Abnormal Laboratory

B The title of the book is okay, but I suggest changing the cover to a horror one. Yours looks like someone engaged in weapons research and development. The introduction is short and weak, you can think about it yourself. The content is generally okay, the writing style is relatively mature, the world framework is fairly well designed, the writing style is okay and can ensure smooth reading, and the rhythm of the writing is generally okay. I feel that the character of the protagonist is a little too conservative (he actually likes little girls?). Overall, he is still more of a rational researcher, without the feeling of a true scientific madman. It took about ten chapters to lay out the world view, and then brought out the thickest main line. There was not much research content in between, which made the reader feel like he was trying to sell someone else's meat. It is recommended that the author let the protagonist develop more things for himself and use the knife on himself. This way, the protagonist's ability will be improved and the readers will enjoy it, and it can also add a sense of abnormality to the character.

[Seedling collection] Type: Fantasy Recommendation index: 🌱🌱-🌱🌱🌱 (2.5) Brief comment: The writing is pretty good, and the setting is also very interesting. It's a story about a "crazy" scientist who travels through time. Big D does a good job in controlling the rhythm. The whole text is full of exciting and eye-catching points, and it's still very comfortable to read. Readers who like it can read it!

A very exciting fantasy novel. It's so enjoyable to read that I can't stop reading it.

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