male protagonist has a harem, are you?
It's very beautiful and pretty good. Come on, the author, work hard.