Alien Hotel

Don't make the background so big, it doesn't fit the story at all. It is enough for you to exchange the crisis of the whole universe for the crisis of this galaxy. It's too embarrassing to look at the astronomical moon with a little basic knowledge. I will simply say that the Milky Way＜Local Group＜Local Group＜Virgo Supercluster＜Laniakea Supercluster＜South Pole Wall, and then say that the observable stars in the Milky Way are about 100 to 400 billion stars, with a size of 120,000 light-years. Let's just say that there is one civilization for every 1,000 stars. The names of all civilizations are enough for you to write a book, so don't come up and just save the universe, okay? It doesn't deserve it. It doesn't deserve it. It doesn't deserve it. The universe is much bigger than human beings can imagine, so don't save the universe. You can say that the Xenozord is on top of this galaxy, which is more immersive than saving the universe.

Book friends who need it should pick it up by themselves.

It is completely unnecessary for the supporting characters next to the protagonist to be all women, or for the main supporting characters to be all women. What's the point of writing a book like this? The deep sea is a little better, at least there is an old man.

I saw Chapter 646. The only thing that impressed me was the copy of the fairy tale. None of the characters are created, only some stereotypes remain The protagonist has gone too far. He will not die, blood will take over his body, and the team fight will almost end in one glance. Just let the protagonist die on the opposite side. Irene, Fox, Luna, the additions, have few daily routines and are difficult to shape. They basically cannot help in combat. Compared with the abnormal character creation, it can be said that they were blown away by my previous books. The combat power is chaotic, super powers and immortals appear together. The strength that Yun Qingzi can use up with the angels is left at home and not used. When it comes to playing in a group, everyone seems busy, but in fact they are just waiting for the protagonist to die. The sword is also very weak, because the character creation is not very good, so the artificial saint killed by the sword in the new chapter did not touch me. When this artificial saint appeared, I knew she would not join the protagonist group. Luna, the artificial saint, was not well-shaped, and adding an almost identical one was even more perfunctory. Therefore, I felt nothing when this artificial saint died. I knew she would die when she appeared, let alone die so soon. There is nothing more to say. When I think about it, it is almost all a bland plot, and I don't even have the desire to complain. My advice is to give up hope Ling's worldview and continue to expand the world. This kind of protagonist is born to be a savior and is naturally close to being invincible. There must be problems in the world. So how to create the protagonist? How do you make the world you create attractive? The protagonist can't stand, and the world is like a small copy. What's left for the other supporting characters? A doll that loves to play games and scold others, what kind of personality does she have? Almost none A benevolent fox eats a lot, but what is left? Show off your ingenuity once in a while? What is her character? An artificial saint can make a bad girl named Dollin, and then what is left? Apart from these stereotypes, what else do they have left? Is this what you want to portray?

There is the time traveler Gawain, the sword god of Dawn, and the ghost captain of Embers of the Deep. Could this be an apartment manager?

Yu Sheng is probably the least "human" protagonist in Big Eyes' novels. I would like to remind latecomers that it is best not to view the rest of your life by ordinary people's standards. Therefore, many people find it difficult to understand the protagonist's words and deeds. Only by treating Yu Sheng as a highly anthropomorphic and unconscious "pseudo-human" can we understand the protagonist's words and deeds. And there are also many people who dislike the slowness of writing books. This is normal. This is the case when it comes to catching up on updates. They lose interest when they see it. But it is inappropriate to talk nonsense and even affect other people's reading experience. You can save more books and read them later. You don't have to worry about reading books with big eyes.

Too much nonsense, describing the environment and appearance. Too many words wasted. I can't help but want to jump to watch it, it's not interesting. Everything else is okay.

They all agreed But I think there is too much nonsense. 🌿A bunch of nonsense, dispensable, I can't stand it at all.

Writing is the way, and the most important thing is to update it diligently. You can update thousands of words every day, and you can expect it from a great master. In the past, Zuoqiu was blind and wrote "Guoyu"; Sun Tzu was blind and discussed "The Art of War". Your Excellency is eight strokes tall now, and your pen holds the wind and thunder, just like Yuan Ming picking chrysanthemums, and Ziling fishing, don't you hesitate? When this new tunnel is first tested, it is like the spring thunder. If it gathers momentum and does not strike, the observers will scatter in all directions, like dead branches lying on the ground. In the past, Tai Shigong wrote three thousand words, which ended up as a rhymeless rhyme; Kong Zhongniwei compiled three masterpieces and cast the golden sound of the Six Classics. Your Excellency, Huai Jin and Yu, don't you know that the lights are on at three o'clock and the chicken is at five o'clock, which is the time when the scholar has his hair? If you imitate Jiang Lang and exhaust your talents, you will lose the preciousness of Luoyang paper; if you imitate the green lotus and get drunk with ink, you will only leave your poems covered in dust. Looking at the bookstore today, it is like a battle array, and the readers are like running water. I am afraid that I will not be able to update ten thousand words every day. How can I be hesitant again like a horse under the shaft? In the past, the emperor of Qin burned books and still left the slips on the wall; in the Han Dynasty, when he sought talents, he found talented people in the back alleys. Now that you are on the cloud platform, you should imitate the Kunpeng and hit the water. How can you imitate the wren nesting in the reeds? Fu Wei vibrates the calligraphy and ink on the case, driving the writing and thoughts like a spring, making the readers feel like drinking mellow wine and not letting go of the scroll. This is the day when paper in Luoyang is expensive, so you can stand and wait.

I like both the structure and the plot, but the author has put a lot of water into it, and there are a lot of chapters that are just short of words. It can be said to be humorous at the beginning, and to increase the characterization, but when it accounts for more than 50%, you will have long-term mindless bickering and feel aesthetic fatigue, especially the part about Erin, which is too long. I often skipped entire pages or even entire chapters later. Because I probably wrote two or three chapters of bickering in a row.