Self-reading Miscellaneous Books - Most Long Reviews

The author of Jin Dan has a new book, I hope I can write it smoothly this time. This time I start from the beginning. The writing is still online. The biggest difference from the previous book is the creation of the protagonist. It was Xu Dao before, this is Xu Heng. In fact, the difference in the direction of shaping the protagonists of the two novels can be seen from the names.

Just like the title, Wanli New Book. Judging from these dozens of chapters, the author's data collection, character creation and writing skills are all excellent. The article is also clearly focused on reform. Looking at the current focus, the focus of reform should not be using technology to increase productivity (I personally feel that only improving productivity without changing the system is a modern scientific self-promotion to put out fires). It should still be about how to adjust the bureaucracy, taxation, military and other systems under the framework of the feudal dynasty.

Full marks! Concept, writing, characters, plot There is a very precise description of this book in the review section. The number of people reading this is a bit small. I feel that the first plot is too long in comparison. And although it is quite exciting, there is a big gap between the previous running between the mines and the town and the endless star sea ancient dynasty created at the beginning. But the atmosphere and writing power can already be shown. Starting from the late stage of the first plot, I think everyone should be able to fully appreciate the charm of this book. Still reading, will add a full review later!

A good daily martial arts novel. The daily life of a young master, a beggar apprentice, and a bald-headed carpenter's second apprentice in a small town. I've been pushing the plot lately, and the pace is a bit faster.

New book by the author of Soul Painter The Soul Painter is a starting point novel that I quite like (although I haven't finished it yet). The author can vividly describe the distorted picture from various angles. This requires a certain amount of imagination and talent. Simply piling up words will only make the article full of twisted, gibbering and crazy. At present, the background design of this novel is very complicated. On the one hand, the background of the era is a mixture of various schools of thought, but the dynasty is the Zhou Dynasty. However, apart from the representatives of various factions being used in the works, there is no connection with real history. Because there are so many elements, it's hard to summarize, so I'll just talk about what I like: 1. Atmosphere: The atmosphere that took place in Yanghu Academy in the early dozens of chapters was created to be particularly urgent and terrifying. From the weird and unclear wording of the power system, to the more mysteries that emerge as things develop, to the strange classmates who all have secrets around them, this reading experience is the unique charm of the horror/supernatural/gram genre. 2. Characters: I think the character Ying is well written. While he himself has strange characteristics in this world, he is also a positive moonlight-like character who helps the protagonist. At the same time, the subsequent treatment of this character will be of great help to the improvement of the protagonist's character. The protagonist himself is an ordinary student, and all his behaviors in this environment are consistent with his identity. How does this kind of protagonist struggle back from the edge of collapse in such an environment, self-hypnosis after being hit, and the calm but epileptic state when facing the truth. But at the same time, he is very reliable and will not make you wonder why this person is so stupid. In the middle and later stages of the school, the protagonist gave me the impression that he was in a mental state of writing a thesis with a high fever. He knew what he wanted to do and was doing it, but the feeling of instability was very obvious. Note: After leaving the academy and entering the city, the pacing and narrative style change. If the early reading experience is weird, this part is completely different from the beginning. The power system is revealed more, the character development is easier, and there are relatively more confrontations and conflicts. The wording and shaping are obviously a bit crazy and relaxed. Personally, my interest is greatly reduced. As a new book, the beginning of it is very complete. But we have to read slowly about the subsequent development.

