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C I don't know what the first two chapters are for. Anyway, it feels a bit like a horror paradise. It's the kind of feeling that you can't put on your life disguise even if you drop it. It's awkward and meaningless. After entering the world later, a series of inexplicable operations began. I felt that the protagonist did not do anything particularly smart. It felt a bit like a monster-killing and upgrading routine with daily trivial matters added. Your writing is too awkward. It's either scheming and brain-burning to the end, or passionate and brainless to the end. Both of them are half-baked, which makes it very uncomfortable to read.

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After reading the title of the book, I don't really like cats, but at the author's repeated request, I planned to spend some relaxing time in the mood of reading a cute pet novel. As a result, after reading three chapters, wdnmd started off like crazy and went off the rails. Isn't this the wrong style? Is there something wrong with how I open it? I thought to myself that maybe the author wanted to play with contrast, first depressing and then relaxing, so I read Chapter 10. Then I watched a moral and ethical film with a dark core... The author is very thoughtful. This kind of powerful spiritual core is indeed something that is generally lacking in online articles nowadays. Everyone is trying to be clever and write some Internet garbage that is purely entertaining without using their brains, and ignores the ideological connotation that an excellent novel should have. But too much is not enough. The novel cannot be divorced from reality, but it cannot be too realistic either. I only read two words in your novel, depressing. When you read online articles, you want them to be enjoyable, relaxing, and soothing. Novels should be both realistic and absurd at the same time. Novel is the unity of absurd reality. What is absurd? It is to write out the cruel things in reality in a way that makes people laugh. Absurdity can dispel the sense of depression that the dark core brings to readers. This is exactly what your novel lacks. As for how to improve, I'll help you figure it out. Your protagonists are just two tools in the early stage and have no sense of existence. You can make them active and complain about this ethical and psychological drama throughout the whole process, just like a barrage. No matter how serious a movie is, barrage comments will always make people laugh. With this kind of change, your novel will make a big difference to people. As for how to arrange the comments and how to change the settings, you can think about it yourself. I will stop here. If you think what I said makes no sense, you can write according to your own ideas. Writing a novel is inherently a lonely task. If too many other people's ideas are mixed in, the novel will indeed change its flavor.

B+ The title of the book is not very good and not very attractive. The introduction is pretty broad too, so it's not too dissuasive if I don't get any extra points. The writing is relatively smooth and logical. The protagonist looks like a normal person, there is no intellectual content, the book is interspersed with various truths, and the writing is stylish. It was slow to pick up in the early stages, and there were a lot of lines being laid, but because I had an online IQ, I could still watch it. The main plot needs to be highlighted, letting readers know that the plot is progressing, so that they have something to look forward to. This is so bad in the early stages, and it is easy to give up after a few chapters. If this point can be overcome and readers can read more than ten chapters, this book should be okay. Having said that, if you want to sign a contract, the plug-in must be published within three chapters, otherwise Whip Chicken will most likely not sign you. Although your writing seems to me to be okay, online writing is so cruel! Whip Chicken doesn't have the patience I do!

B There's no point in trying to create a buzz with a book title, because readers have no idea what you're writing about. What does the introduction say? It's inexplicable, just tell the readers honestly what you want to write about, and just use some gimmicks. The content is somewhat creative and not very routine. There are a lot of private things in the book, especially the name of the heroine, which almost made me laugh to death. As soon as I saw your profile picture, I knew what it meant. Do you really want to merge with Station B? 23333333333333333

B+ A niche fan fiction for LOL players. As a long-term reader of LPL, I was quite moved by this novel. Using skin stories as a starting point is a very good idea. But why choose Nunu as the protagonist? Nunu is still a Nunu without a snowman, he looks so useless. However, the story is still very interesting. People who don't know LOL may find it confusing, but those who know it should be able to read it. I'm not very good at writing this kind of subject matter. The author can use it freely. It all depends on the results. At least the creativity is good. Just treat it as gaining experience. Anyway, there are so many skins, so I will write next time.

A- The characters are okay, the settings are perfect, and the narrative techniques and plot development are quite sophisticated. If there was a dragon recommendation, would it be like this? After all, online novels still rely on resources and luck. Those with strength may not be able to get ahead, but a bunch of clever things get lucky and get ahead. This is the tragedy of modern online novels. Also, stop writing about martial arts, martial arts are dead, don't talk about feelings, no one wants to tell this kind of thing to whom?