[Beyond the Chest, Intercontinental Level] Recommended Collection of Good Online Articles
【胸口以外洲际级】良品网文分级推荐合集
Welcome all book friends! The following is currently publicly available information: The [Intercontinental Level Beyond the Chest] book list is a companion volume to the [World Class Below the Neck] book list. As for the positioning of the former... High EQ: The recommendation concepts are similar but the standards are appropriately relaxed; Low EQ: The latter requires a pick-up when the quantity limit is reached. The book list is graded and recommended, and the specific information is as follows: Evaluation dimensions: A. Outstanding highlights (core competitiveness, determines whether readers can be attracted to watch) B. Complete system (core competitiveness, determines whether readers can be retained to read) C. Other interesting points (extra points) Grading standards: T1.5: Half-step T1, spiritual food that is more suitable for the physique of online children has two core competencies but no extra points There may be points deducted: A+BT2: The Secret Treasure of Book Desolation, a typical online text with outstanding advantages and disadvantages that has one core competitiveness and additional bonus points: A/B+CT3: Waiting for a Destined Person, the radio-wave text of Bi Xian Wo Po has only one core competitiveness or additional bonus points: A/B/C Finally, thank you all book friends for your patience in reading. The book list contains the subjective factors of the single owner and is for reference only! PS: The book list contains suspended/discontinued works, which have been marked and noted. Book lovers who are interested can skip them by themselves.
1I Am a Monk in Yingzhou
Light Novel我在瀛洲当和尚
Huten
An Anxin who traveled to Yingzhou really didn't want to be a monk at all, but looking at the smiling maids and the endless monsters and monsters around him, he made a difficult decision...
An Anxin who traveled to Yingzhou really didn't want to be a monk at all, but looking at the smiling maids and the endless monsters and monsters around him, he made a difficult decision...
Final acceptance: T3 level. 1.2 Million words, completed. Work tags: Japanese culture, extraordinary Japanese style, fictional city, light novel. Rating: A. Japanese cultural content is authentic and has both breadth and depth; B. In terms of the current progress, the integrity can only be said to be average, with insufficient preparation; C. The writing level is quite acceptable, and the character creation meets the standards of light novels. A brief review in one sentence: A two-dimensional light novel with a strong Japanese style. 1. Introduction An Anxin who traveled to Yingzhou really didn't want to be a monk at all, but looking at the smiling maids and the endless monsters and monsters around him, he made a difficult decision... 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot design is relatively ordinary, the rhythm is not very smooth, and some situations may develop unexpectedly; The characters are basically at the level of ordinary Japanese light novels, and there are many exaggerated and extreme labeled characters; The writing level is considered acceptable. 3. Highlights The most outstanding highlight of this book is the Japanese cultural content that is full of useful information, including but not limited to social customs, religious systems, historical changes, and class backgrounds... Not only does it cover a wide range of topics, but the author's depth of understanding of Japanese culture is also far better than that of ordinary Tokyo-style authors who only rely on Baidu Wiki. It can be said that the core attraction of this book is its rich and solid Japanese cultural information. In addition, the author of this book also adopts a humorous and satirical writing style, showing a series of strange social phenomena that exist in the island country through jokes, which also enhances the interest of reading to a certain extent. Of course, whether the style of making jokes is good or bad is a matter of opinion. 4. Questions ①The rationality of the story is questionable. The author explains that there are more outrageous prototypes in reality, but the novel is actually more logical than reality; ② The second dimension has a strong home-like feel, and there are endless types of maids that the author is too lazy to pretend to be; ③The protagonist is somewhat like the ancient dragon Aotian: reckless, enlightened, outrageous and transcendent... ④The rhythm is average and smooth, and there are not many plots that promote the plot through unexpected situations. ⑤Multiple interruptions lead to great changes in the plot line in the later stages of the story.
2Father Mawe
Fantasy神父马维
Ke Xue's Dish
Please always be patient, polite and graceful. And... Don't speak ill of God.
Please always be patient, polite and graceful. And... Don't speak ill of God.
Final acceptance: T3 level. 2.93 Million words, complete. Work tags: cultivation, priest, management, light novel. Rating: A. Becoming a true priest is undoubtedly a very eye-catching setting, and the main plot of the religious version of the competition also makes readers full of expectations; B. The setting, background and plot development logic all make sense, but the actual effect... Combined with the writing style that favors light novels is even more difficult to describe; C. The author's writing skills are quite excellent, and the characters of most of the characters are also very comfortable. A brief comment in one sentence: I call you goddess, you call me daddy, we both have our own opinions. 1. Introduction The protagonist is the second-in-command of a licensed pirate gang who survived a catastrophe. He used the wealth accumulated over many years of licking blood to establish the Church of Truth in a small town with great geographical potential. From doctrine to rituals, everything was created from scratch by the protagonist. Even the image of the Goddess of Truth was created by the protagonist, the first priest. One night when the heaven and earth shook, the protagonist suddenly discovered that a little girl appeared out of thin air in the church. It was verified that this girl was actually the goddess of truth created by the protagonist... Countless gods descended on their respective churches overnight. Since gods and faith are closely related, from this night on, the dispute over religious beliefs will not be limited to the ideological level. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot prospect planned by the author is undoubtedly very attractive. As a reader, I can't wait to see the major churches develop from the initial stage of adaptation, which is calm on the surface and secretly scheming, to the time when the time is ripe for the gods to personally come to the end, and the war of religious beliefs that affects the whole world... I personally think that the actual effect of the author is not ideal, otherwise the rating of this book will be at least one level higher; Most of the character designs are actually quite good, especially the protagonist, who is capable and has attitude; The writing level of this book is a definite plus. The author's writing skills are also a major factor in why we have high expectations for the subsequent plot. 3. Highlights Reject the headline-grabbing behavior. The title of the book is "Father Mavey". The goddess will call the protagonist daddy, and the real priest should let God call him daddy. There is nothing wrong with it. It perfectly interprets the true meaning of a priest. No gimmicks. He is genuine and honest. The main plot with religious conflicts, battles for faith, and battles of gods as core elements; The author's touching descriptions. 4. Questions ①The level of plot design cannot match the high-quality creativity; ②The combination of light novel elements and serious western fantasy background is not harmonious enough; ③The idea is bright but the implementation into specific settings is not reasonable and perfect; ④The rhythm is erratic, the plot develops randomly, the sense of urgency seems to be absent, and there is a strong sense of fragmentation.
3My Weird Life
Xuanhuan我的诡异人生
Cut The Spring Breeze With A Bare Blade
In the age of the end of the Dharma, Li Gui has revived, and the world has reached a dead end. A watch passed down from his deceased parents allowed Su Wu to travel into the past and the future. The ancient inheritance that was cut off from the past, the taboos that were passed down orally, and the skills that fell into the dust are reborn. In the secret realm, there is a method of binding the evil spirits with sutras, offerings, and the body of the self; in the Kitchen God Sect, the art of refining oil, weighing rice, and frying the evil spirits... The fire was rekindled, and the chaotic mystery that shrouded the present and the future was slightly outlined by the firelight... - The new book "You Wei" is ready to be slaughtered, click on the author's avatar to get there directly!
In the age of the end of the Dharma, Li Gui has revived, and the world has reached a dead end. A watch passed down from his deceased parents allowed Su Wu to travel into the past and the future. The ancient inheritance that was cut off from the past, the taboos that were passed down orally, and the skills that fell into the dust are reborn. In the secret realm, there is a method of binding the evil spirits with sutras, offerings, and the body of the self; in the Kitchen God Sect, the art of refining oil, weighing rice, and frying the evil spirits... The fire was rekindled, and the chaotic mystery that shrouded the present and the future was slightly outlined by the firelight... - The new book "You Wei" is ready to be slaughtered, click on the author's avatar to get there directly!
Final acceptance: T3 level. 4.94 Million words, complete. Work tags: folklore, mystery, strange apocalypse, simulator flow. Rating: A. Mysterious and strange folklore, wonderful simulator copies; B. The integrity is relatively average, and reality and simulated copies are relatively separated; C. The author's writing skills are qualified and can fully display the weird and magical atmosphere of the story. One-sentence review: A strange recovery-themed simulator streaming novel with an inferior main line in T1. 1. Introduction In the age of the end of the Dharma, Li Gui has revived, and the world has reached a dead end. A watch passed down from his deceased parents allowed Su Wu to travel into the past and the future. The ancient inheritance that was cut off from the past, the taboos that were passed down orally, and the skills that fell into the dust are reborn. In the hidden realm, there is a method of binding Li Wei with sutras, mantras, offerings, and the body of oneself; Within the Kitchen God Sect, the art of refining oil, weighing rice, and frying it... The fire was rekindled, The chaotic mystery that shrouds the present and the future is slightly outlined by the firelight... 2. Plot, characters and writing level The main plot arrangement of "My Weird Life" is quite clear. The protagonist constantly escapes from strange resurgences and strengthens himself through trial and error in the simulator. The real-life plot is relatively ordinary, and the core highlight is the simulator copy. Character creation is not the focus in this book. Well-written novels with weird and supernatural themes often fall into the category of looking at people rather than looking at ghosts. The author's basic skills are quite solid and do not hinder the quality of the work. 3. Highlights "My Weird Life" is somewhat similar to "Mysterious Resurrection". The elements such as the unkillable Weird, the ability to control Weird through different means, and the ability of Weird to revive are all quite familiar. Even the protagonist's temperament has some similarities. The core advantages of "My Weird Life" such as the fact that Wei can't be killed, Wei is the only source of transcendence, and the correlation between price and power are all retained in "My Weird Life". However, the extremely stretched human plot and the protagonist's irritable character in "My Weird Life" have also been improved in "My Weird Life". I personally position "My Weird Life" as a version of "Mysterious Life" with less prominent core highlights and optimized and adjusted poisonous content. 4. Questions ① There is a big gap in the quality of the plot between the real part and the copy part; ②The author introduces too many systems and the overall structure is not very clear; ③The main plot lacks sense of existence, and the overall story is relatively divergent.