This should be the most interesting and satisfying novel I have read in the past few months. Compared with fantasy or classical fairy tales, the subject matter is more appropriately described as a monastic novel. The title of this novel is the introduction. Based on the opportunity of time travel, "Huang Ting Jing", the protagonist practices Taoism and understands Taoism in this righteous world of immortality. Although there are clear grade divisions and common fantasy settings, the author's cultivation system is based on realistic Taoist classics and articles. From mental training to enlightenment and practice, there will be very detailed Taoist scriptures and explanations. As far as my reading experience is concerned, the author's characterization of the classics is eye-catching: On the one hand, you can see abundant expression in all aspects. Whether it is the practice of a small method or the practice of the fundamental Huang Ting, there is a systematic Taoist knowledge system explained by the author. On the other hand, the author's language skills are very fluent. While reading, the sense of pictures and the wonderful experience of cultivating immortals are portrayed in an extremely vivid and interesting way. In general, the reading experience is a bit like the feeling of watching "The Wizard's Journey" and "Arcane Throne" at that time. On the one hand, it is detailed and credible, on the other hand, it is interesting and easy to understand. In addition, let's talk about the characters and world society setting: Compared with the dark or cruel reality-oriented novels about cultivating immortals that have been popular in recent years, this novel does not focus on competition for resources and monks plotting against each other as the keynote of the work. On the contrary, when you experience it from the perspective of the protagonist, the presence of spiritual stones and spiritual objects is very low. The most important exercises also need to be understood by the practitioners themselves. So it's hard to see the struggle for resources. Rather than collecting resources to achieve breakthroughs, this novel is about the process of understanding Taoism, refining understanding, and exploring the path of cultivation. Therefore, it reads more like the spirit of cultivating Taoism and cultivating immortality in the traditional sense. In terms of this style, I would tend to describe it as an intermediate state between the two styles of "Red Heart Patrol" and "Lan Ke Qi Yuan". The contradictory rhythm of "Red Heart" is very strong and compact, while the tone of "Lan Ke Qi Yuan" is very high. The protagonist is always rolling around in various human affairs, leaving traces with his immortal posture for others to recall. The plot of this book is mainly about enlightenment and cultivation, so it is not as urgent as "Sincerity", and the step-by-step cultivation is step-by-step, so it is not like "Lanke" who comes and goes. I quite like the characters. The little junior brother is portrayed as very smart and cute, and fellow practitioners and big-name cultivators are also good people who study hard and practice hard. The villains are divided into two categories. The low-level villains such as the White Lotus are purely evil, while the high-level villains are more inclined to practice Taoism. I wouldn't say that the character is particularly shocking, but I think it's good enough. Finally, from the perspective of everyone reading the book, let me talk about the shortcomings: The detailed practice setting of this book occupies the main line of the story. Therefore, compared with the current novels, it will have much less conflicts and twists. If you're expecting to fight against constantly breaking enemies along the way, this should disappoint you. On the other hand, the detailed description of cultivation may also be boring to some readers. A matter of opinion. It's a novel with a rare style. I personally like it very much. Stopped updating

Speedy flow. I rarely read speedrunning articles, but it seems that Qidian is a genre that has suddenly become popular around this year? The advantages of this novel are its smooth rhythm, reasonable character creation and plot advancement. Overall, it may not be as fascinating as some novels that need to be pondered, but it won't be unreadable because of the poisonous points. At the same time, the story itself is also very interesting, and you will not be bored at all if you read it in one sitting. Another highlight is the characters. The protagonist, a speed-reading male protagonist, is portrayed as a character with a strong heart, meticulous planning, and a generally sound outlook on life. It is actually quite valuable to be able to create a good character with no personality or poisonous points at the starting point. I think this level of shaping is above the standard. The protagonist's invincibility or genius is well portrayed. Without the feeling of being pressed or hindered, speedrunning should have an overwhelming advantage. The supporting characters are actually quite good, not to mention impressive, but they all promote the plot very well. For me, the biggest flaw is that the plot is too paced. I think the kindness the protagonist feels is a little too much. Although the medical ability of Shennong Gong can indeed win a lot of favor for the protagonist, it always feels like "all the masters in the world regard me as a treasure". As a result, when I saw Beggars' Gang, I wasn't very interested in continuing to read it, because generally speaking, it was just about finding opportunities to obtain skills and resolve disputes to gain favor. The characters and background lines are relatively simple at the moment, which makes speedrunning always a "winning" rhythm. But on the one hand, after speedrunning, you should use experience to increase the character's favorability and increase it rapidly, so maybe I am nitpicking. On the other hand, the author obviously designed a new map, and the protagonist also wants to ascend quickly. Therefore, it may make sense to push the lower bound rhythm faster. In general, the grain and grass above the horizontal line are smooth and readable.

