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Tang San has dual god status, but he, Poseidon, is only a first-level god, and Shura is a god-king level, but he can't use it without Xiao Wu. You two are also first-level gods, and you have Ning Rongrong to assist you. Can't you defeat him? He has more magical weapons than you, but you can use the Nine Treasures Invincible Divine Light to deceive his ultimate move away and then fight him.

Actually, it's okay, but it really doesn't have much to do with Douluo. Apart from the fact that the character doesn't have much to do with Douluo? It's a bit speechless to write like this

The stars change
Well written by the author! Highlight the theme of the article and the protagonist has a distinct image!

23DAY丨Design death games and rules
520 today! (Time: 24 hours) Successfully found 3 real couples in this mall! There will be 20 couples in the mall! Players will observe as observers! Report! There is a reporting black room in the mall! Each player will have two verification opportunities! Those who are successful in verification pass the level successfully! Those who fail verification die! Game rules: 1. Each player can ask the couple three questions 2. Players will have half an hour to communicate with each other! 3. Not during communication time! Players are not allowed to talk to each other!

Author, I read your introduction. Needless to say, these three women, Bibi Dong Qian Renxue and Zhu Zhuqing, will definitely make it out alive. Isn't it just because you don't want them to die? On the other hand, look at the other characters in Shrek. Either dead or disabled. No chance of survival at all. Writing like this is purely brainless. If you want to write cool articles like this, You can write the human skin paper in Mysterious Resurrection as Qian Renxue's second martial spirit, and it says Renpigui: My name is Qian Renxue. I am your future self. Don't win over Tang San, don't contact Tang San. Otherwise you will die. Renpigui: My name is Qian Renxue, and I am you in the future. When you hear this, I will be dead. Don't go to the Ice and Fire Eyes and cut the Hu Xiancao, or you will die. ...Remember not to come into contact with these people or you will die. Qian Renxue: Why did I die? Flirting: God is watching you. Don't want you to succeed.

Looking for evaluation and guidance... please take a look
Looking for evaluation and guidance... Please take a look

This book has four chapters, describing war, internal affairs, economy, production, and politics in a very realistic way.

After reading Chapter 66, I felt a strong sense of separation, and the more I read, the stronger this feeling became.

The subject matter is good
Many of the plots are okay, but the protagonist is not decisive enough, and he is not strong enough and still messes around. Several times, he relies on coincidence to save his life. This kind of plot often appears in new book issues and is very fatal.

This book is so bad that I can't read it anymore. It talks about technology but not technology, and talks about hegemony without explaining it clearly. I feel that the ancients were all fools and didn't understand what a cavalry team is. Why are slaves so invincible? In an era without machine guns, war horses were king! This author is rubbish and speechless!

More curious about the heroine
Yes, I won over Yi Qingwu after writing more than ten chapters. I look forward to other female protagonists. There are a few good ones that appeared in the original book, such as Princess Yue Shi from the Ziwei Dynasty? Ye Zhuo's sister seems to be a sun god as well? The protagonist should also be able to enter the Eight Views Palace and teleport directly to Beidou, right? Recommend Huo Lin'er, Jiang Tingting, Weiwei, Zixia, Yan Ruyu, Yaochi Saint, An Miaoyi, Dragon Princess... If you want to buy more, Ji Biyue, Jiang Caixuan, Jiang Family Goddess Body, Yao Xidaoyi Saint Daughter, Golden Heavenly Girl, these are also good.

