Fannon's Notes

凡農筆記

6643(41 linked)5mo ago

I was forced to change it more than 20 times due to review, so I stopped writing an introduction😅

Vip CreationKeep Pace with the TimesMale ChannelTime TravelSystem FlowEasy
Deep Inside the Living Person23

Fatty In Yellow

2.7M8.572

Lovecraft 2. Understand the related concepts of █ people, anomalies and monsters, and have a certain understanding of ██ literature. 3. Be physically and mentally healthy, with no infectious diseases and no history of mental illness. 4. Master at least one technology, not limited to infrastructure, medicine, sports, etc. 5. Family immigration has high priority. Make the most important decision in your life, become a new immigrant in the United States, and carve your own name on the monument of human history. Thank you for your cooperation.

Curator3

Grain ~ Licorice After the update, I felt weak. I rated it as lacking a sense of urgency. I can't remember the last time I fought with a sense of urgency. Licorice How shameless The description of the battle is refreshing, and the "camera sense" of the text is there. The family members The depth of the foreshadowing is moderate, allowing readers to see part of it, thus creating a good interactive atmosphere. The power system seems to be quite confusing. There is no clear division to highlight one. As long as there is a fight, the author can talk nonsense.

Players Please Get on Board24

Haiyan Mountain

6.4M8.0304

"Players are welcome to board the special train for the Dimension Crack game. This train will depart from the E-level departure station to the D-level station. Players are asked to ensure their safety and get on the train in an orderly manner and abide by the rules of the train." "The riding rules are as follows:" "1. Please do not bring non-game items on the train. (Except underwear)" "2. Must consume. (All train staff work without pay)" "3. Do not turn on the lights after turning them off. (Except for those who are talented and bold)" "In addition, the train encourages sneak attacks, fights, hunting and other leisure methods. Players are welcome to choose as they please." "Have a nice trip." * If you are interested, you can join the readership group! Players please get on board. Reader group 1: 812635662 (full) Players please get on board Readers Group 2: 730895563 (new group)

Curator7

Licorice I think it's pretty good if I can continue to design good copies. Grain ~ Licorice Some chapters and plots have a serious sense of separation. I don't know if it's caused by modifications. The design of the dungeon is acceptable, and the description of the real world is acceptable. The writing is a bit too flat and dry, which makes reading difficult. I can't read it because of the world view and dungeon design.

The Copy is 0 Fault-tolerant, and the Last Words All over the Place Have Been Made for Me25

Twelve Foods

3.1M7.958

Violating hospital rules and leaving the ward late at night will result in sudden death. Without access application, climbing over the gate will be blocked. Bet money with the fat guy in the lounge and he'll cheat and win your life. How do I know, you ask? The last words of players everywhere said that this is how they died. After many dangers, I met the hidden guardian of justice and asked me to see what the last words on his body were saying. "Master Priest, don't do anything. I am also a believer of the evil god. We are our own!" Oh, it's another trap, there's nothing to say, just light up the health bar!

Curator6

Weeds~grains I'm a novice at writing. The design of the dungeon is okay, but the writing in the real world is so bad that I don't even want to jump over to see how the next dungeon is written. I'll be poisoned to death.

Alien Hotel26

Alien Hotel

Science Fiction

Far Pupil

2.2M9.3124

Underneath daily life, at the end of reason, beyond the world you are familiar with - there is a scenery you have never imagined. When Yu Sheng opened the door for the first time, the world he was familiar with collapsed. And the "truth" that goes straight to the root of the world is coming.

Curator8

Licorice ~ grass jelly I have never finished reading a big-eyed book, including the previous one, Embers of the Deep. I usually abandon it when the world view becomes more and more grand and the setting becomes long and dry. This one is as good as ever at the beginning, so I read it first.

