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"Steam Sequence"-T3 level. 460,000 Words, no updates. Tags of the work: Steam Age, Mystery, Extraordinary Disease, Teamwork. Rating: A. It has successfully created a unique aesthetic that is both mechanical and mysterious, and the protagonist team can also be said to be distinctive and diverse; B. The overall nature remains to be seen. At present, it seems that the author should belong to the planned category; C. Extra highlights... Does drinking kerosene count as a cure? A brief review in one sentence: "The Age of Steam: A Battle of Extraordinary Patients" 1. Introduction In the fifth year after time travel, Jiang Qin, who suffered from lung disease, went bankrupt. He had to wander among the factories and new routes in Delran City, trying to find a way to solve the life-threatening debt as soon as possible, but he happened to witness the mysterious thing that the world tried hard to hide-- He witnessed with his own eyes his old friend being dissolved and corrupted into an indescribable mass of flesh and blood. The scarlet blade engraved with seven snake scale blood grooves in his hand whispered to him softly: "Hate whispers in the mist, serpents haunt the soot, and the gift of consumption has come in grand glory." "Forty mythological sequences are about to return." "Jiang Qin, do you choose steam and soot, or myth and sequence?" "Or, do you choose humans or me?" 2. Plot, characters and writing level The opening plot is not a good one, and overall it is closer to the traditional classic mode. The author has put some thought into the characters. The protagonist team covers three religions and nine streams. The characters are highly differentiated and somewhat like a group portrait. The author's writing skills are relatively good, and you can feel the imagination and picture from the words. 3. Highlights In the age of steam, extraordinary sequences are no longer rare things in today's online literature field, but whether they can bring out the effect of putting new wine in old bottles depends on how the author uses them. Generally speaking, the steam element mainly plays a decorative role in online articles, but the steam element in this book plays an important role in the plot. The giant steam engine, which can support an industrial city as the source of power, has both extraordinary mystery and mechanical beauty. The steam age has become a wrestling field between old and new forces; in the book The supernatural power system is still in the initial stage of exploration. Rather than power, it is more like the side effects of creatures suffering from supernatural pollution. The author uses images such as snakes/soot, rats/miasma, etc. As the external embodiment of extraordinary power, giving it a mysterious color with a more contemporary background. 4. Questions ①The author rushes out the emotional line before the story gets on track, and the content is relatively unfocused; ② The key clues are not laid out well enough, such as the mysterious and supernatural powers used by each of the accomplices are somewhat abrupt; ③The plot style is becoming less and less serious.

"The Hidden Library"-T3 level. 280,000 Words, unfinished. Work tags: variant unlimited flow, variant simulator, Cthulhu, fast pace. Rating: A. The dungeon theme selection is interesting and distinctive, with certain puzzle-solving and reversal elements; B. The integrity remains to be seen, there is a certain correlation between the copies, and some sections cannot withstand careful study; C. The good news is that the dungeon has a tight pace, but the bad news is that there are almost no other plot lines except the dungeon. A brief review in one sentence: Cthulhu style single-player unlimited streaming. 1. Introduction Open the archives, cut off history, tease the ancient gods, and mock fate. Xu Ming put down the book and couldn't help but sigh as he looked at the eyeballs and tentacles growing out of his body. "Sure enough, books are the ladder of human evolution." 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot is basically dungeon after dungeon, with almost no transitions. Since the author has chosen a fast-paced writing style, he naturally does not leave much room for character development, which can be considered a gain and a loss. The author's writing skills are above average, and the atmosphere-adjusting jokes and jokes are only so-so, which is not enough. 3. Highlights The author has properly controlled the size and style of the opening copy. Generally speaking, the early copy should be short and concise. It is not wise to test the readers' patience before the story has a strong appeal to the readers. Even if you have to arrange a big job, it is best to adopt a staged mode, and stop in time when the plot points are reached. This book does a relatively good job in this regard. The first two copies are both solved within 5-10 chapters. In addition, the author has put a lot of thought into the selection of themes and the creation of the painting style and atmosphere of the copies. Although the copies are short in length, they have distinctive features and prominent themes, and most of them have certain memory points. 4. Questions ① The plot lacks an absolute breakthrough point or a theme that runs through the entire story, and its appeal is highly dependent on the quality of the plot; ② Upgrading and strengthening is one of the core joys of Infinite Stream. The setting of this book is too limited in terms of freedom and potential exploration in this aspect; ③Many of the protagonist's operational decisions are based on head-to-head gambling, and their rationality is questionable; ④Compact copy can cover up many problems through fast pace. I wonder if the author of copy with larger content in the middle and later stages can still control it.