4You Call This the Mastermind?
Light Novel你管这叫幕后黑手?
You Have To Wash Your Hands Frequently
Civilizations change and eras restart. Returning to the age of steel and steam, the world is filled with chaos, madness, distortion and evil. Among them, a group of wizards called the Truth Cultists did even more bad things. They sacrificed to evil gods, besieged the pope, assassinated the emperor, and even started the First World War... All of this originally had nothing to do with the time traveler Melen. When the world was in turmoil, he was the one squatting aside to eat and watch the show. Until one day, this group of people came to him and insisted on recognizing him as their leader. They also said that he was the son of destiny and that everything they did before was because of following his instructions...
Civilizations change and eras restart. Returning to the age of steel and steam, the world is filled with chaos, madness, distortion and evil. Among them, a group of wizards called the Truth Cultists did even more bad things. They sacrificed to evil gods, besieged the pope, assassinated the emperor, and even started the First World War... All of this originally had nothing to do with the time traveler Melen. When the world was in turmoil, he was the one squatting aside to eat and watch the show. Until one day, this group of people came to him and insisted on recognizing him as their leader. They also said that he was the son of destiny and that everything they did before was because of following his instructions...
Final acceptance: T3 level. 1.09 Million words, complete (unfinished). Work tags: Western fantasy, light novels, magic, destiny. Rating: A. The author's prominent content is relatively radio-sensitive. Whether it is acceptable or not mainly depends on whether the reader belongs to his audience; B. So-so, almost all stories involving fate or behind-the-scenes flow are difficult to avoid bugs; C. The writing level is quite good, and the character creation can be considered a success. A brief comment in one sentence: selling both sheep's heads and dog meat 1. Introduction The world that has returned to the age of steel and steam is filled with chaos, madness, distortion and evil; Mysterious and supernatural forces hide behind the scenes in the real world; Sorcerers called Truthers sacrificed to evil gods, assassinated emperors and popes, and triggered a world war; The protagonist controls the golden finger that affects destiny... Trying to get it all. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot of this book is quite interesting. It is not the old-fashioned cycle of traditional upgrade stories that create conflicts, fight, and upgrade. The development and turning point of events and situations is the core content, which is in line with the style of behind-the-scenes flow; The author has put a lot of effort into character creation, and the effect is obvious to all. After all, what light novels want to highlight is character creation; The author's writing skills are quite good, enough to support a high-quality work. 3. Highlights As we all know, Chelsea, the top team in the Premier League, is also known as "car". The important elements of Chelsea that are talked about by fans are "bus" and "reversing". The heroine of this book is called Mrs. Chelsea. With this relationship, related fans should feel quite friendly and have a good taste. 4. Questions ① Western fantasy readers: Can the protagonist do something serious and stop hanging around women every day? ②Light novel readers: Can the protagonist do something serious? At this rate, when can he start falling in love? ③The rationality of the fate cheat + behind-the-scenes flow is hard to say; ④The disparity between the protagonist's influence and strength is too large, and it's a bit too much.
5驱邪从食尸请神开始
Crab Eggs
Maoshan altar, human skin lanterns, inviting gods. The Eight Trigrams are running through the arms, the wind is dancing, the faces are appearing in all directions, and the magic numbers are astonishing and can reach the sky. Nine Hells, Seven Mountains, Alchemy, Corpse Eating, Saha is unbearable, the five turbid worlds are evil, and all living beings are upside down, no matter how bad you or me are. Hello everyone, My name is Chen Ying, I am capable of both literary and military skills, and I am very or even nine times handsome. I was born in the spring breeze and grew up under the red flag. After experiencing an unnecessary but severe labor pain, I became a part-time worker in a non-traditional religion. The current goal in life is to find the source of all laws in the universe and become a sage who is proficient in the mysteries of the world. Our company has a long history, orderly inheritance, and specializes in contracting various civil engineering projects. We once buried a one-eyed stone man in the Yellow River. Nowadays, the competition among friends is unscrupulous. They can actually make such outrageous promises that as long as they change their faith, they can go to heaven and distribute various models of succubi. I still miss the traditional friends and merchants who shouted "Heaven is dead". I really hope to return to the original world. If you have a way to go back or are a beautiful girl, please contact me as soon as possible.
Maoshan altar, human skin lanterns, inviting gods. The Eight Trigrams are running through the arms, the wind is dancing, the faces are appearing in all directions, and the magic numbers are astonishing and can reach the sky. Nine Hells, Seven Mountains, Alchemy, Corpse Eating, Saha is unbearable, the five turbid worlds are evil, and all living beings are upside down, no matter how bad you or me are. Hello everyone, My name is Chen Ying, I am capable of both literary and military skills, and I am very or even nine times handsome. I was born in the spring breeze and grew up under the red flag. After experiencing an unnecessary but severe labor pain, I became a part-time worker in a non-traditional religion. The current goal in life is to find the source of all laws in the universe and become a sage who is proficient in the mysteries of the world. Our company has a long history, orderly inheritance, and specializes in contracting various civil engineering projects. We once buried a one-eyed stone man in the Yellow River. Nowadays, the competition among friends is unscrupulous. They can actually make such outrageous promises that as long as they change their faith, they can go to heaven and distribute various models of succubi. I still miss the traditional friends and merchants who shouted "Heaven is dead". I really hope to return to the original world. If you have a way to go back or are a beautiful girl, please contact me as soon as possible.
"Exorcism begins by eating corpses and inviting gods" - Level T3. Work tags: martial arts, fictional Republic of China, folklore, Hong Kong-style supernatural. Rating: A. The Hong Kong-style supernatural atmosphere is well created. Readers who have watched the film and television works of that era should be able to have a sense of the picture; B. The author's story has an unserious temperament, and its integrity is questionable; C. The author writes about the turbulence and characteristics of the times in a place where world cultures meet. A brief comment: The recent economic situation is not optimistic, and even my father-in-law has returned to his old career. 1. Introduction Maoshan altar, human skin lanterns, inviting gods. The Eight Trigrams are running through the arms, the wind is dancing, the faces are appearing in all directions, and the magic numbers are astonishing and can reach the sky. Nine Hells, Seven Mountains, Alchemy, Corpse Eating, Saha is unbearable, the five turbid worlds are evil, and all living beings are upside down, no matter how bad you or me are. Hello everyone, My name is Chen Ying, I am capable of both literary and military skills, and I am very or even nine times handsome. I was born in the spring breeze and grew up under the red flag. After experiencing an unnecessary but severe labor pain, I became a part-time worker in a non-traditional religion. The current goal in life is to find the source of all laws in the universe and become a sage who is proficient in the mysteries of the world. Our company has a long history, orderly inheritance, and specializes in contracting various civil engineering projects. We once buried a one-eyed stone man in the Yellow River. Nowadays, the competition among friends is unscrupulous. They can actually make such outrageous promises that as long as they change their faith, they can go to heaven and distribute various models of succubi. I still miss the traditional friends and merchants who shouted "Heaven is dead". I really hope to return to the original world. If you have a way to go back or are a beautiful girl, please contact me as soon as possible. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot design of the opening chapter is quite brilliant, highlighting the characteristics of the subject matter and having a certain impact. Character creation is one of the author's strengths. The famous debut novel "The Emperor's Training Diary in the Martial Arts Era" depicts several father-in-laws vividly, and you can tell at a glance that the author really understands the ways of the palace. It's not bad to be a well-known father-in-law. After all, being able to stand out from the many holes dug and left unfilled on the side of the road is a matter of time and again. 3. Highlights First of all, the author has made a super hodgepodge in terms of settings, such as the Queen who has ruled the plus version of the Empire where the sun never sets for seven hundred years, the Black Supreme of Egypt, the Thunder Emperor of Eastern Europe... It can be said that there are countless immortals; secondly, the author chose the great era of world cultural confluence and the intersection center of Eastern and Western cultures as the core story background; finally, the author uses the Hong Kong film and television style as the main tone of the work, and the use of jokes and memes is more appropriate. It can be said that the stage is very big, it depends on how the author plays it. 4. Questions ①The development of the plot is relatively abrupt and out-of-the-box. For example, the protagonist with a big background is inexplicably involved in street fights and supernatural events, which gives people a sense of abruptness; ②The combination of humorous writing style and ghost and supernatural themes has different effects; ③The opening chapter has 100,000 words, and the exact meaning of the inverted image in the title is still unknown; ④The author is a has-been father-in-law with numerous criminal records.
6我的模拟长生路
Angry Squid
The path to immortality is so difficult! What's more, the world of immortality has been completely changed by a plague! Mortals are infected with diseases, and once immortals come into contact, their cultivation level will decrease at first, or return to the heaven at worst, so immortals and mortals will be separated forever; immortals cannot practice together, and the entire world of immortal cultivation has become a huge dark forest;... Li Fan came through time, and although he had great ambitions, he could only wallow in the mortal world and waste his life. Fortunately, when I was dying, I finally awakened to the strange treasure, which was able to turn truth into fiction, turn real life into a dream, and return to the time when I just traveled through time! Thus, Li Fan began his long journey of life! In the second life, Li Fan finally gained power over the world after fifty years, but he searched the world and found no trace of the fairy. Only at the end of life can we see traces of immortals. In the third life, Li Fan tried his best and planned in every possible way, but in the end he was no match for the immortal sword! The fourth life... I, Li Fan, am a mortal, I will never regret it, but I hope to live forever!
