A High-powered Adventure for the Incompetent

B The author's writing style is a bit like mine, he likes to complain and open up his imagination. The best way to play this style of writing is probably to sleep twice in three days. There is nothing wrong with this style, and it has a large audience, but they are all young people, and old bookworms are not very fond of it. After reading the specific content, in fact, there is no need for your book to stay in fantasy. Light novels are the most popular place for this type of writing. Fantasy readers mostly prefer Western fantasy and Cthulhu novels with serious writing styles and rigorous settings. Such novels with too strong a humorous style cannot be tolerated in fantasy. Moreover, you have a childhood sweetheart at the beginning, plus an elf girl. There are a lot of ascetic readers in fantasy novels without a heroine. About half of the readers left after reading your introduction, and half of the remaining readers left after reading your opening style. Basically only readers of light novels can bear this kind of start. All in all, if you want to develop in fantasy, don't make too many complaints about it. If you want to retain the original writing style, just develop in light novels. But as far as I am concerned, complaining will become a natural habit and cannot be changed at all, emmmm...

[Seedling collection] Genre: Fantasy Recommendation index: 🌱🌱--🌱🌱🌱 (2.5) Brief comment: The writing style is passable, the writing is smooth, and the descriptions are relatively delicate. The details in some places can be strengthened (*≧ω≦) The setting is quite interesting and has a certain appeal~ Interested readers can read it!