Personal Complaints Collection

个人吐槽集

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A list of self-selected books about picking up shells on the beach, combined with comments or comments A6 - I like it purely personally B Good - the plot/characters/expressions present a sense of relaxation/vitality/personal style C Complete - a basic story is clearly told

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Behind the Curtain22

Qingyulu

603K8.731

Traveling through the steampunk world, Gallo just wants to use the golden finger system to live a stable life as a "humanoid search engine". While others were sweating in the factory, he sat in a cafe and made huge sums of money every day relying on "knowledge navigation". When the geniuses at the Imperial University of Technology were struggling with their papers, he read the classics in a few minutes and pointed out the core point. The professors were amazed by him and regarded him as a distinguished guest. But Gallo knew in his heart that what he learned from Golden Finger was not just knowledge that could change his destiny. And those... Horrifying memories of warp knowledge.

Curator5

C The solipsistic approach cloaked in Western fantasy skin has a mysterious resurgence

The Holy Master, He is Too Steady23

August Flying Eagle

1.7M8.38

[Xu Yongsheng traveled to a martial arts world. Xu Yongsheng: "It's hard to predict good or bad fortunes. Safety comes first. You need to be more prudent in your actions." [The mysterious book I carry with me, the first page I open is the picture of Zhang Di. "Tingting will bring you the princess's tryst location." "Diting will bring you the whereabouts of Suzaku's left eye." "Di Ting has brought you the secret book of Eighty-nine Mysterious Techniques." "Listen carefully..." [The Great Qian Dynasty flourished but then declined, the world was in chaos, and the people were hanging upside down. He took his disciples to travel around the "countries" in the world, bringing peace to the world. Xu Erlang Xu Yongsheng: "Scholars talk about truth. If you don't understand the truth, I also know a little bit about fists and kicks." Disciples: "Now that the most holy master has returned to the world, the sky will not give birth to Xu Zi, and eternity will be like a long night!"

Curator4

C

Infinite Demon God: How to Download Without Data?24

Latte 70% Sugar

317K8.412

(There is already a completed work of more than two million words. If you are interested, please click on the homepage) This is an ordinary world on the surface, no different from the previous life. It wasn't until Hu Long, who had traveled through time, discovered the hidden dangers in his body that he gradually discovered the horror of this world. The secret martial arts body communicates with the gods, and the strange spirits hide in the darkness. The old magic restarts Yin and Yang, and the family has been in power for thousands of years. ... The universe is vast and there are countless civilizations. When the starry sky becomes a battlefield, the world becomes a cage. Hu Long's body ignited with a golden glow like a corona, tearing apart the curtain barrier in front of him. What appears in front of you is a giant tree that runs through the heavens, its branches spreading to the infinite universe, and every leaf has the cycle of birth and death of the world. He stretched out his hand and pressed it. Silver writing appeared in front of my eyes. [Target: World Tree. Spiritual Origin] [Size: 99999Y (Status: Downloadable)] [Explanation: The beginning of all dharma, the root of all realms.

Curator1

C Secret martial arts routines

Starting from the Cause and Result, One Can Become a Martial Saint25

Beef Brisket Bun

294K0

Chen Xiao traveled through time and became a villain. You can't control your life, it's disgusting. But he has fire in his heart and doesn't want to become such a nasty person! But in these troubled times, demons appear in the world, the imperial court is decaying, cults are everywhere, and evil gangs are disturbing the undercurrents of the world. Ordinary people can only live in an ignoble existence, so there is no chance of turning around. The situation is like a dead end. Fortunately, there is a great cause and effect diagram in Chen Xiao's consciousness. By resolving cause and effect, you can gain great luck, change your destiny, and deduce martial arts! Changed from [Destiny of Unfortunate Death] to [Prosperity and Fortune] Changed from [Poison to the Heart] to [Hongwu Body] From [Eternal Life Fist] to [Kunjin Juxu Fist] Deduced from the great path of [Calm Mind Technique] to [The True Interpretation of Nine Transformations of Nirvana] A few years later, Chen Xiao was on the top of the mountain. A diagram of cause and effect spread out from the sky, and a line of large ink characters slowly emerged. [To unify the cause of heaven and earth, achieve the supreme Tao and fruit, prove the great way of martial arts, and finally obtain the name of Martial Saint! Chen Xiao occasionally fell into deep thought. "Throughout this journey, I really, really, really want to be a good person..." [This book has been reviewed and submitted, and it has a complete outline. Feel free to collect it and read it with confidence!