The path to immortality is so difficult! What's more, the world of immortality has been completely changed by a plague! Mortals are infected with diseases, and once immortals come into contact, their cultivation level will decrease at first, or return to the heaven at worst, so immortals and mortals will be separated forever; immortals cannot practice together, and the entire world of immortal cultivation has become a huge dark forest;... Li Fan came through time, and although he had great ambitions, he could only wallow in the mortal world and waste his life. Fortunately, when I was dying, I finally awakened to the strange treasure, which was able to turn truth into fiction, turn real life into a dream, and return to the time when I just traveled through time! Thus, Li Fan began his long journey of life! In the second life, Li Fan finally gained power over the world after fifty years, but he searched the world and found no trace of the fairy. Only at the end of life can we see traces of immortals. In the third life, Li Fan tried his best and planned in every possible way, but in the end he was no match for the immortal sword! The fourth life... I, Li Fan, am a mortal, I will never regret it, but I hope to live forever!
"My Simulated Road to Immortality"-T2 level. 4.84 Million words, complete. Work tags: alternative fairy tales, mastermind, moral depression, reincarnation simulation. Rating: A. A very creative practice system and a self-justifying story cycle; B. The plot has been carefully designed by the author, and its completeness is ideal; C. The author has solid writing skills and a relatively restrained style. One-sentence review: A collection of the complete plot lines and guides for "Xuanhuang Ascension Record" produced by Taishi Li from the Moral Depression 1. Introduction The path to immortality is so difficult! What's more, this world of immortality has been completely changed by a plague! Once mortals are infected with diseases, and immortals come into contact with them, their cultivation level will be reduced in the slightest case, and in the worst case, they will return to heaven, and the immortals and mortals will be separated forever; Immortal magic cannot be practiced together, and the entire world of immortal cultivation has become a huge dark forest; ... I, Li Fan, am a mortal, I will never regret it, but I just want to live forever! 2. Plot, characters and writing level The author is very passionate about plot design and foreshadowing arrangements. The story development is unconventional and contains various clues. He is very skilled in digging and filling pits. In this regard, he is not like a novice author at all. The introduction of simulator elements makes the author even more powerful. The continuous reincarnation mode perfectly adapts to the writing technique with many foreshadowings and hidden lines. It is just like playing a game and digging out all the hidden contents through SL method. Of course, the author is quite restrained in the use of simulator cheats, which is actually more similar to the form of Tingri's "Death and Rebirth". Character creation is considered outstanding in the field of online literature. For example, readers look forward to the unlucky protagonist Xuanhuang, Taishi Li, who is in a moral depression. The author's writing style is not gorgeous, but the content to be explained can be expressed clearly, and the writing level is adequate for the category of online articles. 3. Highlights "My Simulated Path to Immortality" creatively introduces settings such as "Kung Fu cannot be practiced together" and "Aura Plague", which complements Tiandao as a collection of rules and more logical means of countering monks. Faced with monks who practice against the will of heaven and wantonly plunder, Tiandao greatly reduces the efficiency of fellow practitioners by changing the rules, just like a Kung Fu. With multiple people practicing, they cannot be promoted to the next level even after their lifespan is exhausted. This change means that monks who practice the same technique will be absolute enemies of each other. It completely shatters the foundation of the traditional sect system with the inheritance of techniques as the underlying logic. It directly shakes the organization of the monk group. It is a stroke of genius. 4. Questions ①This book is more like a full-plot game guide than a fairy novel; ② As the author continues to introduce new content, the story gradually becomes a bit bloated from the mid-term; ③Some details are slightly rough, such as the opening stage of Taishi Li who is often criticized.
7猩红之刃:漂泊之旅
Three Wolves And Six Birds
Wandering - wandering - traveling far - Honor-Hangover-Death- This is the story of an adventurer [Bounty Hunter][Blood Magic][Mythical Equipment][Dnd Desert World Setting][Witcher-style Adventure]
Wandering - wandering - traveling far - Honor-Hangover-Death- This is the story of an adventurer [Bounty Hunter][Blood Magic][Mythical Equipment][Dnd Desert World Setting][Witcher-style Adventure]
"Scarlet Blade: Wandering Journey"-T3 level. 600,000 Words, no updates. Work tags: DND Deserted State, Western Fantasy, No Golden Finger, Realistic Style. Rating: A. The protagonist's image is remarkable; B. The integrity is difficult to evaluate; C. Character interaction is a bit cumbersome. One-sentence review: It is recommended to treat it as a short story. Giving up the book after reading the owlbear hunting section is the most cost-effective reading option. 1. Introduction Wandering - wandering - traveling far - Honor-Hangover-Death- This is the story of an adventurer 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot of the story is relatively clear. The protagonist is a young and well-known bounty hunter who has gained the opportunity to join the Imperial Academy of Magic through years of hard work. The long-term plot aims at learning magic to save his hometown that is gradually being swallowed up by the swamp. The short-term plot mainly tells the protagonist's series of efforts to join the empire's mage training system. The character creation in this book is a bit polarizing. The protagonist's image is relatively successful, and it perfectly interprets the appearance and interior of a strong man. He has both outstanding strength and the extraordinary inner ability to control this strength. The other characters may be to set off the protagonist. Although they are flesh and blood, they seem to be a little too weak or emotional... The author's writing is of high quality, which adds a lot to the overall atmosphere. 3. Highlights The main highlights of this book are as follows: first, the author's writing style is more consistent with the background of Western fantasy, especially the protagonist's independent plot part, which is simple and lively, clear in expression, smooth and smooth, and the narrative technique makes people feel smooth and natural; secondly, the protagonist's character is comfortable, strong in execution, clear in goal, firm in heart, and clear in mind. As a seasoned adventurer who is young but has a long working experience, the protagonist is able to make decisions before taking action without losing the courage to take advantage of the fire. He has good strength and delicate mind, and is a bit like a tiger sniffing the roses; again, both the protagonist and the plot are relatively safe. The high-level Shuangwen mode is like the protagonist's fighting method, which starts with a critical strike to establish the victory, and then proceeds to patiently and steadily deal with it until victory, without giving the opponent any chance to counterattack, leaving the enemy confused in defeat and dying in frustration; finally, there is no special cheat introduced in this book. 4. Questions ① Although the title of the book already indicates that the nature of organizations that use blood magic is not too negative, the author deliberately used too much force in the early stage to create an oppositional image between the empire and the blood magic organization. The protagonist forcibly sided with the blood magic organization without any evidence, just like the empire and the blood magic organization in the Werewolf game. The former does good things and the latter does bad things. The protagonist says that it has nothing to do with me while choosing to side with the blood magic organization. This can only be regarded as a charging wolf... ②Compared with the smooth narrative of the plot, the character dialogue and communication scenes seem a bit tedious and awkward; ③ There is still a lot of room for improvement in the rhythm control. For example, the scenes between trading owl bears and defeating jackals are too slow and too fast. One reading experience is awkward and the other is inexplicably abrupt; ④The quality of the plot dropped off a cliff after entering the academy, especially the heroine, who was a failure among failures; ⑤Perhaps to highlight the protagonist, the performance of other characters is not satisfactory.
8Dnd: Make the Vampires Great Again
Light NovelDND:让血族再次伟大
Sazo
Tags: Dungeons and Dragons (including second generation), anti-hero, team running, all-member growth. "Lynn, I think we can make a deal." The enchanting devil licked his lips and said. "Spawn Linn, where can you escape to?" Pure-blood master Zar's bloody eyes narrowed. "Sir Lin En, thank you for helping us defend [Myconid Homeland]" After defeating the gray dwarf army, the myconid people cheered for joy. "I heard that a new tomb has come out, and there must be good things in it!" Hearing this, Linn couldn't help but twitch his ears, waved his hand, and called to his companions (Vampire Priest, Drow Barbarian, Constructor, Hobgoblin Bard...), "Let's go!" This is really a heartwarming story of "making the Vampire Great", but the method is a little abnormal, and the team members are also a little different. Maps involved: Pendor's surface, the Underdark, the Nine Hells (including the Abyss), the original world (not the real world, please do not associate it)
Tags: Dungeons and Dragons (including second generation), anti-hero, team running, all-member growth. "Lynn, I think we can make a deal." The enchanting devil licked his lips and said. "Spawn Linn, where can you escape to?" Pure-blood master Zar's bloody eyes narrowed. "Sir Lin En, thank you for helping us defend [Myconid Homeland]" After defeating the gray dwarf army, the myconid people cheered for joy. "I heard that a new tomb has come out, and there must be good things in it!" Hearing this, Linn couldn't help but twitch his ears, waved his hand, and called to his companions (Vampire Priest, Drow Barbarian, Constructor, Hobgoblin Bard...), "Let's go!" This is really a heartwarming story of "making the Vampire Great", but the method is a little abnormal, and the team members are also a little different. Maps involved: Pendor's surface, the Underdark, the Nine Hells (including the Abyss), the original world (not the real world, please do not associate it)
"DND: Make the Vampires Great Again"-T3 level. Work tags: DND, vampires, team adventure, traditional fantasy. Rating: A. Classic team adventure mode, the opening plot is also unique; B. There is a DND framework as the foundation, the main goal is relatively clear, and the overall performance is cautiously optimistic; C. The opening section is a bit complicated, starting from the Dark Territory officially enters the main theme of the story. A brief review: Underneath the abstract title is a rather traditional team adventure plot. 1. Introduction Tags: Dungeons and Dragons (second creation), anti-heroes, team running, magical weapons Linn felt that the only main mission of "Making the Vampires Great Again" seemed a bit evil-- [Prevent extravagance and waste, improve the cohesion of the blood clan, and the current task completion rate is 0.1%] If this is normal, what next? [Inducing a blood count to die permanently and clearing the team of pests. The current task completion rate is 1%. ] [Help the adventurer team break the 35-year-old death curse, the vampire's reputation will increase, and the current mission completion rate is 10%] [Let the vampire spawn be kind and charitable, the vampire become a neutral camp, and the current mission completion rate is 20%] ... [Strength has been greatly improved, becoming an elite adventurer, the current mission completion rate is 30%] When only Linn is left in the pure-blood clan-- [Becoming the leader of the vampire clan, the current task completion rate is 50%. ] At this time, Linn said, "In this case, can I play a little wilder? Anyway, greatness does not need to be defined." 2. Plot, characters and writing level The protagonists unite as spawns who were squeezed by the real Vampires. When the master is being attacked by adventurers, they fight back and start the legendary journey of making the Vampires great again from the Dark Territory. The character creation, especially for the core team members, is relatively successful, and there are no character types among the teammates that are too extreme or strongly objectionable. The author's writing level is average to above average, and the overall style is relatively relaxed. 3. Highlights First of all, this book is a classic team adventure mode. The author introduces core teammates quite directly at the beginning, which is in sharp contrast to the classic lone wolf protagonist of online novels. Readers who prefer traditional Western fantasy are worth a try. Secondly, the author gives the protagonist team the racial characteristics of the vampires, which on the one hand strengthens the character construction. On the other hand, it is also convenient to unfold the conflict between good and evil, and the plot of the story does not have the rigidity of copying a team battle report; finally, the author's writing skills are passable, the character creation and the smoothness of the plot are acceptable, and the reading experience belongs to the type where even if there are some minor flaws, it will not cause strong disgust. 4. Questions ①The plot structure at the beginning is a bit bloated, and the rationality of some links needs to be discussed; ②The protagonist's golden finger, especially the one in the spiritual space, feels somewhat familiar; ③The formation of the protagonist team was too smooth, and you can feel the more deliberate and authoritative meaning.
