
Pirate: Start by Picking up the Red-haired Severed Arm
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He was in the East China Sea and had just been picked up by Bellemere and brought back to the orange grove. The invasion of the Aaron Pirates is about to happen. Fortunately, the sacrifice system is awakened and he picks up a red-haired severed arm. Xia Nuo discovers that by sacrificing important items that change the world line, he can get huge points and strengthen himself. What is this? Kuina's express elevator? I eat! What is this, Roger's gallows? I eat! What is this? Luffy's straw hat? I eat it too! I ate, ate, ate everything! Grow first and then go to sea. Gather wool everywhere to get points. This is the era of great pirates! ----[There are already two high-quality old pirate books, "One Piece is a Good-looking Man" and "One Piece: The Swift Wind Swordsman", welcome to join]
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Official(63)Scraped 22d ago
The character Junichi is a failure.
No matter what evil deeds Junichi's father did, it was all to avenge his mother. Everyone can say something about his father, but he can't, because it is his mother who died. My first thought about this kind of plot is that Junichi should work with his father to avenge his mother or inherit his father's revenge plan, instead of showing that Junichi has never thought about revenge for his mother, and only knows to scold his father for his black heart. Also called Chunyi, Chunyi was born.
Come on, pure birth
It's called exchange, but isn't it just robbery? Is the straw hat your thing? Just put that aside, md, you still said it was "for family and friends", and you still built a memorial arch after being a scoundrel, right? Pure hypocrite Literary Youth, according to your statement, those people who read extensively and robbed became heroes? What kind of NT article.
I've already come to read fanfics, and why do I need original characters? Isn't this a pure failure?
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is just a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of great emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains? ---------- Data analysis ----------- A Mortal's Story of Immortality: Crowdfunding 40.25 Million yuan Immortal Rebellion: Crowdfunding 700,000 yuan -------- I am cultivating immortality through science for mortals: 7.6 Points No system 3 fanaticism, 7 obsession, 421 support ---------- Doupo: The strongest in the whole map, I will always be above you: 8.8 Points Systematic 0 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 7 support --------- Fight Po: Yang Emperor: 7.8 Points No system 1 fanaticism, 1 obsession, 173 support --------- The most skillful pirate hunter: 8.0 Points No system 1 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 3 support, --------- Pirate Talent System: 9.1 Points Systematic 0 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 2 support ----------- The world of Naruto through the eyes of reincarnation: 8.6 Points No system 1 fanaticism, 3 obsession, 500+ support ------------- Naruto: 9.0 Points Systematic 0 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 5 support -------- .... Many... Many... You can count them yourself... ---------- Facts have proved that people who like to read brainless novels and systematic novels have no money. These brainless people scold the brainless authors the most. They always feel that their feudal ideas are correct, just like a primary school student scolding a graduate author as disgusting. Isn't this contrary to Tiangang? If you don't understand it yourself, you'll scold others as disgusting if it doesn't suit your needs. The author can't satisfy everyone, so he can only serve the high-quality group of people and give up on the low-quality and moneyless group of people.
The first time I saw the low martial arts pirate king
Too pretentious
If you don't know how to write emotional stories, just write less. Brother, look at how many clowns you have written for a supporting role. And with your price, you are obviously capable of suppressing combat. Since you can't write detailed and macroscopic chapters about battle scenes, it's okay. It's so awkward to write...
I thought you were going to put on the red-haired arm and use it as a unicorn arm.
