Longevity Martial Arts: Start with Tai Chi Health-preserving Skills
by Remote Knowledge Of Drunken Laughter And Zen
About This Novel
No matter how magnificent you are, I will watch you turn into withered bones in the world of mortals and light a stick of incense in front of your grave. Yang Chan traveled to a martial arts world that was about to begin in troubled times. His qualifications were mediocre, and he could only rely on the Tai Chi health-preserving skills and extra points brought by the time travel. He kept adding points to improve his cultivation, improve his qualifications, and increase his lifespan. He set a small goal for himself first, to live for a thousand years. In the long journey of his life, Yang Chan watched his enemies rise from the Zhulou, watched his enemies feast guests, and watched the enemy tower collapse. Finally, he lit a stick of incense in front of his grave and sent away one enemy after another. In the long years, he walked towards the road to immortality on the other side. "Tai Chi practitioners are born without extremes!" Tai Chi's health-preserving power: awaken the spirit and body, sit quietly and maintain health, and you will not grow old in the spring and autumn, be free and live forever. Immortality + points + proficiency panel + Gou Daoliu.
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Official(34)Scraped 29d ago
I kept repeating the explanations and explanations, filling one sentence into a chapter.
He kept repeating and explaining what he had said before. Each chapter was based on what he had said before, and he repeated it to form a new chapter. For example, the new chapter is: Arrange new disciples to go to the secret realm to find the elixir. Use this sentence that I wrote before and then continue to explain why new disciples are assigned and what are the benefits of having new disciples. Anyway, the whole chapter is one sentence: Arrange new disciples to go to the secret realm to find the elixir. Others are filler explanations, and many are repetitions that have been written before. Each chapter is the same, filling a sentence into a chapter.
The author would like to ask if the protagonist has a vest in the future, can the name of the vest be named after the name of the medicine?
The same old routine, no special features, keeps dragging the realm
Too slow. What does the plug-in do?
You will be promoted to junior pharmacist after more than 60 chapters, and you will be promoted to intermediate pharmacist after more than 300 chapters. What are the plug-ins for? Is this too slow?
The subject matter is quite good, the martial arts realm and rhythm are also quite good, but the inner drama and behavioral analysis are written too much and are too verbose. It seriously lowers the quality of the book. Most people abandon the book probably because of this.
I just thought, if there is no magic medicine, these warriors will starve to death The amount of each meal is so exaggerated, will the warriors in prison be unable to move? The daily consumption is so large, there is not enough to eat every day, and there is no medicine to supplement it, so we must not continue to be in deficit? It's impossible to eat a lot of meat and fish in prison. It would be nice to have rice soup.
Good. 400 Is a bit unbearable. It slowly became too watery. Strength growth is too slow. The ups and downs of the plot can involve others as protagonists. It doesn't have to be a protagonist. You also need to use Shou Yuan. Just like you said, watch the rise of a genius and watch the end of a genius. You should write it down. I have been writing about it for months and months. Give me some special effects. Does Tai Chi Turtle inhale purple energy just increase lifespan and speed up recovery?
Author: I have an idea. Can you adopt it?
The author would like to ask if the Grand Master of Marrow Cleansing can be designed to be inhuman. As long as the realm breaks through to the Grand Master of Marrow Cleansing, his life level will be promoted. Even if he still thinks that he is a human being psychologically, from a genetic point of view, he is no longer a human being but another species (roughly speaking, as long as he breaks through the realm of the Grand Master of Marrow Cleansing, it is equivalent to a race of his own) It's just that there is no reproductive isolation from humans), as long as you break through the realm of the Grand Master of Marrow Cleansing, you will have two forms. One is the normal state, which can also be said to be the disguised state (which is the original appearance), and the other is the liberated state (which is the true appearance after the breakthrough). Entering this form will greatly increase the combat power, but at the same time as the combat power is greatly increased, the food intake will also increase.
The writing is good, but too watery.
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Official(34)Scraped 29d ago
I kept repeating the explanations and explanations, filling one sentence into a chapter.
