Personal Complaints Collection

个人吐槽集

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A list of self-selected books about picking up shells on the beach, combined with comments or comments A6 - I like it purely personally B Good - the plot/characters/expressions present a sense of relaxation/vitality/personal style C Complete - a basic story is clearly told

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Bodhisattva, Please Help Me Practice!25

Old Game

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[This is a game of old times and new times. [The iron law of the new era does not allow the demons and ghosts of the old era to exist, but the demons and demons are peeping into the light from the dark. [Heirs of the new era, you will not allow the iron laws set by your ancestors to be violated. Pick up your weapons and defend your era! Ao Peng looked at the game that suddenly appeared and fell into deep thought. Then he looked at other people's games. [If you choose the path on the left, you will be bitten to death by Huangpizi. [If you choose the right path, you will be bitten to death by Huangpizi. [If you choose the middle path, you will still be bitten to death by the yellow skin. So he was going to change his approach... When he was possessed of the three poisons, surrounded by the five turbidities, spewing karma fire, transformed into the body of a nine-foot drought demon, and stepped into the Putuo Taoist Hall. The lotus has withered and the pond water is turbid. If the six roots are impure, the five heavens and humans will decline. Ao Peng looked at the fish basket Guanyin statue in front of him and said, "Bodhisattva, you don't want me to be born in this form and endanger the common people, right?" "So I ask Bodhisattva to be compassionate and help me practice for the sake of all the people in the world!"

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B Really an extraterrestrial devil, not an extraterrestrial loach

Wandering Around the Heavens, I Want to Become an Immortal26

Dreaming About Goddess

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In Jin Yong's world, palm strength is no more than five feet, but Xu Zhu, who has been practicing the Xiaoyao sect's internal skills for more than two hundred years, can jump off a cliff that is almost five feet away and show off his skills, making people sweat. The world of ancient dragons invites the moon to sweep ten feet away. In the world of Huang Yi, Pang Ban's surroundings are like mirrors, flowers, and water, making it difficult for people to distinguish between reality and illusion. Ling Donglai writes on a twenty-foot-high mountain rock as strong as fine copper. It is said that the eagle is taking the enemy's head from the ten thousand troops, leaping across the sky, and flying away in pieces. ... Zhou Yao looked at the Nine Yin Manual, Nine Yang Manual, Everlasting Eternal Spring Kung Fu, Wedding Clothes Magic Kung Fu, Dao Heart Demon Planting Technique, and the God of War Illustration with tears streaming down his face... Chasing combat power is so difficult. Every time he changed the world, it was like a new version of the game, which made him sweat profusely.

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C Tinker Bell's classical writing style is as playful and playful as ever. But the problem is very obvious - too full, all the conditions of the protagonist are too full, the advantages and values ​​​​are almost overflowing, the combat power exceeds the standard, there are too many martial arts, and the plot is too familiar - the author does not intend to use it freely. The protagonist's stay and actions have become very meaningless. He wants nothing from the world, has no shortcomings in himself, and has no difficulties. He should retire from the world. And I don't know if it's because I've read too much information. The writing has a strong flavor of academic research, and the author's emphasis on the authenticity of the data seems to exceed the description of the plot itself.

Shinigami: I Picked up Attributes in Seireitei27

Toad Seedlings

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Wang Xun, who accidentally traveled to the Soul Society, awakened the golden finger that can see "dropped objects". From the [spiritual fragments] floating out of the soul to the [Kidō Experience] falling at the feet of the God of Death... Since then, Seireitei has had a guy with a strange style of painting. A fellow student from the Spiritual Arts Academy: "Brother, how can you graduate smoothly if you wander around the streets without doing your job all day long?" Gotei team member: "Hey, besides hooking up with beautiful women, you are just fishing in troubled waters. How can you become a chief officer?" ... Many years later, the Invisible Empire attacked, and Wang Xun was labeled by Yhwach as the leader in special combat power. Amid the surprised expressions of the captains, he sighed helplessly. "I just picked up 100 million more attribute fragments."

