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"Necromancer"-T3 level. 3.66 Million words, no updates. Work tags: Western fantasy, DND-like, balance, humor. Rating: A. Compared with the first book "Golden Finger" which specializes in curing squirrel diseases, although this book also highlights the contrast, it is still a little less interesting; B. The author is very detailed in the outline and setting, and the integrity of the work is trustworthy; C. The author's writing style is humorous and fluent, which is very suitable for relaxation and leisure. One-sentence review: External gimmicks packaged with internally sophisticated and interesting Western fantasy stories 1. Introduction Travel to the game world. Matthew found that there seemed to be a slight problem with his system. ... "Occupation: Necromancer Mission: plant trees Target: 1,000 trees Reward: Summoned object 'Bone Dragon' & a lot of EXP" ... In this way, a necromancer who respected the way of balance more than the druid was born. 2. Plot, characters and writing level The author's plot still maintains a consistently high level, and he hopes to recreate the famous scene in the first book where he slayed two dragons with his back. The author plans to increase the intensity of character creation in this book, and it seems to have a certain effect so far, but most of them tend to be exaggerated and funny. The author's writing is his strong point. Even if the plot settings are put aside, just reading it as a series of humorous stories can make people smile. 3. Highlights It can be said that the author of Ten Years One Key has found a path that suits him, which can be summarized as follows: "A gimmick golden finger that focuses on contrast" + "strict and sophisticated setting system" + "well-prepared plot with ups and downs" + "humorous writing style" Whether you are a medium-to-heavy reader who has certain requirements for settings and plots or a light reader who mainly wants to kill time, you can find fun in his works. The meticulous outline/plot design and light and funny writing style have created a very high limit. As long as it is a Western fantasy theme that the author is good at, you can basically try it with confidence. 4. Questions ① Although the humorous style is more suitable for the current market demand for online articles, it also basically loses the seriousness and epicness of Western fantasy stories; ②The game flavor of the golden finger and power system settings is a bit too heavy, and the sense of reality is not ideal; ③The content is relatively fragmented. Although the author is very detailed, the reading experience is slightly confusing from the reader's perspective; ④Although segmentation is helpful for mobile phone reading and makes it easier for readers to publish this chapter, too frequent segmentation can also make people feel uncomfortable.

"Wild America: My Revolver Infinite Evolution"-T3 level. 500,000 Words, suspended due to the author's health. Tags of the work: mutant superpower system, imaginary North America, demonic invasion, ups and downs. Rating: A. The subject matter is novel, the plot unfolds wildly, and the character creation is not ignored; B. The overall style is relatively rough, but judging from the fact that the author has already determined the main characters and image illustrations in the opening few words, the long-term planning is cautious and optimistic; C. The author's writing foundation is quite solid, with a somewhat wild and free feeling. One-sentence review: American nonsensical magical western novel with a balance of violence 1. Introduction This is the story of a Chinese soul who travels back to the American West, where he drinks, spits, picks up girls, and shoots guns. The gun speed is very fast, please wear a helmet! 2. Plot, characters and writing level As the name of the book suggests, the plot unfolds quite wildly, which is very different from the Gou Dao style that has been popular in recent years, and there is no such thing as a novice village. The opening chapter is about a big event. From the introduction, it seems to be that it is mainly about one wave that has not subsided yet another wave of attacks. After all, as long as the world is chaotic enough, there will be no shortage of things for the protagonist to get involved in. It can be seen that the author has ideas for character creation and has implemented them well. At the beginning of the book, the settings and illustrations of the five main characters have been uploaded. Two of them have not even appeared in the scene... In addition, the images of the characters that have appeared are quite consistent with the author's illustrations. It can be seen that the author has a clear character concept in his mind. It is indeed uncommon to do this in online books. The author's writing skills are above the standard, and he has formed a certain personal style, which can be considered as complementary to the background of the Wild West; but why is the tone of writing the magical west exactly like this? "New Gods of North America" ​​is the same. It has upgraded from fists and meat to guns and blood, and it still has a casual and unserious narrative tone, writing such bloody and exciting scenes as if it were everyday life and even a little humorous. However, on second thought, this is indeed quite American. 3. Highlights The power system in the book is called Soul Gun. It is essentially a superpower system with an added layer of American classic packaging (revolver). The advantage of the superpower system is that it has a wide variety of abilities. How to fully utilize your own advantages while restraining your opponents and also incorporate some elements of wits. , The disadvantage is that this kind of rule-based ability can easily become unbalanced and lead to a collapse of combat power. As we all know, even if the Platinum Master writes about the later rules battle, it is very easy to overturn. In recent years, the only more exciting novel about the supernatural system that I have read is "The Weird Containment Expert". This book chooses a more flattering system of higher, faster, stronger + superpower compound combat power, which is somewhat similar to One Piece's Haki + Devil Fruit. It can reduce the difficulty of balancing combat power while retaining the advantages of diversified superpowers. So far, the author's performance is quite remarkable. 4. Questions ① The big opening and closing of the plot can certainly help solve the problem of lack of big scenes in the early stage, but it can also easily lead to rationality doubts; ② Based on personal experience, the actual performance of so-called unlimited abilities is often not as good as deep cultivation of several core abilities; ③The background, settings and plot framework are relatively simple and straightforward, lacking some mysterious cultural charm.