Totally rotten. What happened: After reading the novel, I posted a short review in the book circle, commenting on the advantages and disadvantages, and finally concluded that it was a passable fast food. Then Xiti was permanently banned. From the total number of comments in book circles and the number of new comments in the past few days, it is not difficult to see the intensity of deletion of comments. Before, I thought it was a very euphemistic comment from the book circle, so I will add a book list and give it a good scolding: 1. Story elements: A hodgepodge. It mixes elements of modern martial arts like swallowing the stars, global martial arts, and alien wars like the king spares his life. But the result is different. Due to the limitations of the author's ability, he cannot digest and combine these themes well. Secondly, each subject can be said to take its dross and discard its essence. When it comes to modern martial arts, it is nothing more than breaking away from the practice of ancient martial arts. It is often related to college streams and competitions. The King, Spare Your Life, etc. Will design very competitive and exciting confrontations to promote the evolution of the protagonist. But in this novel, the existence of the academy is to provide resources, and there is no pressure on peers at the same level, and it even has an outrageous pace of speed reading. As a result, the modern background cannot even describe the technological sense of swallowing the stars. Instead, a lot of bad elements such as virtual fighting are used. In the modern setting, the leader of the official organization who appears will be called the "lord of the palace." Very humorous wording. 2. Perfunctory writing in the form of fast food: As a high-level martial arts novel, the biggest weakness of this novel is the description of battle scenes and the depiction of the training process. The protagonist's battle process is similar to a card game. You can win by just shouting the names of the moves you have developed (not to mention the world of Gaowu, it is outrageous that a high school student who is not even the first in his age can develop his own moves). There are no specific fights with fists and feet, clashes of swords, and confrontation of combat power. In terms of the cultivation system, it is even worse. Compared to Swallowing Starry Sky, which also writes about how to train physical fitness, skills, and weapons, this book is directly packaged and thrown into the system. There is no in-depth description of the entire training process. The whole article is "the protagonist worked hard for three hours, and the panel data increased by 3%." 3. Let's talk about story rhythm again. In fact, there are not many slap-in-the-face plots, so my impression of this novel was not bad at first. I just felt that the author's level was just that, so there was no need to be too demanding. But to be more careful, after he has written dozens of chapters of the plot, the plot is basically finalized all the way to 500 chapters. The protagonist is about to take the college entrance examination, and the elders in the family join the army in the dangerous border war in order to make money. So the follow-up is probably that the protagonist will gain points and enter the five major martial arts schools, and there will most likely be a plot with a word count similar to that of the National College Student Competition. Then it's time to enter the Astral Army to train. It's already 500 chapters since I finished writing this section. The subsequent design of a villain that causes changes in the situation in the star realm will take another three hundred chapters. Or engage in a global martial arts competition, which costs two hundred chapters. The protagonist's martial arts is the first to be completed. If you still want this kind of template fast-food article, just copy Swallowing Starry Sky and design a larger cultivation map beyond the earth. Anyway, although this author's writing skills are very average, at least he can copy routines neatly. Not to mention the martial arts master Guhuoniao and others, they are completely incomparable to the Atlas of Heaven and Man in the new book. This is the kind of writing that has no talent or care.

Still reading. The characters, plot, world view, and plot control were all better than I expected.

I was misled by the title introduction. At first, I thought it was the kind of live broadcast or provoking trouble in the arena to add points and upgrade. But in fact, the protagonist is very serious and down-to-earth, with a very correct attitude. He is not just a brainless fun-loving person like now. At present, the novel has advanced to the point where the protagonist's ranking is outstanding, and the youth training is used as a springboard to enter the LPL team. The overall process is written very naturally and realistically, and the pace of progress is also fast and slow. It can be seen that they are carefully foreshadowing and describing, rather than rushing into the LPL tulle career in three chapters. So I personally look forward to the follow-up completion. After all, the so-called ideas and creativity in lol novels are nothing new at the moment. What attracts me are works that carefully tell good stories and create good characters. The protagonists in everyone's stories are ultimately the strongest players at the current position who want at least a double crown at the start, a double crown, a triple crown, a quadruple crown, a Grand Slam, etc. The results are all very different. The difficulty is to explain this process well As for the shortcomings, it's a new book. The word count is currently very small and the number of updates is average. For a novel with this style of writing, it would indeed be a lot less enjoyable if it were more enjoyable. Readers' experience of following new books may not be good

A pretty good novel. (Enter the palace) He started cultivating immortality under the Sanyi sect. The protagonist is the kind of character who is down-to-earth and devoted to cultivating Taoism, and is not just fighting for the sake of killing. It's considered a genius stream. The current fifty chapters are written in extremely practical and detailed terms on the cultivation system. They combine the inner alchemy knowledge learned by the protagonist in his previous life to study the three aspects of rebirth. The process of cultivation is completely beyond the level that a fanfic should have. The character design is also very good so far. The advantages are many. The shortcomings are nothing so far, it's just that it's too short, with only fifty chapters. If I have to criticize, I just hope that in subsequent novels, the length and insertion of the reasoning parts will continue to be well controlled. Although under one person, both life and life are cultivated, the state of mind is indeed very important, and reasoning is an important part of this cultivation system. The three views of the protagonist currently created by the author are also very good. But after all, I am a lv1 author, so I must avoid writing too much and ending up with a series of articles falling out of my book bag.

