The Sword Comes Out of Hengshan

It is said that the sword comes out of Hengshan. After reading more than 40 chapters, the protagonist has not yet joined the Hengshan sect, but he has learned various martial arts first.

It's an absolutely enjoyable novel. Once you get through the first few chapters, the rest will definitely be enjoyable. The plot is reasonable and the characters are full. The story has a rhythm and a sense of martial arts

But I can't tell a story and piece together some messy things. When you first read it, it feels like a martial arts style, but the storyline has no sense of logic. Forcing a disguise but telling a story gives it away. I really don't know who got the points. I guess one star will be deleted soon.

In recent years, I have written very good martial arts novels. I would like to call them the T1 batch after Heroes Especially in recent years, except for a few interesting short stories, there are few such coherent stories that can be written so well (although I borrowed the mature characters and martial arts factions from the Xiaoao books) After reading the whole book, the writing is generally smooth, and the use of allusions and quotations is a major feature, which to a certain extent makes up for the shortcomings of the author of the online article. The best thing is that it breaks away from the old-fashioned martial arts/Zhutianwen formula of practicing the strongest skills, sleeping with the most beautiful women + three-two first-rate, innate, and grand masters to defeat monsters and upgrade. Of course, there are also shortcomings. One is that the allusions are too deliberate in some places, and the other is the lack of growth of the characters, not in martial arts, but in character. Generally speaking, the protagonist is more to my liking, but the protagonist is a mature character from the beginning. From his personality to his understanding of the world, there is basically no change. This was especially obvious when I tried the second playthrough. The author's description is delicate and the structure is reasonable. In addition, the length is very concise among online novels, so that there will be no phenomenon of forgetting after reading. When you play the second time, you will have the feeling of a max-level character in a novice village.

The author is just claiming to be a fan, and the content has nothing to do with Swordsman. There are two hundred chapters in the book, and nearly a quarter of the more than 50 chapters are plots other than those before the original story begins. The pace is slow and the plot is as bland as water. Do you not know why you write fan fiction? If your newly written plot is exciting, forget it. The key is to procrastinate and talk about some things about darts and bandits. If the nearly 100 chapters have not entered the original plot, then there is no one. What a stupid dog. Under the guise of martial arts, he is actually writing a romance novel. It has nothing to do with Swordsman.

Forget about showing off poetry too much. You can just skip the fighting scenes if you don't know how to write them. There are only 50 chapters, except for palm-to-palm + vomiting blood or palm-to-palm + vomiting blood. It's endless. I don't know if there are more if I don't read later. These are just the protagonist's scenes. Everyone else is the same. Below are descriptions of the first four fights in the book. 1: When the boats on both sides were separated, wisps of blood flowed from the corners of Zhao Rong's mouth, and he suffered minor internal injuries. (A slap in the face) 2: At that time, after being hit by the palm, I felt like my whole body was burning, and a large mouthful of blood spurted out. I didn't know what palm technique the opponent used. (Change the palm) 3 Zhao Rong felt uncomfortable, and a mouthful of blood spilled from the corner of his mouth. (A slap in the face) 4: But at this time, Zhao Rong's internal strength is at a loss, and his energy is difficult to reach. If the strength of the ice had not offset most of the power of the hot palm, he might not be able to block this palm. He couldn't swallow the mouthful of blood in his mouth and choked it out from his throat. (A slap in the face) This is the fight in the first 50 chapters, which can be summed up in one sentence: palm to palm and vomiting blood. Can this score be so high?

This is enough for anyone to read. The author of more than 10 chapters will be updated soon

Martial arts novels are indeed lonely Original martial arts is not as good as original fantasy How can flying over the eaves and walls be as exciting as flying into the sky and escaping to the earth? Three days and two nights of sleep, the original work is also tepid, let alone others If you want to write martial arts, you can only rely on Jin Guhuang But there are so many rotten fish and shrimps in the martial arts genre In the past few years, there was a global sword debate and an online game called The Indestructible King Kong. Find another way to start with the game category. Unfortunately, these two sacred books started high and ended poorly. The last one who wrote nonsense about the indestructible Vajra Stronghold became very popular. All the settings about martial arts in it are nonsense. Writing like this is enough to prove that readers are hungry for traditional martial arts. It's not like there haven't been good martial arts writings in the past few years. But it's all because God's starting point is less than 300,000 words. Martial arts lacks capable writers This sword came out of Hengshan just as a result of the long drought and the rain.

The bright jade appears with a proud smile, the wedding dress is spread out against the sky, the eagle is shot to create four photos, the heavenly dragon lifts up without a sign. This is really something to hope for! ! !

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