
Versatile Mage's Holy Spirit Judgment
About This Novel
[Not the Virgin] [Don't dismantle the original cp] [Try to save the tragedy of the original] [Decisively kill] [Double heroines] I stayed up late watching the anime "The Master" and accidentally traveled to the world of "The Master". Carrying the Pony Pendant, I awakened the new magic system in this magical world, the Holy Spirit System! When he raised his hand, there was a stream of light, and when he lowered his hand, there were meteors all over the sky. With a thought, the giant sword of light fell from the sky, and with a flash of bright golden light, all the monsters dispersed! When that brilliant scorching sun hung high in the sky above the Holy City, overlooking the seven angels below, one person and one spirit, the Lord of the Sword of Light and the Queen of Thunder, a shocking spear of light stood on the ground! Solemn and solemn words resounded here: "From today on, I declare that the radiance of the Holy Spirit will fall on the entire earth and will replace the angels. Is there any doubt?" Theme elements: [Holy Spirit Dharma God] [Puni]
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(First of all, my personal opinion) I feel a bit awkward in the ancient capital. It's best not to flirt with the Black Vatican before reaching a high level. Otherwise, the more you write, the more your strength will collapse. The Black Vatican you provoke will never stop. The Black Vatican is a group of lunatics with no humanity. I am stronger than you, so I can crush you to death, but you still have to obey the orders of the superiors 100%. The ancient capital is now on the throne of God. There are definitely a large number of Black Church cats trying to cause trouble. The things the protagonist has done are well known to everyone. The Black Vatican will definitely become suspicious. The protagonist is from Bo City and will definitely hate the Black Vatican. The only way to win over someone is to kill them. And with the abilities displayed by the protagonist, it is absolutely impossible to send only one executioner. I'll check it out later. I hope there won't be such an embarrassing plot after this paragraph (I'll add a layer of armor at the end, the above are all my personal opinions) and I'll say it again. All countries in the world are abnormal. Strong people will only get stronger, and rich people will only get richer. Common people, except for those with cheats like Mo Fan, have no chance of rising. And they all work on their own. The country that was invaded by the Kraken is almost gone, and each family is still trying to make a fortune for themselves. If civilians want to rise up, they can only become hunters and work hard on tasks. If they are lucky, they can save about 100 million and become high-level mage. Bad luck, or you'll be eaten by a demon. Or be suppressed to death by the family's children. The high level is a complete watershed. Even Mo Fan has to use the Veins of the Galaxy. Mu Ningxue's "spiritual seed" in her natural field also depends on the veins of the galaxy (I found that I said a lot of things that are meaningless to this book🤐🤐. I also hope that the full-time mage fandom will get better and better👍👍)
renew!
Updates will resume this month, probably next week... The starting point has already sent out chapter notifications, and the QQ reading side should synchronize them a few days later.
There are two pain points in all fandoms. First, why is there no one that focuses on cultivation and keeps climbing for eternal life? Secondly, why is it so shameful in modern times to write a fanfiction and think gringos are good? The protagonist of this book is a retarded person. How could Irene have feelings for an ordinary person? They are nothing more than tools. They are all the author's wishful thinking. The aristocratic family always only cares about interests. The Japanese did such crazy things to China. Did you have any reaction when you traveled to the past? Are 35 million people really just talking? I won't talk about human experiments. The most outrageous thing is that you can be behind the scenes, but you have to go to the Black Church in the early stage. Although I like cool writing, can you not be so brainless? The writing skills are not good either.
I really have nothing to say when I force my cultivation.
Entering the academy a year earlier than Mo Fan, he can definitely have a lot of arrangements, and he can have a higher level of cultivation. How many months of the trip to the UK plus a few months of return will the Holy Spirit break the third grade? Are there any changes to the other three series? Nearly a year, oh my god? After entering the three-step tower, two galactic veins break through the first series of high-level ones, but it takes five months to control a constellation? Just do it like this, and the three systems won't move at all? After looking at the catalog, I found Rey in the high-level summons later. In the ancient capital chapter, I got the high-level shadow, and the thunder system was also high-level at about the same time. And then in the academy chapter, I didn't get the holy spirit until the second level before playing Kasuo? I saw a keyword of "Light System Super Level" in the ancient capital chapter. I thought it was an ingenious book that could reach the super level before the decisive battle in the school. But it turned out that this book was forced to suppress the combat power. The transition of strength is one thing. It is really speechless to waste several months doing nothing. Fans should not be submissive to make up for the regrets of saving, and just feel comfortable until the end. It is really boring to exert strength all the way.