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C It's rare to have a sense of life

Starting from One Person, He Became an Immortal, but the Substitute Messenger28

Liewenzi Soup

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Heaven's Gate can replace part of the effects of Julingshuangjiang and Shuangquanzhi. The effects of Platinum Star and World are far better than that of Luanjin Tuo. Combined with Dragon Dream and Purple Hermit, it will have the effect of Qimen Dunjia. In terms of change and treatment, the experience of Crazy Diamond and Gold may not be weaker than that of Fenghouqimen and Shuangquanshou... Fifteen Taoist substitutes walked sideways throughout the area. That year, a true immortal emerged from the false Xuanmen, a true invincible emerged from the Tianshi Mansion, and a true saint emerged from the den of villains. This year, a Qing half-immortal grew up in the black soil. If all supernatural powers are there and nothing is missing, how do you know that I am not a true god? ------ The current world: Under one person, the bad guy, Mr. Marvel in China...

Curator

C The feeling of being told so eloquently is really good. However, the writing may not be able to create a sense of passion in the later stage, and the protagonist is indeed a bit too artificial. The artificiality in "Under One Person" is to match the urban feel and out of certain needs, he cannot have a protagonist who kills decisively, but this is not the case in online novels.

Behind the Curtain29

Qingyulu

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Traveling through the steampunk world, Gallo just wants to use the golden finger system to live a stable life as a "humanoid search engine". While others were sweating in the factory, he sat in a cafe and made huge sums of money every day relying on "knowledge navigation". When the geniuses at the Imperial University of Technology were struggling with their papers, he read the classics in a few minutes and pointed out the core point. The professors were amazed by him and regarded him as a distinguished guest. But Gallo knew in his heart that what he learned from Golden Finger was not just knowledge that could change his destiny. And those... Horrifying memories of warp knowledge.

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C The solipsistic approach cloaked in Western fantasy skin has a mysterious resurgence

The Holy Master, He is Too Steady30

August Flying Eagle

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[Xu Yongsheng traveled to a martial arts world. Xu Yongsheng: "It's hard to predict good or bad fortunes. Safety comes first. You need to be more prudent in your actions." [The mysterious book I carry with me, the first page I open is the picture of Zhang Di. "Tingting will bring you the princess's tryst location." "Diting will bring you the whereabouts of Suzaku's left eye." "Di Ting has brought you the secret book of Eighty-nine Mysterious Techniques." "Listen carefully..." [The Great Qian Dynasty flourished but then declined, the world was in chaos, and the people were hanging upside down. He took his disciples to travel around the "countries" in the world, bringing peace to the world. Xu Erlang Xu Yongsheng: "Scholars talk about truth. If you don't understand the truth, I also know a little bit about fists and kicks." Disciples: "Now that the most holy master has returned to the world, the sky will not give birth to Xu Zi, and eternity will be like a long night!"

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C

Infinite Demon God: How to Download Without Data?31

Latte 70% Sugar

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(There is already a completed work of more than two million words. If you are interested, please click on the homepage) This is an ordinary world on the surface, no different from the previous life. It wasn't until Hu Long, who had traveled through time, discovered the hidden dangers in his body that he gradually discovered the horror of this world. The secret martial arts body communicates with the gods, and the strange spirits hide in the darkness. The old magic restarts Yin and Yang, and the family has been in power for thousands of years. ... The universe is vast and there are countless civilizations. When the starry sky becomes a battlefield, the world becomes a cage. Hu Long's body ignited with a golden glow like a corona, tearing apart the curtain barrier in front of him. What appears in front of you is a giant tree that runs through the heavens, its branches spreading to the infinite universe, and every leaf has the cycle of birth and death of the world. He stretched out his hand and pressed it. Silver writing appeared in front of my eyes. [Target: World Tree. Spiritual Origin] [Size: 99999Y (Status: Downloadable)] [Explanation: The beginning of all dharma, the root of all realms.

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C Secret martial arts routines

Starting from the Cause and Result, One Can Become a Martial Saint32

Beef Brisket Bun

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Chen Xiao traveled through time and became a villain. You can't control your life, it's disgusting. But he has fire in his heart and doesn't want to become such a nasty person! But in these troubled times, demons appear in the world, the imperial court is decaying, cults are everywhere, and evil gangs are disturbing the undercurrents of the world. Ordinary people can only live in an ignoble existence, so there is no chance of turning around. The situation is like a dead end. Fortunately, there is a great cause and effect diagram in Chen Xiao's consciousness. By resolving cause and effect, you can gain great luck, change your destiny, and deduce martial arts! Changed from [Destiny of Unfortunate Death] to [Prosperity and Fortune] Changed from [Poison to the Heart] to [Hongwu Body] From [Eternal Life Fist] to [Kunjin Juxu Fist] Deduced from the great path of [Calm Mind Technique] to [The True Interpretation of Nine Transformations of Nirvana] A few years later, Chen Xiao was on the top of the mountain. A diagram of cause and effect spread out from the sky, and a line of large ink characters slowly emerged. [To unify the cause of heaven and earth, achieve the supreme Tao and fruit, prove the great way of martial arts, and finally obtain the name of Martial Saint! Chen Xiao occasionally fell into deep thought. "Throughout this journey, I really, really, really want to be a good person..." [This book has been reviewed and submitted, and it has a complete outline. Feel free to collect it and read it with confidence!