10雾海帆影
Ruffian
The Notes of a War Photographer has been written on EMO. I have opened a new book and written it to change my mind. Try to maintain stable updates, but focus on battlefield updates, so don't rush for updates unless you give me a reward of 10 million. One million is fine, and one hundred thousand is not unacceptable. In short, this is a story about fighting a naked butt-hairless sea monster and collecting some treasures to support the family. After the Valkyrie killed Poseidon, she carved the secrets of the world on the reverse scale, thus starting the Age of Discovery. There are six countries in the Star Sea Continent, a lawless pirate city, star-like islands in the boundless sea, and a treasure map that attracts captains. This is not the world of Caribbean, not Robinson's world, and certainly not Wang Lufei's world. This is a... A wild, weird, yet ancient new world!
The Notes of a War Photographer has been written on EMO. I have opened a new book and written it to change my mind. Try to maintain stable updates, but focus on battlefield updates, so don't rush for updates unless you give me a reward of 10 million. One million is fine, and one hundred thousand is not unacceptable. In short, this is a story about fighting a naked butt-hairless sea monster and collecting some treasures to support the family. After the Valkyrie killed Poseidon, she carved the secrets of the world on the reverse scale, thus starting the Age of Discovery. There are six countries in the Star Sea Continent, a lawless pirate city, star-like islands in the boundless sea, and a treasure map that attracts captains. This is not the world of Caribbean, not Robinson's world, and certainly not Wang Lufei's world. This is a... A wild, weird, yet ancient new world!
"Sail Shadow in the Fog Sea"-T3 level. 1 Million words, complete. Work tags: fantasy navigation, treasure hunting adventure, ship development. Rating: A. A fantasy sailing story with a relatively pure flavor, with the elements of ship upgrades that will make management enthusiasts ecstatic; B. It's difficult to evaluate the integrity. If you can't explain it, it means it's related to Poseidon's remains. I hope everyone knows; C. Originally, there was no need to worry too much about the control level of a mature author's work, but the author has both. A brief review in one sentence: "The Autobiography of Poseidon in the Underworld: Who hid my body!" >> 1. Introduction In short, this is a story about fighting a naked butt-hairless sea monster and collecting some treasures to support the family. After the Valkyrie killed Poseidon, she carved the secrets of the world on the reverse scale, thus starting the Age of Discovery. There are six countries in the Star Sea Continent, a lawless pirate city, star-like islands in the boundless sea, and a treasure map that attracts captains. This is not the world of Caribbean, not Robinson's world, and certainly not Wang Lufei's world. This is a... A wild, weird, yet ancient new world! 2. Plot, characters and writing level There isn't much to talk about in the plot. There are a lot of unexpected events and adventures. I hope that the subsequent plot development will focus on the protagonist's selection and planning. The level of character creation is so-so, and it seems that the author has no intention of making it complex, three-dimensional or diversified. The author's writing quality is passable, but it seems to lack some of the flavor of Western fantasy. 3. Highlights There are roughly two points of interest in this book: one is the classic western fantasy sailing style, and the other is the upgrade of extraordinary ships. The former is easy to feel, with classic elements such as activated vine cables, sailboats in glass bottles, and talking magic mirrors emerging in endlessly; the latter has well filled the needs of business readers in this genre. There are not many sailing stories in online articles, and many of them have chosen the plot route of expanding power to conquer the world. Presumably many people still have longing for free adventures, treasure hunts and secret explorations, right? Isn't it a man's romance to own a boat of his own, to continuously upgrade it through hard work, and to gradually move the boat closer to his ideal? Not to mention it's a super cool supernatural Ship of Theseus. 4. Questions ① The author wrote both books, and said that he wrote this book with the intention of changing his mind when he was tired of writing the old book; ② There are too many just-in-time accidents in the plot, which conflicts with the theme of sailing that highlights freedom; ③The role labeling is too thorough, allies and enemies are clearly distinguished and the tool attributes are prominent; ④The setting is too simple and crude, and everything can be Poseidon.
11Ember of the Old God
Fantasy旧神余烬
Shi Jiudong
Kingdom News headline: "Recently, through the unremitting efforts of the Ember Investigation Bureau, we finally locked in Lin Jie Leonard, a fanatical secret cult member who is trying to revive the old god. I believe that in the near future, this thug who seduced the saint, blackmailed the king, and beat the pope will die on the gallows. Light will eventually defeat darkness! " The next day, the Kingdom News headline: "Because Lin Jie Leonard, the director of the Ember Investigation Bureau, took the risk to go undercover to the esoteric cult, he repeatedly foiled the esoteric cult's evil plots and saved thousands of lives. The king decided to award Mr. Lin Jie the Imperial Order of the Sword and select a date to hold his wedding to the saint. Let us cheer for our great heroes! " ... Ash calendar year 1370. The esoteric cult activities that were rampant in the kingdom were finally effectively controlled. A large number of hiding pagans were arrested and many dens of evil god believers were destroyed, and I was the biggest contributor to this series of events. Because I rebelled - an excerpt from "The Autobiography of Lin Jie: My Years as an Undercover Agent"
Kingdom News headline: "Recently, through the unremitting efforts of the Ember Investigation Bureau, we finally locked in Lin Jie Leonard, a fanatical secret cult member who is trying to revive the old god. I believe that in the near future, this thug who seduced the saint, blackmailed the king, and beat the pope will die on the gallows. Light will eventually defeat darkness! " The next day, the Kingdom News headline: "Because Lin Jie Leonard, the director of the Ember Investigation Bureau, took the risk to go undercover to the esoteric cult, he repeatedly foiled the esoteric cult's evil plots and saved thousands of lives. The king decided to award Mr. Lin Jie the Imperial Order of the Sword and select a date to hold his wedding to the saint. Let us cheer for our great heroes! " ... Ash calendar year 1370. The esoteric cult activities that were rampant in the kingdom were finally effectively controlled. A large number of hiding pagans were arrested and many dens of evil god believers were destroyed, and I was the biggest contributor to this series of events. Because I rebelled - an excerpt from "The Autobiography of Lin Jie: My Years as an Undercover Agent"
"Embers of the Old God"-T3 level. 560,000 Words, no updates. Tags of the work: Esoteric Cult, card cheats, multiple identities. Rating: A. The background setting is quite interesting, simple, direct and consistent in style; B. The integrity is currently difficult to evaluate; C. The author's writing is very skillful, clear and can show the charm of the magical atmosphere. A brief review in one sentence: A novel about esoteric religion that you can give it a try but look forward to with caution. 1. Introduction Kingdom News headline: "Recently, through the unremitting efforts of the Ember Investigation Bureau, we finally locked in Lin Jie Leonard, a fanatical secret cult member who is trying to revive the old god. I believe that in the near future, this thug who seduced the saint, blackmailed the king, and beat the pope will die on the gallows. Light will eventually defeat darkness! " The next day, the Kingdom News headline: "Because Lin Jie Leonard, the director of the Ember Investigation Bureau, took the risk to go undercover to the esoteric cult, he repeatedly foiled the esoteric cult's evil plots and saved thousands of lives. The king decided to award Mr. Lin Jie the Imperial Order of the Sword and select a date to hold his wedding to the saint. Let us cheer for our great heroes! " ... Ash calendar year 1370. The esoteric cult activities that were rampant in the kingdom were finally effectively controlled. A large number of hiding pagans were arrested and many dens of evil god believers were destroyed, and I was the biggest contributor to this series of events. Because I rebelled - an excerpt from "The Autobiography of Lin Jie: My Years as an Undercover Agent" 2. Plot, characters and writing level The author's plot arrangement should be the highlight of this book. The protagonist's identity design is quite clever. If done properly, it is not impossible to achieve both hands with both hands, not to mention the possibility of deriving funny plots. The character creation in this book tends to be exaggerated, with a high proportion of extreme characters. The author's writing skills are relatively high, which is a plus point for the quality of this book. 3. Highlights The setting of this book is not complicated, but the style of painting is unified and the logic is smooth. The extraordinary elements are concentrated on the theme of ashes, which not only highlights the sense of weight but also highly fits the atmosphere of the esoteric religion. The power system is simple and intuitive, and the promotion ideas are simple but logical. There is no deliberately mysterious packaging, but enough room for development is reserved. The main focus is not to increase the number of entities, but it is enough. In addition, it is worth mentioning that the author's words can maintain a certain degree of appeal despite a relatively monotonous extraordinary structure, which is the best proof of the author's writing skills. 4. Questions ① The protagonist frequently encounters troubles, the threshold for the fate of the gods is not high, and the way to solve problems is slightly rough... These details make the story give people the bad impression of being like child's play; ② The important characters all have outstanding quirks. Although there may be reasonable explanations, it will inevitably destroy the atmosphere and sense of substitution of the work to a certain extent; ③Goldfinger is too simple and crude. The simplicity is reflected in the fact that it is like copying a card game and lacks proper packaging modification. The crudeness lies in the strength super model. The initial function is similar to being immune to all negative states and has top growth and scalability; ④ There is a lack of decisive highlights. The double identity of the protagonist may be considered a possibility but it has not yet been expressed with enough weight.