personal opinion
When reading novels, especially fan novels, most of them are about the main character traveling through time to seek benefits through wisdom and reason. He is someone who has a clearly careerist personality and wants to be a master, which is very satisfying. Personally, I feel that fan novels, especially the type where the protagonist travels through time, most hope that the protagonist can be smart, or rational, and do not require the time-traveling protagonist to be extremely intelligent. As long as the author writes fan fiction and depicts the time-traveling protagonist as relying on foresight to gain benefits and relying on poor information to reap benefits, at least the protagonist has a witty and smart character, for example, a gentleman will not stand behind a dangerous wall. However, I have read a lot of full-time fans, including this book, and most of the time-travel protagonists in full-time fans are "Wei Guangzheng", "Savior" and "Hot-blooded Man Hero Setting" (The original male protagonist of "Full-time Mage" is the male protagonist of the hot-blooded comic, and the savior Wei Guangzheng is set.) You write a fan novel and set the male protagonist to be the same type as the original male protagonist. So what's the difference between what you wrote and the original work? The setting of the male protagonist is the same, and the plot is roughly the same (for example, the crisis in Bo City, the crisis in the ancient capital. Most full-time fans will write about the protagonist participating in the battle in Bo City.) The setting of the male protagonist is the same, and the plot is roughly going the same way, so it is better to just read the original work.
A very fair evaluation, don't pull or step on it
Many readers and fan authors said that this book is good and excellent, and they all recommended it. I also read it. The overall theme is very novel, and a new French chapter is written through "Serhaoponi"... But the overall writing style of this book gives me the feeling that it is too deliberate to suppress the cultivation and combat power. It gives people an intuitive feeling that it is a waste of cultivation. Without the three-step tower, it is nothing. Basically, there is no cultivation that is accumulated by oneself. Even the small levels in the big stage only see "Holy Spirit" Is it something like breaking through the middle level to level 2 or level 3?" Did he break through this paragraph on his own, or did he break through after staying in the UK for more than half a year... I remember seeing the author writing "I'm afraid of being scolded too harshly if the combat power level increases too quickly." ? ? If you don't have the strength to reach the middle level, you will go to the porcelain executioner, and you will die with that senior brother? Secondly, I don't know how to evaluate the setting of the protagonist's character... I can understand single heroine, multiple heroines, and harem. But the feeling of dual heroines is that they are neither humans nor ghosts. You say you are sentimental, but you don't engage in all kinds of things. You say you are single-minded, and you have sex with two people at the same time? And the emotional scenes are also very stiff... I like to see bikinis and stuff, but I don't dare to accept other people's hookups. Anyway, I feel frustrated and speechless watching them. Finally, there are many commentaries in the group and in the book saying that they all went to see "Thousand Lies of Void Light". After writing so much, there is no trace, and there are some things about the Holy Spirit's Dharma... In the end, the author chose the name Fei + the writing method of elementary school students. Most of the hundreds of chapters are the same name of the protagonist. It's dizzying and aesthetic fatigue. The fighting scenes are not exciting at all. I'm just a noob.
The page shows that there are two female protagonists, and they don't conflict with Mo Fan, which feels good. Who else knows an Irene so far? The most important thing is, it's not enough to watch😊
I read about seventy chapters. Why did this novel get such a high rating? Are you writing fan fiction without even reading the original work? The basic settings are all wrong. The Holy Spirit type is the Holy Spirit type. Do you have to receive light type spiritual seeds? So what's the difference between you and someone with a natural talent for light? In addition, the summoning system is written in a tacky way. Summoned beasts are just temporary workers that can be replaced casually. Do you have to raise them at a loss like Mo Fan? I don't see how close the relationship between you two is. The contracted beast has to get a similar elemental spirit, which is not innovative at all. The character design is completely ruined, Tang Yue is just like a big resentment, giving away everything? Ding Yumian suffered from a disaster, and her psychic system affects the empathy of those around her. Therefore, in the original work, she has always suppressed her emotions and will not show her face. It is impossible to be in the limelight in various competitions, and it is even less possible for an exchange student. She is under a state of house arrest similar to protection. The plot is unremarkable, and so far it seems to be completely based on the original work. Bo City has done nothing, and it is still Pearl Academy plus Qingtian Hunting Institute. If I set it up, I would start with the Holy Spirit system, and the Bo City disaster would be revealed to Zhan Kong and Tang Yue anonymously in advance, and then I would run away before the disaster. It would be useless to stay anyway. At most, I would take the Mo Fan family or a few close friends with me on the excuse of going to the Pearl to see the school. When I get to the Magic City, I will go directly to Old Man Bao for a showdown, and use Old Man Bao's connections to develop in the Holy City. The Holy Spirit system itself is similar to the system of the Holy City, and it is not a dark system. Why does it have to go against the Holy City because it has the ability of the Forbidden Magic system? Relying on Old Man Bao's connections, you can definitely find a group to hang out with, and maybe you can even hang out with an angel candidate or something. If the big boss likes you, you will have no shortage of resources, and you can go sideways with the background of the Holy City. Why don't you join the biggest power background in human beings, and have to go against it? Seeing that there is no innovation at all, it doesn't deserve an 8.7 Score, it's a second-rate work, go check out the writing of "I Can Control You to Death" next door. That's it, good-bye readers.