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C

You Don't Want the Secret to Be Known to Everyone, Right?26

One Hundred Thousand Vegetable Groups

985K9.027

[Light intrigue + plot flow + many beauties + intelligence tips + the mastermind behind the scenes] In the first month of Jingping, something big happened in the world. General Zhao of the Great Zhou Dynasty wore a yellow robe, seized power in a coup, ascended the throne and proclaimed himself emperor, changed the country's name to "Song", and vowed to create a new atmosphere. The only trouble is that the former little emperor's whereabouts are still unknown. Li Mingyi traveled through time and became the former emperor who was hiding among the people and was captured by the world. I also found that this world is a bit familiar, and it resembles an ancient game I have completed. So he carried countless pieces of information, held his head high and walked towards the Great Song Hall. "I didn't come to this world to be a fugitive." ... Princess Zhaoqing of the new dynasty has had mixed joys recently. The retainer she recruited named Li Mingyi was so capable that she could win over all civil servants, military generals, nobles, great monks, and female national preceptors just by talking in secret. He also often recommended capable ministers to high positions and spared no effort to combat the remnants of the previous dynasty. But why do you always feel that this group of people only follows his lead and are attacking more and more remnants of the previous dynasty? Is my father's heart disease getting worse? She decided to talk to him.

Curator3

C The plot in the first 30 chapters or so will be quickly skipped, and the following plot will focus on the important turning points. The biggest drawback of this kind of book is the endless palace battles, scheming, and foot-binding...

Final Form!27

Final Form!

Xuanhuan

Go To Bed Early And Get Up Early

696K02

Chen Chong traveled back in time to the Gaowu era and became a senior high school student. As he was about to graduate, he was involved in an elaborate conspiracy. In a desperate situation, mysterious numbers suddenly appeared in front of his eyes. 1%, 2%...99%, 100%. [First form, open. The cold voice echoed in the starry sky of consciousness, and Chen Chong's path to becoming a strong man began. Traditional martial arts, modern martial arts, genetic enhancement, physical limit breaking... Giant corporations, gangs, central city and wasteland, plutocrats and the Free Army. The new and the old collide fiercely, and the tide of the times is rolling forward. And in the corner where no one is paying attention-- Alien beasts are quietly dormant, and there are dark eyes in the cracks of the ruins, silently watching everything in the world. However whatever it is. No matter who it is. None of them could stop Chen Chong from advancing. Second form, third form, fourth form... Unable to stop Chen Chong, Chen Chong continues to grow stronger. His attitude towards the world is also quietly changing. Finally, when Chen Chong stood on the top of the tallest building in Central City, everything in the world was at his feet. Facing the figures around him whose auras shook the world, behind Chen Chong there were also terrifying shadows slowly steaming, as if they were about to swallow the whole world. "Next, is..." "Final form!"

Curator

C The writing is okay, but it seems less like an online novel and more like an old story from before. It has a classic three-act format and is very repetitive. It makes people have no motivation to follow up.

Traveling Simultaneously: Across the Heavens28

Listen To The Rain With A Knife

836K7.834

The same flow, the dragon clan, the sun and the moon make the same mistake, under one person, in the snow, Luo Xiaohei, the fox demon matchmaker, Zhu Xian, etc...

Curator

C It's okay. It mainly focuses on a fast, refreshing and invincible flow. It's quite contrived and deliberate, but originally I just wanted to find a routine article to read.

Practice Martial Arts, and the Tao Will Be Forever Solid!29

Mars Hotpot

1.5M7.916

[PS: The average daily update is 20,000+, focusing on a large quantity to satisfy the needs] Coming to a strange world by chance, he almost became a refugee who was forced to rebel... Qin Fang expressed his regrets. Fortunately, I carry a golden finger with me - if you practice hard, you will definitely gain something! And the fruit of Tao is eternal! This is a world where individuals cannibalize people, the court, sects, demons... In this troubled world, human life is like a piece of grass. I want to reach the highest level step by step!

Curator

C It's not the kind that's cool, but it's the kind that tells characters and stories, a slightly traditional way of writing. It's just that the rhythm is wrong. The first 40 or so pictures are all about the protagonist suffering. The rest of the film is basically flooded with water, and the rhythm is pitifully chaotic.

