Personal Complaints Collection

个人吐槽集

1.2K27(62 linked)15d ago

A list of self-selected books about picking up shells on the beach, combined with comments or comments A6 - I like it purely personally B Good - the plot/characters/expressions present a sense of relaxation/vitality/personal style C Complete - a basic story is clearly told

America: the Burners21

White Dove And Screen

351K06

"Burn the corpse of the FBI agent and obtain the entry [Intelligence Insight]!" "Burn the corpse of the legendary boxing champion and obtain the entry [Peak Boxing Skills]!" "Burn the A-level weird siren head corpse and get the entry [Soul Broadcast]!" "Burn the corpse of the S-level weird gun demon and obtain the entry [Demon-Repelling Holy Flame]!" ... Murder is hidden in the corners of the city, and the piles of corpses breed strangeness. Su Long traveled through the parallel world of America and became a federal corpse burner, accidentally activating the [Corpse Burner System]! As long as you keep burning humans and weird corpses, you can get various entries! He originally just wanted to survive by relying on the system, but as time went by, countless titles were added to him: The weird barbecue master, the brother-in-law of the current president, the one-word king of North America, the sternest father of the capitalists, the god on earth who alone controls all things... "Well, it's really a hero made from corpses!" [PS: The best products are coming soon, and the results can be checked! Quality guaranteed, read with confidence!

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The world view is great, not the kind of thing that is just for the sake of popularity. However, The operation that makes the protagonist fall into unconsciousness at every turn, and the bloody relationship between men and women... Bring him back to the third-rate level of just trying to catch the heat.

The Secret Immortal22

Xiang Juonen

578K8.218

"The weather is fine today and nothing happened." Chu Xun, who seemed to be in his twenties, looked through the words he had written a few days ago and found that they were almost exactly the same. After thinking for a while, he continued to write two more lines: "I remembered that summer in Songguo Village, the way Anxiu hid a water bag in her clothes and called Brother Xun while running along the field ridge." Before he could continue writing, the boy reported outside the door: "Master, the Holy Spirit Immortal Lord wants to request a decree to avenge Hongtian Immortal Lord for beating him." "How come I still remember the hatred that happened tens of thousands of years ago?" Chu Xun shook his head and sighed, then closed the note in front of him. I saw five big words written on the cover: My path to eternal life! This book is also known as "That Man Came from Millions of Years Ago", "He is an Immortal, Secret and Great", and "From Mortal to Invincible in the Heavens"

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B 1. The system locks the cultivation level, so there is no need for the protagonist to develop desperately. Gou can be at ease and at ease, which provides the basis for a sense of leisure in the plot structure. 2 Has basic system long-term tasks, but they are not oppressive and intense tasks, so that the plot will not become chaotic and scattered. 3 Skills can be improved, and the combination of five elements spells and rural background has good application scenarios, completing the two-way growth of ability and influence, and providing a branch line for monster killing and upgrade. 4 It looks like you are just dawdling, but in fact you are cultivating immortals and other upgrades. The low-key sense of the white dragon fish suit and the obscene development of the hidden dragon in the abyss will never go out of style. 5 He saves people out of kindness, is believed in out of gratitude, attracts the hostility of the Shinto forces because of his belief, and refuses to die because of the zero-sum game of the Shinto forces themselves... This villain is naturally introduced. 6. Classical description of cultivating immortals - with ethereal and vague features, relatively sophisticated writing skills, and relatively mature depiction of worldly affairs. This is the final point of the novel's expressive power.