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Official(284)Scraped 1d ago
(First of all, my personal opinion) I feel a bit awkward in the ancient capital. It's best not to flirt with the Black Vatican before reaching a high level. Otherwise, the more you write, the more your strength will collapse. The Black Vatican you provoke will never stop. The Black Vatican is a group of lunatics with no humanity. I am stronger than you, so I can crush you to death, but you still have to obey the orders of the superiors 100%. The ancient capital is now on the throne of God. There are definitely a large number of Black Church cats trying to cause trouble. The things the protagonist has done are well known to everyone. The Black Vatican will definitely become suspicious. The protagonist is from Bo City and will definitely hate the Black Vatican. The only way to win over someone is to kill them. And with the abilities displayed by the protagonist, it is absolutely impossible to send only one executioner. I'll check it out later. I hope there won't be such an embarrassing plot after this paragraph (I'll add a layer of armor at the end, the above are all my personal opinions) and I'll say it again. All countries in the world are abnormal. Strong people will only get stronger, and rich people will only get richer. Common people, except for those with cheats like Mo Fan, have no chance of rising. And they all work on their own. The country that was invaded by the Kraken is almost gone, and each family is still trying to make a fortune for themselves. If civilians want to rise up, they can only become hunters and work hard on tasks. If they are lucky, they can save about 100 million and become high-level mage. Bad luck, or you'll be eaten by a demon. Or be suppressed to death by the family's children. The high level is a complete watershed. Even Mo Fan has to use the Veins of the Galaxy. Mu Ningxue's "spiritual seed" in her natural field also depends on the veins of the galaxy (I found that I said a lot of things that are meaningless to this book🤐🤐. I also hope that the full-time mage fandom will get better and better👍👍)
renew!
Updates will resume this month, probably next week... The starting point has already sent out chapter notifications, and the QQ reading side should synchronize them a few days later.
There are two pain points in all fandoms. First, why is there no one that focuses on cultivation and keeps climbing for eternal life? Secondly, why is it so shameful in modern times to write a fanfiction and think gringos are good? The protagonist of this book is a retarded person. How could Irene have feelings for an ordinary person? They are nothing more than tools. They are all the author's wishful thinking. The aristocratic family always only cares about interests. The Japanese did such crazy things to China. Did you have any reaction when you traveled to the past? Are 35 million people really just talking? I won't talk about human experiments. The most outrageous thing is that you can be behind the scenes, but you have to go to the Black Church in the early stage. Although I like cool writing, can you not be so brainless? The writing skills are not good either.
I really have nothing to say when I force my cultivation.
Entering the academy a year earlier than Mo Fan, he can definitely have a lot of arrangements, and he can have a higher level of cultivation. How many months of the trip to the UK plus a few months of return will the Holy Spirit break the third grade? Are there any changes to the other three series? Nearly a year, oh my god? After entering the three-step tower, two galactic veins break through the first series of high-level ones, but it takes five months to control a constellation? Just do it like this, and the three systems won't move at all? After looking at the catalog, I found Rey in the high-level summons later. In the ancient capital chapter, I got the high-level shadow, and the thunder system was also high-level at about the same time. And then in the academy chapter, I didn't get the holy spirit until the second level before playing Kasuo? I saw a keyword of "Light System Super Level" in the ancient capital chapter. I thought it was an ingenious book that could reach the super level before the decisive battle in the school. But it turned out that this book was forced to suppress the combat power. The transition of strength is one thing. It is really speechless to waste several months doing nothing. Fans should not be submissive to make up for the regrets of saving, and just feel comfortable until the end. It is really boring to exert strength all the way.
personal opinion
When reading novels, especially fan novels, most of them are about the main character traveling through time to seek benefits through wisdom and reason. He is someone who has a clearly careerist personality and wants to be a master, which is very satisfying. Personally, I feel that fan novels, especially the type where the protagonist travels through time, most hope that the protagonist can be smart, or rational, and do not require the time-traveling protagonist to be extremely intelligent. As long as the author writes fan fiction and depicts the time-traveling protagonist as relying on foresight to gain benefits and relying on poor information to reap benefits, at least the protagonist has a witty and smart character, for example, a gentleman will not stand behind a dangerous wall. However, I have read a lot of full-time fans, including this book, and most of the time-travel protagonists in full-time fans are "Wei Guangzheng", "Savior" and "Hot-blooded Man Hero Setting" (The original male protagonist of "Full-time Mage" is the male protagonist of the hot-blooded comic, and the savior Wei Guangzheng is set.) You write a fan novel and set the male protagonist to be the same type as the original male protagonist. So what's the difference between what you wrote and the original work? The setting of the male protagonist is the same, and the plot is roughly the same (for example, the crisis in Bo City, the crisis in the ancient capital. Most full-time fans will write about the protagonist participating in the battle in Bo City.) The setting of the male protagonist is the same, and the plot is roughly going the same way, so it is better to just read the original work.