12Under the Nuo Mask
Urban傩面之下
Make A Cup Of Tea
When Qi Lin woke up from the interrogation room, he found that he had become the main suspect in a murder case. Confusing and confusing memories, contradictory evidence, and irreplaceable time gaps... Unreasonable murders point everything to a strange new world. Until he put on the mask and wanted to explore the truth through the eye holes, he found that all living beings were under the Nuo mask and could no longer see the future and ending clearly. [Urban suspense + supernatural powers + group portrait writing, stable daily updates of 4,000+]
When Qi Lin woke up from the interrogation room, he found that he had become the main suspect in a murder case. Confusing and confusing memories, contradictory evidence, and irreplaceable time gaps... Unreasonable murders point everything to a strange new world. Until he put on the mask and wanted to explore the truth through the eye holes, he found that all living beings were under the Nuo mask and could no longer see the future and ending clearly. [Urban suspense + supernatural powers + group portrait writing, stable daily updates of 4,000+]
"Under the Nuo Face"-T3 level. Work tags: folklore, suspense, urban supernatural. Rating: A. Masks + superpowers are no longer new. Maybe the element of Nuo noodles can be regarded as a feature? B. The integrity is difficult to evaluate, but there are very few works that can write well about official supernatural organizations; C. There is something special about the author's writing techniques and words. One-sentence review: A non-traditional web-style urban supernatural novel packaged with folklore elements. 1. Introduction When Qi Lin woke up from the interrogation room, he found that he had become the main suspect in a murder case. Confusing and confusing memories, contradictory evidence, and irreplaceable time gaps... Unreasonable murders point everything to a strange new world. Until he put on the mask and wanted to explore the truth through the eye holes, he found that all living beings were under the Nuo mask and could no longer see the future and ending clearly. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot has elements of suspense but not too much. When encountering situations that are difficult to explain with common sense, you don't need to think too much and just assume that Nuo Mian is responsible for the matter. According to the author's writing style and the label of the work, character creation should be one of the important contents of this book, but the character creation direction chosen by the author may not necessarily be in line with the tastes of ordinary online readers. The author's writing skills are quite excellent, not only limited to his writing skills. The author also uses metaphors, symbols and other processing techniques in the form of expression, which enhances the sense of substitution and makes the world he writes more vivid and real. 3. Highlights It can be seen from the content of the work that the author has both ability and attitude in creation. The setting and plot of the story are not too flawed, and the presentation techniques are often excellent. Personally, I feel that this is an urban supernatural novel with a high minimum quality limit. If you don't mind the content of the story that is not in the mainstream style of online literature, this book is well worth a try. 4. Questions ① The most obvious problem with this book is the writing style. It is a bit like ordering state banquet dishes in a fast food restaurant. You can really taste the difference in taste, but it is neither authentic enough nor served slowly; ② It is no longer the version of the Riddler, at least not in the current field of online literature; ③The follow-up development of the APP and the official organization is questionable. The former has a more abrupt sense of supporting plot tools, while the latter can easily turn into a negative burden that is unpalatable to both parties; ④The opening part is not without its highlights, but what supports the highlights is more the author's writing skills rather than the plot or setting.
13我的民俗文字游戏成真了
Cookies Are So Crispy
One day when he was fighting against life, Chen Che suddenly discovered that a folk word game called "Breatharian" appeared on his mobile phone. And the rewards obtained in the game can actually be brought to reality? From then on, his life changed. Ghost control, spells, soul summoning, support, exorcism, nightmare suppression, head reduction, witchcraft... Various means are available at your fingertips. However, just when Chen Che was living a prosperous life, he discovered that there seemed to be more and more strange incidents in reality.
One day when he was fighting against life, Chen Che suddenly discovered that a folk word game called "Breatharian" appeared on his mobile phone. And the rewards obtained in the game can actually be brought to reality? From then on, his life changed. Ghost control, spells, soul summoning, support, exorcism, nightmare suppression, head reduction, witchcraft... Various means are available at your fingertips. However, just when Chen Che was living a prosperous life, he discovered that there seemed to be more and more strange incidents in reality.
"My Folklore Word Game Comes True" - Level T3. 28,000 Words, the first 30 chapters are blocked + the author's account is cancelled. Tags of works: folklore, supernatural games, strange recovery, city. Rating: A. The author is quite accomplished in supernatural-themed online articles, and story mode is also the author's area of strength; B. The integrity is quite difficult to evaluate. On the one hand, there is still little content, and on the other hand, there is a lack of reference; C. After the author rested for a few years, his writing skills improved instead of falling, making up for his shortcomings in writing ability. One-sentence review: A new work in the comfort zone of a veteran author of supernatural themes. 1. Introduction One day when he was fighting against life, Chen Che suddenly discovered that a folk word game called "Breatharian" appeared on his mobile phone. And the rewards obtained in the game can actually be brought to reality? From then on, his life changed. Ghost control, spells, soul summoning, support, exorcism, nightmare suppression, head reduction, witchcraft... Various means are available at your fingertips. However, just when Chen Che was living a prosperous life, he discovered that there seemed to be more and more strange incidents in reality. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot of the story is roughly that the protagonist who is engaged in game development accidentally plays a mysterious text supernatural game. On the one hand, the gains in the game can be reflected in the real world, and the protagonist gradually acquires extraordinary abilities. On the other hand, since the protagonist starts the game, ghosts have also appeared in the real world. The character creation is at an average level in the field of online writing. There are no extreme characters, and the characters' actions and reactions are more natural and reasonable. The author's writing skills have improved significantly. The negative experiences that were relatively rigid in the previous two books have been basically eliminated, and there is even a subtle feeling of flexibility and freedom. 3. Highlights The highlights of this book are mainly reflected in the following aspects: First of all, there are only a handful of online writers who can truly show the charm of supernatural themes, and the author of this book is one of them; secondly, although the model of word games affecting reality has only emerged in recent years, it happens to be similar to the core idea of the author's debut work "I Created an Urban Legend in Tokyo", which is a popular element + original. The combination of powerful forces with successful experience reflects the author's ingenuity in story structure; thirdly, in this book, the author chooses to use his strengths and avoid weaknesses, using the protagonist as the starting point for the supernatural, that is, there is no systematic official organization, which circumvents the key pain points in the first two books; finally, the author's writing skills have improved quite a few years after he stopped writing, and the reading experience is smooth and relaxed. The jokes and jokes incorporated follow the trend and are not obtrusive. 4. Questions ① The author has a long criminal record and the book he writes cannot be completed normally; ②Compared with previous works, it seems to have less of a thrilling and depressing atmosphere.
14The Sword Comes Out of Hengshan
Multiverse剑出衡山
A Piece Of Sage Leaf
As a member of the Hengshan faction, Zhao Rong has become increasingly obsessed with rectifying his workplace. As the saying goes, the world is slippery and people's hearts are complicated. When our Hengshan School discusses art, there are a lot of big names gathered, including Xiaoxiang Yeyu and Guangling San, who are very loud. But in terms of combat power, who can DPS check? Even the demon sect elder Shangguan Yun, who was lying dead for a second, had something to say. I participated in the world boss siege battle. What is your record in Hengshan? "The business model of Mr. Yue's sister store next door is backward, and it must be in line with the five-year plan of the left alliance leader." "The direction must be clear." "We must build combat power and develop the guild!"...
As a member of the Hengshan faction, Zhao Rong has become increasingly obsessed with rectifying his workplace. As the saying goes, the world is slippery and people's hearts are complicated. When our Hengshan School discusses art, there are a lot of big names gathered, including Xiaoxiang Yeyu and Guangling San, who are very loud. But in terms of combat power, who can DPS check? Even the demon sect elder Shangguan Yun, who was lying dead for a second, had something to say. I participated in the world boss siege battle. What is your record in Hengshan? "The business model of Mr. Yue's sister store next door is backward, and it must be in line with the five-year plan of the left alliance leader." "The direction must be clear." "We must build combat power and develop the guild!"...
