Xian Gong Kaiwu

The teacher said angrily: If you don't listen to the class well, how will you make money in the future? ? "It's very simple. I just go into the factory." After saying that, his aura no longer concealed, it was revealed. When he returned to the assembly line, he was at the peak of junior college cultivation! For a moment, the assembly line was silent again, and three Gu insects flew out with his wave of his hand. The first turn was coolie Gu, the second turn was cow and horse Gu, and the third turn was minnow Gu! Interesting, really interesting, wonderful, really wonderful. I am the pinnacle of junior college! Who dares to catch me? Who can catch me? I heard him murmur again: The cold wind blows in the electronics factory. The great master on the assembly line has returned. Tens of thousands of people have quit after working endless shifts. I regret my undergraduate degree but I don't regret it! Late at night, he firmly occupied his work station, turned around and lowered his eyebrows and said: It's just a little night shift.

The cold wind blows in the lonely valley, and the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn. The young man returns. At Danghun Mountain, the stone man sheds tears, and the fixed immortal wanders and the demon heads north. Countercurrent and tens of thousands of immortals retreat, love loses and persists in tears. Destined to succeed or fail, the Immortal will regret it but I will not. In his early years, he knew that things were going to be difficult, so he allowed Xu Fei to wander through the clouds. The cold wind was as deep as cotton wool along the way, causing the sea to rise and fall, and the traveler walked alone. Thousands of hours of grinding and pounding of new iron are used to forge a sword. Nowadays, the sword is pointed at the clouds, practicing Gu, practicing human beings, and practicing heaven. The ancient emperors and immortals passed away with the wind, and the three kings of the past returned to Qingzhong. I will worship the sheep and the reckless man, and he will come back and claim the title of king again. Fishing for dragon fish in the Tianhe River, going against the will of heaven and wandering alone in Bahuang. Let's spread our wings today, and tomorrow I will ascend to heaven and eat phoenixes.

The protagonist of Gu Zhenren himself has traveled back in time. Although he has no system, he has many memories of his previous life. ➕ There is no problem with the rationality of Spring Autumn Cicada. The protagonist of this book has no system, nor is he a time traveler, nor does he have past life memories. The plug-in is similar to hypnosis and the kind that prevents attacks from spiritual consciousness and demons. Then the question arises. How can the first protagonist be better than others as a puppet without any talent? The second protagonist can be said to be an orphan since he was a child and no one has educated him. How can he develop a cunning character and cognition? I feel that the author was praised too highly by Gu Zhenren's book. Many details were simply ignored. It can be said that if you don't read this book carefully, it will easily lead to drama. The writing method is still the same as pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger more than ten years ago. It is boring. The most important thing is that the protagonist of the book is an Aboriginal. Now the protagonist of the novel is still an Aboriginal. It is destined to be a bad book. Now the reader's level is much higher than before. If you write an Aboriginal protagonist, there is no sense of empathy. It can be said that this book has stepped on all the pitfalls.

It's quite boring. The NPC writing makes me feel sick. It's all about money transactions, calculations, violence, and rebellion. I don't know who would like to read this kind of writing. It's not interesting at all. The description of the male protagonist makes it impossible for people to take in the emotions, and they can only watch the growth as a bystander. Novels without a sense of empathy are really torture

