Heavens: Pindao Specializes in Treating All Kinds of Dissatisfaction

We are currently in the second world: the first world is leaning against the sky, and the second world is full of rain and clouds. The plot of Yitian World progresses a little faster, and the world of Rain and Clouds after it is released is very well written.

Don't know why the rating is so high... In the beginning, I pretended to awaken Su Hui to be a child prodigy, and used the Taoist knowledge I learned as an Internet writer in my previous life to debate scriptures with others, and even won. Not to mention, after all, Internet writers have no monsters. The most important thing is that when the author wrote about the Ancient Tomb Sect, the Ancient Tomb Sect did not have the Nine Yin inheritance, and then the author looked like he was researching the party... Ah, I don't know what the oldest version is like, but the recent version and the newly revised version of The Woman in Yellow Shirt both have the Nine-Yin White Bone Claw or the Destroying Divine Claw, which is described in Chapter 38 of the original book (I remember the last sentence clearly stated it), but when it comes to the author, it doesn't change. The protagonist is handed over to the descendants of Yang Guo. This is really... Then they directly killed a lot of people in Ruyang Prince's Mansion and left Zhao Min behind. At the beginning of the plot, when Zhang Cuishan and the others came back from Binghuo Island, they directly ascended and changed the map? ? ? No, if you don't have enough power to control the plot, don't write like that at the beginning. It stands to reason that you changed the map when the original plot started, and you should have entered the climax stage? ? ? It almost makes people vomit blood if it doesn't go up or down. You also said that there is nothing to write about in the world of Yi Tian Sword and Dragon Slaying? No, why is it gone? There is no need to write about martial arts. You can also write about fighting against the Yuan Dynasty, and it is not necessarily necessary to write about martial arts. The death of King Ruyang does not mean that there will be no one in the Yuan Dynasty to fight against cholera and martial arts. And to be fair, if you just kill King Ruyang, Yuan Ting won't retaliate against you? Yes, you are invincible, and so are your relatives and friends? People directly surrounded Wudang Mountain with an army. You and Zhang Sanfeng must be fine. Where are the other disciples of Wudang? Can you survive the encirclement and suppression of the Yuan army? In short, there are a lot of poisonous points and illogical points. The most important thing is that the author deleted the comments and left some comments for deletion. Tsk.