Traveling Simultaneously: Across the Heavens

... The two comments above left me stunned. This book has a total of 24 updated chapters. One of you read it for an hour and a half, and the other read it for three and a half hours. How the hell did you see this? After watching it, I was still discussing the plot comments.

The ups and downs of the plot are not much exciting, but there are quite a few literary ones. Evaluation: Those who like the thinking of female videos are in luck.

I just feel like why, except for a few, everyone's life experience is so miserable?

The protagonist in Snow World is too sadistic in the beginning, but everything else is easy to kill decisively.

It is a romance novel disguised as Zhutian. It looks very exciting at first, but after a few more glances, something doesn't feel right. The author, Wen Qing, has a brain disease. Before writing a pleasant plot, he should suppress it first. He is not a human being at all. Later, it becomes a romance novel. How about your development? What about the idea of ​​merging the heavens? I deviated from the topic and wrote it as a romance. It has the same problem as Dragon Clan, but its writing style is not as good as Dragon Clan.

I'm so confused. I regret subscribing. The more I read, the more weird it becomes. The first part is just vague, but the second part stops acting and I just write romance.

Waiting for so long for the story in the snow, but the result is a huge mess, too🐮🍺

The original review said that Xue Zhong's writing was okay, but that it was written by a fox demon. Damn, the continuation of the story is also a mess.

6 is numb, it's been a few years, and I'm still writing this kind of thankless thing.

There are definitely bright spots in this book, but the author has also been making mistakes. For example, the supporting characters are all outwitted. For example, in the scene with the fox demon, there is a plot that asks the protagonist to fight Tushan. This description is extremely procrastinating and brainless, and there is no need to exist at all🌚. For another example, the plot is extremely dragging, with repeated descriptions. Just one plot of Lu Linglong being beaten can last so long. The protagonist keeps talking nonsense, without any master style, long and useless descriptions, and the more you read, the more annoying you are. These ideas are actually okay. There are no major problems in the plot, but there are constant minor problems. The toad is crawling on the feet - if it doesn't bite, it will hurt people.•ᴗ•💧