Poisonous Weed🌿🌿🌿🌿

First of all, someone in the comment section said that after reading so many Red Mansions, this one is not poisonous. I don't know if it's the author's trumpet or something, but it's like tricking people into killing them... And then in terms of plot... The protagonist acted like a fool after meeting that Sister Lian, not at all like a second generation person. When I lent Sister Lian money, I couldn't help but give her a hug. It's understandable, but when Sister Lian called the protagonist a gangster, the protagonist looked confused? No, don't you know about the great defense between men and women in that era? You are still confused... Later, Sister Lian said that she was rich, but you touched someone else's hand again, and when they scolded you, you still looked confused, and complained in your heart that you caught fish for her, so what? Then the protagonist, Sister Lian, still had this attitude? I can understand if you want to say that the protagonist is a native. Your protagonist is systematic and a time traveler. Even if you can't see what's going on, you can guess something even if you guess, right? Even if your guess is wrong, you shouldn't be complaining like this, right? And you already have a system, but if people are not interested in you, why are you still licking your face and trying to get close to her? There is also the need to pay food later. Others say that 1,000 kilograms of food is worth 700. My father was beaten and endured it. Later, the officers and soldiers asked the protagonist to kneel down and the protagonist also endured it. If you can't defeat it, forget it. The author also specifically said that if you can defeat it, you will kill officials and rebel later. Those who make it a big problem will not stick to trivial matters... What's so informal? You said you can kill them all, what's the difference if you kill them early or later? They were all murders of officials. It is considered a serious crime such as treason and treason. If you are killed later, you will not be wanted? It's just a joke... Finally, I would like to give my opinion to this author. This author has been banned and deleted comments, which is quite acceptable. However, the logic of his writing is not smooth and is not allowed to be criticized... By the way, the author's character is really difficult to evaluate. He doesn't let anyone criticize his poor writing. He added a poisonous grass reading list and came after me to complain that I envy his achievements. It's really funny, not to mention that I haven't written a book in many years, but even if I write, I still envy his poor performance, and I don't know how much data he bought for his poor performance. Tsk tsk tsk... Your grades are really good, but you are afraid that others will say your books are not good? This behavior is just like Meituan's comment on a bad dish and the boss saying that his peers are scheming. It's really funny. In short, this is the only book whose author's behavior made me laugh. If you see this book list, you can read this book if you have time, and then leave some comments in the book review area. It's quite fun to tease this guy haha

It's a short story, so I won't talk about the history. The main thing is that the protagonist is really speechless... While thinking about how to treat the princess well, when he saw the system rewards, he immediately remonstrated with his life. Ah, this... Yes, if you succeed, you can bring the princess to modern times, but are you sure that the princess will be willing to go to an era that does not belong to her own, a strange era without relatives or friends? Okay, even if you are willing, you haven't discussed it with the princess. Don't you know how worried your wife is because your stubborn remonstrance made Lao Zhu angry? In the final analysis, the protagonist is just a refined egoist who pretends to be good to others. In fact, if you write that the protagonist talks things to the princess like Lao Zhu, or reveals a little bit, it is actually acceptable. After all, just like the princess may not be willing to go to modern times, we cannot force the protagonist to stay in an era that does not belong to him. But the protagonist is too rough and has no growth at all. While talking about being good to the princess (daughter-in-law), while looking at the rewards, you directly decide on behalf of the princess to take her back to modern times, and then directly remonstrate... Even after you remonstrated, you didn't explain it, just to make people who care about you fearful. To be fair, this book wouldn't be worth reading if it wasn't for free, but if it's limited and you're in a book shortage, you can still read it as a short article to pass the time. And speaking of it, the author's writing style feels like the brainless cool writing from Tomato or the cool writing style from Qidian more than ten years ago. It's actually a bit... Embarrassing for old bookworms. PS: This book actually requires 500 points for comments, but only has more than 50 comments. Tsk.

