Ximen Immortal Clan

65 points A work of food and grass! 1. The setting of the reincarnation of the ancestor is too poisonous. The sense of substitution is gone all of a sudden. It is clear at a glance who is the master and who is the auxiliary of a memory of about 30 years and a memory of hundreds of years. This is not a sense of dislocation that can be offset by the author's words or someone else's! The author of the follow-up plot also keeps emphasizing the identity of the protagonist's ancestor in his previous life, which is really vicious 2. The ten thousand-year elixir is too unreasonable. It is obviously beyond the resources that the protagonist can control. It is an act of seeking death! The family's development of large-scale sales of ten thousand-year-old elixir obviously has risks greater than the benefits, and it is eager for quick success and instant benefits. 3. A common problem among family members is to be a nanny! The rest of the family are of no use to the protagonist, they all seem to be a burden! And it was written about the third uncle or the one who asked the protagonist for weapons and puppets as soon as he advanced! 4. The author copies and pastes too much. Whether the protagonist is overcoming a tribulation or exploring a secret realm, you will find that he always changes his name and level, and then writes a few chapters! The plot is also like a matryoshka doll, upgrade, enslave others, explore the secret realm, change the map and try it again! 5. Weapons can be upgraded to overcome tribulations. A spiritual weapon allowed the author to overcome tribulations all the way to become an immortal weapon. It was clearly said before that the most powerful weapon is the Xuantian magic weapon. The inconsistency is unreasonable! 6. The plot is not too bad, but there are constant minor flaws. In short, it is watchable and a solid work! It's just too watery. If this book is checked for plagiarism by itself and 30% of it is copied and pasted, be careful when subscribing!