The American Kill Line? I Am Extraordinary and Don't Eat Beef!23

Pipi Tree

428K9.050

(30,000 regular authors, quality assurance.) "It's time for dinner again, brother!" Chu Sheng was reborn in 2023, became a Chinese street wanderer in the United States, and formed a partner with Professor Ding. "Ding... The jungle system is being bound!" "You found the material distribution point, and the reward strength is +0.1!" "Your spirit exceeds 3 points. Awaken "Bullet Time" and become invincible! " "You have helped a group of homeless people and gained the "Halo of Loyalty". The foundation of your great cause has been completed! " On the first day I came to Los Angeles, I wanted to eat again, brother. On the second day after arriving in Los Angeles, Mr. Fu paid the bill for me! On the third day in Los Angeles, what? Am I the only one who is extraordinary? I don't eat beef! On the fourth day after arriving in Los Angeles, Jie Jie Jie~~~ ... Instructor Ding, the number one jungler in the United States, Californian Priest, and North American Duke, was dumbfounded when he saw his former brother with a blonde beauty in his left hand and billions of wealth in his right hand. "No, bro, why do you eat so well?" "I'm so jealous!" ------ Ps: The protagonist is coquettish and promiscuous, has a flexible bottom line, does whatever he wants, lets himself go, and doesn't eat beef! Ps: Extraordinary + power, grab it with both hands! Ps: The old book "Hong Kong Movies: You Hung Hing Tsai, what the hell are you, the Charity King?"

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He is almost the only sane author in the genre of killing lines. --Don't let the protagonist really be a tramp for a long time, and finally become the king of tramps. This is some kind of literary youth routine from hundreds of years ago. This book has a very good choice - reform homeless people, provide jobs, bind loyalty, gang wars, unify the underground market... The rich themes and liberal laws of Lao America make the scale and upper limit of this book much higher than the previous Young and Dangerous. If the subject matter is chosen correctly, it feels like it will achieve better results than the author's previous book.

Daily Settlement, I Use My Magical Power to Cast Eternal Life24

Scallion Beef Noodles

451K0

Qingfu Tianlu is like the sun in the sky, illuminating the realm in all directions. Jiuzhou and the four seas, fairy mountains and wonderful lands. There are true immortals who preach the Tao, there are supreme truths who teach the Dharma, and there are endless living beings seeking immortality and asking questions. The waves wash away the sand, and nothing can be saved. ... Chen Zhou traveled through time and became a Taoist temple servant. Awakening magical powers, daily settlement. Various rewards can be obtained based on different assessments. [Daily settlement: The evaluation is low and medium, and you can get a wisp of energy. Taking it can increase your energy and relieve fatigue] [Daily settlement: Evaluation is medium or low, get three drops of moon dew, washing can increase wisdom and understanding] [Daily settlement: If the evaluation is high, you will get Yimu Qinghua, which can be refined to increase longevity and build bones] ... "Cultivation is difficult and the path to immortality is difficult?" "Isn't it just a matter of diligent practice and hard work, and when the opportunity comes, it will happen?"

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C The routine of the settlement flow does have a calm atmosphere of "every day is a success, but the success is not in vain". Let's see the follow-up.

Tokyo Medical Path25

I'll Be Hungry When I Wake Up

1.0M043

After being reborn in Tokyo in parallel time and space, Kiryu Kazusuke held back for a long time before writing "My high school grades were not ideal." In desperation, he had no choice but to give up writing and pursue a career in medicine. Fortunately, he can see the girls' world line, and as long as he makes a decision to act, he can obtain corresponding rewards (surgical skills, medical papers, bank card deposit +N...) So, soon, he understood three things: 1. Someone who really likes you won't care what color Porsche you drive. Second, just drink some wine with them and just chat in bed. Don't think too much and stop making unreasonable troubles. 3. Good time management.

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B 1. A very Japanese-style depiction of the workplace and life. At least he looks like the Japan seen in TV novels and news, rather than someone wearing Japanese skin. 2. A very professional medical description, quite like a giant white tower. The plot of 3 Villain is subtle and subtle, and it is more expressed in the lines of choice. It is also relatively multi-faceted and does not look like a stereotyped villain, so the repair of relationships and the sublimation of emotions appear natural and comfortable. 4. The golden finger is just right - it exists in theoretical models, but the surgical effect is almost unattainable in reality, and that's it. There is no epoch-making medical development. 5 The most amazing thing is that in fast-food-style online articles and medical topics that are originally unflattering, the author can make people calm down and slowly read what he writes.

Time Travel at the Same Time, but the Villain Scientist26

Destiny's Trump Card

2.3M8.058

Even though we have traveled through time, we are still traveling through the same flow. Bad news, capabilities cannot be shared. The good news is that most of the people who travel through time travel are well-known figures, and they are all scientists with incredible research and development capabilities. But why are most of them villains? (Hokage Orochimaru, Ultraman Masaki Keigo, Under One Man Zhuge Qing, Marvel Harry Osborn, Kamen Rider Overhaul Card, EVA, Forced Breeding Armor, Infinite Horror, Stone Age, Three-Body Problem, Wandering Earth, Gundam...) In short, these technological streams travel through each other at the same time, and the story of a group of scientists using black technology to change the world...