Don't know why the rating is so high... In the beginning, I pretended to awaken Su Hui to be a child prodigy, and used the Taoist knowledge I learned as an Internet writer in my previous life to debate scriptures with others, and even won. Not to mention, after all, Internet writers have no monsters. The most important thing is that when the author wrote about the Ancient Tomb Sect, the Ancient Tomb Sect did not have the Nine Yin inheritance, and then the author looked like he was researching the party... Ah, I don't know what the oldest version is like, but the recent version and the newly revised version of The Woman in Yellow Shirt both have the Nine-Yin White Bone Claw or the Destroying Divine Claw, which is described in Chapter 38 of the original book (I remember the last sentence clearly stated it), but when it comes to the author, it doesn't change. The protagonist is handed over to the descendants of Yang Guo. This is really... Then they directly killed a lot of people in Ruyang Prince's Mansion and left Zhao Min behind. At the beginning of the plot, when Zhang Cuishan and the others came back from Binghuo Island, they directly ascended and changed the map? ? ? No, if you don't have enough power to control the plot, don't write like that at the beginning. It stands to reason that you changed the map when the original plot started, and you should have entered the climax stage? ? ? It almost makes people vomit blood if it doesn't go up or down. You also said that there is nothing to write about in the world of Yi Tian Sword and Dragon Slaying? No, why is it gone? There is no need to write about martial arts. You can also write about fighting against the Yuan Dynasty, and it is not necessarily necessary to write about martial arts. The death of King Ruyang does not mean that there will be no one in the Yuan Dynasty to fight against cholera and martial arts. And to be fair, if you just kill King Ruyang, Yuan Ting won't retaliate against you? Yes, you are invincible, and so are your relatives and friends? People directly surrounded Wudang Mountain with an army. You and Zhang Sanfeng must be fine. Where are the other disciples of Wudang? Can you survive the encirclement and suppression of the Yuan army? In short, there are a lot of poisonous points and illogical points. The most important thing is that the author deleted the comments and left some comments for deletion. Tsk.

Let's talk about the poison first. Let's not talk about whether the Hyuga family can use ninjutsu. Then the protagonist pretends to let the caged bird's activating technique leak into the hands of the Mist Ninja, secretly promoting the changes in the Hyuga family. Although the author's notes are okay, there is nothing wrong with the writing. But the logic at the beginning was a little bit poisonous... If the caged bird could be activated so easily, the Hinata family would have been gone long ago, right? It can't be that the caged bird of the Hinata family hasn't been leaked since the Warring States Period, right? Okay, let's just pretend it hasn't been revealed, but directly absorb the Byakugan's pupil power to evolve the Byakugan? ? ? No, you are so awesome at absorbing the power of the white eyes through the caged bird. Didn't you just crack the caged bird casually? Then there is the issue of the timeline. These three battles have not ended yet, and the Seven Ninja Swordsmen have not been crippled by the Eight Gates, but Ranmaru appears? He just showed up, and the protagonist still acted like it was natural? EXM, if you want to say that the protagonist is surprised, I can also think of reasons such as changes in the timeline to make up for you. What's wrong with you acting so naturally? PS1: Originally, although this book was a bit poisonous, it was not yet at the level of poisonous weed. But since the two books of Naruto have added it, this one should also be included... (Before sorting out the poisonous points) PS2: Before sorting out the poison points, I was thinking of PS1, but there are so many poison points in the list, which is enough to be a poisonous weed~

Slightly poisonous. The most important problem is that the author gave Uchiha Mikoto the lv5 super power of Misaki Mikoto, but what is very surprising is that she only gave her super power but no computing power. As a result, Uchiha Mikoto couldn't process the surrounding information? ? ? No, either you don't rely on the magic ban, or you write the word "raw stone" when giving abilities. The superpowers of the Magical Forbidden City require a lot of computing power. Is it true that the average person with superpowers in the Magical Forbidden City has more computing power... You are a fan who wants to take advantage of the magic ban, but the setting is full of loopholes, which is very confusing, okay... And the most important thing is that one of the chapter reviews I gave my opinion on was swallowed. I don't know if the author deleted it or what happened. Anyway, I was very unhappy and added it to the list of poisonous weeds.