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C

You Don't Want the Secret to Be Known to Everyone, Right?33

One Hundred Thousand Vegetable Groups

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[Light intrigue + plot flow + many beauties + intelligence tips + the mastermind behind the scenes] In the first month of Jingping, something big happened in the world. General Zhao of the Great Zhou Dynasty wore a yellow robe, seized power in a coup, ascended the throne and proclaimed himself emperor, changed the country's name to "Song", and vowed to create a new atmosphere. The only trouble is that the former little emperor's whereabouts are still unknown. Li Mingyi traveled through time and became the former emperor who was hiding among the people and was captured by the world. I also found that this world is a bit familiar, and it resembles an ancient game I have completed. So he carried countless pieces of information, held his head high and walked towards the Great Song Hall. "I didn't come to this world to be a fugitive." ... Princess Zhaoqing of the new dynasty has had mixed joys recently. The retainer she recruited named Li Mingyi was so capable that she could win over all civil servants, military generals, nobles, great monks, and female national preceptors just by talking in secret. He also often recommended capable ministers to high positions and spared no effort to combat the remnants of the previous dynasty. But why do you always feel that this group of people only follows his lead and are attacking more and more remnants of the previous dynasty? Is my father's heart disease getting worse? She decided to talk to him.

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C The plot in the first 30 chapters or so will be quickly skipped, and the following plot will focus on the important turning points. The biggest drawback of this kind of book is the endless palace battles, scheming, and foot-binding...

Final Form!34

Final Form!

Xuanhuan

Go To Bed Early And Get Up Early

696K03

Chen Chong traveled back in time to the Gaowu era and became a senior high school student. As he was about to graduate, he was involved in an elaborate conspiracy. In a desperate situation, mysterious numbers suddenly appeared in front of his eyes. 1%, 2%...99%, 100%. [First form, open. The cold voice echoed in the starry sky of consciousness, and Chen Chong's path to becoming a strong man began. Traditional martial arts, modern martial arts, genetic enhancement, physical limit breaking... Giant corporations, gangs, central city and wasteland, plutocrats and the Free Army. The new and the old collide fiercely, and the tide of the times is rolling forward. And in the corner where no one is paying attention-- Alien beasts are quietly dormant, and there are dark eyes in the cracks of the ruins, silently watching everything in the world. However whatever it is. No matter who it is. None of them could stop Chen Chong from advancing. Second form, third form, fourth form... Unable to stop Chen Chong, Chen Chong continues to grow stronger. His attitude towards the world is also quietly changing. Finally, when Chen Chong stood on the top of the tallest building in Central City, everything in the world was at his feet. Facing the figures around him whose auras shook the world, behind Chen Chong there were also terrifying shadows slowly steaming, as if they were about to swallow the whole world. "Next, is..." "Final form!"

Curator

C The writing is okay, but it seems less like an online novel and more like an old story from before. It has a classic three-act format and is very repetitive. It makes people have no motivation to follow up.

Traveling Simultaneously: Across the Heavens35

Listen To The Rain With A Knife

836K7.839

The same flow, the dragon clan, the sun and the moon make the same mistake, under one person, in the snow, Luo Xiaohei, the fox demon matchmaker, Zhu Xian, etc...

Curator

C It's okay. It mainly focuses on a fast, refreshing and invincible flow. It's quite contrived and deliberate, but originally I just wanted to find a routine article to read.

Practice Martial Arts, and the Tao Will Be Forever Solid!36

Mars Hotpot

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[PS: The average daily update is 20,000+, focusing on a large quantity to satisfy the needs] Coming to a strange world by chance, he almost became a refugee who was forced to rebel... Qin Fang expressed his regrets. Fortunately, I carry a golden finger with me - if you practice hard, you will definitely gain something! And the fruit of Tao is eternal! This is a world where individuals cannibalize people, the court, sects, demons... In this troubled world, human life is like a piece of grass. I want to reach the highest level step by step!