I Build a Shelter in the Eternal Night30

Medieval Rabbit

1.2M9.1212

Chen Fan traveled to a strange and fantasy world. In this world, after night fell, countless strange things wreaked havoc on the world. He became an architect by traveling through the Lord of Night panel that came with him, and built his own camp in the wasteland bit by bit. Strange fires, city walls, and sacrificial towers were built one after another out of thin air, and his reputation gradually spread throughout Jiangbei. Until-- When the "ultimate natural disaster" comes, countless crazy monsters harm the world, and people are in dire straits. A Great Wall stretching across the continent rose out of thin air! ... "This is the Evernight Continent." "My territory."

Curator8

A It's very comfortable to watch, relaxed and refreshing, the mood is very naive, but the design is not so naive, it's like a casual and relaxing game.

Extreme World, Draw Cards to Become a Saint31

Li Jianxia

530K8.017

At the end of the dynasty, the world was in chaos. Force is power, and the names of immortals and Buddhas are captured with fists and swords. The common people are like grass and grass, struggling in religion, natural disasters and conquests. Lu Chen traveled through time with a card-drawing mobile game. Xuan Gong Secret Code? Card Pool: "Dragon Tiger Prison Suppressing Skill", "Xuan Wu Zhen Gang"?, "Tian Mo Sword Manual" [Qi Men Weapon Box] Card pool: Zimu Soul Leaving Dart?, Dragon Bird Great Ring Knife?, Wanmiao Soul Capturing Umbrella [Exotic Gu Mysterious Embryo] Card Pool: Ten Thousand Transformation Gu, Blood Marrow Demon Tendon, Nirvana Insect Nest The Record of Strangers? Card pool: Poison Doctor·Mrs. Yu, Counting the Common People·Sima Hui, Wine and Meat Toutuo·Bujie In the world of rivers and lakes, there is no poetry, wine and romance, only flies and dogs. The top of the Forbidden City. Lu Chen looked down at the so-called heroes of the right path swarming under his feet like a swarm of ants. "My road needs to be paved with corpses. If you don't want to be one of them, come and try to see if you can make me stop."

Curator

C There is a saying about writing a book review well: 3 million words of writing power. It's not very good-looking, but it doesn't have the exaggerated flavor of a short drama.

Rebirth 1878: America's Most Ruthless Gangster32

Covered With Flowers

2.7M9.062

Lawson was reborn in 1878 and awakened the dead soldier system. In this Wild West where heroes and villains dance together, the Chinese are not even qualified to sit at the card table. But Lawson's arrival will personally overturn this table! Chinese dead man, British dead man, African dead man During the day, he is a gentle and harmless resident. At night, he was the leader of robbers who made all white people in the West fearful. The Irish dead soldier Kong committed a heinous crime, and then used his identity as a British dead soldier to launder his wealth. Use dead Chinese soldiers to establish an image of justice. When the order of civilization cannot bring justice, then let the laws of the wilderness reshuffle the cards! Don't agree with the creation of a Chinese state? Then I have no choice but to create a new federation!

Curator10

A The best gesture of the Internet article - Xiaobai's name, Xiaobai's value pursuit, Xiaobai's story routine, Xiaobai's emotional satisfaction; but it has quite detailed and rich historical data as a foreshadowing, and the writing style is smooth enough to complete the narrative. But the biggest dilemma of this kind of writing often comes from himself - as the length increases and the plots are repeated, the author will fall into a self-contradictory circle, and he can no longer balance the shallowness of the plot and the weight of history. It's like standing on the shoulders of a giant and looking tall, but when the giant appears in full view, he is made to look particularly small.

Cultivating Immortality in Two Realms33

Wen Chao Gong

678K9.064

The prosperity and misfortune of the years, the circulation of the spiritual atmosphere, the transformation of yin and yang - these are all achievements at the end of the year... This is the story of a young man who travels across two realms to cultivate immortality and explores how to become a [worth-year-old]...

Curator10

C Standard formulaic writing

The Arrival of the Infinite Gods34

Ninety-four Or Leaping Into The Abyss

1.1M8.18

Many years later, when Siming looked at the densely packed evolved people, contract people, star people, and Tianguan people in front of him. He will definitely think of the day when he was transferred from the Donghai team to the Tenjin team because he couldn't stand the footbath in 2007. --Yuanzu Infinite Flow, the first generation. From the apex of the world of reincarnation to the apex of the multiverse.

Curator3

C There is too much flavor of textual criticism. The author's ability to write stories is average, and it will unconsciously turn into a thesis style, considering and demonstrating the infinite flow setting.