... The main reason is that it is a bit loose. The author made Uchiha Inari and Uchiha Tiehuo the same generation as the third generation. The problem is not big, but it is a bit of a drama.

I couldn't stand it after reading two chapters. The author may have wanted to write with more beautiful words, but... He abused the idiom. Why do you use the third person to write that someone has the qualities of a father... EXM, isn't this word used to praise others to their face? Writing in the third person... Emmm, does he have the demeanor of a reader's father? Then he described Kuai Jian's swordsmanship as "red tape" without "red tape"... I don't read much, don't lie to me. Is this how the word "red tape" is used?

Emmm, if you make some comments, the author will delete the post, okay, okay... How can I put it this way, if you lose your mind and only read the free part of this book, you can actually read it, but because the author deleted the post, he added poisonous weeds. Then list the poisonous points. The punctuation in many places is very strange, which leads to a strange word order. For example, transition words such as "but" and "however" follow directly at the end of the previous sentence, and there is no punctuation mark to separate them. For example, "Generally, this is the case, but this time it is different." Then the author has a lot of private settings, and he is not clear about many settings. For example, Uchiha Madara obtained the power of the small universe, but after cultivating his sixth sense, he could no longer practice without the Holy Cloth. Okay, but the sixth sense of the small universe can be used to exercise all kinds of weird superpowers. You can't improve the small universe, and you can't learn various superpowers, such as telekinesis. After all, many seven-sense combat skills are also based on telekinesis, such as crystal walls, stardust spinning skills, and so on. Moreover, the author has no clear understanding of the destructive power of the seventh sense of the small universe. In Saint Seiya, the power of the seventh sense is not strong because the earth is special. Outside the earth, the galactic starburst can really explode stars at will, and the stardust rotation skill can also really produce stardust. Then there is the weird seam setting. For example, the initial level setting, the tiger ghost destroys the dragon god madly... Seems to be this setting? In short, both "MUGEN" and "One Punch Man" are silent...

Daiyu's character is ruined. Because there is no room, the protagonist is directly asked to live in a room with him, and he even actively invites... Ah this...

There are a lot of logic errors First, the author's description of the fate of being born as a slave is... Very entertaining. Even if a sideline concubine is not welcomed, it cannot be counted as a slave. Second, in the simulation, Jia's mother asked the protagonist to serve as a long-term follower to the big-faced treasure... No, no matter how downcast they are, they are still members of the Jia family. How can there be any reason for the brother to be a long-term follower? Third, Mrs. Wang attacked and killed Jia Lian for her title? In fact, it is said that if Mrs. Wang arranges the manpower herself, there will be no problem. After all, although Mrs. Wang has a brain, all she can think about is house fighting, and there is no problem if she does not know about the patriarchal inheritance. But your protagonist is like this too, and he tells Jia Lian that his title will fall into Jia Baoyu's hands after his death? Are you kidding? Jia She is not dead yet. Even if he dies, Jia Cong will inherit. Even if Jia Cong dies, he will inherit by one adopted person until the precious jade day lilies are cold. Well, you said that the protagonist is a time traveler and he doesn't know. Mrs. Wang even got a military crossbow in order to intercept Jia Lian. She must have got Wang Ziteng's consent. Otherwise, she, a woman, can get the crossbows from the army to kill the heir of Rongguo Mansion? After reading twenty or thirty chapters, there are so many poisonous points that I can't stand it anymore.