He kept repeating and explaining what he had said before. Each chapter was based on what he had said before, and he repeated it to form a new chapter. For example, the new chapter is: Arrange new disciples to go to the secret realm to find the elixir. Use this sentence that I wrote before and then continue to explain why new disciples are assigned and what are the benefits of having new disciples. Anyway, the whole chapter is one sentence: Arrange new disciples to go to the secret realm to find the elixir. Others are filler explanations, and many are repetitions that have been written before. Each chapter is the same, filling a sentence into a chapter.
The author would like to ask if the protagonist has a vest in the future, can the name of the vest be named after the name of the medicine?
The same old routine, no special features, keeps dragging the realm
Too slow. What does the plug-in do?
You will be promoted to junior pharmacist after more than 60 chapters, and you will be promoted to intermediate pharmacist after more than 300 chapters. What are the plug-ins for? Is this too slow?
The subject matter is quite good, the martial arts realm and rhythm are also quite good, but the inner drama and behavioral analysis are written too much and are too verbose. It seriously lowers the quality of the book. Most people abandon the book probably because of this.
I just thought, if there is no magic medicine, these warriors will starve to death The amount of each meal is so exaggerated, will the warriors in prison be unable to move? The daily consumption is so large, there is not enough to eat every day, and there is no medicine to supplement it, so we must not continue to be in deficit? It's impossible to eat a lot of meat and fish in prison. It would be nice to have rice soup.
Good. 400 Is a bit unbearable. It slowly became too watery. Strength growth is too slow. The ups and downs of the plot can involve others as protagonists. It doesn't have to be a protagonist. You also need to use Shou Yuan. Just like you said, watch the rise of a genius and watch the end of a genius. You should write it down. I have been writing about it for months and months. Give me some special effects. Does Tai Chi Turtle inhale purple energy just increase lifespan and speed up recovery?
Author: I have an idea. Can you adopt it?
The author would like to ask if the Grand Master of Marrow Cleansing can be designed to be inhuman. As long as the realm breaks through to the Grand Master of Marrow Cleansing, his life level will be promoted. Even if he still thinks that he is a human being psychologically, from a genetic point of view, he is no longer a human being but another species (roughly speaking, as long as he breaks through the realm of the Grand Master of Marrow Cleansing, it is equivalent to a race of his own) It's just that there is no reproductive isolation from humans), as long as you break through the realm of the Grand Master of Marrow Cleansing, you will have two forms. One is the normal state, which can also be said to be the disguised state (which is the original appearance), and the other is the liberated state (which is the true appearance after the breakthrough). Entering this form will greatly increase the combat power, but at the same time as the combat power is greatly increased, the food intake will also increase.
The writing is good, but too watery.
Daily check-in and check-in experience.
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59 points is barely enough food! It tastes the same as chewing wax! The author defines this book as Gou Dao Wen, but what he writes is timid and timid, and he cannot finish it from beginning to end! Plot-wise, is there a plot? They are all fragmented developments, filled with a lot of meaningless alchemy and potential point calculation analysis! There is no main thread to coordinate these fragments! Delete all these fragments of plot and you will find that they have no impact on the plot of the book! It is inexplicable to suddenly go to the secret realm of Zixu. It is better to put the plot of Zixu in Taiyintian, so that it is reasonable to be forced to teleport! Zixu's formation spirit was still waiting for the protagonist to inform him about the cross-border teleportation formation, but they didn't wait until the end! When training to the realm of Grand Master, the author obviously suppressed the protagonist's realm. When it came time to change to become a Martial Saint, the protagonist's realm was greatly improved. After the emergence of divine veins, it was even more outrageous. In a few chapters, he directly reached the level of a true god! It's definitely a mess! The author's ability and attitude are really not good enough. Do I seriously doubt that there is an outline? If you can't grasp the overall rhythm, it's because of your lack of ability. If there's no plot, it's because of your poor attitude! To be honest, there is no need to read this book if there are still other books to read. It would be better to waste money on it, and I have no expectations for the new book!
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No matter how magnificent you are, I will watch you turn into withered bones in the world of mortals and light a stick of incense in front of your grave. ~~Yang Chan
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