My Trading Space

C+ The title and introduction of the book are okay, at least it clearly tells the readers what you are going to write about. The beginning is okay, not too cliche, and uses a little flashback trick, which is somewhat attractive. But it gets a little confusing later on. The author's writing power is not very strong, and the context of the story seems a bit confusing. The appearance of characters and the addition of various information are too confusing and hasty, making the impression very confusing, and it is difficult to remember what is there and who is there. Write slowly, and write in a clear order. The most basic requirement of a web article is that the sentences are smooth and the content is clear. The readers should remember what you have written, so don't include too many useless information names.