The Secret Immortal

I recommend two books on immortality. The protagonist of this book has a system for immortality. The system has negative reviews. The Qi training in it is not much better than that of mortals, and the foundation building is probably not strong either, but the content is good. You can read it.

Out of the circle index: 90 The writing is really good. I haven't seen such a good fairy tale novel for a long time. The plot is also very smooth. It can be regarded as a story about going from a mortal to an invincible one. The pace is very fast and the reading is very smooth. Basically, there are no obvious poisonous points. Friends who like fairy tales can read and save it and read it slowly when you feel better.

B 1. The system locks the cultivation level, so there is no need for the protagonist to develop desperately. Gou can be at ease and at ease, which provides the basis for a sense of leisure in the plot structure. 2 Has basic system long-term tasks, but they are not oppressive and intense tasks, so that the plot will not become chaotic and scattered. 3 Skills can be improved, and the combination of five elements spells and rural background has good application scenarios, completing the two-way growth of ability and influence, and providing a branch line for monster killing and upgrade. 4 It looks like you are just dawdling, but in fact you are cultivating immortals and other upgrades. The low-key sense of the white dragon fish suit and the obscene development of the hidden dragon in the abyss will never go out of style. 5 He saves people out of kindness, is believed in out of gratitude, attracts the hostility of the Shinto forces because of his belief, and refuses to die because of the zero-sum game of the Shinto forces themselves... This villain is naturally introduced. 6. Classical description of cultivating immortals - with ethereal and vague features, relatively sophisticated writing skills, and relatively mature depiction of worldly affairs. This is the final point of the novel's expressive power.

Changshengliu Farming The rhythm of the narrative is very stable, which shows that the author's writing skills are not bad. The key is that the mentality is very appropriate. I have seen many books about the immortality style, but none of them have the ups and downs of the mentality and emotions of the immortal. Many plots are too deliberate. The current few chapters of this book are very comfortable to read, and some of the plots about getting along with small animals have a classic fairy tale feel. Recommended viewing