The world view merges with Devil High School. Although the true ancestor template in Blood Devouring Attack is nothing in the world view of Devil High School, you should still take a look at it. But... Later, Megumi Kato was a five-star assassin, and then he defeated Naobu and was treated like this or that... ? ? ? EXM, my saint, Hui Ren, has collapsed! Even if you say that this is the difference in life caused by the different worlds, but the sage's benefit to people is broken, you might as well find someone else! ! ! All in all, I can't stand it!

There was something wrong with the author's setting at the beginning. A life span of 20 years is exchanged for 300 hours of coins, and then these 300 coins can be used to buy a house and furniture. As a result, the annual management fee is 100... Although it was changed later, it was changed to 3000 and 10. But before the change, the author won a lot of praise and did not admit that there was a problem with his setting. Moreover, this author couldn't listen to any objections at all, so he directly deleted the post, accused the commenter, blocked a dragon, and slipped away...

The authors Jia Zhu and Yuan Chun got the sizes wrong, yet they came to write about Red Mansions... I'm afraid you're not the kind of person who has a little bit of information on the Internet, but you haven't read the original work at all, right?

To summarize a little bit. The mistress spends 380,000 yuan as a gift to get engaged to a woman. The woman and the yellow-haired scum mock the mistress in person and refuse to withdraw the gift. The bitter master was red-blooded. He took a kitchen knife and chopped off Huangmao Zizhi and the male protagonist who was Huangmao Zhasi's brother in anger. Finally, the exciting part is here, the scumbag and the male protagonist time travel? ? ? EXM? This doesn't look right no matter how you look at it, right? Anyway, I feel that the first chapter of this book has incorrect views. It doesn't matter if you ᵗᵐ is the master of suffering and has traveled through time. In short, the three views were inconsistent, and I couldn't stand it anymore, so I slipped away. Another: I also subscribed to a chapter in order to comment, Σ_(꒪ཀ꒪‖∠)vomit Another question: To be honest, should this book be divided into levels, 16+ or 18+, so that it can be read by people who have already formed their three views? Otherwise, does it feel that it affects the three views a little (one's own opinion, stacked armor)

When I saw Gun Yong coming in, I thought that although the plot was cliche, it was a cool novel. If it is cliche, it should be cliche. If the plot is reasonable, it doesn't mean that I can't watch it. But! Yes, but! I saw the spiritual realm copy of the college entrance examination and the Saiyan transformation, and I was really stunned. Originally, although this copy was a bit cliched and a little bit poisonous, it was not unreadable. Until I saw that the author directly created the Saiyan bloodline of Son Goku with a stroke of his pen, and then changed the gorilla transformation into a transformation similar to a Super Saiyan - except for the combat power, it is exactly the same as a Super Saiyan. Ah this... Awkward, quite awkward. You said that you should just publish a setting collection and write a super game. After all, once your transformation comes out, the excitement of future super games will definitely be gone. Otherwise, if you want to overwhelm the competition, just write Gorilla. It can be said that it is to gain the fans' faith for the sake of future super games. If you do this, well, in order to suppress the combat effectiveness, it is okay to directly destroy the reasonableness of the plot. I don't know if this part has been changed or not. Anyway, I couldn't stand it before it was changed.

Poison to death at the beginning The protagonist got a plug-in when he was 6 years old. It probably gave him a chance to drop skills, attributes, and talents when he defeated others. Then, at the age of 6, he defeated Naruto and obtained Asura Chakra. Everyone knows about Asura Chakra. It contains the will of Asura, and there is a high probability that it will be affected into a stupid thing. Then the protagonist did not introduce whether the plug-in can eliminate the influence of Asura, did not understand the operation of the plug-in, and understood that the Asura chakra may bring hidden dangers... Directly fused with Asura Chakra! ! ! And before the integration, the pros and cons were analyzed there... No, normally, shouldn't the average person understand the plug-in first and then think about whether to integrate it and take a gamble? Protagonist, you didn't understand anything, so you just took the bet, and then you seemed to have considered a lot of things, which is really shocking.