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C Looks like a science geek

The Little Priest Mixed in the American Tv Series27

Coke Who Loves Skiing

614K8.648

I was downloading a copy, and suddenly I was transported to the world of American TV series? Did you also bring the game character's skills? This is great, there are only a few attacks, but a lot of healing... Open a small clinic and plan to rely on the Holy Light to make a living. The roommates are Sheldon and Leonard from The Big Bang Theory. The first patient turned out to be an old man with a chainsaw. He opened the door and said, "I want to play a game with you." John Wick came to take care of the business when he had nothing to do, and finally joined the clinic with his wife-- Who told you to turn free medical care into employee benefits? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I was quite happy staying in the low-demon world-- It's okay to treat a terminal illness and eat two small cakes made by Max from "Broke Sisters". Until a certain "trickster" drew a circle and said: "Find the doctor." The moment Ethan stepped into the circle of light, battlefields, corpses, and despair all rushed towards him. The enemy sneered: "You have already lost. It is useless to call anyone over." Wait, there's a trick I've never used before-Group Resurrection! The holy light tore through the night, the fallen heroes stood up one after another, and the other side was silent: "Report, someone is cheating here!" Tags: America, time travel, doctor flow, supernatural powers, relaxed, funny, cool articles, three views

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Half Fairy - Has major blemishes and major highlights It's getting better, or it suits my personal taste. The flaws are very clear. The author is unable to grasp the stylistic differences between various film and television plots, nor is he able to grasp the plot style he wants to write. The confusion, contradictions, and logical conflicts are very conspicuous. But the advantages are very special. In the opening line drawing, you can feel the character and laughter without resorting to film and television clips; the subsequent plot of the underground world and underground characters restrainedly grasps the serious but very unrealistic movie setting; using relatively hard-core medical descriptions to show the effects of treatment has an alternative sense of reality. Generally speaking, you can feel that the author really likes those film and television characters, not just using them as material.

China Entertainment Butcher28

Fish Star

1.7M8.229

"As a director, if you want to convince everyone, you only need four words - cruel enough and crazy enough!" "I, Zheng Jirong, can be the boss in the entertainment industry because of three things: enough courage to hype, enough fists, and enough money!" "Lao Mouzi, you fully support me as the director of this Olympic Games, and I fully support you as the director of the next Olympic Games." "Pick up the script! I asked you to pick up the script!" "I can talk too! I can also shoot the main theme!" "There will only be one rule in the entertainment industry from now on, and that is my rule, Zheng Jirong!" ------ Many years later, Zheng Jirong, the world box office record holder, head of Asia's largest media company, and winner of numerous awards, accepted an exclusive interview. The reporter asked cautiously: "Director Zheng, what did you do before? Why were you able to build such an entertainment empire in just a dozen years? Did you..." Before entering the entertainment industry? Zheng Jirong grinned and said lightly: "I'm just an ordinary person, I'm a pig butcher." ---- (This book is also known as "Director, what nonsense are you talking to him!" "Pork Rong, are you going to ruin the entertainment industry?"!) (Self-directed and self-acted, multiple heroines, pure and refreshing writing, The Sweet Garden of Poetry and Immortals of the Tang Dynasty) (The author has really been a butcher, and has also won the Best Actor Award in his dream. He is proficient in the art of comprehensive dispatching from pig hind legs to female stars. Please feel free to eat.)

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C A lot of dramatic content, international hot spots, famous movie scenes... The plot is intertwined with the work.

Bodhisattva, Please Help Me Practice!29

Old Game

346K8.827

[This is a game of old times and new times. [The iron law of the new era does not allow the demons and ghosts of the old era to exist, but the demons and demons are peeping into the light from the dark. [Heirs of the new era, you will not allow the iron laws set by your ancestors to be violated. Pick up your weapons and defend your era! Ao Peng looked at the game that suddenly appeared and fell into deep thought. Then he looked at other people's games. [If you choose the path on the left, you will be bitten to death by Huangpizi. [If you choose the right path, you will be bitten to death by Huangpizi. [If you choose the middle path, you will still be bitten to death by the yellow skin. So he was going to change his approach... When he was possessed of the three poisons, surrounded by the five turbidities, spewing karma fire, transformed into the body of a nine-foot drought demon, and stepped into the Putuo Taoist Hall. The lotus has withered and the pond water is turbid. If the six roots are impure, the five heavens and humans will decline. Ao Peng looked at the fish basket Guanyin statue in front of him and said, "Bodhisattva, you don't want me to be born in this form and endanger the common people, right?" "So I ask Bodhisattva to be compassionate and help me practice for the sake of all the people in the world!"

