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C- The title of the book is that the benevolent see benevolence and the wise see wisdom, so I will not comment. The introduction is average, not much to say. The prologue is a standard redundant prologue. I don't understand why a lot of authors like to create pretentious prologues. In fact, apart from pretending that they have a prologue that is very interesting, the G8 has no use at all. A lot of flaws are exposed at the beginning, the sentences are not fluent, and you have to read many sentences for a while before you can understand what you want to express. The protagonist's mouth is too loose, and there are too many mental activities, which makes people irritated to watch. Moreover, although the protagonist talks a lot of nonsense, the image of the protagonist is not well sketched out. What's even worse is that it's obviously an ancient setting. It's just a bunch of plain text and a few passing sentences. That's not how it's funny. You can only make people embarrassed. In addition to the number of words in each chapter of "Water Explosion", there are too many problems, so you can change it yourself.

B- Break it down into paragraphs, it seems too tiring to read in one paragraph. In terms of story content, if you want to follow the story further, you need to have some violent conflict at the beginning, such as a prisoner coming to cause trouble (by the way, prison is this kind of place, why is your prison like a nursing home), so that the protagonist has something to do. Anyway, you just have to figure it out, break it down into sections as soon as possible.

C Reading this book feels like smoking low-quality local cigarettes, suffocating and uncomfortable.

D Too immature. Junior high school students should study hard. Without enough experience and spiritual realm, what they write will be difficult to read. The plot and logic are very confusing, the storytelling method has too many flaws, and the character image is basically zero. It's just a dry plot point. Let's wait until you're in college to talk about writing online articles.

Book request? I was stunned for a moment when I saw the message. Ever since I changed the list of poisonous tongue books, the ones who usually come here are asking for advice and testing. It's been a long time since an author has left a message like this. What's the use of asking for a book list? Not many readers will actually read it. Only if the novel is really powerful and interesting enough will everyone read it. Perhaps the author feels that his book is already great enough, and it just needs a place where people can read it. In this case, I won't read the book, and I'll leave the place to you.

There are so many e-sports articles about Pesticide of the Dead? Times are really changing with each passing day.

C There are too many characters at the beginning, and there are so many flashy characters in the first chapter that I would be discouraged from reading it. The first chapter is the most important part of the entire novel. Everyone worked hard to write the protagonist and make some powerful eye-catching points to attract the readers' attention. As a result, you wrote a bunch of characters, and then these characters are useless in the next ten chapters. Why did you write them? In the following chapters, I started to spit out the settings as if I had diarrhea. It is taboo to vomit the settings in a large space at the beginning. The settings must be followed naturally by the writing. The beginning alone is already very dissuasive, and you also combine it with the typical over-description and large paragraphs, which is really more effective in dissuading people. Backed off.

The protagonist's pretentious skills obviously need to be improved

The beginning of soil spraying. Why are you still pretending to be your boyfriend after 9102 years? Pretending to be gay is more creative than this, right? The beginning was so tacky, and it was very discouraging. I suggested changing the heroine to a male, which would increase the eye-catching effect tenfold.

The wonderful sexual fantasies of a certain otaku are smoothly brought in from the first person, saving the brain power of all the otakus, and helping you evolve into a lazier fat otaku.

Futa sutra

Your novel is too delicious

B The author's writing style is a bit like mine, he likes to complain and open up his imagination. The best way to play this style of writing is probably to sleep twice in three days. There is nothing wrong with this style, and it has a large audience, but they are all young people, and old bookworms are not very fond of it. After reading the specific content, in fact, there is no need for your book to stay in fantasy. Light novels are the most popular place for this type of writing. Fantasy readers mostly prefer Western fantasy and Cthulhu novels with serious writing styles and rigorous settings. Such novels with too strong a humorous style cannot be tolerated in fantasy. Moreover, you have a childhood sweetheart at the beginning, plus an elf girl. There are a lot of ascetic readers in fantasy novels without a heroine. About half of the readers left after reading your introduction, and half of the remaining readers left after reading your opening style. Basically only readers of light novels can bear this kind of start. All in all, if you want to develop in fantasy, don't make too many complaints about it. If you want to retain the original writing style, just develop in light novels. But as far as I am concerned, complaining will become a natural habit and cannot be changed at all, emmmm...

B The title of the book is okay, but I suggest changing the cover to a horror one. Yours looks like someone engaged in weapons research and development. The introduction is short and weak, you can think about it yourself. The content is generally okay, the writing style is relatively mature, the world framework is fairly well designed, the writing style is okay and can ensure smooth reading, and the rhythm of the writing is generally okay. I feel that the character of the protagonist is a little too conservative (he actually likes little girls?). Overall, he is still more of a rational researcher, without the feeling of a true scientific madman. It took about ten chapters to lay out the world view, and then brought out the thickest main line. There was not much research content in between, which made the reader feel like he was trying to sell someone else's meat. It is recommended that the author let the protagonist develop more things for himself and use the knife on himself. This way, the protagonist's ability will be improved and the readers will enjoy it, and it can also add a sense of abnormality to the character.

C+ The title and introduction of the book are okay, at least it clearly tells the readers what you are going to write about. The beginning is okay, not too cliche, and uses a little flashback trick, which is somewhat attractive. But it gets a little confusing later on. The author's writing power is not very strong, and the context of the story seems a bit confusing. The appearance of characters and the addition of various information are too confusing and hasty, making the impression very confusing, and it is difficult to remember what is there and who is there. Write slowly, and write in a clear order. The most basic requirement of a web article is that the sentences are smooth and the content is clear. The readers should remember what you have written, so don't include too many useless information names.

B- Nowadays, science fiction is generally systematic and unlimited writing disguised as science fiction. People like you who actually write science fiction are considered non-mainstream. Although the setting is not very new, it is not a routine text either. It's too difficult to grasp the coolness of this kind of writing. Nowadays, the online writing model is relatively mature, and readers' tastes are spoiled by cool writing. People stop reading if they don't feel happy after reading a few chapters. This kind of niche literature must be written by chance, otherwise no one will read this kind of novel carefully without exposure.

Rural love story

The world is gone

I heard that the signature was signed inside, so I need to arrest them first to prevent them from escaping.

C Too stupid early on. The introduction of various settings is so cumbersome that readers will vomit. The protagonist is not strong enough and is simply a fool, which makes readers have no desire to continue reading. The protagonist should be strong and there should be less nonsense. Only by speeding up the tempo of cool spots can readers be interested in reading. Many novels today fail to grasp this point. You need to make major changes in the early stage, otherwise you will have to wait for the street novel to make you a eunuch.