"Sword Out of Hengshan"-T3 level. 1.27 Million words, complete. Work tags: Martial arts fandom, Swordsman, organization and management. Rating: A. The entry point is novel and unconventional, with a certain traditional martial arts flavor; B. With the original work as a background, as long as the fanfic is not messed up and integrated, it is mostly OK; C. The writing is interesting, the sense of humor is relatively advanced, and there are certain problems with rhythm control. A brief review in one sentence: a traditional martial arts style fan novel with modern online literary characteristics 1. Introduction As a member of the Hengshan faction, Zhao Rong has become increasingly obsessed with rectifying his workplace. As the saying goes, the world is slippery and people's hearts are complicated. When our Hengshan School discusses art, there are a lot of big names gathered, including Xiaoxiang Yeyu and Guangling San, who are very loud. But in terms of combat power, who can DPS check? Even the demon sect elder Shangguan Yun, who was lying dead for a second, had something to say. I participated in the world boss siege battle. What is your record in Hengshan? " "The business model of Mr. Yue's sister store next door is backward and must be in line with the five-year plan of the leader of the Left Alliance. " "The direction must be clear. " "We need to develop combat capabilities and develop the guild! " 2. Plot, characters and writing level There is no big problem with the short-term plot, but whether the long-term rhythm is appropriate is still open to question. It is not impossible to invest hundreds of thousands of words before the protagonist joins the Hengshan sect, but the premise is that these hundreds of thousands of words have enough interest and value. The important roles are based on the original work, and the secondary supporting roles are played freely by the author. So far, the performance of both of the above is acceptable. The author has excellent writing skills, and his writing combines the cold flavor of traditional martial arts with the refreshing humor of modern online writing, which is a major plus for this book. 3. Highlights As we all know, most of the Swordsman fans started out in Huashan, and readers will inevitably get fatigued if they write too much. It is undoubtedly a very clever choice for the author to use the Hengshan School as the starting point. Similar to this, there is the Naruto fan "Red Sand". Choosing "Swordsman" as the background of the story is naturally indispensable for the plot of the arena. The author has also put a lot of effort into this aspect. On the one hand, it shows the value of morality and prestige in the arena. After all, "the arena is not just about fighting and killing"; on the other hand, the arena is not just about fighting and killing. It is a gray society that operates on the basis of violence. It is the businessmen who make money in harmony, not the people in the world. Therefore, if you blindly avoid fighting and killing, you will inevitably be killed. It also proves from another perspective that "if you are willing to fight, you will be in danger, and if you forget to fight, you will be destroyed." This is an unbreakable truth in the world. Personally speaking, the most exciting part of this book is the author's interesting creation of characters. For example, Lu Lianrong in "Darkness of Hengshan" is a typical example. One of the highlights of e-sports writing is the audience's ridicule of the players. The author has learned and applied it in martial arts fan fiction, and the effect is impressive. 4. Questions ① As a Xiaoao fanfic, the plot is a bit too linear and lacks surprises. In the middle and later stages, it starts to look more and more like the protagonist Long Ao who conquers the world; ②The overall style with modern humor can increase the fun, but it also makes the ancient style and rhyme elements in the author's writing slightly nondescript; ③As a martial arts fan, martial arts training and fighting are undoubtedly the core highlights. So far, there is no outstanding performance in these two aspects.
15The Final Gentleman
Suspense终末的绅士
Fatty In Yellow
Weary reader, I am honored that you have chosen this book in this heavy, dark library. Somewhat sadly, this book is sick. Your fingers should be able to feel the raised proliferative tissue on the surface of the book cover. The words written in the old days are like parasites taking root in the pages. I hope someone can observe their wriggling, feel, analyze, and touch the story of the disease. If you insist on borrowing this book, please be sure to check your physical condition regularly.
Weary reader, I am honored that you have chosen this book in this heavy, dark library. Somewhat sadly, this book is sick. Your fingers should be able to feel the raised proliferative tissue on the surface of the book cover. The words written in the old days are like parasites taking root in the pages. I hope someone can observe their wriggling, feel, analyze, and touch the story of the disease. If you insist on borrowing this book, please be sure to check your physical condition regularly.
"The Last Gentleman"-T3 level. 2.74 Million words, complete. Tags of works: suit thugs, supernatural disease, wasteland. Rating: A. The atmosphere is quite outstanding, and the world created by the author has a unified and unique aesthetic; B. The perfection and maturity of the system are average; C. The author's writing skills are average to above average. It is a bit stiff to match the characteristics of the story, but the overall effect is pretty good. One-sentence review: thugs in suits vs. Exotic pathogens 1. Introduction The core of this book is not complicated. It can be summarized simply in one sentence: The protagonist joins an organization called "Gentlemen and Doctors" to save the world contaminated by disease. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The main plot is still a relatively classic routine, joining an idealistic organization to save the world; down to the specific details, it means downloading a dungeon, killing monsters and upgrading; The character image template has a strong sense of déjà vu; The author's writing style has outstanding characteristics and appeal, and it fits well with the overall atmosphere of the story. 3. Highlights The biggest highlight of this book is the twisted and terrifying morbid world described by the author and the elegant and heroic thugs in suits. The friction and collision between the two create a contrasting beauty that erupts in distortion and depression. Monsters with strange and disgusting shapes but containing strange vitality VS "gentlemen and doctors" who are elegant and tidy on the outside but hide murderous intent inside. The author combines these extreme and opposite elements to create a picture with great contradictory impact. 4. Questions ①The author uses too much force to create the atmosphere, such as the more abrupt and blunt English insertions; ②The early routines are too "classic", with exaggerated exams + special academy + abnormal training, full of ancient flavor; ③The main characters are relatively templated.
16Mysterious Resurgence
Suspense神秘复苏
Laying Flowers In Front Of Buddha
"My name is Yang Jian, and I am already dead when you read this sentence..." A strange parchment scroll, an eye peering into the darkness, this is the story of a person who survived. ------
"My name is Yang Jian, and I am already dead when you read this sentence..." A strange parchment scroll, an eye peering into the darkness, this is the story of a person who survived. ------
"Mysterious Resurrection"-T2 level. 5.3 Million words, complete. Tags of works: writing about ghosts and supernatural beings, writing about people and super ghosts, thriller and mystery solving, supernatural recovery. Rating: A. Supernatural stories that are at the ceiling of the web literature field; B. Due to the adjustment of the outline, the integrity of this book can only be described in a few words; C. The text of this book is a little thin, but combined with the author's outstanding imagination in the supernatural field, it is full of atmosphere and ghostly. One-sentence review: The correct way to open this book: look more at ghosts and less at people 1. Introduction In the evil world of the five turbidities, hell is empty, evil ghosts are resurrected, and the world is like a prison. Ghosts have appeared in this world... Then where is God? I pray to God to save the world, but there is no God in the world, only ghosts. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The author of this book is good at foreshadowing. Many of the contents mentioned above and the emphatically described descriptions are related to the following. The descriptions of the appearance, behavior and impact of ghosts on the environment in the book are often full of profound meanings, which make people suddenly realize when the secrets are revealed. It is no exaggeration to say that there are very few normal characters in the book, and most of the readers who choose this book are looking for ghosts. Reading the text of this book alone may not be outstanding, but the supernatural atmosphere created by the author has the effect of turning decay into magic. 3. Highlights Ghosts in traditional supernatural novels are more similar to "souls" or "wraiths", mostly transformed after death, and the story content is more like a supernatural detective suspense. One of the highlights of "Mysterious Resurrection" is that it abandons the traditional setting of people becoming ghosts after death. The ghosts in the book are pure ghosts. They have no connection or communication with humans and only follow their own rules to kill people. There is a hint of weird spirituality in the rigid numbness. The author's rigor and persistence in setting are also very thorough. Unlike many novels that throw out eye-catching settings in the early stage to arouse readers' interest and then turn them into gimmicks and no longer mention them, the three settings given at the beginning of "Mysterious Resurrection" are adhered to from beginning to end. It can be said that the story is all basic. Based on the extension of these three basic settings, even the idea of upgrading the protagonist in the mid-term is also derived from these three laws. The scene where the ghost is possessed and he commits suicide with a ghost rope in front of the ghost mirror is a famous scene of the protagonist upgrading in personal online novels. The upgrades are so ghostly that it is amazing. 4. Questions ①The core content of this book involving ghosts and supernatural events is of good quality, but other parts may not be as satisfactory; ②The author's adjustments to the outline greatly affect the direction of the story; ③The quality of the story declined in the later period.
17我只想安静的做个苟道中人
Exploding Mini Latte
The new book "After Taking Over the Underworld, I Became the Chief of Weirdness" has been released, and the seedlings ask for love and care~ The short play of the same name of the book has been launched on Hongguo, welcome to watch. "Ding dong!" "Welcome to the fully intelligent cultivation system!" "You choose to practice [Bone Forging Art], and the system starts to practice for you. The system detects that the training elixir, Bone Tempering Pill, is missing. Please wait..." "The system has successfully stolen ten bone-hardening pills for you. Your practice will continue..." "Important reminder, during system training, you will lose control of your body..." After obtaining the intelligent immortality cultivation system, Pei Ling grew up rapidly and quietly, preparing to survive until one day... "Ding dong!" "You chose to practice [Unnamed Kung Fu]. The system detected that there is a lack of Taoist companions. The system is looking for a Taoist partner for you..." So, Pei Ling watched helplessly as he ran towards the training room of the Demon Sect Saint...
The new book "After Taking Over the Underworld, I Became the Chief of Weirdness" has been released, and the seedlings ask for love and care~ The short play of the same name of the book has been launched on Hongguo, welcome to watch. "Ding dong!" "Welcome to the fully intelligent cultivation system!" "You choose to practice [Bone Forging Art], and the system starts to practice for you. The system detects that the training elixir, Bone Tempering Pill, is missing. Please wait..." "The system has successfully stolen ten bone-hardening pills for you. Your practice will continue..." "Important reminder, during system training, you will lose control of your body..." After obtaining the intelligent immortality cultivation system, Pei Ling grew up rapidly and quietly, preparing to survive until one day... "Ding dong!" "You chose to practice [Unnamed Kung Fu]. The system detected that there is a lack of Taoist companions. The system is looking for a Taoist partner for you..." So, Pei Ling watched helplessly as he ran towards the training room of the Demon Sect Saint...