Yi Renhua's new book is here - "Master Fu, Madam is pregnant again to grab merit", please favor~
[Powerful boss vs. Beauty, sweet pet + marriage first, love later] Qin Qing entered a bloody novel. She is a bitch-licking female partner who likes the male protagonist. She gives condoms to her fiancée, but accidentally breaks into the room of the top dignitary in the Beijing circle. The villain Fu Ye, who was rumored to be suffering from a hidden disease, bit her red lips: "It tastes good, follow me from now on." Qin Qing discovered that the villain could extend her life. When Master Fu faced Qin Qing, his hidden illness was cured. After a night of absurdity, the two quickly obtained a marriage certificate. In order to save the villain's life, Qin Qing returned to his old business - fortune telling, drawing talismans to drive away evil spirits, and grabbing the merits of heaven and earth to feed her husband. She single-handedly shocked the circle of heavenly masters and became the number one person in Xuanmen. From the rich and powerful families to the new aristocrats from all walks of life, they all bowed down just to ask for her advice! * "Fu Shuheng, have you had enough?!" No one told Qin Qing that the villain was addicted to sex! Or are the characters in the book so talented and energetic? Qin Qing ran away, leaving the villain with a message - he has entered Taoism and is not a man! Master Fu's fingertips turned white and he laughed angrily: "Little liar!" The night Qin Qing was found, she was pressed against the floor-to-ceiling window of the presidential suite. The man strangled her neck, his breathing was scorching, and his voice was hoarse: "Not close to men? Madam seems to be duplicity." "..." Qin Qing, whose waist was trembling and her legs were weak, was speechless.

Shouldn't 100W plus one percent be 100 million? How did this author learn mathematics, and the numerical values he writes like this are bound to fail later.

I thought it was interesting at first, but then I realized it was crazy! The heroine is a funny little expert

It's so sexy and direct, no one has written such a boring book for a long time.

The new book is in pk, please click in and take a look.
The new kids will read more and leave footprints on the bookshelf. The subsequent plot will be more exciting and you won't get lost~

The script is novel in form, concise in content, and feels more cultural.

Amethyst Winged Lion King
To be honest, this one is really not strong, just a level 1 or 6 monster, which can still be defeated in a fight. The strongest lion in Douluo is probably the blond lion mastiff. The author can understand the main feeling that the Amethyst Winged Lion King has no highlights.

It looks good, but you have to keep books. If you don't keep books, who can catch up with you every day?

23DAY丨Designing a death game, including content and Rules]
Copy: Lin Mansion Recruiting Marriage The Lin Mansion throws hydrangeas to attract a bride. Players need to find their bride by throwing hydrangeas. In the hydrangea tossing session, players need to catch their bride's hydrangea and answer three questions from the bride. After completing all the wedding processes, enter the battle royale session. Rules: 1. Please catch the bride's hydrangea. 2. Don't look at the bride. 3. Alcohol is prohibited. 4. Complete the wedding process.

Hey, I only saw Banging the Wall and Momojiji, some kind of world-savior who was reborn. He treated the sister who had snatched his spiritual bones. People wanted her four times countless times. Since her approach was to hit the wall, sneer, and then leave, what does it mean that she is an adult and does not remember the faults of others? Ha?

[url=bn]Genius Club[/url] Fandom!
I like this novel very much, but I haven't seen any fans yet! I opened a book myself! If you like it, you can add it to your collection! Let's recreate the secret of 42 together!

Update soon
The author is right. He stayed up late at a young age and still had to update five times a day.

Update quickly, update quickly, update quickly, update quickly😹😹😹

I still like to watch Dou Yi ruthlessly torture the little Yakuza, lusting after the little anus, the old rat.

It's beautiful, very exciting, come on! ! Looking forward to more powerful female masterpieces

Let me tell you my personal opinion, do you think it's right?
It is known that the protagonist's golden finger is a skill point for practicing a martial arts, and the skill points can improve the fitness of the martial arts! I have read more than twenty chapters so far, and the protagonist has gained the most skill points in martial arts! But it's all swordsmanship back and forth, which means there's a bit of a lack of resources! No matter how you look at it, this golden finger should train the protagonist into a kaleidoscope, with fists, palms, fingers, legs, body, and eighteen kinds of weapons... This is the way to maximize profits. "I can use it, but I can't live without it"

