[Sacrifice to the Dead at Lingyan Pavilion]

It's a decent story about supernatural powers that's worth reading. The book was written early, and some parts looked awkward. For example, when writing about the Tea Fairy, I didn't realize how awesome he was, but the author couldn't wait to brag about it. The creation of the worldview is not detailed enough and lacks a sense of substitution. The fight scenes are a mess.

One person can never truly convince another person-at least not a few words online. An author can only write what he wants to write - at least in most cases. To be honest, there are a lot of problems in volumes 1 and 2 of this book, but I feel that the flaws outweigh the flaws, and there are still some things that can support me in reading. But what did you write in Volume 3? Into the classical, oriental, fantasy, martial arts, and chivalrous world view that you laid out in Volumes 1, 2, and 3, you inserted your so-called characteristic emotional line that is inexplicable and incomprehensible in blockbusters, and that most people have already mastered in light novels. What a disaster. Pei Ye, the male protagonist in your novel, a childish but sharp swordsman, arrived in Shenjing and became the target of every beautiful and positive female character. After all, he went through more than 2 million words of beatings and killings. Life and death, I have been used to seeing so many human emotions, but there is a childhood sweetheart that has never started and a relatively complete first love, and the result is as innocent as a 13-14-year-old girl who has never left home. I can no longer tell whether I am pretending to be innocent or really innocent. My intuition tells me that I am pretending to be innocent, but you read between the lines that he might really be that innocent. Ming Qitian, how do you want to write it? Do you want to write it like a classic Liu Beiwen routine like the fairy falling into the mortal world? But others are more or less fake fairies, but you are more or less a real sword fairy. Is she both a teacher and a friend, a sister and a mother, or is there more love between a man and a woman? I can't see it, and I have no intention of distinguishing it, because your brushstrokes are as ambiguous as the characters you write. It's just like what you claimed - you don't have a harem if you don't trade in stocks. However, after you established a relationship with your current girlfriend, your interactions with your ex-girlfriend were written in such a way that it's easy for people to misunderstand. It's no wonder that some book friends started scolding you in the group, because your writing was so ambiguous. This book might as well be renamed Ambiguity Lord. People and things are all shrouded in such a shadow, and it also involves more contradictions and dilemmas. Also, I wrote about where I dreamed. Why did Xiao Li and the male protagonist break up earlier? You have to take care of the sect, right? You won't go to the Sword Training Academy for two years, so what now? Less than half a year later, he still came to Shenjinglang, and even stepped up a series of scenes opposite Li Biao, which was unbelievable. I don't even want to talk about the bad life of a fan club. If the tone of a work is very serious or even depressing, it is okay to add some light-hearted things to it, but if you use large sections to make it superficial and to consume the strong character of the characters, I have to wonder if your intention is to screen readers. A book friend said it well, 9 out of 10 chapters will disgust you, and the last chapter will make you feel better. It was identified as Wenqing disease. Never again.

I was persuaded to quit at the beginning. The protagonist's IQ depends on the plot, and the logic of his actions is inconsistent. The magical power and traditional historical style are not organically combined, and they appear to be neither fish nor fowl. For Shaosong's sake, I ordered a lot of chapters. I regret it. Don't subscribe in advance. It's best to read a few chapters and order a few!

I probably read about 700,000 to 800,000 words. It's really good-looking at the front, with top-notch plot pacing, vivid and vivid character portrayals, and top-notch driving skills. However, maybe it's because of the book. After reading more than a hundred chapters, it becomes a bit boring to read it. My mood has changed and I can't see it no matter how hard I look. I really can't keep books for too long in the future. Harmful.

The Eve of Upgrade-a tasteless light cyberpunk novel This book almost satisfies all my stereotypes about cyberpunk: the future city under neon lights, the crooked technology tree, the reorganization of power after technological changes, the collapse of the living order of ordinary people, the alienation of human nature... But - But they are all too superficial, without rich details, they simply throw out the settings, and there is no sense of substitution. It's better to watch a movie and just see the scene of the future city, which is attractive enough. The story itself is not attractive enough, and the character and motivations of the protagonist are not handled well enough. The real science fiction comes from those traditionally published writers, including Liu Cixin. Doing science fiction in online articles? Either you can't do it well, or what you're doing is not pure science fiction. -------------- On the contrary, the closing speech is quite well written. The author has taken out some fragments of contemplation during the writing process, which shows his sensitivity to life and his exploration of his own life and works.

