Personal Complaints Collection
个人吐槽集
A list of self-selected books about picking up shells on the beach, combined with comments or comments A6 - I like it purely personally B Good - the plot/characters/expressions present a sense of relaxation/vitality/personal style C Complete - a basic story is clearly told
43Dragon Fist
Xuanhuan龙拳
Charge Cat
At the end of the New Dynasty, there were constant wars, disasters, and demons. Western life cultivators, Japanese warriors, muskets and iron ships, demons and troubled times. At the bottom of the Nine Rivers, all nations are connected. Three religions and nine streams coexist here, and Jinmen's rules are greater than the king's laws. In the last years of this turbulent dynasty, Qin Geng awakened from the "Book of Hundreds of Industries" and started as a coachman in Jinmen, developing a master of national arts and becoming a god. [Cartman] circles Jinmen and runs for ten days to unlock [Magic Walk]. His endurance is endless and he can travel thousands of miles in a day. [Paper-tying] adds the finishing touch, attracts butterflies to come to court, unlocks [Six Painted Skins], wears dead human skin, and secretly learns martial arts. [Martial Arts Master] Xingyi is ready to fight, beat people and hang paintings, unlock [Dragon Muscles and Tiger Bones], dragon and tiger fight each other, endless life. The horse [invite the gods to come to the body], the school captain [find the dragon to share the gold], the feng shui [the divine secrets and hundreds of solutions], and the doctor [the heavenly craftsmanship of hundreds of herbs]. Qin Geng was full of enthusiasm for his career, controlled the Cao Gang, and fought against the West. He was nicknamed "Jinmen Yama". All professions lead to martial arts, righteousness is the top priority, dragon slaying is the first priority, this is Dragon Fist! The Westerners drove iron ships and cannons: "The new dynasty has agreed to abolish the canal and reform the sea. How dare you stop this? How dare you, Qin Geng, surpass the king?" Qin Geng stood with his hands behind his back. "In Jinmen, Qin is Wang Fa." "Abolition of the canal and reform of the sea is the lifeblood of millions of canal workers. The New Dynasty promised it, but Qin absolutely refused!" "National martial arts, killing skills." "Westerners, today you and I are both superior and inferior, and it is also a matter of life and death!"
At the end of the New Dynasty, there were constant wars, disasters, and demons. Western life cultivators, Japanese warriors, muskets and iron ships, demons and troubled times. At the bottom of the Nine Rivers, all nations are connected. Three religions and nine streams coexist here, and Jinmen's rules are greater than the king's laws. In the last years of this turbulent dynasty, Qin Geng awakened from the "Book of Hundreds of Industries" and started as a coachman in Jinmen, developing a master of national arts and becoming a god. [Cartman] circles Jinmen and runs for ten days to unlock [Magic Walk]. His endurance is endless and he can travel thousands of miles in a day. [Paper-tying] adds the finishing touch, attracts butterflies to come to court, unlocks [Six Painted Skins], wears dead human skin, and secretly learns martial arts. [Martial Arts Master] Xingyi is ready to fight, beat people and hang paintings, unlock [Dragon Muscles and Tiger Bones], dragon and tiger fight each other, endless life. The horse [invite the gods to come to the body], the school captain [find the dragon to share the gold], the feng shui [the divine secrets and hundreds of solutions], and the doctor [the heavenly craftsmanship of hundreds of herbs]. Qin Geng was full of enthusiasm for his career, controlled the Cao Gang, and fought against the West. He was nicknamed "Jinmen Yama". All professions lead to martial arts, righteousness is the top priority, dragon slaying is the first priority, this is Dragon Fist! The Westerners drove iron ships and cannons: "The new dynasty has agreed to abolish the canal and reform the sea. How dare you stop this? How dare you, Qin Geng, surpass the king?" Qin Geng stood with his hands behind his back. "In Jinmen, Qin is Wang Fa." "Abolition of the canal and reform of the sea is the lifeblood of millions of canal workers. The New Dynasty promised it, but Qin absolutely refused!" "National martial arts, killing skills." "Westerners, today you and I are both superior and inferior, and it is also a matter of life and death!"
C The plot is average, but the writing is quite solid and smooth. The story writing itself is considered first-class from Qidian. It has a simple and unpretentious beauty. The subsequent plot, how should I put it, feels that the author is indeed not a mature author. It's not simply that it became unsightly in the future, but that it was separated, that is, separated from the three-quarter acre of land and the life of the middle and lower classes, the author became completely unable to write.