Curator

C It's not the kind that's cool, but it's the kind that tells characters and stories, a slightly traditional way of writing. It's just that the rhythm is wrong. The first 40 or so pictures are all about the protagonist suffering. The rest of the film is basically flooded with water, and the rhythm is pitifully chaotic.

I Build a Shelter in the Eternal Night37

Medieval Rabbit

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Chen Fan traveled to a strange and fantasy world. In this world, after night fell, countless strange things wreaked havoc on the world. He became an architect by traveling through the Lord of Night panel that came with him, and built his own camp in the wasteland bit by bit. Strange fires, city walls, and sacrificial towers were built one after another out of thin air, and his reputation gradually spread throughout Jiangbei. Until-- When the "ultimate natural disaster" comes, countless crazy monsters harm the world, and people are in dire straits. A Great Wall stretching across the continent rose out of thin air! ... "This is the Evernight Continent." "My territory."

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A It's very comfortable to watch, relaxed and refreshing, the mood is very naive, but the design is not so naive, it's like a casual and relaxing game.

Extreme World, Draw Cards to Become a Saint38

Li Jianxia

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At the end of the dynasty, the world was in chaos. Force is power, and the names of immortals and Buddhas are captured with fists and swords. The common people are like grass and grass, struggling in religion, natural disasters and conquests. Lu Chen traveled through time with a card-drawing mobile game. Xuan Gong Secret Code? Card Pool: "Dragon Tiger Prison Suppressing Skill", "Xuan Wu Zhen Gang"?, "Tian Mo Sword Manual" [Qi Men Weapon Box] Card pool: Zimu Soul Leaving Dart?, Dragon Bird Great Ring Knife?, Wanmiao Soul Capturing Umbrella [Exotic Gu Mysterious Embryo] Card Pool: Ten Thousand Transformation Gu, Blood Marrow Demon Tendon, Nirvana Insect Nest The Record of Strangers? Card pool: Poison Doctor·Mrs. Yu, Counting the Common People·Sima Hui, Wine and Meat Toutuo·Bujie In the world of rivers and lakes, there is no poetry, wine and romance, only flies and dogs. The top of the Forbidden City. Lu Chen looked down at the so-called heroes of the right path swarming under his feet like a swarm of ants. "My road needs to be paved with corpses. If you don't want to be one of them, come and try to see if you can make me stop."

Curator

C There is a saying about writing a book review well: 3 million words of writing power. It's not very good-looking, but it doesn't have the exaggerated flavor of a short drama.

Rebirth 1878: America's Most Ruthless Gangster39

Covered With Flowers

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Lawson was reborn in 1878 and awakened the dead soldier system. In this Wild West where heroes and villains dance together, the Chinese are not even qualified to sit at the card table. But Lawson's arrival will personally overturn this table! Chinese dead soldiers, British dead soldiers, African dead soldiers During the day, he is a gentle and harmless houseguest. At night, he was the leader of robbers who made all white people in the West fearful. The Irish dead soldier Kong committed a heinous crime, and then used his identity as a British dead soldier to launder his wealth. Use dead Chinese soldiers to establish an image of justice. When the order of civilization cannot bring justice, then let the laws of the wilderness reshuffle the cards! Don't agree with the creation of a Chinese state? Then I have no choice but to create a new federation!

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A The best gesture of the Internet article - Xiaobai's name, Xiaobai's value pursuit, Xiaobai's story routine, Xiaobai's emotional satisfaction; but it has quite detailed and rich historical data as a foreshadowing, and the writing style is smooth enough to complete the narrative. But the biggest dilemma of this kind of writing often comes from himself - as the length increases and the plots are repeated, the author will fall into a self-contradictory circle, and he can no longer balance the shallowness of the plot and the weight of history. It's like standing on the shoulders of a giant and looking tall, but when the giant appears in full view, he is made to look particularly small.

Cultivating Immortality in Two Realms40

Wen Chao Gong

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The prosperity and misfortune of the years, the circulation of the spiritual atmosphere, the transformation of yin and yang - these are all achievements at the end of the year... This is the story of a young man who travels across two realms to cultivate immortality and explores how to become a [worth-year-old]...