Adding the setting of luck when writing usually means that the author is cheating on himself. You can selectively incapacitate the protagonist's opponents, allowing the protagonist to push them evenly, and then call it a beautiful name: being obsessed by luck. However, this approach is very easy to fail. Many authors do not control it well and allow supporting characters and villains to be clever without limit, which will appear too brainless and no different from ordinary brainless novels. It will make readers feel that the protagonist is nothing but good at life. This not only loses the Machiavellian character, but also makes the author look very incompetent. Unlike those common third-rate writers, Master Fang Yuan used the setting of luck very well, which shows his profound knowledge. When writing this article, Fang Yuan's use of the setting of "Qi Luck" was very measured. In the article, characters such as Meng Kui and Zhu Xuanji who rely on their brains will also be "bewitched by luck" in front of Ning Zhuo's halo as the protagonist, but they can also rely on their own resourcefulness to grasp the key to the incident, thereby making up for the situation. When advancing the plot, their IQs are all online. It can bring enough obstacles to Ning Zhuo. Ning Zhuo was at a disadvantage in the overall situation most of the time. Even at the end of the first volume, Ning Zhuo couldn't be considered a winner, at most he was only a half-win. This is enough to show that Meng Kui and Zhu Xuanzhi are far beyond the standards of the Internet literary circle. It also reflects Ning Zhuo's top strategy from the side. Instead of giving the protagonist the title of "strategic" like some third-rate authors, and then relying on the protagonist's halo to be reckless, the whole text does not reflect the protagonist's strategy at all. It is said that Fang Yuan can make good use of the luck setting. It's not because he doesn't use luck settings to cheat himself when writing (selectively outsmart the protagonist's opponents/sending resources to the protagonist/filling pitfalls). It's because he can keep the book from collapsing after cheating, and allows all kinds of protagonist's opponents to still suppress the protagonist in terms of strategy. And it should be noted that this is not to abuse the master. The cool points in the text under Fang Yuan's control are no less than the mindless cool ones. In Fang Yuan's writing, the protagonist works step by step, constantly defeating opponents who are far superior to him or evenly matched through his own wisdom, which can bring readers a sense of satisfaction that is far better than a mindless and entertaining novel. If you read this kind of article, you won't be afraid of looking stupid after reading too many online articles. Judging from the strength distribution of the three-party camps in the first volume and the profits of the three parties at the end, it is not difficult to see Fang Yuan's ability to control the overall situation and his delicate writing techniques. Ning Zhuo relied on T1 level strategy, T0.5 Level luck, and T1 level age advantage (to make others look down upon). He combined these three advantages to produce a qualitative change and exert a comprehensive strength that far exceeds the T0 level. In the end, although he failed to control the Immortal Palace as he wished, he also gained the most benefits: the hidden 2/3 authority of the Immortal Palace, the inheritance of the Immortal Palace, the Nascent Soul Dragon Puppet, multiple golden elixir puppets, and the successful separation of the family (preliminarily forming his own power, cutting off the luck of being sucked by the main line, and getting the umbilical cord back.). Meng Kui also showed in this volume: T0.5 Strength (limited to the first volume), T1-level power, T1-level strategy, and T2-level luck (relying on the immortal talent of his grandson), thus showing his T0 comprehensive strength. In the end, part of the strategic goal was achieved: mastering the Immortal Palace. Although another strategic goal (to allow the Meng family to completely control the fairy city) was not achieved, it also laid a solid foundation for subsequent planning of this goal. What Zhu Xuanzhi showed was: T1 strength (limited to the first volume), T1 power, T1 strategy, and T1 luck, thereby exerting a comprehensive strength slightly lower than T0 level. Although he failed to receive any benefits in the end, he also achieved the royal family's strategic goal: to prevent the Meng family from completely controlling the fairy city. It also provides an opportunity for the royal family to confront the Meng family again in the fairy city without being completely eliminated. This writing method breaks out of the traditional two-dimensional framework of strength and power in traditional fairy novels, and embodies the comprehensive strength of the characters from multiple dimensions, giving each character flesh and soul. This not only reflects Fang Yuan's superb characterization techniques, but also reflects his rigorous logic and flexible control of plot advancement. High-level group portrait writing, well deserved. After reading the first volume, I can vaguely see that Master Fang Yuan seems to be showing off his skills🌚. Regardless of the subsequent content, the first volume alone deserves five stars🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟.

When will my beloved Immortal Lord come? Juyang and the others have been fighting for several years.

A pig's trotter can practice Qi for three levels, and its foundation-building combat power is already incredible, and it can actually still have the golden elixir combat power. Moreover, he was careful in what he did in the Immortal Palace, but he still did it in front of other people's golden elixir powerhouse. To put it bluntly, when he killed that Demon Yuan, an explosion was caused. If he, a little Qi practitioner, was not buried with him, would the Ning family save him? There are also people who are divine catchers, not holy virgins. If they can become the divine catchers of golden elixirs, their character will not be as strong as your 10-year-old precocious mind? The most important thing is that it can make a third-level Qi training plug-in with golden elixir combat power, and his chances will not be much worse than the chances of this three-stupid real person. And pig's feet are just precocious wisdom, not rebirth. These things are inherently illogical.

There is no time to mourn. The next person to appear is the protector of the Red Lotus Demon Lord, the instructor of the Dameng Immortal Lord, and the creator of the Dragon Clan. He resisted the invasion of the North Plains with one person, crushed the dazzling performance of the Heavenly Demon Lord with one hand, and won the FMVP of the Battle of Heaven. He is the great mage with no health bar and only a progress bar, Lord Long!

Fang Yuan's life story The soul travels to another world, and the blood wings cover the sun; the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn, and the killings are overwhelming. By refining Gu, you can master reincarnation; if the cave of madness is broken, the way of heaven cannot be stopped. With one thought of rebirth, the past five hundred years are wiped out; thousands of opportunities are exhausted, and the nine levels of disasters are destined to pass through alone. The sea of ​​blood is turbulent, and the demon king stands up to profess great love; the common people are like rotten dogs, with cold eyes and mocking eyes. Capture the essence of heaven and earth, refine thousands of poisons to become a god; defy the principles of yin and yang, step on the mountain of corpses to ask for immortality. Neither good nor evil, only self-interested; unfettered and unfettered, lamentable and crazy. Fang Yuan In the Spring and Autumn Period, the cicada sheds its slough and traces back the passing years, and its wings of blood hang in the troubled times. Counting all the common people to see the great road, massacring hundreds of tribes to create demons. The clouds of calamity dispersed in the madden's cave, and the hegemony was engraved in the picture of purgatory. Don't ask where your original intention is. Great love is ruthless and will last forever.

We know that the road to growth is full of ups and downs and rumors, but we never care, because we know how a firefly can compete with the bright moon, and how a mayfly can climb the giant Kunpeng. Master Gu will not be the end, Fang Yuan is still there, all the Gu Immortals still exist, but you and me, my friends, the road is long and endless, the sun is dim and the sun is rising, persistence will never be a coma, the wandering of time is the accumulation of life, the longer it becomes, the more fragrant and mellow it becomes. The two have been separated for a long time since they first met, and their acquaintance has no place but empty words. Goodbye is a new look, standing proudly in this world.