Solemn statement: The following opinions come from the perspective of a person who has read the first part and the summary of the first part of Lord of Mysteries and Circle of Fate. (I don't care about the rest of the plot. Of course judging from the reactions, it seems that the rest of the plot is also broken) From the summary of the first part and many other places, we can see that Squid likes to challenge himself, especially in writing. So in the first part of Circle of Fate, in a little more than a hundred chapters, he told us a very "old-fashioned" story, because this kind of time loop story is actually very common. The ones I know about include the movie "Edge of Tomorrow", the novel "Dragons", and the TV series "The Beginning". There are definitely more that I don't know. But there's a problem with Cuiyu's writing: it lacks a sense of urgency. In this type of story, the protagonist learns from constant experiences and expands his own methods. The situation is usually very critical, and the number of cycles is not infinite. Only in this way can tension, intensity and conflict look good. But in the first part of Circle of Fate, I couldn't feel the sense of urgency. As someone who has read Mysterious, I saw the appearance of Miss Salted Fish, saw the gaze of the old [Circle of Fate] in the title of the book, and then associated a little bit of the protagonist's halo, and saw that the protagonist even took some time to kill monsters and upgrade in the dream world, what sense of urgency can I have? Then comes the ending of the dream that Squid seems quite proud of. All I can say is, disaster. There are a lot of so-called bright and dark lines interspersed, and a lot of unintelligible and ambiguous hints. What do you want to express? Or do you simply want to let the readers guess and deceive based on various clues, and in the last two chapters, dreams are thrown in to explain, and everyone suddenly realizes: Oh, it turns out that this is the case, some details match up, it's fun! So awesome! No, it's not fun, it's not awesome. This game where the information between readers and authors is completely unequal is not fun at all. At least I personally can't get it at all. What is really fun is a form similar to the original reasoning of Japanese detective novels. That is the real reasoning game, not like this. The nondescript writing style and extremely confusing expressions make reading no fun at all. Thirdly, when I read Mystery, a large part of my pleasure comes from the unfolding of the worldview and the revelation of the setting. As a sequel, this part is really less fun. Of course it is inevitable. So, that's the end of it. I personally no longer have any motivation to read the rest.

This is the first time I read this kind of book. After reading a few chapters, I felt sick. Is the so-called "dark flow" meant to indiscriminately fight for one's own survival? That's really appalling. After reading the comment section, it was called "The Growth of the Evil God". That's even more awesome. First of all, I am a human being, and I will only sympathize with those innocent people you killed indiscriminately. Secondly, I am a human being. Whether it is the rules engraved in my genes or decades of modern ideological education, I can only regard you as an enemy. It is said that feudal ethics kill people, but that is "the cold sun and the warm moon are used to fry people's life." This is better for you, it will be directly destroyed physically. There is also the book review area that has been obviously purified. Those who label all objections as "Holy Mother", I just want to say, why don't you read the records of various major cases? Isn't the pure evil of human nature in them more shocking than your nondescript evil god's growth diary? Those people are also very "enterprising". In order to stand higher and for their own selfish desires, they do the most basic operations. How "enterprising"! If everyone is no longer "Holy Mother", you will only be the first. Some people should not regard their abnormal psychology as capital to be proud of. It's so funny.

The writing is good, and the atmosphere in the front is very folky and weird. The end of the first dungeon in the free chapter, Deus Ex Machina, is boring. When entering the next dungeon from the paid chapter, it doesn't have the same flavor anymore. It just feels like an ordinary monster-fighting and leveling up. My favorite character, Aquarius, is not with me either, so it's just boring. Hey, a lot of books I've been reading recently have a fascinating beginning, but when the novelty wears off, I immediately feel a huge gap. Keeping readers fresh is also a big problem for authors to solve.

I read more than sixty chapters. Let's talk about the advantages first. The author is a doctor of Harbin Institute of Technology. His writing is logical and his writing style is above average. And, I really hate the idea of ​​"destined people." Although the protagonists of all the novels we read are undoubtedly "destined people", the protagonist himself should not know it. People should be able to see the protagonist's efforts, struggles and resistance, and what kind of courage and means he uses to reach the top or save the world. Rather than like this, the beginning is about the choice of "fate", the beginning is about the different treatment of various gods, and the protagonist is left to teach the protagonist how to use cheats to speed pass. It's as if it doesn't matter what the protagonist chooses or whether he works hard or not. People, things, and things all revolve around him anyway. God will always favor him, and everything runs on an established track. So what's the point? This is my opinion, but I don't rule out that some people would like this. In the final analysis, you still have to go and see for yourself.

Chen Dong's peak remained in the Tomb of Gods to perfection. From Holy Ruins to Ye Wujiang, I only saw perfunctory performance. The plot is not distracting at all, the villains are sent off in waves without thinking, and passers-by are amazed. There is also this huge flood, which is unbearable. Although the same routine seems to have been used before, there are also differences between routines. Can those wonderful characterizations and thoughtful plot designs never come back? Maybe Dongzi's imagination has been drained by so many years of writing, maybe I am really tired of my aesthetic after reading for so many years... In short, that's it. I will always remember the shock brought by Immortality, God's Tomb, Immortal Realm, Covering the Sky, and the Perfect World.