"I just want to be a quiet and honest person" - level T3. 4.78 Million words, complete. Work tags: Born Demon, Veteran Driver, System Flow. Rating: A. Stunning Tiandao foundation copy, sect design with different core concepts; B. It is difficult to evaluate the integrity. We can only say that there are significant changes in the focus of the early, middle and later works; C. The author's writing skills are acceptable, but there is a problem of over-description. One-sentence review: Selling dog meat over sheep's heads in every sense of the word 1. Introduction "You chose to practice [Unnamed Kung Fu]. The system detected that there is a lack of Taoist companions. The system is looking for a Taoist partner for you..." So, Pei Ling watched helplessly as he ran towards the training room of the Demon Sect Saint... 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot can be divided into two parts: the main part is the story of the protagonist's training in a demonic sect with a rather underworld atmosphere, and the secondary part is the funny content derived from the protagonist being tricked by the mentally retarded system. The character creation in this book is quite remarkable, for example, Brother Tang who is strong and shrewd and knows how to treat friends and foes clearly, Brother Han who is domineering and confident, decisive and will never give up, Brother Dong who is brave after knowing her shame but still forgets her original intention... Funny characters such as the protagonist who is born a devil and Brother Zheng who relies on his body to resist taking the blame can also make readers smile. The author's writing skills are quite solid, but he prefers detailed descriptions in the form of running accounts. 3. Highlights In my personal opinion, the best part of this book is the plot related to the foundation building of Heaven's Way starting from Han's Villa and ending at Pei's Manor. According to the setting, human foundation building is equivalent to using external force (elixir) to break through. Tunnel foundation building is an enhanced version of human foundation building, which increases the investment of external force (Five Elements Genius Earth Treasures). However, the Tiandao foundation building method involved by the protagonist is completely different in terms of ideas. In essence, it is similar to If you bet everything on yourself and the Heavenly Dao, God will send down an equal opponent to participate in the game. If the Heavenly Dao Foundation Builder wins, he can also take back the part of the Heavenly Dao generated by the Heavenly Dao. Therefore, his strength is far superior to that of the Dao and the Human Dao Foundation Builder. If he loses, his opponent will naturally take everything. The Han's Villa dungeon is more similar to the "sandbox" mode than the traditional linear process. The plot progresses layer by layer. The personalities and behavior styles of the main participating characters have their own characteristics while being generally consistent with the corporate culture of the underworld. They are not different NPCs except for their names; Fu The foreshadowing is clever and thoughtful, and many of the descriptions are related to the subsequent plot and have implicit hints. For example, every time the protagonist approaches a certain location, the system will prompt that there is a section that can record the foundation-building skills of the Heavenly Way, which very cleverly hints at the core content of the final truth, which is amazing. 4. Questions ①In the middle of the story, the author makes a lot of gains through the wealth code, but what is the cost? ②The plot quality is very unstable; ③The entire work contains an astonishing amount of water; ④The way the system determines the direction of the plot may displease some readers.
18Genius Club
Science Fiction天才俱乐部
City And Cicada
[Works with 100,000 orders, won the 35th Science Fiction Galaxy Award] "Since I was born, I have had the same dream every day, and the same day keeps repeating in the dream." "What have you done in the dream?" "Robbing banks, blowing up buildings, picking up girls, Grand Theft Auto... Anyway, it is in the dream, so naturally you do a lot Lawless things." "Tell me what you did last night." "Yesterday was more interesting. This is the first time I have dreamed about someone I know in real life..." "Yeah." The policeman nodded while taking notes: "You continue to talk, I'm listening."
[Works with 100,000 orders, won the 35th Science Fiction Galaxy Award] "Since I was born, I have had the same dream every day, and the same day keeps repeating in the dream." "What have you done in the dream?" "Robbing banks, blowing up buildings, picking up girls, Grand Theft Auto... Anyway, it is in the dream, so naturally you do a lot Lawless things." "Tell me what you did last night." "Yesterday was more interesting. This is the first time I have dreamed about someone I know in real life..." "Yeah." The policeman nodded while taking notes: "You continue to talk, I'm listening."
"Genius Club"-T3 level. 2.81 Million words, complete. Work tags: suspense, plot, dream future, urban superpowers. Rating: A. A suspense and mystery novel with a clear theme, and a story atmosphere that coexists with tension and humor; B. Based on the beginning of the story and the author's hints about depositing the manuscript, the integrity of the book is worth looking forward to; C. Although the author claims to be a newcomer, his writing skills are quite impressive and the reading experience is smooth and natural. One-sentence review: A dream-future puzzle story worth looking forward to 1. Introduction "Ever since I was born, I have had the same dream every day, and the same day keeps repeating in my dream." "What did you do in your dream?" "Robbing banks, blowing up buildings, Grand Theft Auto... It was all in my dreams anyway, so naturally I did a lot of lawless things." "Tell me what you did last night." "Yesterday was more interesting. This is the first time I have dreamed about someone I know in real life. She was a very beautiful girl..." "Yeah." The policeman nodded while taking notes: "Keep talking, I'm listening." 2. Plot, characters and writing level "Genius Club" is a work that focuses on suspense and puzzle solving. The plot is naturally the core focus of the book. So far, the plot of the story is intertwined with dreams and reality, and the plot development can be regarded as gradual. The characters don't have much highlights yet. The author's writing skills are excellent, and his words are concise and tense, far exceeding the level of ordinary newcomers. 3. Highlights Compared with the industrialized assembly-line cool novels where the theme is unclear, the length is determined based on achievements, and the map can be changed at will to expand DLC, this book obviously has a distinct theme and the story revolves around the concept of the Genius Club. Combined with the hint that the author's new book period cannot burst out and has enough manuscripts to be put on the shelves, this book is obviously a complete story with an outline and basically formed, and the subsequent development is worth looking forward to. The author's control of the rhythm of the plot is quite reasonable. He does not arrange too lengthy content at the beginning to test the readers' patience. He handles several turning points successfully and maintains continued attraction to readers. 4. Questions ① The author has laid the foundation for the concept of the Genius Club in the early stage. Whether it can meet the readers' expectations when revealing the truth and serve as the core to support a work is still unknown, and it is also the most critical factor affecting the quality of the book; ② In order to whet the readers' appetite, the author arranges many twists and turns. This technique is fun when done properly, but it will be counterproductive if the scale is not grasped properly. This is especially true for online readers who are not known for their patience and are accustomed to revenge without skipping a page; ③Compared with other types of stories, readers will pay more attention to the details of suspense and puzzle works, and have higher requirements for the author's logical rigor, especially now that this chapter exists.
19Necromancer
Game死灵法师
One Click For Ten Years
The Kingdom of God has fallen, and the sky is shattered and the earth is falling! I wander the boundary between life and death, uncovering secrets buried throughout the ages, and taking control of the power of nature and immortality. Become a legend in an era of broken order. This is the fate of a guardian. It's also my legendary way! The first part of Traces of the Dead has been completed. The second part of the odd-numbered series of changes in the sky is in progress. Original introduction: Travel to the game world. Matthew found that there seemed to be a slight problem with his system. "Occupation: Necromancer Mission: plant trees Target: 1,000 trees Reward: Summoned 'Bone Dragon' & a lot of XP" In this way, a necromancer who respected the way of balance more than the druid was born.
The Kingdom of God has fallen, and the sky is shattered and the earth is falling! I wander the boundary between life and death, uncovering secrets buried throughout the ages, and taking control of the power of nature and immortality. Become a legend in an era of broken order. This is the fate of a guardian. It's also my legendary way! The first part of Traces of the Dead has been completed. The second part of the odd-numbered series of changes in the sky is in progress. Original introduction: Travel to the game world. Matthew found that there seemed to be a slight problem with his system. "Occupation: Necromancer Mission: plant trees Target: 1,000 trees Reward: Summoned 'Bone Dragon' & a lot of XP" In this way, a necromancer who respected the way of balance more than the druid was born.
"Necromancer"-T3 level. 3.66 Million words, no updates. Work tags: Western fantasy, DND-like, balance, humor. Rating: A. Compared with the first book "Golden Finger" which specializes in curing squirrel diseases, although this book also highlights the contrast, it is still a little less interesting; B. The author is very detailed in the outline and setting, and the integrity of the work is trustworthy; C. The author's writing style is humorous and fluent, which is very suitable for relaxation and leisure. One-sentence review: External gimmicks packaged with internally sophisticated and interesting Western fantasy stories 1. Introduction Travel to the game world. Matthew found that there seemed to be a slight problem with his system. ... "Occupation: Necromancer Mission: plant trees Target: 1,000 trees Reward: Summoned object 'Bone Dragon' & a lot of EXP" ... In this way, a necromancer who respected the way of balance more than the druid was born. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The author's plot still maintains a consistently high level, and he hopes to recreate the famous scene in the first book where he slayed two dragons with his back. The author plans to increase the intensity of character creation in this book, and it seems to have a certain effect so far, but most of them tend to be exaggerated and funny. The author's writing is his strong point. Even if the plot settings are put aside, just reading it as a series of humorous stories can make people smile. 3. Highlights It can be said that the author of Ten Years One Key has found a path that suits him, which can be summarized as follows: "A gimmick golden finger that focuses on contrast" + "strict and sophisticated setting system" + "well-prepared plot with ups and downs" + "humorous writing style" Whether you are a medium-to-heavy reader who has certain requirements for settings and plots or a light reader who mainly wants to kill time, you can find fun in his works. The meticulous outline/plot design and light and funny writing style have created a very high limit. As long as it is a Western fantasy theme that the author is good at, you can basically try it with confidence. 4. Questions ① Although the humorous style is more suitable for the current market demand for online articles, it also basically loses the seriousness and epicness of Western fantasy stories; ②The game flavor of the golden finger and power system settings is a bit too heavy, and the sense of reality is not ideal; ③The content is relatively fragmented. Although the author is very detailed, the reading experience is slightly confusing from the reader's perspective; ④Although segmentation is helpful for mobile phone reading and makes it easier for readers to publish this chapter, too frequent segmentation can also make people feel uncomfortable.