Speed ​​through the Heavens and Kill the Immortals in the World of Mortals35

Meishuijin

560K8.43

Mu Mobai, you were born to be a devil. Killing and arson are as simple to you as eating and drinking. People like you should be cut into pieces without a burial place! Absurd, Mu's name says it all. He knows that his nature is pure and white, but he maintains the darkness of chaos. He is a pure person who is free from vulgar taste! Your hands are full of blood and your crimes are heinous, but you are worthy of being pure! Mu is an assassin, so shouldn't his hands be full of blood. In addition, he can do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. No matter what, wealth, glory, beauty and power are all just passing away! Mu Mobai, you still say that you are not a devil! Across all the heavens and worlds, I use my killing power to establish the way of humanity and open up the path to disaster. I have gone through thousands of twists and turns, tempered over and over again, and I am determined not to change, that's all! ... In the world of Condor Shooting, since we are ordinary people, we should do the things of ordinary people, join the world to benefit ourselves, and cultivate an ordinary heart. Life is not easy for people. If you can blame others, don't blame yourself! In the world of Tianlong, if there are great grievances, there will always be residual grievances. How can we do good by repaying grievances with virtue? Cultivate a normal heart that is not afraid of life and death and looks down on worldly affairs. Everything is empty and everything is allowed. Who can't die! Lu Xiaofeng's legend is that when he was young, he held up a fire toward the Yuan Dynasty, but still raised his eyes to look up. When he was old, he turned sideways and turned into a shadow, as if he was in the immortal class. He found peace in the noisy world. Silence is true silence. Seeing dust is true dustlessness. A clear mind is true transcendence. In this way, living in seclusion in the mountains is no different from living in the world. You can enter the Tao, you can live in the real world, and you can experience the Tao and the truth. Therefore, this world will be the best, and you will be the best in the world in the past. Even when you see me, you have to lower your eyebrows! For eternity, a god came from the Corpse Mountain and the Sea of ​​Blood, sweeping across the heavens!

Curator2

C The writing style of middle school students. I have written several books. It is still the writing style of middle school students. This type of author is also quite powerful.

Prime Minister in White37

Top Of The World

106K0

"Hey, have you heard that the civil and military champion this time is the same person!" "I heard that the civil and military champion is three points more beautiful than the women!" "And he is only 15 years old, and he is the nephew of Tong Yun, the richest man in the country! The emperor made him the Minister of War on the spot. , Holy grace is profound!" Hearing these rumors, the man in green held the tea cup with his fair and strong hands, squinting his slender red phoenix eyes, looking at the tea cup with deep and distant eyes: Mo Junyu, what kind of person is this man who became famous in the imperial capital overnight? He is said to be Tong Yun's nephew, but there is no trace of his previous experience! Thinking of this, his eyebrows frowned slightly. Tonight, my father will host a banquet in honor of the top scholar and all the candidates. Let's try again then. He and she ended up with a mysterious ending...

Curator2

0 chapter collection

Starting from the World of Martial Arts and Breaking Through the Abyss38

Wu Jiechao

1.5M8.820

The original title of the book is "Falling into the Abyss: Only I Have an Equipment Slot" The earth was captured by the abyss. Based on various residential areas, it fell into the abyss and struggled to survive. While the survivors had to face the harsh environment of the abyss, they also had to go to other worlds to find items of will to recharge the will of the earth. Among all the survivors, only Lin Hao has his own equipment slot, which can be used to enchant additional equipment attributes. When the eighty-two kilograms of Qinglong Yanyue Sword was poured into the spear in his right hand, and the coat on his body was enchanted with hundreds of kilograms of full-body armor, Lin Hao, who ignored the weight of the enchantment, looked at the team blocking the evacuation point in front, with a hunting smile on his face, "Falled into a trap, little mouse." (It has accumulated 4 million words and 10,000 orders. It is a masterpiece with over 10 million words. Your character is guaranteed, so please feel free to read.)

Curator12

C A game similar to search, fight, and retreat. It's very dry and can only be said to have completed the narrative.

