Xuanjian Immortal Clan

It felt like there was nothing interesting about it anymore. The names were difficult to pronounce and the magical powers were unfamiliar. I read the beginning again. I didn't have such problems before. At first, the writing was quite simple and easy to read. I don't know when it started. Unusual characters must be used in names and in the practice system. It seems that the writing is deliberately obscure and difficult to read, and it is deliberately "showing off skills"? It was originally a group portrait, but when the characters appeared, they were always real people in white clothes or real people in green clothes, and their words did not sound like human words. I don't support it anymore, I contributed a lot of steamed buns, so that's it.

Currently there are these people in Qingdu Li family

This book is very famous, but I feel that it is not suitable for me. This book does not make me want to spend money for it. After I saw the testimonials on the shelf, I did not want to read it. I came here to evaluate it. First of all, the first point is that family stories do not have to be written as farming stories. After reading 90 chapters so far, I feel as if I am reading a farming manual type novel, such as what I did today, what I did tomorrow, what I did the day after tomorrow, etc. Generally speaking, the storyline is not exciting, and there is even a kind of story because I am writing a group portrait novel, so I have to write slowly and portray various other characters, which is a strange causal relationship that will advance the overall plot slowly. The second point is that the protagonist has little role, and can even be said to have a single role. Because the protagonist does not show up in front of others and pretends to be unintelligent, there is almost no psychological description of the protagonist. At most, there is an occasional sentence or two. The author himself also said it, saying that it is not the feeling of a ghost story or a mastermind behind the scenes. This makes it impossible for readers to get involved with the protagonist. Can you take on the role of a robot like a nanny? As for the supporting characters, I didn't even recognize their names, and they were almost dead, let alone substituted. Most of all, I could only read this novel from a spectator's perspective, so this inevitably led to me feeling a little bored while watching it. The third point is that I saw other people in the comment area saying that this book is very slow-paced, and it takes 200 chapters for someone to reach the qi training realm. So I speculated that if I write this way, I think this book can become the kind of book with more than 1,000 chapters. Moreover, in the world of immortality itself, this subject matter is very routine. When you rise to the top of a realm, a new realm will appear. World, when you rise to the top of one world, it will take you to another world. If I write according to the author's current progress, I will feel very tired when I see the people behind me, because the author himself also said that this is not a good book, that is to say, its core tone is depressive. Can you imagine the feeling of being depressed all the time in a book with more than 1,000 chapters? Anyway, I can't stand it anymore, so I can't say more than that.

There is no highlight at all in Chapter 30. Plain and a little bit poisonous

By the way, brothers, are you also from Douyin?

In more than ninety chapters, the only girl of the third generation of the Li family, the author also wrote that she was extremely beautiful and had a good temperament, but then she was captured by a foreign race along with her brother? She was also sent to the tent of the little leader of the foreign race, and then if you touch me, I will be killed here. This chapter is gone. The next chapter will say that her brother has been working hard in the foreign race for more than ten days. No, has she been affected by that? I am thinking about this question. The question, I didn't have the intention to read anymore, the author didn't write it clearly, and the most annoying thing is that in the first few chapters, the author also wrote that a branch disciple of the Li family peeked at her and seemed to have a crush on him. A kind of secret love for the goddess came out, and then this happened after a few chapters? Damn it, it was still ntr, right? It slipped away.

I really felt inspired. None of the characters starting from the Crown Prince made my eyes shine so brightly. The author's description directly helped to establish the image of this marginal character who has been working for hundreds of chapters. It really amazed me. He is so handsome, brother. Let me put it bluntly, the best jungler in Jiangnan in the current short video clips is really not as good as the image of Bai Ziyu. Originally, the character image in the later generations of Shi Zisheng made people feel lackluster, but this one made the fighting image of the character Ye Hui come to life. It is really too tense. Although Ye Hui's previous strategic description also reflects the character's personality, it is far less impressive than this battle description. I really need to blow my mind at this section, which instantly brought to mind the oppressive feeling of a general using double surgical swords to summon the supernatural power and turn into a thunder bead on the left and a fire talisman on the right to control thunder and fire. So handsome brother🌪️😭

The plot about Liu Changtiao is really very illogical. The more I write, the more outrageous it feels! For the time being, I can only reluctantly accept that he is indeed a reborn person! Rather than being planned by the Jindan boss as many people speculated! Because this is too buggy, too brainless and illogical! Is the Jindan boss so awesome? Can you see the past and the future? Will future generations know what it is called? What big things will happen in the future! If he wasn't so awesome, how could he instill destiny into Liu Changtiao? How did Liu Changtiao know about these people? (It is recommended to write this one down as soon as possible! Otherwise, the more you write, the harder it will be to get it right!) And if this is truly a reborn person, he is such a waste! It's even more unreliable. I think this character is a failure. It's so illogical! 🙄

Lu 🐢 is both the lunar and the yin, but the sun is in the fruit position and the upright position, and Taiyin is in the remainder position, so yang prevails and yin declines. In the world, the bright yang cuts off the yin and dominates the world. Shaoyang is the embryo of Tao and interferes with the remaining position of taiyin. This is also the victory of yang and the decline of yin. Lu 🐢 definitely wants the balance of yin and yang, so he can only reshuffle the yin and yang. Then when the sun sets and the night is late, it is the time for the handover of yin and yang (why not in the morning, because the sun has already passed its glory, and the time equivalent to noon has passed). This is the most suitable time to reconcile yin and yang. When the sun shines brightly and then sets in the west and turns into evening, the sky will naturally be filled with rays of rays, which is in line with the prosperity of the rosy rays of Taoism.

It's 19 or 20. Let's write their whole family as old fritters and others as fools, right? A peak leader went to his house to fight demons, and saw several people in her family practicing well. If the author hadn't sent them down, the people nearby would have definitely felt that the skills they practiced were different and stronger than what the peak leader had practiced before. Secondly, the peak leader said who his descendants were when he came. Aren't you embarrassed? It's really embarrassing to force the plot together. What if a peak master is the descendant of some foundation building? I think it's very strange that the Peak Master can continue to hide there and observe, and then go to his house and use Shenshi to scan him and he will find the mirror, because the Wind Master will definitely not kill their whole family and erase their memories, and then pretend to say something, the memory was lost by the monster, I saved you, I saw that everyone in your family has bones, teach you the skills, the author keeps saying who is the descendant of whose descendant, don't you just want to get away with it? A peak master, he is not an ordinary person to be a peak master. I don't want to tell you how secretive his heart is. For a normal person, his whole family may be gone. The paragraph you wrote is hilarious.