The plot of the story is very interesting at the moment, but there are some problems. For example, the protagonist is too impatient in some places. For example, regarding Xiao Bai, there are some people who are relatively dissatisfied and say something unpleasant. It feels a bit like a stallion. After all, Xiao Bai is already in this space and is already in the pocket. There is no need to be so impatient, thus leaving a bad feeling to the readers. And when facing Gu Yuena, there is actually no need to threaten her, because the relationship between the protagonist and the soul beast is that the protagonist is dominant, but the soul beast is also needed. It can be said that both parties need each other, so you can tell her, As long as I am alive, this is your world. The most important thing is that there is no God Realm here, because even if the soul beasts really turn over on Douluo Continent, there will still be God Realm pressing on them, but not here. The protagonist needs them to surrender verbally, and for the soul beasts, this world is definitely better than Douluo Continent. There are neither human soul masters, nor gods, nor heavenly tribulations. Then tell them that if the protagonist dies, then they may die, or they may return to Douluo Continent and be tortured. Also, it's a bit minor. I hope that the protagonist will purely use the soul beast as a resource. After all, it can provide faith. In addition, if this matter is exposed, it will be somewhat different. It has no impact on the protagonist, but doesn't he persuade people to quit? Since when you pretend to be a good person, you should act a little better, and when you want to be a bad person, you should act more thoroughly. There is something in between. And it can be said that when those human soul masters were brought in, because other worlds under God Realm did not have such a deformed system, it was probably because of Douluo Continent. Maybe those soul masters who entered his world would not be stuck due to soul rings, and could also build the protagonist's plane into a harem group.

After reading the introduction, there is no desire to continue reading. When your body returns to normal, the book will come to an end and there will be nothing to read.

We are testing the waters, brothers, don't raise books
I'm testing the waters. If you like this book, don't support it. Please help me read more. Thank you for your support, brothers.

The introduction doesn't match the title.
Although I haven't read the main text yet, just reading the introduction, I feel that it should be named a card system instead of a puzzle of all things. I haven't read the text yet, so I'm giving it 3 stars.

23DAY丨Please design a death game, including game content and rules.
Game name: An Inn Game content: Players are members of the martial arts world, coming from different sects. In order to compete for the same treasure, they gather together in an inn... Conditions for clearance: Obtain the treasure of the world. Game rules: 1. Please do not leave the inn without permission. Keep your belongings safe when leaving the inn. 2. Please do not refuse the request of the hotel staff. If refused, please pay the corresponding currency. 3. Note: There will be no strange phenomena in the inn. (Bold red text) 4. The treasure of the world must be in the inn. 5. Remember your identity and don't let employees find out that you are not an Aboriginal~ 6. Pay attention to your mental health at all times, and ignore it when auditory hallucinations occur. 7. An inn is just an inn.

When your mother is writing a novel, it would be more interesting to start with the loser flow.

illustration
The new AI-generated pictures are so expensive, one dollar per picture.

So am I the only one who discovered that his chapters are in the wrong order?
Apart from this little niggle, the book as a whole is very good.

Logically speaking, it is not realistic at all. After reading two paragraphs, it is not obvious that it is pure AI. But it's really fun

It doesn't feel very interesting, but I can still read it. It can be regarded as a mediocre novel.

The love between seabirds and fishes is conferred by gods! !
After reading Chapter 40, I couldn't control my tears. The mermaid who was trapped by fate was willing to bear the pain and peel off her scales to change the medicine, and used her flesh and blood and obsession to stick to her love; The most beloved person in the world is probably like this.

Too humble
The protagonist is too humble, too slow to develop, and too soft-hearted. Why are you looking for Wei Yi? Just look for Gai Jiuyou. Let Gai Jiuyou take you to Zishan to rescue Jiang Taixu, learn how to practice Zi Mi and Dou Zi Mi, and by the way, let Gai Jiuyou help you seize the Prince of Shetian, so that you can have a top-notch physique. Then snatch the jar back from Tu Tian. Then he cut up the Holy Prince and ate it. When the Buddha dared to stand up after the battle, Lao Gai killed him and took away the sacred iron and the demon-conquering pestle. Then go get the real dragon elixir to prolong Lao Gai's life, save the human demon on the way, take Lao Gai and the human demon with the magic jar to destroy the Wanlong nest and grab the Wanlong bell. Then eat all the ancient princes one by one, and then let Lao Gai kill a few quasi-emperors for you to absorb. When you become a saint, let Lao Gai take the complete Sky-Swallowing Magic Jar to go shopping with the Golden Crow. After both sides are injured, you directly eat them both and become the quasi-nine. It doesn't even take two hundred years. You will become emperor within fifty years. After you become emperor, ask ruthless people to help you kill a few supreme beings. Once you have eaten almost all the supreme beings, you will become the Emperor of Heaven. Then let the ruthless person lead you to become an immortal. What a perfect growing experience









