Whispering Poems

In this kind of world, there is still a harem. It's awesome. You can slip away. Don't scold me. I didn't give you any points.

Hahaha, it's very fatal for Shad to understand but not speak. It's better to not understand. After all, to understand but not speak, the feeling of wanting to say something but not being able to say it will make your heart itch.

Requirements: card name + rules. The name must be in line with the era of the book, and you can make it up yourself, as far as city names or names of items and customs. The rules must comply with the basic rules of "blackjack", and their effects cannot be too outrageous. If the collected cards are used in the book, acknowledgment will be given in the author's words.

The most disgusting thing is this protagonist The author always emphasizes that the protagonist is cautious But everything the protagonist does is just to show off and seek death. The first volume of Lord of Mysteries is about the villain creating various coincidences for the protagonist through 0-08, and finally appears to kill the protagonist. This book also has an extraordinary item similar to 0-08. The villain wanted to arrange for the protagonist, but the protagonist's golden finger decrypted it. Instead, the protagonist himself took the initiative to go to the villain and let the villain kill him. The protagonist claims that he never gambles, but a passerby pulls the protagonist and asks him to gamble. The protagonist says yes. Then the passerby says, you are so lucky. You help me bet. No matter if you win or not, I will give you 0.5 Yuan. The protagonist says yes, so he takes the initiative to walk in front of the villain and die.

This book is barely okay, but I personally think it has three shortcomings: First, personal heroism is too prominent. There is no problem with outstanding heroism, but the question is, is it too ridiculous? Without the burning divinity or the afterglow of divinity, Gao Hua stood in front of Gao Hua in a low-level state, and he couldn't find it. Moreover, there was a problem with the protagonist's setting. The author wanted to express that the protagonist's character should be a good person, but he wrote the Virgin's Heart forcibly, especially the pictures of the red butterfly twins, which gave me a brain hemorrhage. Second, the protagonist's ability setting does not require that it be awesome, but at least it can correspond to other characters. Not to mention the chosen one, for example, other team members can obtain pure runes by performing a ritual, and the protagonist has a prefix for the life-and-death leap. Oh, how bad are you? There are also a bunch of thaumaturgy auxiliaries that have too many and too many restrictions. Except for a few, there are basically no offensive ones, and their attack capabilities are average. Third, there is the issue of the protagonist's own design. Why are you so involved in it when you have nothing to do? I went to work as a nanny without asking for anything in return. I kept it secret while talking about various things. I was really not afraid of being used as a relic so that I could find out that I had related magic skills.

After seeing the protagonist upgrade to the second ring, I suddenly couldn't stand it anymore. The fate of the world was previously arranged by the prophecy, which was acceptable. The protagonist was set to be a foreigner outside of destiny. There were still choices, but at the first ring, he took the initiative to participate in big events. He was more chosen than the chosen one. He completely fell into the script of the prophecy. Others were on the 2nd, 3rd and 4th rings and were seriously injured at the 9th ring. He carried on the 1st ring. After gaining divinity, none of the important characters in the god cheating game was injured or killed, and there were a bunch of big boss backgrounds in the capital. In the end, low levels were repeated to save the world. You can just do it once in a big roll, or several times. Outlander does the same thing as Destiny's Child, and there's no thrill of leveling up. Anyway, there are all kinds of coincidental assists that help you win, and the plot completely loses any sense of expectation.

It seems that there are too many women. They are either picking up women or looking for women.

The Lord of Mysteries understands Miao Miao, Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao Miao

It's really good. The storyline is not that exciting, but the plot is smooth and the story doesn't feel stiff. Overall, it's pretty good.

There are many advantages, but this time I will only highlight the shortcomings and comment on them in detail: First of all, the plot is too slow. In the first four chapters of the Chosen One, it is very effective to use this step-by-step way of revealing the secrets and then leading to the explosion of the Chosen One incident. But after the fourth chapter, not only the "revealing" becomes more and more confusing, but as the book progresses and the readers have almost figured out the settings, they will feel unusually tortured. There is a kind of "your equipment can already clear the instance" unique to online games. But I still have to do a lot of smelly and long door-opening tasks and ticket tasks to get into the book," I feel disgusting, including the space chapter I am writing now, and there are a lot of pre-requisites to go to the ancestor's island. I only had to do about 7 pre-requisites to get the blond boss on the island in GTA. Shad has more pre-requisites to go to Edwards' ancestor's island than the blond boss, so you are newbee than the blond boss. Secondly, the character portrayal is distorted. The consequence of the wider harem is that the characters are becoming more and more facial-shaped. Before Sylvia, the characters collected basically have detailed characterizations, but after Sylvia, they are basically just vases + paper figures. It is really pointless to collect them for the sake of collecting them. I am not opposed to collecting so many, but it is better not to accept them. For example, there is almost no news about the few collected in the chapter on the earth, and even if they are mentioned, they will only be mentioned in a few sentences. Is this interesting? The character creation of the protagonist Shade is even more biased step by step. I know that the author does not want to write the protagonist as a bitter and hateful image like Geralt, who will be avoided or even stoned when he goes to the countryside, so he specially arranged this "dangerous background" for Shade. "Danger is everywhere, but everyone around him is very kind to him" situation, but this does not mean that Shade must be written as the image of a classic Japanese Asashi male protagonist. The author's setting for Shade is lawful good, but don't you think the more you write, the more he looks like a neutral and kind Virgin? He has to take a hand in everything. When he sees others suffering a little bit, he will run over after smelling it, and then he will do good to others at the expense of himself. It seems that he does not know what it means to respect the fate of others. I can only say that the lawful and kind lawful ones are probably thrown away by you. Moreover, the male protagonist Asasi has long been disliked by people. The various Madonna plots are really a bit disgusting. Where is the "audience off the stage" you set at the beginning, and where is the "Although I am involved in the whirlpool, but I am not involved" plot in the previous chapters? Finally, there is the description of the power system. This is also a common problem in all kinds of novels. At the low level, there are various subdivisions. This is rare, this is very powerful, this is magical, and that is super model. As a result, after rising to the middle and high levels, there is only plain energy fighting. This is especially serious in the setting where the protagonist can cheat, and there is no way to do it. When the enemy is equal, he will cheat and perform miracles, and then the moonlight will shine, bang, bang, bang. After that, everyone will watch the protagonist pretending to be more impressive and dare not show off. Fortunately, the author also knows that writing this way is boring, so he not only limits the number of cheats for the protagonist, but also adds a lot of high-end combat power as a check and balance. It can only be said that the shortcomings in this area are acceptable and not as serious as the ones mentioned before.