Starting from One Person, He Became an Immortal, but the Substitute Messenger
About This Novel
Heaven's Gate can replace part of the effects of Julingshuangjiang and Shuangquanzhi. The effects of Platinum Star and World are far better than that of Luanjin Tuo. Combined with Dragon Dream and Purple Hermit, it will have the effect of Qimen Dunjia. In terms of change and treatment, the experience of Crazy Diamond and Gold may not be weaker than that of Fenghouqimen and Shuangquanshou... Fifteen Taoist substitutes walked sideways throughout the area. That year, a true immortal emerged from the false Xuanmen, a true invincible emerged from the Tianshi Mansion, and a true saint emerged from the den of villains. This year, a Qing half-immortal grew up in the black soil. If all supernatural powers are there and nothing is missing, how do you know that I am not a true god? ------ The current world: Under one person, the bad guy, Mr. Marvel in China...
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Official(4)Scraped 22d ago
Very good, very good
I have read more than forty chapters so far, and they are very good.
I finally found a fanfic that I can read. The author's writing is indeed very good. I've probably checked a lot of information. The writing style is okay and the story is coherent. There are a few updates. I'm still not satisfied with the latest chapter. I plan to save it for a few months and read it together.
The author's writing skills are good, the description of the plot is very good, and the writing feeling is relatively good. It is a small masterpiece, worth reading. Mr. Marvel, that part of the plot is also well written so far, and the connection between different worlds is also very smooth. The overall evaluation here is a top
Pretty These worlds interest me We can develop some martial arts or childhood animations in the future^O^ It would be great if there was Star Travels, but Star Travels's combat power is too great
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Official(4)Scraped 22d ago
Very good, very good
I have read more than forty chapters so far, and they are very good.
I finally found a fanfic that I can read. The author's writing is indeed very good. I've probably checked a lot of information. The writing style is okay and the story is coherent. There are a few updates. I'm still not satisfied with the latest chapter. I plan to save it for a few months and read it together.
The author's writing skills are good, the description of the plot is very good, and the writing feeling is relatively good. It is a small masterpiece, worth reading. Mr. Marvel, that part of the plot is also well written so far, and the connection between different worlds is also very smooth. The overall evaluation here is a top
Pretty These worlds interest me We can develop some martial arts or childhood animations in the future^O^ It would be great if there was Star Travels, but Star Travels's combat power is too great
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C The feeling of being told so eloquently is really good. However, the writing may not be able to create a sense of passion in the later stage, and the protagonist is indeed a bit too artificial. The artificiality in "Under One Person" is to match the urban feel and out of certain needs, he cannot have a protagonist who kills decisively, but this is not the case in online novels.
The narration feels very good. It is rare for the author to maintain the balance between the sense of city and the sense of rest when writing about the city under one person. The shortcoming is that it is a bit dull. The protagonist's character is more comic-oriented, which makes him look a little middle-class, pretentious, and even artificial. This has nothing to do with good or evil, but an overall mental attitude - the difference between juvenile comics and adult online novels.
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