My Skills Have Mutated Again!27

Black-hearted Dabai

1.9M7.971

The six pillars fight and the world collapses. The plane dimension is digitized, and the Shattered Ember Zone is opened. Xia Lin raised his head and looked at this fragmented world. "This is the worst of times. The bad is the invasion of aliens, rampant monsters, internal fighting among humans, and dogfights." "This is also the best of times. The good is that my name is Xia Lin, Sequence One, Uncertain Shadow, and Supreme!" [Unstable mutation: All your skills will produce random mutations at the beginning of an Ember Zone. All buffs or debuffs you receive will also produce random mutations. ...[Backstab (F-level skill): The damage of attacks launched from behind increases. Backstab (Mutation): When you backstab the force you belong to, all attributes will be permanently improved according to the impact caused. ...[Lighting trick (F-level skill): Light up the darkness. Nuclear Explosion Sun Fist (Mutation): Set the world on fire, spreading love and nuclear peace. ...[Six Armor Heavenly Soldiers (S-level skill): Summon Six Armor Heavenly Soldiers to subdue demons. Pregnant with Liujia Heavenly Soldier (Mutation): Let the target be forcibly impregnated, and the offspring will be reincarnated as a Heavenly Soldier and bring their own spiritual roots. ]... Explosive attributes and regular skills. I, Xia Lin, am both a numerical monster and a mechanical monster! "It's over, my skills have mutated again!" Xia Lin clenched his fists and his smile became more and more abnormal. "Oh, let me correct you. I said the word "done" on your behalf."

Curator13

Weeds~poisonous weeds, poisonous escape in two chapters

Three Towers Game28

Three Towers Game

Science Fiction

Be More Attentive

2.9M8.551

A lunatic's journey to climb a tower. This is the iron rule of the Three Towers game in the eyes of others: 1: It is forbidden to cause killing in the Tower of Desire. The Tower of Desire is a tower full of love. Please use love to climb the Tower of Desire. 2: Killing is the only pass for killing towers. All tower-killing creatures are enemies of mankind. Please do not try to communicate with monsters. 3: Stay away from the treacherous tower and live happily. This is the iron rule of the Three Towers game in Wen Xishu's eyes: 1: The tower of desire is full of fat sheep that cannot kill. 2: The monsters in the killing tower are powerful and reliable. They are really a concentration camp for foster fathers. 3: I love the treacherous tower very much.

Curator4

Grain ~ Licorice The dungeon is pretty good. The less about the bunker, the better. The humorous roommates in the college are becoming more and more embarrassing to me. The few teammates who appear outside are pretty good. The ones who gamble on stones, eat monsters, and drive race cars are all more pleasing to the eye than the few expensive ones in the dormitory.

Harry Returns from Hogwarts Legacy29

Bite Of Kale

2.5M7.839

After spending his sixth year at Hogwarts a hundred years ago, Harry returned to the stair compartment in 1991 and once again received the Hogwarts admission notice. "You mean, my parents were killed by a dark wizard?" Harry asked, "Who is that dark wizard? Why are you so afraid of him that you don't even dare to mention his name?" "It's Voldemort," Hagrid replied cautiously: "Okay, Voldemort, because he has killed hundreds of people with his own hands." Harry nodded noncommittally. "What about the next day?" Hagrid: "Huh?"

Curator1

Food and grass have been abandoned Byd harem party article can't stand it anymore Licorice → Grain I don't read HP fanfics very often, and everyone who reads fanfics has different preferences. I prefer clever and plausible adaptations of the original plot, which is why I rated the early stage as Licorice. Ever since the first heroine was rescued, the tone of the whole story has become a funny palace fight story about party conflicts. Each concubine has her own relative, and they are just fighting with each other like crickets. It is extremely boring to me. The author also always likes to lay out some humorous "hidden threads" in which the first heroine prepares to play with technology and magic and climb together, and the Shinra Empire is resurrected. I can only say that it is boring, and I will not see it so late that I abandon the book after finishing the main plot of the original novel. To sum up, what was licorice in the early stage turned into food after rescuing the first heroine, and the quality declined.

I Was Not Arrested, Why Should I Be Said to Be Guilty!30

Traveling To The End Of The World With A Sword In Blue Shirt

1.7M8.389

"You mean, since you were born, in the past twenty years, you have been able to control your dreams and do whatever you want in your dreams?" "Yes, I have done these things countless times, including outlaw gangsters, flying airplanes, parkour, gun battles and street fights." "To put it bluntly, the crimes I committed in my dreams, It was enough to get all the police officers in a region promoted!" "But then I became a good person." "Why?" "Because..." Looking at the tragedy of the four corpses kneeling on the ground in front of them, their eyes were hollow and they were nailed to the cross. Xu Hao stubbed out the cigarette in his hand, his eyes gradually blurred. "A dream come true."

Curator3

Grain ~ weeds A mountain of bizarre cases that highlight cruelty and bloodiness. The level of conspiracy is extremely poor, and the replay of the previous chapter that is indispensable for each case is responsible for forcibly adding value, and some eye-catching dramas are used to cover up the fact that it is essentially a third-rate criminal investigation drama, just like adding seasoning to the national trend takeout for free.