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B Really an extraterrestrial devil, not an extraterrestrial loach

Wandering Around the Heavens, I Want to Become an Immortal30

Dreaming About Goddess

241K08

In Jin Yong's world, palm strength is no more than five feet, but Xu Zhu, who has been practicing the Xiaoyao sect's internal skills for more than two hundred years, can jump off a cliff that is almost five feet away and show off his skills, making people sweat. The world of ancient dragons invites the moon to sweep ten feet away. In the world of Huang Yi, Pang Ban's surroundings are like mirrors, flowers, and water, making it difficult for people to distinguish between reality and illusion. Ling Donglai writes on a twenty-foot-high mountain rock as strong as fine copper. It is said that the eagle is taking the enemy's head from the ten thousand troops, leaping across the sky, and flying away in pieces. ... Zhou Yao looked at the Nine Yin Manual, Nine Yang Manual, Everlasting Eternal Spring Kung Fu, Wedding Clothes Magic Kung Fu, Dao Heart Demon Planting Technique, and the God of War Illustration with tears streaming down his face... Chasing combat power is so difficult. Every time he changed the world, it was like a new version of the game, which made him sweat profusely.

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C Tinker Bell's classical writing style is as playful and playful as ever. But the problem is very obvious - too full, all the conditions of the protagonist are too full, the advantages and values ​​​​are almost overflowing, the combat power exceeds the standard, there are too many martial arts, and the plot is too familiar - the author does not intend to use it freely. The protagonist's stay and actions have become very meaningless. He wants nothing from the world, has no shortcomings in himself, and has no difficulties. He should retire from the world. And I don't know if it's because I've read too much information. The writing has a strong flavor of academic research, and the author's emphasis on the authenticity of the data seems to exceed the description of the plot itself.

Shinigami: I Picked up Attributes in Seireitei31

Toad Seedlings

324K021

Wang Xun, who accidentally traveled to the Soul Society, awakened the golden finger that can see "dropped objects". From the [spiritual fragments] floating out of the soul to the [Kidō Experience] falling at the feet of the God of Death... Since then, Seireitei has had a guy with a strange style of painting. A fellow student from the Spiritual Arts Academy: "Brother, how can you graduate smoothly if you wander around the streets without doing your job all day long?" Gotei team member: "Hey, besides hooking up with beautiful women, you are just fishing in troubled waters. How can you become a chief officer?" ... Many years later, the Invisible Empire attacked, and Wang Xun was labeled by Yhwach as the leader in special combat power. Amid the surprised expressions of the captains, he sighed helplessly. "I just picked up 100 million more attribute fragments."

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C It's rare to have a sense of life

Starting from One Person, He Became an Immortal, but the Substitute Messenger32

Liewenzi Soup

321K8.55

Heaven's Gate can replace part of the effects of Julingshuangjiang and Shuangquanzhi. The effects of Platinum Star and World are far better than that of Luanjin Tuo. Combined with Dragon Dream and Purple Hermit, it will have the effect of Qimen Dunjia. In terms of change and treatment, the experience of Crazy Diamond and Gold may not be weaker than that of Fenghouqimen and Shuangquanshou... Fifteen Taoist substitutes walked sideways throughout the area. That year, a true immortal emerged from the false Xuanmen, a true invincible emerged from the Tianshi Mansion, and a true saint emerged from the den of villains. This year, a Qing half-immortal grew up in the black soil. If all supernatural powers are there and nothing is missing, how do you know that I am not a true god? ------ The current world: Under one person, the bad guy, Mr. Marvel in China...

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C The feeling of being told so eloquently is really good. However, the writing may not be able to create a sense of passion in the later stage, and the protagonist is indeed a bit too artificial. The artificiality in "Under One Person" is to match the urban feel and out of certain needs, he cannot have a protagonist who kills decisively, but this is not the case in online novels.