Classical fairy tales, but without the obscurity and plot problems of classical fairy tales. The writing and choreography are excellent, and the character development is really good. The writing style has a strong flavor of classical fairy tales, and the setting of cultivation levels and descriptions of sect practitioners are all right. Compared with the level-up training in fantasy cultivation, although the combat power level in this novel is not interesting, due to the excellent writing arrangement, it avoids the feeling of level-up, swallowing pills and buying equipment in online games. Even though the sects and villains have appeared from the beginning, the style and power of the major forces are still there after writing more than one million words. The characterization is my favorite part. Reading from the beginning, you can feel that the author has put great effort into shaping the protagonist. What is the tone of the protagonist's character? What is the dilemma that arises from the beginning and remains consistent? Including the personality changes induced by dilemmas, etc., It is particularly smooth and lively. These changes in character or state of mind can be well integrated into the main line of improving the combat power of classical immortals. The plot of the entire novel unfolds well with the protagonist as the axis. The author is also good at writing female characters. The villain is really well-written, and I started to hate the villain and look forward to the protagonist. Finally, a bonus item is the ability to grasp the major and minor aspects of classical fairy tales. I think a big feature and problem of classical fairy tales is that authors often make the protagonist shoulder some kind of top-level arrangement and destiny from the beginning, and he starts to be involved in incidents frequently when he is weak. Reading like this is often more gripping than upgrading the monster-killing dragon Aotian. This is the big advantage. But corresponding to the shortcomings, the participation of a weak protagonist in big events will always make readers feel powerless and empty. "You are such a useless protagonist, you are nothing more than a protagonist, just a human background." This is an easy thought to come up with. A small advantage of this novel is that although there are major events, the protagonist is not powerless to fight back, but has a sense of participation and a refreshing setting. The intensity of the conflict is also well controlled, gradually increasing but not deliberately arranging for the protagonist to defeat monsters and upgrade. Finally, let's talk about the shortcomings, slow updates. Then I am a little worried that when the subsequent maps become bigger and stronger, the pressure of the forces will become less and less. The flavor of the classical fairy tale is almost gone. After all, against opponents of similar levels, the protagonist of the online novel will definitely win, and there is nothing mysterious or uncertain about it. How to end it well and arrange a high-combat plot is a question that requires the author's conception. Apart from that, in fact, after reading it so far, there are not too novel designs and ideas. The author is mainly known for his writing style and the flow of character content.

The first volume is really well written, and there are quite a few deaths. In the second volume, I personally don't like the rhythm very much. Everyone has different opinions

How to say it. The type is very similar to the Atlas of Heaven and Humanity. However, the background is science fiction, and the social settings and style are a bit more relaxed than those in Tianren Tutu. The combat power setting combines the three categories of martial arts, righteous body, and fantasy. I chose this book because I have a strong preference for martial arts books. As for this book, the author is probably not a new author, and his writing style is smooth. However, it is still a cool article that is more for beginners. If you are interested, you can read it. If you delve into the logic and setting, you don't really need to read this book for entertainment.

It's an old author, but I haven't read any of his books before. This book is quite well written. For me, it is a martial arts novel that is very suitable for me. It focuses on martial arts confrontation rather than trappings and fantasy. The background of the story is similar to the Republic of China period after the magic reform, which is relatively chaotic. Talk about the advantages 1. The writing is crisp and clear. The fight scenes are particularly well-drawn and enjoyable. And there is a complete guarantee. 2. The character of the protagonist and the supporting characters of the good camp (that is, those who have a good relationship with the protagonist~) are both brilliant, above the starting level. Note, this does not mean that all characters are well created. 3. Bonus points for the subject matter, it is a rare novel about fist fights. Those who like novels that prefer realistic force rather than fantasy will probably like it. 4. The combat power is designed very cleverly. Implant mutation and martial arts are harmoniously accommodated together. The role of martial arts is also present here Let's talk about the shortcomings. 1. The supporting villains are imbecile. In the first twenty chapters, most of the villains are characterized by stupid and stereotyped images that are motivated, brainless, and jealous. The classmate who shows off in the class reunion, the senior who is jealous when applying for admission, etc. This doesn't have much impact in ordinary white texts, but it is very glaring in this book. Because the protagonist and good supporting characters that the author tried to create are very delicate, realistic and calm people. The worldview also favors a cruel worldview that suppresses class antagonism. In this kind of novel that tends to create a realistic atmosphere, it is a bit eye-catching to play this naive provocation. 2. Social shaping. I can understand that the author wants to create a society with a strong sense of oppression for the bottom class under class opposition. But his description of upper-class characters is a bit too careless now. A noble martial arts student enters the school through the back door, and the female character, who is suspected to be the heroine, arranges the protagonist's prospects in a self-righteous manner. It seems that the upper class defined by the author only has rights but no intelligence or intelligence. So whenever there is opposition, I feel a little frustrated. Because when I think that the villains are actually a bunch of idiots, I don't feel like cheering for the protagonist at all. The reason why there are few advantages and many disadvantages is that as long as everyone reads novels, they will be attracted by these advantages. No additional introduction is needed from me. The shortcoming is that I personally can't understand it. The author obviously has the writing ability to write these plots well, why does he return to Xiaobai Shuangwen? Overall review: The flaws do not hide the flaws, it is a very good novel both in terms of subject matter and writing style. But it is recommended not to read it as a very reasonable and logical novel, but as a good refreshing article. This can avoid the abrupt look and feel caused by many conflict plots.