American Comics: What Bad Intentions Can Batman Have?31

Mr. Skeleton

4.2M8.363

Chen Tao never expected that even if he traveled through time, he would actually become Batman himself. As we all know, Batman is extremely smart, has extraordinary wisdom, and has extraordinary fighting skills. But - what does all this have to do with me, a time traveler? Oh! It's okay, I can inherit Batman's power and memories...? ! ? Wait, why are they all parallel universe versions? ----- In Metropolis, the Justice League lies on the ground in front of the Dark Lord Darkseid. Warn! "Superman's broken cape", "Wonder Woman's broken shield", and "Green Lantern's damaged Green Lantern ring" have been detected...] "Damn it." Chen Tao looked at the sky speechlessly: "Is it possible that I, the mighty Batman, can only make a living by picking up the corpses of my teammates?" The next second, he picked up the things skillfully and quickly, and then... [Already possessing Wonder Woman's..."Unmerciful Iron Fist" has been loaded! [Already possessing Green Lantern's... "Light of Dawn" has been loaded! ... Bat Mage, Hearthunter, Batsaur, Dark Father, Red Death, Devastator, Drowned Soul, Banisto... As there are more and more parallel universe versions of Batman that Chen Tao can transform into, a rumor has also spread in the Justice League: "You said Batman, he won't take action until all his teammates lie down."

Curator11

Licorice (American comic only) It's not the same as M*K's book, it's in the style of "The Spiritual Master", and the length is just as outrageous as that one. It can be exploited. Some of the units in the early stage were a bit self-motivated, but in the later stage, it became more and more skilled, which is awesome!

Xian Gong Kaiwu32

Gu Zhenren

3.0M8.5184

In the volcano, the fairy palace, the mechanism left behind by the sages and powerful men, is eager for successors. The mother risked her life to fight for the treasure seal of the Immortal Palace, and entrusted it to Ning Zhuo before she died. My Buddha Heart Demonic Seal! Transform yourself into a Buddha, transform others into a demon. The person who holds the palm seal lightly carves the heart seal and controls the mechanism like a feather. Everyone is trying to control it, but their spirits are heavy and tired; Ning Zhuo can control thousands of people with one movement, as light as dancing. Ning Zhuo: "Mom, I will definitely live up to your instructions and obtain the Immortal Palace!" Exactly: Immortals and puppets channel the secrets of spirits, and their craftsmanship coincides with the truth. Kaiyu comes to a new realm, and everything is as beautiful as heaven. The ancient bell transmits the law, and the moonlight dances with clear light. The true body possesses all things, who can be the enemy in this world!

Curator5

Grain ~ Licorice The logic of most people's actions in the book can be justified, which is very valuable. The writing style is not bad, much better than Zhang Wei. He won't catch an adjective and use it 120 times in 100 chapters. It's very watery, especially watery. The last time I saw this kind of water power was at Changyu, and a little further back was the Lushan Waterfall. Even fans were gagging and wouldn't let me talk about it. It was very funny. My ability to write short stories has greatly declined. The short stories in this book gave me the feeling of being force-fed into my family. Let's take a look at the ancestors and family members in the distance. I saw a pop-up ad today, and I thought about taking out this abandoned book and giving it a beating. In the future, if an old friend pops up an ad on the homepage, he will also comment critically on it.

You Are Not Allowed to Fall in Love with Your Trainer33

Fox Pulls Shrimp Braid

184K8.257

By chance, an old screenshot of the comment section unexpectedly became popular on the Internet. --No? Man, every time I see you saying you like Gardevoir on the Internet, I want to laugh. --Ask yourself, is that the trainer's love for the elves? --What you love is not an elf at all. You just dare not approach the opposite sex because of your low self-esteem. You are just afraid of being abandoned and feel insecure. You are a stinky child who lacks love, so you hope that a creature who looks like a girl and has a personality like a girl will love you. --What? You ask me why I know so much and am so good at scolding? --Of course it's because I also like Gardevoir! When the reporter took this screenshot to find its original author, Mr. Qin Zhen, who was the first champion of the Donghuang League at the time, rarely showed a nervous look in front of the camera. "Gardevoir? What Gardevoir? I don't like Gardevoir! I am devoted to those in my family!"

Curator62

It seems to be resurrected, but I am pessimistic. I will read it when it reaches chapter 300 or 500, and the rating will be lowered to Licorice~Licorice Cut Regarding the author's background and criminal record, you can go to the book circle of this book and read the posts. I was already sweating after reading it. What kind of god is he? 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅 Licorice ~ grass jelly It's only a little seedling with a few dozen chapters, but it's so well-written, but the plot seems to move very quickly, which makes people a little worried whether it will end up being a short story.