Behind the Curtain33

Qingyulu

603K8.736

Traveling through the steampunk world, Gallo just wants to use the golden finger system to live a stable life as a "humanoid search engine". While others were sweating in the factory, he sat in a cafe and made huge sums of money every day relying on "knowledge navigation". When the geniuses at the Imperial University of Technology were struggling with their papers, he read the classics in a few minutes and pointed out the core point. The professors were amazed by him and regarded him as a distinguished guest. But Gallo knew in his heart that what he learned from Golden Finger was not just knowledge that could change his destiny. And those... Horrifying memories of warp knowledge.

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C The solipsistic approach cloaked in Western fantasy skin has a mysterious resurgence

The Holy Master, He is Too Steady34

August Flying Eagle

1.7M8.310

[Xu Yongsheng traveled to a martial arts world. Xu Yongsheng: "It's hard to predict good or bad fortunes. Safety comes first. You need to be more prudent in your actions." [The mysterious book I carry with me, the first page I open is the picture of Zhang Di. "Tingting will bring you the princess's tryst location." "Diting will bring you the whereabouts of Suzaku's left eye." "Di Ting has brought you the secret book of Eighty-nine Mysterious Techniques." "Listen carefully..." [The Great Qian Dynasty flourished but then declined, the world was in chaos, and the people were hanging upside down. He took his disciples to travel around the "countries" in the world, bringing peace to the world. Xu Erlang Xu Yongsheng: "Scholars talk about truth. If you don't understand the truth, I also know a little bit about fists and kicks." Disciples: "Now that the most holy master has returned to the world, the sky will not give birth to Xu Zi, and eternity will be like a long night!"

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C

Infinite Demon God: How to Download Without Data?35

Latte 70% Sugar

317K8.414

(There is already a completed work of more than two million words. If you are interested, please click on the homepage) This is an ordinary world on the surface, no different from the previous life. It wasn't until Hu Long, who had traveled through time, discovered the hidden dangers in his body that he gradually discovered the horror of this world. The secret martial arts body communicates with the gods, and the strange spirits hide in the darkness. The old magic restarts Yin and Yang, and the family has been in power for thousands of years. ... The universe is vast and there are countless civilizations. When the starry sky becomes a battlefield, the world becomes a cage. Hu Long's body ignited with a golden glow like a corona, tearing apart the curtain barrier in front of him. What appears in front of you is a giant tree that runs through the heavens, its branches spreading to the infinite universe, and every leaf has the cycle of birth and death of the world. He stretched out his hand and pressed it. Silver writing appeared in front of my eyes. [Target: World Tree. Spiritual Origin] [Size: 99999Y (Status: Downloadable)] [Explanation: The beginning of all dharma, the root of all realms.

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C Secret martial arts routines

Starting from the Cause and Result, One Can Become a Martial Saint36

Beef Brisket Bun

294K02

Chen Xiao traveled through time and became a villain. You can't control your life, it's disgusting. But he has fire in his heart and doesn't want to become such a nasty person! But in these troubled times, demons appear in the world, the imperial court is decaying, cults are everywhere, and evil gangs are disturbing the undercurrents of the world. Ordinary people can only live in an ignoble existence, so there is no chance of turning around. The situation is like a dead end. Fortunately, there is a great cause and effect diagram in Chen Xiao's consciousness. By resolving cause and effect, you can gain great luck, change your destiny, and deduce martial arts! Changed from [Destiny of Unfortunate Death] to [Prosperity and Fortune] Changed from [Poison to the Heart] to [Hongwu Body] From [Eternal Life Fist] to [Kunjin Juxu Fist] Deduced from the great path of [Calm Mind Technique] to [The True Interpretation of Nine Transformations of Nirvana] A few years later, Chen Xiao was on the top of the mountain. A diagram of cause and effect spread out from the sky, and a line of large ink characters slowly emerged. [To unify the cause of heaven and earth, achieve the supreme Tao and fruit, prove the great way of martial arts, and finally obtain the name of Martial Saint! Chen Xiao occasionally fell into deep thought. "Throughout this journey, I really, really, really want to be a good person..." [This book has been reviewed and submitted, and it has a complete outline. Feel free to collect it and read it with confidence!

