Above Destiny

How can I put it? The subject matter is very good and interesting, but the author is not a literary young man. He uses some words that are not necessary to write. It is just appropriate. It makes people have no desire to read. It is boring to watch. Many things are expressed in a vague way. Compared with For example, if you write a spiritual system or something, what you write is an online article, not a classic. There is no need to write this or that. A good online article is a book that reads like a classical Chinese article and allows readers to be emotionally involved. It allows readers to understand it at a glance and expresses it clearly.

Brothers, don't keep bragging. Go watch the last apocalypse forecast and compare it step by step with this one, one in the sky and one on the ground. I have read all the novels by this author. Crown of Silence at the beginning. It reads like rust. It's very real. Very clear cruelty. Looking at Tianqi later, there are twists and turns and a sudden rise. There is a part in the middle that is relatively good. He can establish a character in just a few chapters. It also doesn't have the forced passion and forced tear-jerking feeling of many such novels, which can really make people cry. It started to be funny later on and there were too many jokes, and the story became ordinary.

Fengyue's books have always received high ratings, but I can't get enough of them. I would say it's a publishing style, but it's not that rigorous. If you say it's an Internet article, the writing style is extremely procrastinating and long-winded. I don't know why, maybe I'm desensitized to literary youth. I tried again, but still failed.

It makes people feel confused. After reading several chapters, I still don't know what Jiba thing is talking about. I am defeated.

The creation of the protagonist is completely an empty shell, and the author feels like he is writing for a gunman. One second I want revenge, the next second I love you. It feels like the protagonist is completely unworthy of the experiences that have been given to him. The battle is even more speechless to a certain extent, and the writing is completely broken. One second the protagonist is saying to himself that he will be beaten to death by the opponent casually, the next second it is evenly matched, and then the protagonist sighs and is beaten to death by the opponent. After watching the upgrade route, I didn't know what I was looking at. The setting is very good. But in order to highlight the greatness of the protagonist, I just tear it apart at will, whatever makes the protagonist appear powerful. . . I followed Apocalypse Preview twice. The crazy but delicate character creation turned into a mentally unstable person in the new book. The supporting roles are even more flawed.

I'm not saying that the plot is okay, but it's just too messy. What you wrote is like classical Chinese, but I want vernacular.

It's very suitable to read when you are troubled by complicated things.

That's not right. Why does it seem a bit out of line? Don't be too right about the rhythm and chapters. It feels like it's completely random.

The more I read it, the more disgusting it becomes. It's a bunch of nonsense. It was annoying to begin with, but it became even more annoying after reading it.

For those who say this book is bad, you should look for a few from the current Internet literature circle to read it!