Living in America: My Uncle Don Quixote39

Like To Eat Sundaes

680K029

(The first order exceeded 10,000, and the average order was 30,000. The first order in the history of Qidian. Com was the highest in the history) My name is Levi. After my parents passed away and I owed a large debt, I was adopted by a distant uncle in the United States and went to New York to live with him. Wait, what the hell is this medieval adventure system? Did it identify my uncle as a mad knight? Is the wealthy area of ​​the Upper East Side the courtyard of the aristocracy? There seemed to be a succubus crypt ahead, so I decided to explore it... On the first day I came to New York, I obeyed the law. On the second day after arriving in New York, I was cautious about testing. On the third day after arriving in New York, I decided that I wanted to protect the world. On the fourth day after arriving in New York, I started to get tired of it. The world was so fucked up. On the fifth day after arriving in New York, I am the only superman in this world, and I don't eat beef. ------------------ [Only My Way] [Invincible] [Dislocation System] [Urban Literature] A million-word urban novel with a high order of 7,000 words has been completed. Your character is guaranteed, so you can read it with confidence.

Curator18

B The sense of dislocation and daily life are well written, but there is a slight tendency towards Long Aotian, and this kind of subject matter does not seem to be particularly outstanding yet, so I will leave it conservatively.

Only My Law: Tokyo Fantasy Daily40

Black Gun No. 3

1.8M8.829

Not long after becoming a teacher at a Tokyo girls' school, Aozawa suddenly awakened to special abilities. He could see some strange labels, but the descriptions of these labels made him feel like he was in a fantasy world. The wasp is called the "Lord of Stingers", the middle school girl is the "Paradox Fairy", and the bad girl is labeled the "World-Destroying Witch"... Each label hides extraordinary power. In the process of exploring how to obtain these powers, he gradually approached the long-hanging throne of heaven. [Tag: I am alone, invincible, daily, multiple heroines, relaxed, slow-burning, exploration and growth]

Curator6

C The plot rhythm is very good, and the only player on earth is online. The problem lies in the homogeneity of the overall plot, mysterious resurgence, pretending to be gods and ghosts... It has been as rampant as the three years of Hedong and the three years of Hexi. It started out as a biochemical sci-fi warrior, stimulating the explosion of biotechnology, which was a bit new. But soon he went back to pretending to be a ghost.

Travel Through Three Generations: Make Konoha Great Again!41

Claypot Rice With Bacon And Beans

772K9.120

Konoha 41, the Second Ninja War ended not long ago. There is a turbulent undercurrent in the village, and people's hearts are floating; outside the village, the four hidden villages are heavily armed, waiting for the opportunity to gnaw at the leaves. At a time of internal and external troubles, a veteran of the agency traveled through time and became Hiruzen Sarutobi. Along with it, there is a page of documents in the sea of ​​consciousness: authority, diplomacy, military, economy, education - five indicators that bind his future to the village. Starting from "a cup of wine to release the roots" and rebuilding the bonds with his disciples, Hiruzen Sarutobi embarked on the road to become the strongest Hokage! "Do you believe in the Will of Fire? Konoha, it's time to speed up!" "Winning over geniuses", "System reform", "Health medicine harvesting aristocrats" "Lighthouse of the Ninja World", "Konoha Green Card", "Condensing Hyuga Uchiha" "Supporting civilians", "Iterative technology", "Universal Hashirama vaccine" "Resurrect Tobirama as an Uchiha"... Sarutobi Hiruzen stood on the top of Hokage Rock, and the people below were shouting: "In the name of Hokage, make Konoha great again!"

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C

Wanli Mingjun42

Crane Move

1.6M9.0338

In 1572 AD, there were still 72 years before the fall of the Ming Dynasty and the destruction of the country. At this time, the Japanese pirates were rampant in the southeast, the Tatars in the northwest were knocking on the pass, local annexations were becoming more and more serious, the military and government were exhausted and the people were in poverty, and Emperor Longqing had just passed away. At this time, Shi Yue traveled back to the Wanli Emperor Zhu Yijun who had not been in court for thirty years. The good news is that Zhu Yijun has not yet ascended the throne. There was no time to harm the government. The bad news is that Zhu Yijun has not yet ascended the throne. Feng Bao, the chief minister of rites, wanted to be the spokesperson for imperial power. Gao Gong, the chief minister, wanted to strengthen the cabinet by evading the emperor. The second assistant, Zhang Juzheng, focused on implementing the new law. The only hope was that his biological mother, Mrs. Li, would always make him kneel down and force him to write edicts of sin. ... The collapsing building is right in front of you, with the central swords and shadows intertwining from all sides. If you receive bad luck from your country, you will be the king of the world. Now that I have ascended the throne, in this world, if I don't come to save, who will?

Curator65

B Too bad updates, too good quality

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