20Immortal Disease Name
Science Fiction病名不朽
Be More Attentive
In the sick city, being sick may help you live a better life, but you may also encounter many bizarre things. If you are encountering distortion and weirdness, if you are fighting against sick rules, please don't give up hope, because I am on the way to rescue. I am a sick ginger tree, and I may be the last healthy person in the sick city...
In the sick city, being sick may help you live a better life, but you may also encounter many bizarre things. If you are encountering distortion and weirdness, if you are fighting against sick rules, please don't give up hope, because I am on the way to rescue. I am a sick ginger tree, and I may be the last healthy person in the sick city...
"The Immortal Disease"-T3 level. 440,000 Words, complete. Tags of works: black humor, disease, wasteland. Rating: A. Choosing disease as the theme of the story is not only novel but also contains irony. The world is... Sick; B. There are no big problems with the setting, background, organizational structure and plot arrangement, but the author focuses on the latter in terms of rationality and satire, and some points will be deducted for the integrity; C. The writing level is medium, the satire has a certain depth, and the character creation is a bit too strong. A brief review in one sentence: Excellent creativity, nondescript results, it's a pity 1. Introduction In a world where everyone is sick, medical history can be used as work experience, and patients are the masters with more human rights. Even the prayer has become "May the disease be with us"; Human beings breed diseases through illness, and then use the various abilities brought by diseases; Residence areas are divided according to human body organs. Generally speaking, which organ has disease will live in that area, and the brain area is the seat of the upper-class rulers of society; As the only completely healthy individual in the world, the protagonist Jiang Bingshu, how should he survive in this morbid world? Can he live up to his name and bring changes to the world like "a thousand springs before the sick tree"? 2. Plot, characters and writing level Compared with the setting, the plot is not amazing, and it is still a traditional routine of joining an idealist organization to save the world; The author has put a lot of effort into character creation, but there is also the problem of using too much force; The author's writing level is above average, which is completely adequate in the field of online writing. 3. Highlights The highlight of this book is undoubtedly the setting system with the theme of disease and the satirical technique of black humor. With a simple example, you can understand the highlights of this book: In the book, the lung area and the liver area are both residential areas of the middle and lower classes of society, but their main groups are different; There are many people living in the Lung District who have no hope in life and refuse to work for a long time. They are called the Gods of the Lung District by people in other districts; Residents in the liver area choose high-intensity work, regard 996 as a blessing, and work hard to make money; People in the Liver area look down on the Lung area and call them "Lung goods"; people in the Lung area think that the workaholics in the Liver area only work hard to make money for the capitalists and are nothing more than goods, so they call each other "Liver goods"; Lung goods and Liver goods often mock each other on the Internet. This setting in the story cleverly uses the plot of waste and liver, and readers will smile knowingly after reading it. After all, similar situations are common in reality, but it will also trigger further thinking. This phenomenon occurs in the book because the whole world is sick, so what about in reality? 4. Questions ① The element of satire enhances the ideological depth of the work, but ideological depth does not seem to be that necessary for online articles; ②The author's writing style is exaggerated and not very popular; ③ There is excessive force in shaping the character and the spirit; ④The ending ends hastily.
21Wild America: My Revolver Infinitely Evolves
Science Fiction狂野美利坚:我的左轮无限进化
I Milked The Wrong Cow
"Magic Killer Vika, isn't he the famous bounty hunter?" "The reason why we call him Demon Slayer is not only because he slaughtered many demons, but also because he is more demonic than demons when he kills people." "Mo Tuweika's soul gun is very special. Most people's soul guns only have one ability, but his soul gun has hundreds of abilities! "A series of major events that have occurred in recent years... The annihilation of the Doomsday Contract Cult, the resolution of the civil war, the storming of the Gate of Hell, and the demon slaying of Vika were all involved. " "It can be said that without Demon Slayer Vika, America would have been gone long ago! " "In this case... Why did the authorities put out a $1 billion bounty for the murder of Demon Vika, and why did they gather elite gunmen like us to hunt him together? " "Because the gypsy fortune teller said that within a year the demon Vika will shoot everything in the world with a smile on his face, including children, women, cats, dogs, flowers and plants! " "Gypsy divination... Is it accurate? " "It doesn't matter if he's accurate or not, we're all here for the bounty from the demon slayer Vika, aren't we? " "That's right. " "Then everyone will be hunting the Demon Slayer Vika's companions together! " "Yes, young man, what's your name? " "My name is Vika Valentine. " "..." "I have a name and a surname, don't call me Demon Slayer from now on. " "..." "..." "..." 'Bang! ' ~~~~~~~~~ This is the story of a Chinese soul who travels back to the American West, where he drinks, spits, picks up girls, and shoots guns. The gun speed is very fast, please wear a helmet!
"Magic Killer Vika, isn't he the famous bounty hunter?" "The reason why we call him Demon Slayer is not only because he slaughtered many demons, but also because he is more demonic than demons when he kills people." "Mo Tuweika's soul gun is very special. Most people's soul guns only have one ability, but his soul gun has hundreds of abilities! "A series of major events that have occurred in recent years... The annihilation of the Doomsday Contract Cult, the resolution of the civil war, the storming of the Gate of Hell, and the demon slaying of Vika were all involved. " "It can be said that without Demon Slayer Vika, America would have been gone long ago! " "In this case... Why did the authorities put out a $1 billion bounty for the murder of Demon Vika, and why did they gather elite gunmen like us to hunt him together? " "Because the gypsy fortune teller said that within a year the demon Vika will shoot everything in the world with a smile on his face, including children, women, cats, dogs, flowers and plants! " "Gypsy divination... Is it accurate? " "It doesn't matter if he's accurate or not, we're all here for the bounty from the demon slayer Vika, aren't we? " "That's right. " "Then everyone will be hunting the Demon Slayer Vika's companions together! " "Yes, young man, what's your name? " "My name is Vika Valentine. " "..." "I have a name and a surname, don't call me Demon Slayer from now on. " "..." "..." "..." 'Bang! ' ~~~~~~~~~ This is the story of a Chinese soul who travels back to the American West, where he drinks, spits, picks up girls, and shoots guns. The gun speed is very fast, please wear a helmet!
"Wild America: My Revolver Infinite Evolution"-T3 level. 500,000 Words, suspended due to the author's health. Tags of the work: mutant superpower system, imaginary North America, demonic invasion, ups and downs. Rating: A. The subject matter is novel, the plot unfolds wildly, and the character creation is not ignored; B. The overall style is relatively rough, but judging from the fact that the author has already determined the main characters and image illustrations in the opening few words, the long-term planning is cautious and optimistic; C. The author's writing foundation is quite solid, with a somewhat wild and free feeling. One-sentence review: American nonsensical magical western novel with a balance of violence 1. Introduction This is the story of a Chinese soul who travels back to the American West, where he drinks, spits, picks up girls, and shoots guns. The gun speed is very fast, please wear a helmet! 2. Plot, characters and writing level As the name of the book suggests, the plot unfolds quite wildly, which is very different from the Gou Dao style that has been popular in recent years, and there is no such thing as a novice village. The opening chapter is about a big event. From the introduction, it seems to be that it is mainly about one wave that has not subsided yet another wave of attacks. After all, as long as the world is chaotic enough, there will be no shortage of things for the protagonist to get involved in. It can be seen that the author has ideas for character creation and has implemented them well. At the beginning of the book, the settings and illustrations of the five main characters have been uploaded. Two of them have not even appeared in the scene... In addition, the images of the characters that have appeared are quite consistent with the author's illustrations. It can be seen that the author has a clear character concept in his mind. It is indeed uncommon to do this in online books. The author's writing skills are above the standard, and he has formed a certain personal style, which can be considered as complementary to the background of the Wild West; but why is the tone of writing the magical west exactly like this? "New Gods of North America" is the same. It has upgraded from fists and meat to guns and blood, and it still has a casual and unserious narrative tone, writing such bloody and exciting scenes as if it were everyday life and even a little humorous. However, on second thought, this is indeed quite American. 3. Highlights The power system in the book is called Soul Gun. It is essentially a superpower system with an added layer of American classic packaging (revolver). The advantage of the superpower system is that it has a wide variety of abilities. How to fully utilize your own advantages while restraining your opponents and also incorporate some elements of wits. , The disadvantage is that this kind of rule-based ability can easily become unbalanced and lead to a collapse of combat power. As we all know, even if the Platinum Master writes about the later rules battle, it is very easy to overturn. In recent years, the only more exciting novel about the supernatural system that I have read is "The Weird Containment Expert". This book chooses a more flattering system of higher, faster, stronger + superpower compound combat power, which is somewhat similar to One Piece's Haki + Devil Fruit. It can reduce the difficulty of balancing combat power while retaining the advantages of diversified superpowers. So far, the author's performance is quite remarkable. 4. Questions ① The big opening and closing of the plot can certainly help solve the problem of lack of big scenes in the early stage, but it can also easily lead to rationality doubts; ② Based on personal experience, the actual performance of so-called unlimited abilities is often not as good as deep cultivation of several core abilities; ③The background, settings and plot framework are relatively simple and straightforward, lacking some mysterious cultural charm.