44Technology Invades Modern Times
Science Fiction科技入侵现代
Crow's Thoughts
1960: Lin Ran opened his eyes and was actually on the streets of New York in the 1960s. He had technological data for the next 60 years, but he became a "black account" without an identity. In the 1960s, he became the administrator of NASA, burning 10% of America's GDP budget every year, quarreling with the masses in Congress, gathering heroes in universities around the world, and staking out Fang Qiu in global scientific research cooperation. 2020: Return to China to build a trust monster, build a base on Mars, gather astronauts to set off for Europa, and start a major transformation plan for Rhea. In this huge gamble across time and space, he is both the ghost of history and the fire of the future. When Lin Ran suddenly looked back, he realized that he had already set the whole world on fire.
1960: Lin Ran opened his eyes and was actually on the streets of New York in the 1960s. He had technological data for the next 60 years, but he became a "black account" without an identity. In the 1960s, he became the administrator of NASA, burning 10% of America's GDP budget every year, quarreling with the masses in Congress, gathering heroes in universities around the world, and staking out Fang Qiu in global scientific research cooperation. 2020: Return to China to build a trust monster, build a base on Mars, gather astronauts to set off for Europa, and start a major transformation plan for Rhea. In this huge gamble across time and space, he is both the ghost of history and the fire of the future. When Lin Ran suddenly looked back, he realized that he had already set the whole world on fire.
A quite an abstract book The exciting parts are so exciting, but the part where the left and right brains compete with each other really makes people feel too abstract. In a sense, I think some of the speculations in the book review area are completely reasonable - the author may have found Li Daitao in the middle.
45海贼:没人比我更懂恶魔果实
Horn Of Moon Beast
"Only domineering can be superior to everything." This is the wise saying of Kaido, the gold medal lecturer of the Great Channel, and is regarded as a guideline by countless people. But Roy didn't agree with this. "Then let me ask you - if there is an esper who can analyze and collect all the fruit abilities, and is not affected by the Sea Tower Stone and sea water, can he use the fruit abilities to reach the top of the sea?" To prove his idea, Roy took action. ... Many years later. In the Red Earth Continent, the Holy Land 'Marie Gioia' is burning. At the top of Pangu City, the founder of the terracotta warriors is standing in the sky. The pure white navy cloak is hunting in the wind. "Do you want to be the enemy of the world?" Facing the questioning from the world's nobles, Roy just grinned. "Have I not been against the world for a long time?" He smiled. Those who follow him walk out from behind him. The figures leading among them filled the scene with silence. Everyone recognizes them. They are all powerful men who have suddenly become famous on the sea in recent years. Among them are killers, revolutionaries, pirates, businessmen, doctors... Without exception, they are all extremely powerful ability users, and they belong to the same organization. Legend has it that that organization has a mysterious leader who is the most dangerous criminal in the sea today. And now, the facts speak for themselves. "You, you are..." A new generation of naval legends. The sea's most dangerous criminal. The two were the same person from the beginning. His name is... Loy Amos.
"Only domineering can be superior to everything." This is the wise saying of Kaido, the gold medal lecturer of the Great Channel, and is regarded as a guideline by countless people. But Roy didn't agree with this. "Then let me ask you - if there is an esper who can analyze and collect all the fruit abilities, and is not affected by the Sea Tower Stone and sea water, can he use the fruit abilities to reach the top of the sea?" To prove his idea, Roy took action. ... Many years later. In the Red Earth Continent, the Holy Land 'Marie Gioia' is burning. At the top of Pangu City, the founder of the terracotta warriors is standing in the sky. The pure white navy cloak is hunting in the wind. "Do you want to be the enemy of the world?" Facing the questioning from the world's nobles, Roy just grinned. "Have I not been against the world for a long time?" He smiled. Those who follow him walk out from behind him. The figures leading among them filled the scene with silence. Everyone recognizes them. They are all powerful men who have suddenly become famous on the sea in recent years. Among them are killers, revolutionaries, pirates, businessmen, doctors... Without exception, they are all extremely powerful ability users, and they belong to the same organization. Legend has it that that organization has a mysterious leader who is the most dangerous criminal in the sea today. And now, the facts speak for themselves. "You, you are..." A new generation of naval legends. The sea's most dangerous criminal. The two were the same person from the beginning. His name is... Loy Amos.
B The writing is not bad and the story design is quite good. Simple plug-ins and well-written plot, a standard starting point for high-quality fan fiction. One Piece fans have two inherent limitations: 1. The existing plot parts are too overflowing and the possibilities are almost exhausted. 2 Frequently slapped in the face by Oda's updated content
46从龙族开始重新做人
Thick Ink Pouring Book
July 3, 2004. Xu Yuan came through the storm on this day. There are many big brothers in this world, but they are all called Big Brother Xu Yuan. --Spoilers-- "What does it mean that Bronze City has stood up?" "What do you mean the king of earth and mountains also surrendered?" "What does it mean that Eriki Uesugi has become the new White King?" "What do you mean Odin took Caesar to modify the timeline and hide it?" ---- (Wan Jun's old book "Starting from Naruto as the Mastermind") (Twenty Wan Jun's old book "Starting from Hokage as a Worker")
July 3, 2004. Xu Yuan came through the storm on this day. There are many big brothers in this world, but they are all called Big Brother Xu Yuan. --Spoilers-- "What does it mean that Bronze City has stood up?" "What do you mean the king of earth and mountains also surrendered?" "What does it mean that Eriki Uesugi has become the new White King?" "What do you mean Odin took Caesar to modify the timeline and hide it?" ---- (Wan Jun's old book "Starting from Naruto as the Mastermind") (Twenty Wan Jun's old book "Starting from Hokage as a Worker")
C There are too many redundant and ineffective plots. No matter how you write an escape room, you can't stand the fact that the background of your story is a single-room rental house.