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C Standard formulaic writing

The Arrival of the Infinite Gods41

Ninety-four Or Leaping Into The Abyss

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Many years later, when Siming looked at the densely packed evolved people, contract people, star people, and Tianguan people in front of him. He will definitely think of the day when he was transferred from the Donghai team to the Tenjin team because he couldn't stand the footbath in 2007. --Yuanzu Infinite Flow, the first generation. From the apex of the world of reincarnation to the apex of the multiverse.

Curator3

C There is too much flavor of textual criticism. The author's ability to write stories is average, and it will unconsciously turn into a thesis style, considering and demonstrating the infinite flow setting.

Speed ​​through the Heavens and Kill the Immortals in the World of Mortals42

Meishuijin

560K8.45

Mu Mobai, you were born to be a devil. Killing and arson are as simple to you as eating and drinking. People like you should be cut into pieces without a burial place! Absurd, Mu's name says it all. He knows that his nature is pure and white, but he maintains the darkness of chaos. He is a pure person who is free from vulgar taste! Your hands are full of blood and your crimes are heinous, but you are worthy of being pure! Mu is an assassin, so shouldn't his hands be full of blood. In addition, he can do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. No matter what, wealth, glory, beauty and power are all just passing away! Mu Mobai, you still say that you are not a devil! Across all the heavens and worlds, I use my killing power to establish the way of humanity and open up the path to disaster. I have gone through thousands of twists and turns, tempered over and over again, and I am determined not to change, that's all! ... In the world of Condor Shooting, since we are ordinary people, we should do the things of ordinary people, join the world to benefit ourselves, and cultivate an ordinary heart. Life is not easy for people. If you can blame others, don't blame yourself! In the world of Tianlong, if there are great grievances, there will always be residual grievances. How can we do good by repaying grievances with virtue? Cultivate a normal heart that is not afraid of life and death and looks down on worldly affairs. Everything is empty and everything is allowed. Who can't die! Lu Xiaofeng's legend is that when he was young, he held up a fire toward the Yuan Dynasty, but still raised his eyes to look up. When he was old, he turned sideways and turned into a shadow, as if he was in the immortal class. He found peace in the noisy world. Silence is true silence. Seeing dust is true dustlessness. A clear mind is true transcendence. In this way, living in seclusion in the mountains is no different from living in the world. You can enter the Tao, you can live in the real world, and you can experience the Tao and the truth. Therefore, this world will be the best, and you will be the best in the world in the past. Even when you see me, you have to lower your eyebrows! For eternity, a god came from the Corpse Mountain and the Sea of ​​Blood, sweeping across the heavens!

Curator2

C The writing style of middle school students. I have written several books. It is still the writing style of middle school students. This type of author is also quite powerful.

Prime Minister in White44

Top Of The World

106K0

"Hey, have you heard that the civil and military champion this time is the same person!" "I heard that the civil and military champion is three points more beautiful than the women!" "And he is only 15 years old, and he is the nephew of Tong Yun, the richest man in the country! The emperor made him the Minister of War on the spot. , Holy grace is profound!" Hearing these rumors, the man in green held the tea cup with his fair and strong hands, squinting his slender red phoenix eyes, looking at the tea cup with deep and distant eyes: Mo Junyu, what kind of person is this man who became famous in the imperial capital overnight? He is said to be Tong Yun's nephew, but there is no trace of his previous experience! Thinking of this, his eyebrows frowned slightly. Tonight, my father will host a banquet in honor of the top scholar and all the candidates. Let's try again then. He and she ended up with a mysterious ending...

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Starting from the World of Martial Arts and Breaking Through the Abyss45

Wu Jiechao

1.5M8.823

The original title of the book is "Falling into the Abyss: Only I Have an Equipment Slot" The earth was captured by the abyss. Based on various residential areas, it fell into the abyss and struggled to survive. While the survivors had to face the harsh environment of the abyss, they also had to go to other worlds to find items of will to recharge the will of the earth. Among all the survivors, only Lin Hao has his own equipment slot, which can be used to enchant additional equipment attributes. When the eighty-two kilograms of Qinglong Yanyue Sword was poured into the spear in his right hand, and the coat on his body was enchanted with hundreds of kilograms of full-body armor, Lin Hao, who ignored the weight of the enchantment, looked at the team blocking the evacuation point in front, with a hunting smile on his face, "Falled into a trap, little mouse." (It has accumulated 4 million words and 10,000 orders. It is a masterpiece with over 10 million words. Your character is guaranteed, so please feel free to read.)

Curator14

C A game similar to search, fight, and retreat. It's very dry and can only be said to have completed the narrative.

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