Unrivaled Double Harmony34

Three Days And Two Sleeps

2.5M9.3392

Stop and go on Jianghu Road Revealing the memories of youth and wandering Now that I have passed through this world, I feel nostalgic for it The peak blew up from the past

Curator11

Grass jelly I originally wanted to write a "god" in the review column, but first I was afraid that Xudong Xudong would wish me good health, and secondly I was afraid that there would be fewer updates about my poisonous milk exerting power to Sanzha milk, so I gave up. Sanzha's writing style is nothing to criticize. It's like a little cologne in the Internet literary world. It highlights a skateboard shoe movement-elegant. There are no other shortcomings except for the slow update. If I insist on it, there may be some shit and fart jokes, which makes the food taste unusually.

The Corpse Collector in Conan35

Fairy Boat

8.0M8.7304

Interview with the protagonist: Q1: What is your secret to becoming the [Ace Killer] of the black organization? Jiang Xia: "Take Conan and visit the target's house." ---- "Fake Moriarty's Distillery Career", "How to Correctly Get the Aura of Death" ... Jiang Xia took a puff of the fake cigarette and blew out the smoke ring sadly: "I just wanted to take advantage of some cases and pick up corpses, but I didn't expect that I would become a 'criminal planner' in the eyes of the villain." "What? Why doesn't the protagonist catch me?" "... Maybe it's because in their eyes, I am the contemporary high school student version of Sherlock Holmes." ------ Interviews with detectives from Kexue World: Q1: What do you think of Jiangxia? Detectives: "Nothing short of solving the case too quickly." . Q2: We are both detectives, why not join forces with Jiang Xia to fight against the black organization? Detectives (waving their hands hastily): "No, no, no, we can't tell him. The dark side of these worlds is too heavy for him." ------- [Qidian app, Detective Conan fan], there are some cases of Kindaichi

Curator4

Licorice ~ grass jelly (limited to Conan fan category) In the field of Conan fan fiction, there are too many books that want to be funny but only make bad jokes, but I have read this book for two thousand chapters and it can still make people laugh all the time. Conan fans have a common problem: the homogeneity between the cases is too high, and they often get tired of reading the book. This book successfully delayed my abandonment of the book by introducing the unlucky guy in the new winery. I vaguely remember that I only read a few hundred chapters when I read Snake Essence Disease. Then there are "Snake Essence Disease" and "Ke Xue Coroner". These two books are also top licorice for Conan fans at the starting point, so I won't add them to the book list.

I Wandered into the Elf World Until I Lost Contact36

Keyshen Shidao

2.1M7.516

In order to liberate the elven world that is in dire straits, Chi Chi, a time traveler with the magical Rotom dating system, decided to first find a hundred female trainers as helpers... PS. The strongest, fiercest, most powerful, and most popular Pokémon fan in history. I will regret it for ten minutes after watching it. If I don't watch it, I will regret it for the rest of my life!

Curator5

Grain ~ Licorice The author likes to use Hong Kong comic style descriptions. The underlying setting of the Pokémon world incorporates the structure of the Pirates and Draconis. The writing style is acceptable and there are many ideas. It is currently a very long update period, but there are already so many words anyway. Maybe I will abandon the book before I read the latest chapter.

People in Conan Have an Option System in Their Brains37

Dreaming Of Becoming An Internet Literary Master

680K8.4143

[The car is like a secret room, the woman has been stabbed to death several times, the siren is getting closer and closer, what choice will you make as a suspected murderer? [1. Do nothing, wait quietly for the police to arrive, then surrender to the police and admit that you killed the woman] [2. Do nothing and wait quietly for the police to arrive, but firmly deny that he killed the woman] 3. Escape [4. Before the police arrive, try your best to cover up your murder evidence and avoid responsibility] "Of course I chose 4!" Traveling through Tokyo, facing the system that suddenly appeared in front of him, Akikawa Kosuke made a firm decision. Akikawa Kongsuke firmly believes that as long as he survives the current crisis, he can gain a peaceful and stable life. Until he met the elementary school student wearing a red bow tie and round glasses, who called himself a detective... (Detective Conan fan, original plot, will not repeat animation content)

Curator3

Grain (cut) Writing an original case with a novel angle, using frame-up to inflict real harm to the murderer. The transitional chapter is very complicated, and some details and logic cannot be carefully considered, and it has to be quite slow. Come on, I really don't need to look at it now.