Very interesting and pure fiction. It means there is no sense of fantasy in sword fights It seems to be a game adaptation. But I haven't understood it, and it doesn't affect the reading experience at all.

Dragon clan fan Lu Mingfei was not chosen as the protagonist, nor did it start at the same time as Lu Mingfei. The protagonist is a DNd brass dragon who has been interfering in the development of the world since Angers survived. The overall style is relatively relaxed and the plot advances in an orderly manner. As for the highlights, firstly, this novel is finished, and the quality of the parts I have seen so far is also very good (more than many Dragon Clan fandom). Secondly, it does not follow the path of replicating the delicate youth style of Jiangnan, and the reading will be more unfettered. Pretty good

The one I've been following recently, the protagonist is a manga artist, who probably started serializing manga from the end of Dragon Ball. The style of the whole book is Japanese urban entertainment, similar to the theme of novels about being a director and an actor. Very similar to the strongest style. The advantages are many. First of all, the protagonist does not have any systematic cheats. Although his memory and painting talents are very good, he will never make people laugh. As this type of novel, the description of career is the focus: the author is very attentive in describing the series of processes in which the protagonist learns comics, practices comic drawing, and gradually grows and progresses to update comic masterpieces such as Soul Slam Dunk Master. The content advancement and reader response of the comic are particularly well done. It won't make readers feel too bland. I think the shortcomings are concentrated in the early stage. The protagonist publishes the famous work Soul of the Game relatively late, and the author spends more pen and ink in the early stage to describe the protagonist's experience of studying at Akita Toriyama. This point is actually a matter of opinion. I like it better, but some people think the main line is too slow. Secondly, as is a cliché in this type of article, the female characters and supporting roles are relatively thin. In the later stage, as the status of the protagonist and the influence of past works increase, what should I choose for new works to make readers feel more comfortable? It's a bit difficult Flaws do not cover up strengths

It's very well written, and I can't find fault with it till now. The setting and character of the protagonist, as well as the supporting characters and plot advancement are all solid and readable. It is said that late bloomers and hard work can make up for their shortcomings. This novel really describes the performance of this destiny. The protagonist's behavior and personality are of a really mature type, not the ideal virgin and decisiveness of killing that Qidian disgusted me with (Qidian's decisiveness of killing is basically equivalent to a young violent novel). It makes up for my recent regret of watching Qidian Fantasy Xianxia. Readers who like mature protagonists, realistic characters, and Goldfinger novels that are very restrained can feel free to read this. Supplement: It is recommended to turn off paragraph comments and chapter comments. There are many comments made by idiots, which make people speechless and frustrated (this is not a personal subjective judgment, but various suggestions and criticisms such as quantum speed reading and self-destruction in the comment area). Ironically, the more effort is made in a novel to make the plot reasonable, the more self-righteous idiots will criticize it; on the other hand, novels that are purely cool and half-assed in logic are rarely criticized by anyone. When I read Qidian's fantasy fairy novels before, I actually felt like they were developing into light novels. The story and characters have no sense of depth at all. They are just a combination of facial makeup characters and boring ideas. Even in the world of immortality, the main character is portrayed like a stupid young man in high school. Another tendency is to be too retro to the point of classical cultivation, where the writing and ink of the cultivation system in classics overwhelms the character creation. A featureless paper man is struggling in the dire straits of the immortal world.

Great writing and content It is more like a novel divided into reality than urban entertainment. I haven't finished reading it yet, but I'll add it first. You should read it and you won't be disappointed.