47同时穿越:父愁者联盟
Three People From Lingnan
Special note: 600,000 words have been written in this book, so don't worry about eunuchs The worlds that have been confirmed to be involved are "One Piece", "Topo", "Naruto", "Hunter", and "Sword Wind", and other worlds are to be determined. It was a bit slow to pick up in the early stages, with the main characters being the protagonist's old father.
Special note: 600,000 words have been written in this book, so don't worry about eunuchs The worlds that have been confirmed to be involved are "One Piece", "Topo", "Naruto", "Hunter", and "Sword Wind", and other worlds are to be determined. It was a bit slow to pick up in the early stages, with the main characters being the protagonist's old father.
C Taiping, I can't read the long story, and the author of short stories doesn't seem to be very good at writing.
48民俗从傩戏班子开始
Exploring The Window In The Middle Of The Night
Travel through a dynasty that did not exist in history and become the successor of the four-person Nuo opera troupe. Natural disasters, man-made disasters, monsters, monsters. The first thing Wu Feng did was to bring his entire Nuo opera troupe back from the mountains. As for what to do next. Wu Feng thought that it might be necessary to obtain the county household registration. After all, in this place, it seems that big cities and big households are safer...
Travel through a dynasty that did not exist in history and become the successor of the four-person Nuo opera troupe. Natural disasters, man-made disasters, monsters, monsters. The first thing Wu Feng did was to bring his entire Nuo opera troupe back from the mountains. As for what to do next. Wu Feng thought that it might be necessary to obtain the county household registration. After all, in this place, it seems that big cities and big households are safer...
C There is too much information, the setting is too mysterious, and it is too difficult to read. The story itself is okay, but not that great.
49魔药巫师:我有一个无限农场
Chaos Without A Trace
The Yanxia Federation has ushered in the 12th millennium civilization festival of wizard civilization. The magic particle belt outside the boundary wall brings a warm wave of magic energy, nourishing the matrix of civilization. The cries of the darling of the plane favored by fate made the era more noisy and lively. The invitation from the [Ether Dream Network] of the advanced wizard civilization is about to open the [Ether Dream World] where dangers and treasures coexist. Deep in the potion secret room, after mixing a bottle of [Civilization Potion] and drinking it, Li Yan opened his eyes again. The disasters and crises hidden under the noisy and lively wizard civilization emerged one by one. The [Black Emperor], who borrowed money from the unspeakable evil god, paid the price of the demise of the entire civilization in exchange for the [Immortality Potion], and is secretly coveting it. The [parasites] who target "parasitic civilization" have found new prey. The fallen civilization sliding into the abyss is about to bid farewell to the world and usher in the final madness. ... A potion wizard with [Infinite Farm]. Just simply water and fertilize, and you can get the magical potion ingredients that everyone covets. [Magic Breath] 100% - [Magic Devourer] 500%. [Arc Trick] 100% - [Thunder Destroyer] 1000%. [The Thief] 100% - [The Old Fire Thief] 2000%. [Prisoner of Destiny] 100% - [Fool of Destiny] 5000%. "Would you like a potion?" The potion wizard shook the [magic potion] in his hand and said hello to the entire era!
The Yanxia Federation has ushered in the 12th millennium civilization festival of wizard civilization. The magic particle belt outside the boundary wall brings a warm wave of magic energy, nourishing the matrix of civilization. The cries of the darling of the plane favored by fate made the era more noisy and lively. The invitation from the [Ether Dream Network] of the advanced wizard civilization is about to open the [Ether Dream World] where dangers and treasures coexist. Deep in the potion secret room, after mixing a bottle of [Civilization Potion] and drinking it, Li Yan opened his eyes again. The disasters and crises hidden under the noisy and lively wizard civilization emerged one by one. The [Black Emperor], who borrowed money from the unspeakable evil god, paid the price of the demise of the entire civilization in exchange for the [Immortality Potion], and is secretly coveting it. The [parasites] who target "parasitic civilization" have found new prey. The fallen civilization sliding into the abyss is about to bid farewell to the world and usher in the final madness. ... A potion wizard with [Infinite Farm]. Just simply water and fertilize, and you can get the magical potion ingredients that everyone covets. [Magic Breath] 100% - [Magic Devourer] 500%. [Arc Trick] 100% - [Thunder Destroyer] 1000%. [The Thief] 100% - [The Old Fire Thief] 2000%. [Prisoner of Destiny] 100% - [Fool of Destiny] 5000%. "Would you like a potion?" The potion wizard shook the [magic potion] in his hand and said hello to the entire era!