Genius Club38

Genius Club

Science Fiction

City And Cicada

2.8M8.9279

[Works with 100,000 orders, won the 35th Science Fiction Galaxy Award] "Since I was born, I have had the same dream every day, and the same day keeps repeating in the dream." "What have you done in the dream?" "Robbing banks, blowing up buildings, picking up girls, Grand Theft Auto... Anyway, it is in the dream, so naturally you do a lot Lawless things." "Tell me what you did last night." "Yesterday was more interesting. This is the first time I have dreamed about someone I know in real life..." "Yeah." The policeman nodded while taking notes: "You continue to talk, I'm listening."

Curator3

Grass jelly The book is imaginative, logically self-consistent, and the writing style is above average. However, some of the repeated jokes are not funny, such as Liu Feng's difficult arithmetic sequence, and the fact that he first wrote the ending of cultivating immortals and then changed it to the current ending.

I Can Summon Outrageous Companions39

Fighting Antenna

2.1M8.7

Drumby, Big Big Wolf, Mickey Mouse, Tom and Jerry, SpongeBob SquarePants, Penguins of Madagascar... Please, why are the prize pools in my system all filled with these things?

Curator1

Grain and grass The first dungeon is the best among gods, the second dungeon is good, the third dungeon is mediocre, and I haven't seen the fourth dungeon yet, so the main world can only be considered mediocre. Those who can write the three golden chapters may not be able to write the follow-up. Jpg The fourth dungeon was very well maintained, and the evaluation was raised by half a notch. The writing becomes worse and worse. The author is like the kind of student who grimaces and frowns while writing an 800-word essay. The writing is smooth at first but becomes more and more awkward later.

Stop Hypnotizing Me, Villain Princess!40

Fish Flavored Cheese

1.0M8.4152

[Order 30,000 each, feel free to eat] Traveling through a different world, Lin En was kidnapped at the beginning. The other party is the villain princess in the original work. In order to control him, he must be used for hypnosis experiments. At the critical juncture, Lin En quickly resorted to wisdom, pretending that the experiment was successful, and used his acting skills to deceive the other party. But this is only a stopgap measure. Because her ending in the original book was very miserable, and the people around her didn't end well either. So in the following days, Linn created the illusion of being hypnotized on the surface, but secretly was ready to run away at any time. But gradually, things started to go wrong. ..."Diary of a Princess" [The experiment was successful! ][As the only sample, I decided to keep him with me. ][Due to the curse mark on my face, I look hateful in the eyes of the world, but he says I am beautiful. ][I am very happy because people speak the truth when they are hypnotized. ][When I was alone, I kissed him on a whim. ][This feeling is very strange, which makes me a little bit embarrassed. Fortunately, after the hypnosis is released, he will not retain the memory just now. ][So, it doesn't matter if you are bolder, right? ]

Curator12

Poisonous weeds, complaints about the plot and out of context were banned by the humor management The key points of the chapter are broken every day, and I have to give less poison. Halfway through the chapter, I was rushed by the chapter, so I quickly revised the outline and rounded it up. I still don't want to talk about it. The humorous author and his loyal management Grain and grass, if you have a special hobby, it's licorice The track is quite new, and it seems like it is crazy to attract the two-dimensional Ye Gong to watch the male and female protagonists play Ace Admiration. The method of manifesting one's saints in front of people is relatively old, and so far the villain's intelligence is slightly lacking, but the focus of this book is still on color, so it doesn't hurt.

Corpse Hunter41

Ghost Eyes Peeking Into The Sky

816K07

The only son of the Chen family, he makes a living by fishing for corpses. Let me tell you my story...

Curator5

Licorice ~ grass jelly (when we don't talk about zz, it's the Great Perfection of licorice, when we talk about zz, it's the early stage of licorice) Supernatural slow-warming stories are pretty good everywhere. Although the pace is slow, it doesn't feel watery. The only drawback is that Fei Long likes to bring his own zz thoughts. When I see them, I feel like I'm interested in middle-aged men talking about zz at dinner.

Nomenclature of Night42

Talking Elbow

3.9M9.14,173

Amidst the blue and purple neon lights, under the dense steel sky, the front end of the torrent of data is the world after the technological revolution, and it is also the boundary between reality and illusion. Steel and body, past and future. Here, the outer world and the inner world coexist, and everything in front of you is like a wall of time. Darkness gradually enveloped. But you have to understand, my friend, we cannot deal with darkness with gentleness, we must use fire.

Curator13

Poisonous weed Conceive the Holy

2 / 3