Fingertip Red Mansion
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Ordinary people from later generations travel through the world of Red Mansions. Jia Mao holds the "Fingertip Red Mansion" system in his hand, which can reverse his luck and change his destiny, deduce the secrets of heaven, defeat the Tatars, kill the Japanese slaves, and achieve the goal of dividing the frontier from being born low. Many years later, Jia Mao sighed with emotion: "Without me, this great power has long been in ruins. I really don't know where Longting will go. How many people in the world will be called emperors and how many will be called kings."
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Official(8)Scraped 1d ago
Is it better to write more realistically? Pay more attention to some bloggers who study ancient military warfare. If you want to join the army by practicing martial arts, you must first ride, and then shoot. Then there is the combination of riding and shooting. Then there are various weapons, all of which are practiced from a young age. There is no such thing as training in the winter and three days in the summer. No matter how hot or cold it is, it never stops. Moreover, there must be professional masters to teach equestrian, archery, and weapons. Or maybe your elders have retired from the military to teach you. It's not like you can lift a stone lock and swing a knife around by yourself to gain martial arts skills. Moreover, practicing martial arts costs a lot of money. Horses in ancient times were no cheaper than today's carts. In the Ming Dynasty, a Mongolian horse cost 30 taels of silver in the mainland, and a good horse cost a hundred taels of silver. Bows were not as cheap as horses. You have to study day and night to pass the exams, and you have to have a teacher to teach you. The same goes for martial arts.
ZThis is a good beginning, and the book will be finished when I write about Jia Lian! Do you have any misunderstandings about a top aristocratic family at that time? Before Jia Lian got married, it was almost as if he didn't say that the Jia family was considered the top aristocracy in the capital. When Yu Yin was in his prime, the number of hundreds of people attending the wedding ceremony was very small! ! And do you know the level of protection given to the heirs of top nobles when traveling in ancient times? Don't have too many veterans in your family! Looking for a new recruit for the protagonist? What are you seeing written about?
It looks okay. Li, a fellow Red Mansion fan, is pretty good.
The writing is very casual, I write whatever comes to my mind!
Is there a Shennong?
Is there a Shennong? How is the writing?
Not to mention that modern people value faces, but ancient times valued faces even more.
Your chapter names are too complicated
After reading the first forty chapters, they were written with great care. The ten-fold increment setting for the deduction is too restrictive.
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Official(8)Scraped 1d ago
Is it better to write more realistically? Pay more attention to some bloggers who study ancient military warfare. If you want to join the army by practicing martial arts, you must first ride, and then shoot. Then there is the combination of riding and shooting. Then there are various weapons, all of which are practiced from a young age. There is no such thing as training in the winter and three days in the summer. No matter how hot or cold it is, it never stops. Moreover, there must be professional masters to teach equestrian, archery, and weapons. Or maybe your elders have retired from the military to teach you. It's not like you can lift a stone lock and swing a knife around by yourself to gain martial arts skills. Moreover, practicing martial arts costs a lot of money. Horses in ancient times were no cheaper than today's carts. In the Ming Dynasty, a Mongolian horse cost 30 taels of silver in the mainland, and a good horse cost a hundred taels of silver. Bows were not as cheap as horses. You have to study day and night to pass the exams, and you have to have a teacher to teach you. The same goes for martial arts.
ZThis is a good beginning, and the book will be finished when I write about Jia Lian! Do you have any misunderstandings about a top aristocratic family at that time? Before Jia Lian got married, it was almost as if he didn't say that the Jia family was considered the top aristocracy in the capital. When Yu Yin was in his prime, the number of hundreds of people attending the wedding ceremony was very small! ! And do you know the level of protection given to the heirs of top nobles when traveling in ancient times? Don't have too many veterans in your family! Looking for a new recruit for the protagonist? What are you seeing written about?
It looks okay. Li, a fellow Red Mansion fan, is pretty good.
The writing is very casual, I write whatever comes to my mind!
Is there a Shennong?
Is there a Shennong? How is the writing?
Not to mention that modern people value faces, but ancient times valued faces even more.
Your chapter names are too complicated
After reading the first forty chapters, they were written with great care. The ten-fold increment setting for the deduction is too restrictive.
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The person who wrote The Red Mansion was from the same generation as Jia Lian. He traveled back in time before Jia Lian and Wang Xifeng got married. He should be a military general in the future. It feels good. I recommend it.
There are a lot of logic errors First, the author's description of the fate of being born as a slave is... Very entertaining. Even if a sideline concubine is not welcomed, it cannot be counted as a slave. Second, in the simulation, Jia's mother asked the protagonist to serve as a long-term follower to the big-faced treasure... No, no matter how downcast they are, they are still members of the Jia family. How can there be any reason for the brother to be a long-term follower? Third, Mrs. Wang attacked and killed Jia Lian for her title? In fact, it is said that if Mrs. Wang arranges the manpower herself, there will be no problem. After all, although Mrs. Wang has a brain, all she can think about is house fighting, and there is no problem if she does not know about the patriarchal inheritance. But your protagonist is like this too, and he tells Jia Lian that his title will fall into Jia Baoyu's hands after his death? Are you kidding? Jia She is not dead yet. Even if he dies, Jia Cong will inherit. Even if Jia Cong dies, he will inherit by one adopted person until the precious jade day lilies are cold. Well, you said that the protagonist is a time traveler and he doesn't know. Mrs. Wang even got a military crossbow in order to intercept Jia Lian. She must have got Wang Ziteng's consent. Otherwise, she, a woman, can get the crossbows from the army to kill the heir of Rongguo Mansion? After reading twenty or thirty chapters, there are so many poisonous points that I can't stand it anymore.
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