C The negative teaching material of Invincible Flow or Aotian Flow. After the start, the points of interest dropped off a cliff and turned into another kind of running story.
50The Tai Sui God in the World!
Xuanhuan人间太岁神!
The Five Directions Are Exhausted
[Zhu Tian Liu] [Invincible Liu] [Rising in the era of low martial arts, extraordinary immortality] Hong Yuan traveled through time and carried a [Tai Sui Blessed Land] with him - if he takes possession of it, the blessed land will never be destroyed, his body will be immortal, and he will live as long as heaven! Is this wealth so great that it makes you fly? However, to open the blessed land, you need to unlock the world's best achievements of [Force] and [Power], which are true with hundreds of small flaws. Fortunately, he failed to enter the blessed land, but Hong Yuan was endowed with the terrifying potential of infinite growth in [Bones] and [Comprehension]. Looking around, in this world, if one fights ten, he is a master. If one fights one hundred, he is called the best in the world? Hong Yuan looked at this powerless stage, feeling the endless possibility of becoming stronger in his body, and smiled. Before unlocking the double number one and ascending to the blessed land, he must first live well in this "low martial arts era"... And then step on the limit of this world and move towards the extraordinary immortality for eternity!
[Zhu Tian Liu] [Invincible Liu] [Rising in the era of low martial arts, extraordinary immortality] Hong Yuan traveled through time and carried a [Tai Sui Blessed Land] with him - if he takes possession of it, the blessed land will never be destroyed, his body will be immortal, and he will live as long as heaven! Is this wealth so great that it makes you fly? However, to open the blessed land, you need to unlock the world's best achievements of [Force] and [Power], which are true with hundreds of small flaws. Fortunately, he failed to enter the blessed land, but Hong Yuan was endowed with the terrifying potential of infinite growth in [Bones] and [Comprehension]. Looking around, in this world, if one fights ten, he is a master. If one fights one hundred, he is called the best in the world? Hong Yuan looked at this powerless stage, feeling the endless possibility of becoming stronger in his body, and smiled. Before unlocking the double number one and ascending to the blessed land, he must first live well in this "low martial arts era"... And then step on the limit of this world and move towards the extraordinary immortality for eternity!
B The beginning is not good, but the writing is strong, worthy of being called the devil from heaven and the Tai Sui god on earth. The author's updates are unstable and will either fail or crash later.
50浊世武尊
Lin Shoujing
In the third year of the Republic of China, the situation collapsed. The southern government was first established, and the northern warlords were fighting for their own power. Western iron ships knock at the gate, but the ghost of the previous dynasty still lingers. This is an era where guns and bones compete, chaos and evil spirits dance together - under the undercurrent of the revolution, folk cults breed, soldiers, demons, alien beasts, colonial armors and iron bodies... On a torrential rainy night, Shenghai Concession. Fu Juemin stood in the ruins of the crumbling giant building, and slowly pulled his hands out bit by bit from the chest of the five-meter-tall, white-headed, barefoot ape-shaped monster in front of him. Blood mixed with rain dripped from his fingertips. "The legacy of mountains and seas, the remnants of the common people." "After swallowing this alien beast soul seed that contains a trace of Zhu Yan's bloodline, it's time to complete the last bird of my [Mythical Five-animal Play]..."
In the third year of the Republic of China, the situation collapsed. The southern government was first established, and the northern warlords were fighting for their own power. Western iron ships knock at the gate, but the ghost of the previous dynasty still lingers. This is an era where guns and bones compete, chaos and evil spirits dance together - under the undercurrent of the revolution, folk cults breed, soldiers, demons, alien beasts, colonial armors and iron bodies... On a torrential rainy night, Shenghai Concession. Fu Juemin stood in the ruins of the crumbling giant building, and slowly pulled his hands out bit by bit from the chest of the five-meter-tall, white-headed, barefoot ape-shaped monster in front of him. Blood mixed with rain dripped from his fingertips. "The legacy of mountains and seas, the remnants of the common people." "After swallowing this alien beast soul seed that contains a trace of Zhu Yan's bloodline, it's time to complete the last bird of my [Mythical Five-animal Play]..."
C The combat system is a mess, but the characters and story are well written. It has the feel of an old movie, but it drags on really hard and makes no sense.