A very fair evaluation, don't pull or step on it
Many readers and fan authors said that this book is good and excellent, and they all recommended it. I also read it. The overall theme is very novel, and a new French chapter is written through "Serhaoponi"... But the overall writing style of this book gives me the feeling that it is too deliberate to suppress the cultivation and combat power. It gives people an intuitive feeling that it is a waste of cultivation. Without the three-step tower, it is nothing. Basically, there is no cultivation that is accumulated by oneself. Even the small levels in the big stage only see "Holy Spirit" Is it something like breaking through the middle level to level 2 or level 3?" Did he break through this paragraph on his own, or did he break through after staying in the UK for more than half a year... I remember seeing the author writing "I'm afraid of being scolded too harshly if the combat power level increases too quickly." ? ? If you don't have the strength to reach the middle level, you will go to the porcelain executioner, and you will die with that senior brother? Secondly, I don't know how to evaluate the setting of the protagonist's character... I can understand single heroine, multiple heroines, and harem. But the feeling of dual heroines is that they are neither humans nor ghosts. You say you are sentimental, but you don't engage in all kinds of things. You say you are single-minded, and you have sex with two people at the same time? And the emotional scenes are also very stiff... I like to see bikinis and stuff, but I don't dare to accept other people's hookups. Anyway, I feel frustrated and speechless watching them. Finally, there are many commentaries in the group and in the book saying that they all went to see "Thousand Lies of Void Light". After writing so much, there is no trace, and there are some things about the Holy Spirit's Dharma... In the end, the author chose the name Fei + the writing method of elementary school students. Most of the hundreds of chapters are the same name of the protagonist. It's dizzying and aesthetic fatigue. The fighting scenes are not exciting at all. I'm just a noob.
The page shows that there are two female protagonists, and they don't conflict with Mo Fan, which feels good. Who else knows an Irene so far? The most important thing is, it's not enough to watch😊
I read about seventy chapters. Why did this novel get such a high rating? Are you writing fan fiction without even reading the original work? The basic settings are all wrong. The Holy Spirit type is the Holy Spirit type. Do you have to receive light type spiritual seeds? So what's the difference between you and someone with a natural talent for light? In addition, the summoning system is written in a tacky way. Summoned beasts are just temporary workers that can be replaced casually. Do you have to raise them at a loss like Mo Fan? I don't see how close the relationship between you two is. The contracted beast has to get a similar elemental spirit, which is not innovative at all. The character design is completely ruined, Tang Yue is just like a big resentment, giving away everything? Ding Yumian suffered from a disaster, and her psychic system affects the empathy of those around her. Therefore, in the original work, she has always suppressed her emotions and will not show her face. It is impossible to be in the limelight in various competitions, and it is even less possible for an exchange student. She is under a state of house arrest similar to protection. The plot is unremarkable, and so far it seems to be completely based on the original work. Bo City has done nothing, and it is still Pearl Academy plus Qingtian Hunting Institute. If I set it up, I would start with the Holy Spirit system, and the Bo City disaster would be revealed to Zhan Kong and Tang Yue anonymously in advance, and then I would run away before the disaster. It would be useless to stay anyway. At most, I would take the Mo Fan family or a few close friends with me on the excuse of going to the Pearl to see the school. When I get to the Magic City, I will go directly to Old Man Bao for a showdown, and use Old Man Bao's connections to develop in the Holy City. The Holy Spirit system itself is similar to the system of the Holy City, and it is not a dark system. Why does it have to go against the Holy City because it has the ability of the Forbidden Magic system? Relying on Old Man Bao's connections, you can definitely find a group to hang out with, and maybe you can even hang out with an angel candidate or something. If the big boss likes you, you will have no shortage of resources, and you can go sideways with the background of the Holy City. Why don't you join the biggest power background in human beings, and have to go against it? Seeing that there is no innovation at all, it doesn't deserve an 8.7 Score, it's a second-rate work, go check out the writing of "I Can Control You to Death" next door. That's it, good-bye readers.















