Naruto: from the Time He Captured the Zong Family, He Became the Mastermind Behind the Scenes

The protagonist Hinata's combat power has soared abnormally, from jounin to super shadow level at once, and there is no logic, just a rough description. But the plot is very innovative, Tsunade becomes the queen.

The version Orochimaru used when Konoha collapsed was the Tobirama version. It wasn't until Shippuden that a more accurate version was developed. Orochimaru experimented with the Earth Reincarnation when Naruto was just starting school. As a result, during the Third World War when Naruto was still a sperm, Orochimaru had already mastered the Earth Reincarnation and had a perfect direction. Are you deliberately changing it or have you never watched Naruto?

In the past, it was quite normal to write fanfics about Naruto and Douluo. It was a normal adventure, a normal passion, and a normal process. Later, I don't know who led me astray. As long as I wanted to write a fanfic about Naruto, Douluo, etc., First of all, you must be able to write about political struggles.

How should I put it? The protagonist of this book has almost become a background. Except for occasionally coming out to fight the boss, he is invisible at other times. The reader does not know his behind-the-scenes plan and is not sure of the foreshadowing prepared by the protagonist. Through the plot, he can guess some foreshadowing, but it seems a bit too childish. It can be said to be playing with the ninja world. The fifth generation Hokage is inappropriate, or the fifth generation behind the scenes is inappropriate. However, Konoha is still suppressed by the moralists. It is better to come out, but you come out. Now, let's give a general description of the protagonist's various research and development skills process. I can understand the development of various skills. The protagonist's main skills at this stage are: flying thunder god and Byakugan's space ability, physical skills (steel fist plus soft fist), Byakugan's link ability (creating the spiritual world, capable of transmitting chakra, controlling people, and resisting illusions), seeking jade (synthesized by collecting chakra by oneself), reincarnation eye, dirty soil reincarnation and clone split resurrection technique, spiritualization technique. Of course, there is no specific description of how to obtain and study these. There is only a small amount of text describing the acquisition and description of several skills. Everyone can understand how to obtain them, Orochimaru and the right to be the Hokage's assistant. Then there is the suspicion that he got a clone and became a female account (the beautiful girl of the Akatsuki organization). What kind of logic is this?

Washing the Third Generation should have the rating that washing the Third Generation should have

A few kind words are just enough to protect you

Seeing the end of the free part, it is generally a very good book, but the opening theme is not very clear. I felt that at first I wanted to write a lone wolf and a black-hearted protagonist, who hides behind his back to conduct human experiments, uses others to activate the reincarnation eye experiment, and kills the Hyuga clan members at will. Wanton cooperated with Orochimaru to obtain the reincarnation of the dirty land to strengthen himself, and encouraged the rebellious people in the branch family to leave Konoha. Later, I guess I felt that such a main line was difficult to write. I deviated from the original plot, changed my thinking, and started to support the fourth generation to come to power and help win over Uchiha (this is of course taken for granted. For example, the fourth generation would not easily choose Uchiha as the shadow guardian. The original work did not have it. Although the original work came to power late, it is still a matter of whether to choose it or not. It depends on the fourth generation himself), for example, Tsunade's support, no one can guarantee that Tsunade's blood fear certificate will be cured, the third generation will not make such an attempt, Orochimaru's departure is due to limited research and disappointment in the darkness of Konoha, it is still possible to support the fourth generation, but research is still an unavoidable problem. Danzo's coup was too haphazard, and the Third Generation delegated power too suddenly. If the Third Generation really wanted to delegate power, the original book would not have chosen Namikaze (Namikaze died after beating Kyuubi, and felt too weak except for the Flying Thunder God). Especially the alliance between Namikaze and Uchiha was a betrayal of the Third Generation, and the Third Generation could not support it.

"The Byakugan is the same as the Sharingan. It can also evolve. The condition is to fuse the Byakugan of the Otsutsuki clan on the moon, but... We can't do it." Orochimaru was satisfied with getting another interesting secret.

The author will update Huo Yuhao quickly.

I hate novels written from a political perspective