Can see
Please rate it, it's free today, I'm short of books, I can't find the book I like to read, I opened it, and when I saw the section on the shelf, I didn't take it, so I wouldn't be annoyed if someone said it was free. (Less than 100 chapters yet) The author arranges a pirate camp for the protagonist, but the method is too blunt. Even in the kendo tournament, he gives the protagonist the image of a passionate young man, which makes him feel more comfortable. He attends the kendo tournament without any reason, unknowingly sees through the true identity of the puppet fruitarian, and throws Bailey away without knowing anything to give the protagonist a good reputation. The author's method is good, but his technique is a bit poor. (It is indeed much better than some authors. The protagonist talks trash casually, and a group of heroines and supporting actors, such as Karami, come over and wait for the protagonist. I won't mention the title of the book. If you read more, you will know which authors have too many)
The king of the offshore can bite off the red-haired arm and not digest it for two years? What logic is this
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Official(63)Scraped 22d ago
The character Junichi is a failure.
No matter what evil deeds Junichi's father did, it was all to avenge his mother. Everyone can say something about his father, but he can't, because it is his mother who died. My first thought about this kind of plot is that Junichi should work with his father to avenge his mother or inherit his father's revenge plan, instead of showing that Junichi has never thought about revenge for his mother, and only knows to scold his father for his black heart. Also called Chunyi, Chunyi was born.
Come on, pure birth
It's called exchange, but isn't it just robbery? Is the straw hat your thing? Just put that aside, md, you still said it was "for family and friends", and you still built a memorial arch after being a scoundrel, right? Pure hypocrite Literary Youth, according to your statement, those people who read extensively and robbed became heroes? What kind of NT article.
I've already come to read fanfics, and why do I need original characters? Isn't this a pure failure?
don't like the system
1: The reason why I don't like the system is that the protagonist is just a puppet. Opportunity does not use brain planning, just sends it directly. Ability will not be developed using the brain, but created using the brain, and will be given directly. 2: I don't like novels that start with the second generation of rich people and the cultivation of great emperors. Opportunities will come as they come, they are invincible and have no innovative imagination. If I travel to the world of cultivating immortals, even useless spiritual roots/martial spirits can counterattack and become gods. Plasma (Valkyrie's Tesla), compressed density (brother's black hole nuclear explosion), biological research (Hokage's Orochimaru),... Have you read so many books in vain? Why can others thrive without a system, but what about their brains? ---------- Data analysis ----------- A Mortal's Story of Immortality: Crowdfunding 40.25 Million yuan Immortal Rebellion: Crowdfunding 700,000 yuan -------- I am cultivating immortality through science for mortals: 7.6 Points No system 3 fanaticism, 7 obsession, 421 support ---------- Doupo: The strongest in the whole map, I will always be above you: 8.8 Points Systematic 0 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 7 support --------- Fight Po: Yang Emperor: 7.8 Points No system 1 fanaticism, 1 obsession, 173 support --------- The most skillful pirate hunter: 8.0 Points No system 1 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 3 support, --------- Pirate Talent System: 9.1 Points Systematic 0 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 2 support ----------- The world of Naruto through the eyes of reincarnation: 8.6 Points No system 1 fanaticism, 3 obsession, 500+ support ------------- Naruto: 9.0 Points Systematic 0 fanaticism, 0 obsession, 5 support -------- .... Many... Many... You can count them yourself... ---------- Facts have proved that people who like to read brainless novels and systematic novels have no money. These brainless people scold the brainless authors the most. They always feel that their feudal ideas are correct, just like a primary school student scolding a graduate author as disgusting. Isn't this contrary to Tiangang? If you don't understand it yourself, you'll scold others as disgusting if it doesn't suit your needs. The author can't satisfy everyone, so he can only serve the high-quality group of people and give up on the low-quality and moneyless group of people.
The first time I saw the low martial arts pirate king
Too pretentious
If you don't know how to write emotional stories, just write less. Brother, look at how many clowns you have written for a supporting role. And with your price, you are obviously capable of suppressing combat. Since you can't write detailed and macroscopic chapters about battle scenes, it's okay. It's so awkward to write...
I thought you were going to put on the red-haired arm and use it as a unicorn arm.