"Steam Sequence"-T3 level. 460,000 Words, no updates. Tags of the work: Steam Age, Mystery, Extraordinary Disease, Teamwork. Rating: A. It has successfully created a unique aesthetic that is both mechanical and mysterious, and the protagonist team can also be said to be distinctive and diverse; B. The overall nature remains to be seen. At present, it seems that the author should belong to the planned category; C. Extra highlights... Does drinking kerosene count as a cure? A brief review in one sentence: "The Age of Steam: A Battle of Extraordinary Patients" 1. Introduction In the fifth year after time travel, Jiang Qin, who suffered from lung disease, went bankrupt. He had to wander among the factories and new routes in Delran City, trying to find a way to solve the life-threatening debt as soon as possible, but he happened to witness the mysterious thing that the world tried hard to hide-- He witnessed with his own eyes his old friend being dissolved and corrupted into an indescribable mass of flesh and blood. The scarlet blade engraved with seven snake scale blood grooves in his hand whispered to him softly: "Hate whispers in the mist, serpents haunt the soot, and the gift of consumption has come in grand glory." "Forty mythological sequences are about to return." "Jiang Qin, do you choose steam and soot, or myth and sequence?" "Or, do you choose humans or me?" 2. Plot, characters and writing level The opening plot is not a good one, and overall it is closer to the traditional classic mode. The author has put some thought into the characters. The protagonist team covers three religions and nine streams. The characters are highly differentiated and somewhat like a group portrait. The author's writing skills are relatively good, and you can feel the imagination and picture from the words. 3. Highlights In the age of steam, extraordinary sequences are no longer rare things in today's online literature field, but whether they can bring out the effect of putting new wine in old bottles depends on how the author uses them. Generally speaking, the steam element mainly plays a decorative role in online articles, but the steam element in this book plays an important role in the plot. The giant steam engine, which can support an industrial city as the source of power, has both extraordinary mystery and mechanical beauty. The steam age has become a wrestling field between old and new forces; in the book The supernatural power system is still in the initial stage of exploration. Rather than power, it is more like the side effects of creatures suffering from supernatural pollution. The author uses images such as snakes/soot, rats/miasma, etc. As the external embodiment of extraordinary power, giving it a mysterious color with a more contemporary background. 4. Questions ①The author rushes out the emotional line before the story gets on track, and the content is relatively unfocused; ② The key clues are not laid out well enough, such as the mysterious and supernatural powers used by each of the accomplices are somewhat abrupt; ③The plot style is becoming less and less serious.

"The Hidden Library"-T3 level. 280,000 Words, unfinished. Work tags: variant unlimited flow, variant simulator, Cthulhu, fast pace. Rating: A. The dungeon theme selection is interesting and distinctive, with certain puzzle-solving and reversal elements; B. The integrity remains to be seen, there is a certain correlation between the copies, and some sections cannot withstand careful study; C. The good news is that the dungeon has a tight pace, but the bad news is that there are almost no other plot lines except the dungeon. A brief review in one sentence: Cthulhu style single-player unlimited streaming. 1. Introduction Open the archives, cut off history, tease the ancient gods, and mock fate. Xu Ming put down the book and couldn't help but sigh as he looked at the eyeballs and tentacles growing out of his body. "Sure enough, books are the ladder of human evolution." 2. Plot, characters and writing level The plot is basically dungeon after dungeon, with almost no transitions. Since the author has chosen a fast-paced writing style, he naturally does not leave much room for character development, which can be considered a gain and a loss. The author's writing skills are above average, and the atmosphere-adjusting jokes and jokes are only so-so, which is not enough. 3. Highlights The author has properly controlled the size and style of the opening copy. Generally speaking, the early copy should be short and concise. It is not wise to test the readers' patience before the story has a strong appeal to the readers. Even if you have to arrange a big job, it is best to adopt a staged mode, and stop in time when the plot points are reached. This book does a relatively good job in this regard. The first two copies are both solved within 5-10 chapters. In addition, the author has put a lot of thought into the selection of themes and the creation of the painting style and atmosphere of the copies. Although the copies are short in length, they have distinctive features and prominent themes, and most of them have certain memory points. 4. Questions ① The plot lacks an absolute breakthrough point or a theme that runs through the entire story, and its appeal is highly dependent on the quality of the plot; ② Upgrading and strengthening is one of the core joys of Infinite Stream. The setting of this book is too limited in terms of freedom and potential exploration in this aspect; ③Many of the protagonist's operational decisions are based on head-to-head gambling, and their rationality is questionable; ④Compact copy can cover up many problems through fast pace. I wonder if the author of copy with larger content in the middle and later stages can still control it.