Good book. On a scale of 10 points, the first three films would probably have 9.8 Points, and the following ones would have 8.5 Points. The beginning is indeed a bit blurry, but as the world view slowly unfolds and various characters appear, it becomes more and more attractive. In the first part, while the world view unfolds, the plot is actually very tight, and there is almost no leisure time. In the second and third parts, he became the great detective of Backlund and became an adventurer on the sea. The plot became more and more developed, and the interest brought by the world view and the attraction brought by the plot characters reached a climax. By the fourth part, things started to develop in a strange direction. Becoming a millionaire and stealing notes, there was something wrong with the rhythm and design in the middle. There was a big difference between the anticipation brought about by the foreshadowing and the final result. Then, there were more descriptions of various gods and angels, but it was very confusing and a bit boring. I basically read it in one glance and ten lines, and then the vicious cycle became more and more resistant to similar things. Of course, we cannot blindly rely on the expansion of the worldview to attract people. In the end, we must include all kinds of gods, divine battles and so on. I can feel that the author has tried his best to write it, but it is unavoidable that there is a big gap with the previous stage. Well, overall, it is indeed a masterpiece above the standard, and it is worthy of its reputation as the king of online literature in recent years. Praise the fool.

Lanni can't hold up the wall The author of Lightning Protection

There are masterpieces like "Zhe Tian Perfect" before, and "The Other Side of Deep Space" is a moderately enjoyable novel. I know what kind of mentality Chen Dong used to complete the conception of more than 6 million words? Geneva, refund your money!

Excellent writing and plot ---------- Abandoned in Chapter 265 1. The characters are flat. After the novelty at the beginning, they feel very labelled. You all know what she will say next, and her personality is classic. 2. Some memes can be used once or twice, but if used too much, they will become indifferent or even disgusting. 3. The protagonist is a pure tool man. After seeing his own powers from the perspective of an ordinary person, he suddenly accepted his new identity and started to play dungeons directly. The changes were not written out at all. Regarding his hometown and the origin of his abilities, which were obviously his biggest problems, he did not investigate at all. He could not see the humanity in it, and it was just a tool to promote the dungeon. 4. Boring. The first two dungeons were a bit exciting, but the abilities were too invincible. It didn't feel like seeing a foreign land again. The most enjoyable part of the whole story is pretending to be cool in front of the Secret Service. You can keep pretending without getting tired.

Sure enough, reading is a very personal thing, and it is very important for being on the airwaves. I devoured Zhai Zhu's The Supreme Humanity at that time, and I was persuaded to quit at the beginning of my two recent new books, Chose Day and The Great Road. In the future, when choosing a book, you will have to read two chapters yourself, and other people's evaluations sometimes don't even have reference value.

The opening setting is excellent. But the next two dungeons, Mercury and Quancheng, were below the standard, and there were no bright spots. I'm sorry for such a good setting. Then there is the problem of writing style. There are too many useless rhetorics, and the expression of emotions is too extravagant and wanton. It is still far from your brother Jiangnan. As a fast reader, it is difficult for me to grasp the key points. If the food is tasteless, it would be a pity to throw it away. Above.

Pseudo-science fiction, perhaps it is more suitable to read as a light novel. When I was studying physics in college, I was the least able to understand things like electromagnetism and relativity. Things that couldn't be seen or touched and couldn't be directly simulated with the senses were very abstract. Time is even more abstract, so based on the explanation given in the article, this is definitely not a qualified science fiction work, and he failed to convince me. For the rest, the writing is acceptable, but I don't think the ending is as good as the author's previous work: Die on Mars. Because the ending of death on Mars comes down to a super-god-level civilization. In the adventure of the protagonist group, all the laws are our original laws, which are easy to understand. The aliens will be responsible for the parts that are not consistent with common sense. The super-god-level civilization can solve everything and justify everything. This book has disrupted everything, both alien and our own, these laws are out of control and can be said to be full of loopholes. If you read it differently, don't worry about these things and just treat it as a romantic pure love?

This is a sweet love story (probably). The plot at the beginning is still very attractive, and the author has a lot of dirty talk and secrets. After Chapter 70, the story loses its appeal to me. It's still possible to read, but it doesn't have that sense of novelty. To be honest, Nikkei is very strong in this subject matter. I highly recommend "My Youthful Love Story, There's Something Wrong with It". It's the same daily life of campus love, but it's very long but not boring.

I like to read historical articles recently... The author [Weird Cousin] wanted to use this book to become a god, so he opened this book immediately after the end of the Song Dynasty. It has been updated very well, and it can be said to be a sincere work. At present, it has more than 100 chapters. It has a Machiavellian style, compact plot, vivid characters, and fast driving speed, so it ranks very well on the list. However, some readers are reporting that in this type of novel, if the plot and characters are not grasped well, it will give people the feeling of playing house. But fortunately, it seems that the author's strength lies here. Those who mind speed should beware. If you like history and machinations, you can give it a try. _________ Dividing line I feel like the writing was broken at the end.

It's a good book, but not quite to my personal taste. The world view is very novel, and the writing is good. The story is pretty good, so I say "it's a good book". The style does not match because the author has a lot of personal items. It is full of the sense of familiarity with games and Japanese comics. I don't play those games or watch anime, and I can't get some of the jokes. Even the author's acceptance speech reminded me strongly of the postscript of a Japanese light novel I read many years ago. In summary, people who are not in the same circle as the author cannot effectively resonate with the same frequency. But as for the specifics, you can try to read the free chapters before drawing a conclusion, because the world view and writing are really good.