Can see
Please rate it, it's free today, I'm short of books, I can't find the book I like to read, I opened it, and when I saw the section on the shelf, I didn't take it, so I wouldn't be annoyed if someone said it was free. (Less than 100 chapters yet) The author arranges a pirate camp for the protagonist, but the method is too blunt. Even in the kendo tournament, he gives the protagonist the image of a passionate young man, which makes him feel more comfortable. He attends the kendo tournament without any reason, unknowingly sees through the true identity of the puppet fruitarian, and throws Bailey away without knowing anything to give the protagonist a good reputation. The author's method is good, but his technique is a bit poor. (It is indeed much better than some authors. The protagonist talks trash casually, and a group of heroines and supporting actors, such as Karami, come over and wait for the protagonist. I won't mention the title of the book. If you read more, you will know which authors have too many)
The king of the offshore can bite off the red-haired arm and not digest it for two years? What logic is this
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Xianyuluo new book. Pirate fandom. The protagonist travels through the world of pirates and becomes Bellemere's adopted son. Using the golden finger-sacrifice system, he can sacrifice important items to plot characters to gain points to strengthen himself. The current timeline is one year before Aaron came to the East China Sea. In order to strengthen himself and prepare to take Luffy's straw hat, he had already met the King of the Near Sea on the road and obtained a red-haired broken arm. Why read this book: The old eunuch finally opened a new book, Pirates is indeed true love. There are still a few chapters in this book, but so far it's okay. One of the characteristics of his books is that he does not play the dark genre and does not lick the protagonists or important characters. He is not the kind of fan who looks up to the original characters with a fan mentality. The relationship with the original characters is purely based on status and interests. In this aspect, it just depends on personal preference. Anyway, he was criticized for killing the cigarette man before. Why don't you read this book: The Old Eunuch, although I have finished two books recently. I didn't read the ending so I don't know how good the sequel is, but after all, it ends many years later. Anyway, I will give you a reminder. In addition, as mentioned above, I don't like the original characters. Most of the people who like the fans are not from the same group. In general, I'll give it a try. I'll make a comment later depending on the situation.




Current ranking on the book list: 69 Readability score: 4 Reading experience score: 4.5 Plot-rich score: 3.5 Characterization score: 3 End of story score: 3 Number of reads: 1 Total score: 18 Other comments: At first I thought the author had overexerted himself in writing Ten Mile Wave Sword God, but later I found that the author handled the plot quite calmly and with ease, a bit like he could easily pull it off within the framework of One Piece. As for the plot, if you don't follow the ship anyway, it can even be said that the story is over by the time Luffy goes to sea. Therefore, except for the background setting, the original plot is the result of the author's own deduction based on many years of experience as a pirate fan. It's just that the character's facial makeup is too serious, and there are no highlights or memorable points. Fortunately, the tool man can be regarded as making the best use of his resources. At least it does not hinder the advancement of the plot. As for the ending, I can only say that it is quite satisfactory. It belongs to the type where you can roughly know what the process is without having to watch it. Fortunately, the plot was well developed and the ending was not boring.




[Recommendation level]: ♥♥♥ [Author]: Luocheng Prefect [Achievements]: Ten Thousand Orders (Completed) [Similar recommendations]: Moon Chimon's Horn "One Piece: No One Knows Devil Fruits Better than Me" [Introduction]: He was in the East China Sea and had just been picked up by Bellemere and brought back to the orange grove. The invasion of the Aaron Pirates is about to happen. Fortunately, the sacrifice system is awakened and he picks up a red-haired severed arm. Xia Nuo discovers that by sacrificing important items that change the world line, he can get huge points and strengthen himself. What is this? Kuina's express elevator? I eat! What is this, Roger's gallows? I eat! What is this? Luffy's straw hat? I eat it too! I ate, ate, ate everything! Grow first and then go to sea. Gather wool everywhere to get points. This is the era of great pirates!




The most interesting plot is the sense of anticipation of opening the treasure chest every month and not knowing what will be found. I've read about 200 chapters of this book












