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This type of article is one of the best I have ever seen in male videos, but don't be a stallion. If the author is not very good at grasping the emotional line, he can write it without a female protagonist or not use too much space to describe the relationship. Maybe I am more sensitive to the emotional line in this kind of article, and I can't help but comment in advance every time, so if the emotional line is already written in the later article, just take it for fun😽

I think the writing is very good. Regarding the rigorous aspects of this book, I think it is written very seriously. The writing style is not for beginners. I am very lucky to find such a good suspense mystery novel. The novel did a lot of foreshadowing for Xu Huo's character at the beginning, and it really shocked me later on. Moreover, the writing style is occasionally very humorous, which is just right (forgive me for not boasting). I also like the other team members. My favorite content in the dungeon is Decibel Town and the Amusement Park. If the author is considering choosing a hostess, I recommend Yan Jiayu She has a tough and cute character. When the protagonist needs help, she stands up without hesitation, and she really listens to Xu Huo's words. She is really cute. There is no coquettishness or willfulness, only thoughtfulness and bravery. Who wouldn't love such a girl? I hope the author will consider it. (Personal opinion only)

I like the style of this book very much. Geniuses and madmen coexist, and the best and the best evil coexist. The writing is very good, and it doesn't look like it is written by a new author. Maybe it is an old author? I have read 140 chapters now, and there are no bad points. Maybe the first few chapters were not handled well and were a bit messy, which resulted in the loss of a large number of readers. However, the more I write in the future, the better. Curious about why Xu Huo and his cousin have a history of mental illness even though they are not related by blood? Also, after the copy of "Decibel Town" was released, why did you always carry Wang Chaoqing with you?

But here comes the problem. It is set at the beginning that all superpowers have a strong desire to eat people, but the desire is very strange. At the beginning, it only takes a bite of human flesh, and it will be strengthened later. It is not the kind of eating all people. It does not feel like absorbing souls as resources, but a setting to create conflicts. In the first dungeon, there was a woman who awakened her night vision ability. Her previous words and deeds had revealed that she could see at night. She saw a woman with heavy makeup biting someone to wipe away the blood on her lip. However, she did not explain it, and played riddles with others in a sneaky way. As for the righteous party's absolute suppression by force, the return of the supernatural nun and the only existence of the protagonist who kills decisively in the early stage of the plot, she completely ignored it and did not explain it during the day. Alas, it was forced to be suspense. Suspense reasoning is such an inconvenient thing. This is the so-called top suspense reasoning, right? Tactical fallback.

Little author, if you can keep your level above 600 without adding water, I will go to the starting point and reward you with a gold alliance.

Has the character of the protagonist changed a bit, and does it feel like his previous and later personalities are inconsistent? It's understandable that he acted like a pig and ate the tiger in the early stage of the fairy tale city, but by the end, why didn't he feel like he was ruthless and didn't say much? There is also the excessive period before Xiaohua Honghong. The part where the protagonist is chasing the two people in front of him while still hanging on to a group of people behind him. In terms of force value, the protagonist can definitely defeat them. And according to the previous characters in the book, he should have asked those two people after breaking their hands. As a result, I kept running and felt extremely poisonous. Maybe it's because I wrote so well before, but here I suddenly feel like I'm feeling a bit uncomfortable.

The writing is great. I have already subscribed to all the monthly rewards. I just discovered the treasure book today and will continue to support you. Come on👍👍👍👍

Fell asleep (afraid of the dark + exiting all chats + playing games for half an hour + grinding for half Hours of Weibo and WeChat Moments + Watching videos for a while + Generating a little negativity Emotions then make peace with myself + fall asleep)

The advancement of the plot does not highlight the characteristics of the protagonist. The protagonist's only reaction is that he is relatively calm and has no other emotions. He joins the dungeon just to enter the dungeon. He is more like a machine than a human being. The supporting characters are also very generic and featureless. Yu Qingqing is like a madman, and the appearance of the painted girl seems to satisfy the lust of men. Are these two characters meant to highlight the masculine charm of the protagonist? He has no consciousness of his own and exists to serve the male protagonist. You can't see the excitement of Mugenliu, only the mysterious calmness.

The book is very good. Although I haven't read it, the reviews are full of stars. There should be nothing wrong with it, so I will give it a strong recommendation.