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C

You Don't Want the Secret to Be Known to Everyone, Right?37

One Hundred Thousand Vegetable Groups

985K9.036

[Light intrigue + plot flow + many beauties + intelligence tips + the mastermind behind the scenes] In the first month of Jingping, something big happened in the world. General Zhao of the Great Zhou Dynasty wore a yellow robe, seized power in a coup, ascended the throne and proclaimed himself emperor, changed the country's name to "Song", and vowed to create a new atmosphere. The only trouble is that the former little emperor's whereabouts are still unknown. Li Mingyi traveled through time and became the former emperor who was hiding among the people and was captured by the world. I also found that this world is a bit familiar, and it resembles an ancient game I have completed. So he carried countless pieces of information, held his head high and walked towards the Great Song Hall. "I didn't come to this world to be a fugitive." ... Princess Zhaoqing of the new dynasty has had mixed joys recently. The retainer she recruited named Li Mingyi was so capable that she could win over all civil servants, military generals, nobles, great monks, and female national preceptors just by talking in secret. He also often recommended capable ministers to high positions and spared no effort to combat the remnants of the previous dynasty. But why do you always feel that this group of people only follows his lead and are attacking more and more remnants of the previous dynasty? Is my father's heart disease getting worse? She decided to talk to him.

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C The plot in the first 30 chapters or so will be quickly skipped, and the following plot will focus on the important turning points. The biggest drawback of this kind of book is the endless palace battles, scheming, and foot-binding...

Final Form!38

Final Form!

Xuanhuan

Go To Bed Early And Get Up Early

696K03

Chen Chong traveled back in time to the Gaowu era and became a senior high school student. As he was about to graduate, he was involved in an elaborate conspiracy. In a desperate situation, mysterious numbers suddenly appeared in front of his eyes. 1%, 2%...99%, 100%. [First form, open. The cold voice echoed in the starry sky of consciousness, and Chen Chong's path to becoming a strong man began. Traditional martial arts, modern martial arts, genetic enhancement, physical limit breaking... Giant corporations, gangs, central city and wasteland, plutocrats and the Free Army. The new and the old collide fiercely, and the tide of the times is rolling forward. And in the corner where no one is paying attention-- Alien beasts are quietly dormant, and there are dark eyes in the cracks of the ruins, silently watching everything in the world. However whatever it is. No matter who it is. None of them could stop Chen Chong from advancing. Second form, third form, fourth form... Unable to stop Chen Chong, Chen Chong continues to grow stronger. His attitude towards the world is also quietly changing. Finally, when Chen Chong stood on the top of the tallest building in Central City, everything in the world was at his feet. Facing the figures around him whose auras shook the world, behind Chen Chong there were also terrifying shadows slowly steaming, as if they were about to swallow the whole world. "Next, is..." "Final form!"

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C The writing is okay, but it seems less like an online novel and more like an old story from before. It has a classic three-act format and is very repetitive. It makes people have no motivation to follow up.

Traveling Simultaneously: Across the Heavens39

Listen To The Rain With A Knife

836K7.841

The same flow, the dragon clan, the sun and the moon make the same mistake, under one person, in the snow, Luo Xiaohei, the fox demon matchmaker, Zhu Xian, etc...

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C It's okay. It mainly focuses on a fast, refreshing and invincible flow. It's quite contrived and deliberate, but originally I just wanted to find a routine article to read.

Practice Martial Arts, and the Tao Will Be Forever Solid!40

Mars Hotpot

1.5M7.929

[PS: The average daily update is 20,000+, focusing on a large quantity to satisfy the needs] Coming to a strange world by chance, he almost became a refugee who was forced to rebel... Qin Fang expressed his regrets. Fortunately, I carry a golden finger with me - if you practice hard, you will definitely gain something! And the fruit of Tao is eternal! This is a world where individuals cannibalize people, the court, sects, demons... In this troubled world, human life is like a piece of grass. I want to reach the highest level step by step!

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C It's not the kind that's cool, but it's the kind that tells characters and stories, a slightly traditional way of writing. It's just that the rhythm is wrong. The first 40 or so pictures are all about the protagonist suffering. The rest of the film is basically flooded with water, and the rhythm is pitifully chaotic.

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